The Songbird's Love Comments

  • Taina Iosefo

    Finally they are back together again. Gotta get Eden some help. can’t wait for the next update!!

    08/07/2021 14:02

  • Anita Mara

    i love this story too much!!! i need more chapter 🥰

    08/06/2021 18:07

  • Hollstar

    hahaha I love Dante! 😂

    08/06/2021 07:06

  • 96fairlady

    crash bandicoot!!

    08/06/2021 03:28

  • shanaaz shaz

    ❤❤❤❤

    08/05/2021 13:17

  • hpearce15

    So so so good Jenny! I am loving this story! ♥️😍

    08/05/2021 12:00

  • Penny A Foxie

    82 ha ha ha she shot Dante! saw it coming, glad he seems ok! He seems bemused rather than hurt. Glad hes back at her side. They’re better together!

    08/05/2021 10:42

  • nfau4714

    When Eden called out for Dante THO!!!... girl when I say that made my heart so happy😢😢🥰🥰🥰🥰

    08/05/2021 09:22

  • nfau4714

    Loir is a roll-dawg forreal forreal!! When he realized his Kitty was in trouble he went all out on them! ❤ loved it!

    08/05/2021 09:20

  • Mina

    Ahhh Dante 😍🥰🥰

    08/05/2021 05:56

  • Analee Deniz

    ❤️❤️❤️

    08/05/2021 04:48

  • HeatherP312

    Big Kitty to the rescue!!

    08/04/2021 23:25

  • Adrian Michelle

    Dante is clutch!! I love him!

    08/04/2021 23:24

  • Tara Holland

    nooooo not Dante😭 please please no not him

    08/04/2021 21:20

  • Gabzzz Rodzzz

    mmmm shooting men when they are late was never hotter 😍

    08/04/2021 20:53

  • Pinkear

    possible spoiler theory * * * * * * * * I'm so convinced that Pan is going to be Eden's mother

    08/04/2021 19:52

  • Reader-299919

    oh noo😱

    08/04/2021 19:26

  • Maryam Mohamed

    I love dante💘.. spare him for me

    08/04/2021 17:56

  • Alicia Flores

    ahe shot Dante 😱😱😱😱😱 or maybe he dodged it and the blood on his temple is from some other wound in battle... I really love Dante I want a Dante all for my self 😝💕😘

    08/04/2021 17:43

  • Ludmila Bacova

    that's your Italian marriage

    08/04/2021 15:30

  • Cristina Pognant

    Wow!!!

    08/04/2021 15:01

  • Zaida

    My heart is racing every time there's an update now lol this is such a good story!

    08/04/2021 12:54

  • Florie Frane

    So Dante was shot? Please no...😭

    08/04/2021 11:44

  • Emelie Skillinghaug

    love this story, and all of your other stories. I started to read your stories when I needed to improve my English. And you didn’t let me down I really love to read everything you write. keep up the good work and nothing can stop you from being what you want. //Emelie from Sweden

    08/04/2021 09:17

  • Fatema Bhattacharya

    I am so in love with Dante!!! What a scene... amazing chapter. Amazing!!!!

    08/04/2021 08:59

  • Youvanne

    dante is my hero 💖💖💖

    08/04/2021 07:07

  • Philippa Rosemary

    Yes...Dante. 😍🤩

    08/04/2021 06:10

  • Jennifer L. Giambrone

    thank God he made it...

    08/04/2021 02:31

  • Christina Kay Maynard

    can't wait to read the next chapter

    08/04/2021 02:27

  • Reader-397104

    Dante to the rescue! great update!

    08/04/2021 02:13

  • Beth Wiles

    glad Dante finally made it to Eden. can’t wait to see how the rest of the war goes

    08/04/2021 02:11

  • Gee Higgins

    OMG what a chapter so glad Dante got there. hope she never shot him in the head???

    08/04/2021 01:58

  • Renee Farrell

    ❤

    08/04/2021 01:05

  • Bonib2

    ❤❤❤❤❤

    08/04/2021 00:56

  • Donna Bergemann

    I had to laugh at Dante words.love this book.

    08/04/2021 00:55

  • Roseam

    Wow what an action packed chapter! I love all Loir's little comments. He named the bots 😂. I'm glad our Kittie's are back together. 💜

    08/03/2021 23:29

  • Stephanie Messner Smith

    Thrilling fight scene!!

    08/03/2021 23:28

  • Elite Knight

    oh god... this is so suspenseful 😱😱😱😱 i feel like my breath gonna leave my body 😱😂

    08/03/2021 22:26

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Can’t wait for the next chapter! 🤪🤗☺️

    08/03/2021 22:06

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Eden and Dante are together at last! 🥳🥳🥳

    08/03/2021 22:06

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Oh, my god!!!!! I hope Eden didn’t hurt so much Dante…! 😱😱😱

    08/03/2021 22:05

  • Reader-284557

    ❤️

    08/03/2021 22:05

  • Karine Provencher

    Love Dante ♥️

    08/03/2021 21:59

  • Ahlie

    hope they'll be fine soon. can't help but smile at how dante can still find humor after eden almost killed him accidentally😂

    08/03/2021 21:40

  • Kat M

    Dante to the rescue!!

    08/03/2021 20:35

  • Reader-555364

    I seriously hope she only grazed him! He’s been shot in the head once already! 😮

    08/03/2021 20:32

  • Julia Lehmann

    Poor dante 😂

    08/03/2021 20:15

  • MReinanda

    Lol she shot him

    08/03/2021 20:08

  • SvS 🐝

    hahahahahah Dante clearly underestimated the anger of women 😂😂

    08/03/2021 19:53

  • Ieva Igaune

    She finally shot him 🤣🤣 she put the gun to his head twice, but didn't shot, now she did 🤣

    08/03/2021 19:47

  • nemone van Der bliake

    she shot him🤣🤣🤣🤣

    08/03/2021 19:22

  • Mina

    Fantastic chapter, Jenny! Such a stressful situation for Eden 😅 wish Charles had a better option, would have been sweet for Eden to get to know more about him and her dad when they were younger ❤️

    07/30/2021 13:21

  • T.H.E. Miller.C

    favorite still!

    07/29/2021 17:03

  • Vaslim

    OMG...LOIR IS A CRAZY GENIUS. 🤣🤣🤣

    07/29/2021 11:42

  • SvS 🐝

    time to run little kitty 🐱

    07/29/2021 11:16

  • MReinanda

    I liked Charles

    07/28/2021 20:53

  • Vaslim

    Loir is hella funny!!!! 😂😂😂

    07/28/2021 16:03

  • SuperWhoFly

    Love the way this is unfolding.

    07/28/2021 06:00

  • Penny A Foxie

    81 omg I’ve been waiting for this update! I hope Eden will be ok. Poor Charles, thank goodness she could trust him!!! Get to Dante Eden! 😂 Stressed! 😂

    07/28/2021 04:29

  • Kayla Elliott

    ohh Charles is the man…poor brave guy!! i can’t wait to see what happens next!! is it weird that I hope Charles slipped the pic into Edens pocket at least haha? Jenny your writing is truly brilliant!

    07/28/2021 01:11

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Thank you so much, dear Jenny!!! I’m so happy to read your amazing stories! 🙏☺️🤗 Seriously, can wait to have this too in paperback… someday… 🙏🙏🙏

    07/27/2021 22:08

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    So sad! Charles was a very brave man… Hope Dante can find Eden soon! 🙏🙏🙏

    07/27/2021 22:05

  • Bonib2

    I am sad for Charles. 😭😭😭😭

    07/27/2021 15:37

  • Julia Lehmann

    poor Charles... I hope this helps Eden

    07/27/2021 14:08

  • Maria Patricia

    a real heroe, Charles! Go Eden!

    07/27/2021 11:15

  • Florie Frane

    😭😭😭Charles😭😭😭

    07/27/2021 11:07

  • Youvanne

    wowww

    07/27/2021 03:20

  • Roseam

    Great chapter. Charles is extremely brave and composed.

    07/27/2021 01:00

  • HeatherP312

    omg please make it to Dante!!!!

    07/27/2021 00:29

  • Zaida

    This is getting so emotional. I'm nervous for each chapter now

    07/26/2021 22:36

  • Reader-555364

    It was sad because of Charles, but also a completely awesome chapter!

    07/26/2021 22:13

  • Kelly Kearby Berger

    poor Charles 😭😭💔

    07/26/2021 21:50

  • Satrupa Mohapatra

    so Charles is no more and he had used the bomb to somehow help Eden to gain a little bit of time from core and to try blow down some of the properties of core

    07/26/2021 20:34

  • Reader-397104

    As always great update! and great cliffhanger!

    07/26/2021 20:19

  • Alicia Flores

    Run Eden and find Dante... this is too intense 😬😬😬

    07/26/2021 20:13

  • linda

    Breathing is overrated when reading this book, GOD. 🙈🤯🙈🤯🙈

    07/26/2021 20:10

  • Ieva Igaune

    Ending of this chapter was sad..

    07/26/2021 19:21

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    it's getting real....

    07/26/2021 19:13

  • Amanda Lizzet Ancona

    Loving this book

    07/26/2021 04:42

  • Anthony

    I've been thinking, wondering and hoping for a while now if Pan was Eden's father.

    07/26/2021 04:34

  • Pinkear

    absolutely love this book! if you like matrix or hunger games, you'll love this book too

    07/25/2021 09:08

  • Sienna David

    One of the best books I've read here so far, I love how imaginative the author is! This book needs more recognition, every chapter is interesting and just in the right pace. I hope novels like this can adapt into a movie, it's really one of a kind, a masterpiece indeed 💗

    07/24/2021 05:44

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    LOVE THIS STORY!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH, DEAR JENNY! 🙏☺️👌

    07/23/2021 00:54

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I miss Dante… I would like to see his face when listening Eden got “some” of his assets 😅😅😅

    07/23/2021 00:53

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I’m wanting so much Pan be Eden’s father… 🙏🙏🙏

    07/23/2021 00:51

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Love Loir!!! 🥰🥰🥰

    07/23/2021 00:50

  • Emily Struna

    76 zombies love loir singing zombies. he is seriously my favorite character.

    07/21/2021 19:57

  • Bonib2

    Oh my Gosh, this is so good I cannot wait for the next uodate.❤❤❤

    07/21/2021 17:39

  • Ludmila Bacova

    another mystery...

    07/21/2021 17:14

  • Mina

    Oooooh this just keeps getting better and better! 😃 keep up the great work, Jenny! ♥️♥️♥️

    07/21/2021 16:12

  • laterseen

    80 Charles already mentioned that PAN was her dad's best assistant. he can't also be her dad right?

    07/21/2021 16:01

  • Taina Iosefo

    80 OMG… can’t say enough good things about this story or just Jenny in general. The suspense is killing me with this one. Love that Dante came in and corrected that she is former Newman. lol

    07/21/2021 14:54

  • Soph Hugh

    exciting chapter! thank you Jenny!

    07/21/2021 09:07

  • Soph Hugh

    Please don’t forget to leave several spaces if you are going to leave spoiler comments everyone!

    07/21/2021 09:06

  • shanaaz shaz

    I vote her dad

    07/21/2021 08:40

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    So far so good! Great work Jenny....Let the action begin...Big babe Eden. Pan is definitely her Dad. He has been this close guarding her. It's a pity what they had to go through. Great imagination Jenny... hope you are enjoying Mamafox cooking...but don't gain extra pounds, it could be hard to lose.

    07/21/2021 07:14

  • SvS 🐝

    I vote that he is either her brother or her dad. I’m excited for the next update!

    07/21/2021 05:54

  • Kelly Kearby Berger

    wonder if he is a relative

    07/21/2021 03:33

  • Michelle Hill

    obviously Pan is her dad!! Has to be! love your writing Jenny!

    07/21/2021 03:30

  • Roseam

    Interesting.... 20 years.

    07/21/2021 03:04
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