The Songbird's Love Comments
Ahlie
dante and eden's interaction is really good. nice of loir to just watch at the two. i can't wait for more intriguing chapters to come
11/30/2020 01:34Mina Song
omgggg I died when Loir went silent, he was basically letting the two lovers-to-be have a moment of work together. gosh, these cliff hangers are brutal! I can’t wait for the next update!! what if her master was someone in the core, who wanted the world to change or wanted someone like Eden to make a difference in their world? we need more info Jenny!
11/30/2020 00:01Ayie AieSyah
omgggggg another mystery😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 the thrill eden gives me just make my heart stop beating for a whileeeeeeee
11/29/2020 23:41Winter Rose
I can't get enough of Dante and Eden!
11/29/2020 23:36PramG
Wow, this story is getting so interesting!!! Can’t wait to see what Eden will find there.
11/29/2020 23:24Roseam
Ooooh Pan, the boy who never grew up. Similar to Loir, the crazy one haha. And Loir was so scared he couldn't look. 😂 Thank goodness for Dante's calm demeanor.
11/29/2020 23:03MReinanda
I have a feeling her master is someone highly ranked in the core
11/29/2020 21:58Auras Laura
her mentor might be alive?🤷♀️🤔
11/29/2020 21:45Anna Sota
Loir for me in my imaginantions looks like L from Death Note. I wonder who was the inspiration for Jenny when she made that character?:-)
11/29/2020 21:28Reader-939012
seriously my absolute favorite 🤩
11/29/2020 21:21NINJA
Ooooooooooh i love this story! 💗💗💗
11/29/2020 21:16Stephanie Messner Smith
The plot thickens! I love this book 😍
11/29/2020 20:58Spectral Beauty
Hahahaha Loir playing matchmaker over there. he’s the best third wheel a friend could ask for 🤣🤣🤣
11/29/2020 20:57Mina Song
omg I love Loir😂 imagine if loir is Eden’s brother who somehow survived being shot. hence, that’s why he’s a bit.... crazy... anyways, this chapter is interesting! I’m glad to read more of Eden’s dive and what sort of reality she crosses over to. lol I love the ending though 😂💀
11/29/2020 05:33Andre2695
😂😂😂
11/29/2020 01:12Marija Marković
it's amazing story
11/28/2020 15:16Roseam
Hahahaha Loir is hilarious! Poor Eden's stuck with a furry pink cat suit and Dante watching. 😂😂😂
11/28/2020 05:51Edina Owens
hhahahahaha big kitty is WATCHING!!!!!!😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 OMG that's so humiliating to eden.... poor baby😂😂😂
11/28/2020 04:39Tara Holland
love love love it lol 😍
11/28/2020 01:13Spectral Beauty
hahahahaha Eden is going to be mortified when she comes out of her Dive. God I love this book 🤣
11/27/2020 23:35Aqua the Unicorn
moreeeeee i want more!!! I somewhat imagine Eden like the cat Bitmoji 😂😂😂
11/27/2020 23:14Taina Iosefo
Oh man ... Big Kitty is watching Eden.. hahaha that’s too funny and Lori isn’t much help either. 🤣😂
11/27/2020 22:25Alicia Flores
hahaha Big Kitty is watching
11/27/2020 21:58Winter Rose
I wish I could see her haha
11/27/2020 21:52Sarah Kidman
bahahahaha! nice pink.
11/27/2020 21:40Alexandra Madalina
ahahaha this chapter was hilarious 🤣got to love Loir ,him and Dante chatting like buds makes me so happy ❤
11/27/2020 21:31Cristin Ronqvist
Amazing chapters and wow it realy did ny ecbibg to wait for 2-3chaoters to read in one go 🥰❤️🕊️
11/26/2020 22:36MReinanda
I'm scared. Something tells me this is going wrong, horribly.
11/26/2020 22:01Ashley Werner
I love this story so much jenny! and big old Rolf playing with the puppies 😍
11/26/2020 15:13Roseam
Love crazy Loir. He adds interest to the story.
11/26/2020 06:25Alicia Flores
Loir is so crazy hahaha but so smart too and he takes care of Eden, I wonder what Dante is going to think abouth Eden diving with out his concent
11/26/2020 05:26Ninna HP Jensen
Uuuh I'm so excited
11/26/2020 04:57Twila Carter
I love Loir lol
11/26/2020 04:34Mariana Cdsdc
this is a different kind of story that can go in any direction. keeps us on our toes and looking forward to the next update.
11/26/2020 03:25Beth Wiles
Ooooohhhh can’t wait to see what happens with her dive
11/26/2020 03:07Lally Devon
Rolf a man with a few words then off the Loir who wouldn’t shut up and full of beans his so funny 🤣 though can’t wait for Eden to Dive 😘❤️❤️❤️
11/26/2020 02:40Vidi
I am enjoying this new story. I’m curious to know what is going on! 💕
11/25/2020 23:51NINJA
Exciting! And i love how you want your readers to appreciate nature as we have it now. You're a great author <3 Thumbs up!
11/25/2020 23:23Lei Kela
oooh Eden's going to dive...in her new non-ghost identity 🤩🤩
11/25/2020 23:09Reader-102414
loved this update Jenny💜
11/25/2020 22:27Beatriz Astorga Morales
Can’t wait to read about her “new identity” 😅😛🤪 Loir is so funny! 🥰🥰🥰
11/25/2020 22:00Winter Rose
Ugh I just love this so much. Can't wait until the next chapter!
11/25/2020 21:48Sarah Kidman
I think her new profile is a cat 😂
11/25/2020 21:43Auras Laura
it is an interesting story👏😊
11/25/2020 21:39Reader-555364
I’m rubbing my hands together with glee for the next chapter!
11/25/2020 21:22Shaynie
I guarantee you her brother isn't dead. If you didn't see the body he didn't die🙂
11/24/2020 18:15Lally Devon
Could Eden fall for the Tiger 🐅 another amazing 😍 Chapter Jenny Fox 🦊 😘❤️❤️❤️
11/24/2020 16:49Auras Laura
👏👍😊
11/24/2020 10:11Raluca Iolanda Dragoi
I realy love this story !! initialy I thought that will be a short story but I'm sooo happy that is not!!!
11/24/2020 09:50SvS 🐝
crazy times indeed
11/24/2020 08:08sassyk35
So they took Adam’s body away? 🤔 Eden might end up with a ghost of her own!
11/24/2020 07:23Elite Knight
O M G..!!!!! THIS IS CRAZYYYYY.....!!!!! ITS SO THRILLING....!!!!!
11/24/2020 00:58Chelsea Viteri
my favorite story hands down! thank you for the update!
11/24/2020 00:35Reader-102414
another great update Jenny. I love this story
11/24/2020 00:18NINJA
Love it!!!!!Always waiting fir update 🙋🙋🙋
11/24/2020 00:12Drawkser
this book is too good. Every day after reading I feel lost, I need more but there is no another option different to wait.
11/24/2020 00:04Beth Wiles
Loved the update, glad she was able to check on her friends
11/23/2020 23:34Teresa Bryant
I'm really enjoying this story!
11/23/2020 23:16PramG
Glad to hear the Jack and Rose are ok! Wonder what the Core is planning???
11/23/2020 23:03Winter Rose
I love these two...
11/23/2020 22:50cindy bruneau
oh Dante! I need someone like you!😂
11/23/2020 22:31Roseam
Dante being all sweet hugging her to sleep after her nightmare. I'm glad Jackie and Rose are alright although his bar is a mess. The Core is planning something big and bad for the suburbs. Are they going to try and wipe them out for good? Let's see what Dante and Eden can come up with to mess with those plans.
11/23/2020 22:31Beatriz Astorga Morales
Omg!!! Dante is so lovely!!! Eden wasn’t accept her feelings for him... 🤪🥰🥰🥰
11/23/2020 21:55Alicia Flores
O my.... Dante is so falling for Eden 😍😍😍😍 and she is long gone for him hahaha. I think the Core is going to war to get more territory I hope Dante and Eden find a week spot to attack the Core
11/23/2020 21:50MReinanda
I think the core is going to clean the suburbs...
11/23/2020 21:16Andrea Aludden
this is my fav story, and i got hooked just a few chapters in. as always, excellent work ms Fox 👏
11/23/2020 21:08Gabzzz Rodzzz
very curious how this will go. great book!
11/23/2020 14:55Ahlie
jenny this is another one of my fave books by you
11/22/2020 22:36Brittany Vermette
love this book. becoming one of my favourites.
11/22/2020 18:13Twila Carter
I’m finally to this book and I am not disappointed at all! Jenny you got me to move to this app and I’m so happy at what I found! This book is so good just like your others! I feel like her master could be her dad or the one who created the core. I also feel like the Core is about to try to go to war with the ones it put out. I also really like Dante bunches. He reminds me of Rayan lol
11/21/2020 22:45Shawnda Draper
I neeeeed sooo much more!
11/21/2020 05:38Nancy
it’s nice that he massaged her pain away and tried to distract her. seems like he’s starting to care about her beyond physical attraction.
11/21/2020 03:28Kelly Rocio Romero Gutierrez
Waooo feel something big growing in between those 2... ❤️❤️
11/21/2020 00:16Alicia Flores
those two are so into each other 💕💕💕 I am glad Eden is letting her walls down but not that much Dante needs to work a little more for her trust but I know he will get it
11/20/2020 20:56jyomarie.
poor Eden. 😔. i cant imagine my life without my brothers. 💔
11/20/2020 18:49Spectral Beauty
Methinks “one night” isn’t going to last. I’ll bet Dante is going to want sleep with her every night so that he can help her and make sure she doesn’t become a “damn junkie” by turning to her pills 🤔
11/20/2020 17:23Anna Sota
at the begging game of story I couldn’t even imagine I would get so addicted to this title:-) now it is one of my favourite:-)
11/20/2020 17:10Shaynie
Ooooo, also poor E😕😍
11/20/2020 14:38Auras Laura
let's see what comes next for the 2 of them👏😁
11/20/2020 11:03Anne Embery
I love this story, it's so hard having to wait for each chapter to come out ☺🤪🤪😜😜
11/20/2020 08:17Mizz Meka
oh I have a feeling they have a past connection!
11/20/2020 03:53Aqua the Unicorn
this is getting better and better!! I really dig this one, Jenny good work :)
11/20/2020 02:15Lei Kela
Dante doesn't understand it yet but he is falling for Eden
11/20/2020 02:12Lei Kela
I have a feeling that this is only the start of their cuddle nights, more to come
11/20/2020 02:11Taina Iosefo
That was so sweet of Dante to help out with her pain and dream. Glad Eden is opening up more and more.
11/20/2020 01:02Zaida
I love the direction they're going 🥰 and props to him for finding a way to distract her without the pills
11/20/2020 00:51Beatriz Astorga Morales
Dante, so sweet. Maybe someday, both will realize what are feeling one to another 🙏🥰😘
11/19/2020 23:47Nicole
This is the first update I read on AnyStories!
11/19/2020 23:25Lally Devon
Eden starting to open up to Dante 😘❤️❤️❤️
11/19/2020 23:19Cristin Ronqvist
Amazing 👊❤️🤩😍
11/19/2020 23:14Mina Song
aww he’s sweet for her! I’m pretty sure they both fell in love at first sight, just that growing up in the world they did, love was probably something rare to feel or have now a days. I can’t wait for this book to be published! so going to buy a copy!
11/19/2020 22:58Drawkser
Please more 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼 i cannot get enough of this books is so good
11/19/2020 22:47Katie Factor
It's funny, but also sad, that neither one of them knows or understands what they're starting to feel for each other.
11/19/2020 22:38Winter Rose
This is easily becoming one of my favorite stories. Thank you for the update!
11/19/2020 21:57Alexandra Madalina
awww Dante is so sweet taking care of her like that ❤ they are falling for each other so hard and they don't even know it 🙈
11/19/2020 21:45Alicia Flores
Looks like tje Core ia getting ready for war or looking for some one 🤔
11/19/2020 19:05Shaynie
😍
11/19/2020 15:19Anthony
Ugh, I want more of Dante and Eden. Please Jenny!!! I believe they are definitely looking for someone, maybe Eden, possibly someone else. But it also seems like either the Core wants to destroy and kill everyone in the Suburbs or possibly they jus want power & control over everything. Could also be something we all are not expecting!!! Jenny do you know yet if there will be a sequel to this story, or will this be the only one or are you unsure at this time????
11/19/2020 12:46Cristin Ronqvist
Loved the chapter and cant wait for more Jenny 🙀😍🤩👊🕊️👑❤️
11/18/2020 22:23Beth Wiles
Hot, hot, hot with the promise of more...
11/18/2020 11:23