The Songbird's Love Comments

  • Reader-397104

    great update! not quite a cliffhanger but definitely got more questions waiting to be answered!

    07/21/2021 01:06

  • TheIdeliin

    I'd like to think that Pan isn't her dad but like a secret brother or something 😜

    07/21/2021 00:15

  • Gee Higgins

    pan has to be her dad unread msg for 20 years...be from her dad..pan

    07/20/2021 23:45

  • Penny A Foxie

    Great job Jenny. Again dying to see what happens!!!

    07/20/2021 22:43

  • Penny A Foxie

    80 ha ha Loir tapping into Dante’s money! Should have known! can’t wait to see what has been left for her. Hard to not think Pan is her father…

    07/20/2021 22:39

  • Ahlie

    i wonder what's the messages all about and the thing in the locker...

    07/20/2021 22:10

  • Winter Rose

    Unread message for 20 years. I wonder...

    07/20/2021 21:31

  • Reader-555364

    Loved It!!!! 😍😁

    07/20/2021 21:03

  • Raelynn Lamouche

    oh gosh!! I wish the updates were more frequent!! loving this story so much! thank you Jenny, your writing has been absolutely fantastic. All your stories definitely have been exciting to read!

    07/19/2021 21:25

  • SvS 🐝

    awwwww daddy is a hero 😍

    07/19/2021 06:41

  • Marija Marković

    I think that tree shaped vegetables is probably broccoli. Not sure for the red ones

    07/18/2021 09:29

  • Wcha

    love loir

    07/16/2021 23:55

  • Satrupa Mohapatra

    I am being more curious to know more about her father

    07/16/2021 18:56

  • Kelly Kearby Berger

    I can't wait to hear about her father!

    07/16/2021 04:16

  • Taina Iosefo

    she’s getting closer to knowing who her father was… yay!! hahaha

    07/16/2021 00:55

  • Kayla Elliott

    another perfect cliff hanger chapter!! I swear every single book of Jenny’s will always leave you wanting more! ❤️❤️

    07/15/2021 17:49

  • Big L

    how did Eden call her mom if she was killed by the Core?

    07/15/2021 11:28

  • Maria Patricia

    this amazing story has to be on the tops!

    07/15/2021 10:18

  • SuperWhoFly

    More! 😆 Not demanding, honest! It's just a really great story. I will wait as long as you need me to so you can get out a fabulous chapter. Thank you!

    07/15/2021 09:24

  • minime_29

    Oh I feel honored that Jenny used my name in one of her books. I love that Loir pick my name to name his new computer 😁

    07/15/2021 09:10

  • MReinanda

    Another piece of the puzzle

    07/15/2021 08:13

  • Katie Greco Cole

    this is so interesting! I never would have thought he was the contact. I can't wait for her to meet pan.

    07/15/2021 02:44

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Omg! So interesting!!! 👍👌☺️

    07/15/2021 00:59

  • Andreea Melinda Mirza

    I knew we were going to see him again but I really wasn't expecting him to be the contact 🙂

    07/14/2021 23:09

  • Ahlie

    can't wait for eden and pan to meet

    07/14/2021 22:22

  • Roseam

    I knew we'd be seeing him again.

    07/14/2021 22:13

  • Drawkser

    did not see that one coming lol

    07/14/2021 21:49

  • Ludmila Bacova

    one secret lifted, more questions coming! 😉

    07/14/2021 21:20

  • shanaaz shaz

    amazing xxx

    07/14/2021 20:20

  • Reader-397104

    great update! so the contact was someone I suspected! can’t wait for next chapter Jenny!

    07/14/2021 20:15

  • Pip Burch

    wow I can’t wait for the next update this book is awesome 😍

    07/14/2021 20:06

  • Reader-555364

    Loved IT!!!! 😍

    07/14/2021 19:41

  • Angela Wewege

    This is so exciting. I hope she get there quick.

    07/14/2021 16:56

  • Penny A Foxie

    can’t wait for the next update!

    07/13/2021 04:14

  • Adrian Michelle

    I haven’t been reading this book nonstop for about 3 days. I absolutely love the story. I just finished chapter 69 and a log of questions have been answered.

    07/13/2021 00:06

  • Yael Oman

    just finished chapter 45, something I dont understand - If her mom died all those years ago, who did she call at the beginning of the story? And it is mentioned several times she sold her legs for her mom and needed lots of money for her treatment - how if her mom was dead?

    07/12/2021 18:14

  • Wcha

    wow didn't expect the kiss or her to react that way

    07/12/2021 17:42

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    So amazing!!! Love this story!!! 🤟☺️🥰

    07/12/2021 13:09

  • MReinanda

    awesome

    07/12/2021 10:21

  • SuperWhoFly

    Awesome chapter, as usual. 😘 💜

    07/12/2021 10:15

  • Wahida Alidrus

    OMG! awsome story!!!! started reading and can't stop!

    07/12/2021 09:58

  • Katie Greco Cole

    awesome chapter! go Eden!

    07/12/2021 01:03

  • Philippa Rosemary

    another great chapter.

    07/11/2021 22:16

  • Soph Hugh

    love this book

    07/11/2021 20:25

  • Stephanie Woerner Cooper

    Edits: the Edge should be the Core.

    07/11/2021 14:57

  • Maria Patricia

    I'm so glad for the couple!

    07/11/2021 11:55

  • Zaida

    Holy crap we're in....

    07/10/2021 20:02

  • Soph Hugh

    exciting!!!

    07/10/2021 20:00

  • Satrupa Mohapatra

    ❤️ loved it.... thank you Jenny for this chapter

    07/10/2021 19:34

  • Ludmila Bacova

    taking in the fake perfection before continuing in battle

    07/10/2021 15:55

  • SvS 🐝

    You can do it Eden 💪🏻

    07/10/2021 11:14

  • Mina

    Love Dante’s reaction to Ghost ❤️

    07/10/2021 10:02

  • Roseam

    It must be surreal for her.

    07/10/2021 08:32

  • T.H.E. Miller.C

    still the best in here I have read this far! and the only one of three that keeps me coming back!

    07/10/2021 07:39

  • Christina Kay Maynard

    thank u

    07/10/2021 06:32

  • Sheetu Zutshi Bhat

    Amazing chapter.. loved it.. thank you Jenny 💕

    07/10/2021 05:40

  • Andreea Melinda Mirza

    I wonder who her contact is

    07/10/2021 05:27

  • HeatherP312

    it’s getting so good and I love the kitty kouple

    07/10/2021 01:36

  • Elite Knight

    wow damnnn this is so intense!!!!!

    07/10/2021 00:12

  • Drawkser

    I want so much more !!!

    07/09/2021 23:45

  • Reader-397104

    great update! can’t wait for next chapter! I wonder when Eden will meet Pan in person. and who is her safe house contact?

    07/09/2021 23:39

  • Okafor Umensofor Peace Chinma

    Arghhhhh!

    07/09/2021 23:36

  • caitmjoycm

    it’s getting so intense!!!

    07/09/2021 23:07

  • Ahlie

    ❣❣❣

    07/09/2021 22:52

  • Kat M

    Loir is hilarious and Edente (Eden and Dante) are perfect!

    07/09/2021 21:20

  • nemone van Der bliake

    love loir❤

    07/09/2021 21:17

  • Reader-555364

    Loved it!!

    07/09/2021 19:43

  • Lizard

    Love this story!! Thank you!

    07/09/2021 19:33

  • Elite Knight

    the fck... 😂😅😱 loir really should only change the fan positions.. i mean, let the core feels all that carbon dioxide n give the oxygens to their part

    07/09/2021 02:01

  • Satrupa Mohapatra

    Loir can be terrifying sometimes

    07/08/2021 20:52

  • Katarzyna Nowacka

    I think there are mistakes wirh using "The Edge" instead of "The Core". It pulls me out of immersion when I read rhat "The Edge built a wall" or "sent assasin drones". Other than that a great chapter, as always.

    07/08/2021 20:19

  • Psylocke

    I loved this chapter... nerve racking yet with light hearted humour at the same time! Loir is hilarious

    07/08/2021 19:04

  • Wcha

    she admitted she's a hacker

    07/08/2021 17:57

  • Ludmila Bacova

    the fun has started

    07/08/2021 17:42

  • Bonib2

    And Loir🤣🤣🤣

    07/08/2021 11:48

  • Bonib2

    I love the arguings

    07/08/2021 10:55

  • Ieva Igaune

    We just love Loir 🤪

    07/08/2021 06:50

  • Mamay Lagaga

    Jenny your really amazed me of your stories damn! after I read war God’s favorite I am hooked by all of your stories love it !!!

    07/08/2021 05:28

  • gemkeeper

    great, but there seems to be places where you say the Edge instead of the Core. very distracting...

    07/08/2021 04:53

  • Kelly Kearby Berger

    crazy genius!

    07/08/2021 02:40

  • Ahlie

    crazy loir! hahaha

    07/08/2021 01:44

  • Jacqueline Doss-Cola

    Gotta love Loir!

    07/08/2021 01:20

  • Gee Higgins

    love love love it Jenny

    07/08/2021 01:04

  • Taina Iosefo

    77 Loir is hilarious in this chapter. everyone not know what he’s gonna do. I can’t wait till Eden gets in and Loir is able to help her even more in there and work his magic. lol

    07/07/2021 23:23

  • Christina Kay Maynard

    I love it

    07/07/2021 23:06

  • Roseam

    Loir at his finest! Dominoes. 😂

    07/07/2021 22:45

  • Penny A Foxie

    77 Wall Loir!!! OMG I really hope his crazy genius doesn’t get them killed! 😂 Dante’s going to kill him later! 😂😂

    07/07/2021 22:24

  • Katie Factor

    Oh Loir! 😂 You're just so cute!

    07/07/2021 21:56

  • jen

    I am no longer here for Eden and Dante....I AM HERE FOR LOIR!!!😝

    07/07/2021 21:51

  • Drawkser

    love it!!

    07/07/2021 21:49

  • Zaida

    My heart was pounding reading this but the side conversations are freaking hilarious 😂😂😂

    07/07/2021 21:48

  • Anita Mara

    Loir is the best! Love his character 👏🏻👏🏻

    07/07/2021 21:45

  • Maureen Lawn

    Loir is fantastic. Hahahaha!

    07/07/2021 21:28

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Love Loir!!! He’s so crazy! 🤟🤟🤟

    07/07/2021 20:53

  • Reader-397104

    Wow Loir ! Crazy Genius! can’t wait for next chapter!

    07/07/2021 20:37

  • Catalina Borta

    77. I think in some places it's supposed to be "Core" instead of "Edge" (ex "the Edge might not notice", "deactivate the Edge's control on SINs")

    07/07/2021 20:32

  • Alicia Flores

    Loir is just crazy hahaha love him 😝

    07/07/2021 20:28

  • Marija Marković

    great story

    07/07/2021 20:03

  • Reader-555364

    Loir is insane! 😳🙈🤣

    07/07/2021 20:01

  • SvS 🐝

    Loir for president 😂

    07/07/2021 19:45
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