The Songbird's Love Comments

  • Lally Devon

    So interesting 🤔 and pretty 😍 clever 😘❤️❤️❤️

    12/13/2020 23:47

  • Cristin Ronqvist

    Amazing just amazing Jenny its lovly 🌹❤️🕊️

    12/13/2020 23:15

  • Roseam

    A map of the Core. The possibilities are endless now they have all this information. I wonder what the four zodiacs will be like during their meeting? Loir's reaction indicates his injuries probably come from one of the other zodiacs mentioned.

    12/13/2020 22:52

  • SvS 🐝

    loved the chapter 🍎

    12/13/2020 22:50

  • MReinanda

    So clever

    12/13/2020 22:28

  • Winter Rose

    Eden's Apple, that's clever

    12/13/2020 21:54

  • Robin

    And maybe Adam didn’t really die. Maybe it was supposed to look like he died but he is actually Pan and he went back in the Core. Maybe to help Eden 🤔 So many possibilities

    12/13/2020 21:42

  • Robin

    I still think Pan/Master is Edens father and the architect of the core system.

    12/13/2020 21:40

  • Alexandra Madalina

    whooo a map ! that'ssuper smart and will most deffinetly help them further ❤

    12/13/2020 20:56

  • jyomarie.

    i love peperoni pizza. Loir is so funny. I think Master is her father or uncle, but definetly is family.

    12/13/2020 03:00

  • Lally Devon

    having Peperoni pizza 🍕 waiting for the next update 😋😘❤️

    12/12/2020 03:23

  • Auras Laura

    🥰👏👏

    12/11/2020 18:28

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Omg! I think Dante is jealous!!! I hope Eden’s Master be his father and not a boyfriend or something like that 🥳🥳🥳 Loir is adorable!! 🥰🥰🥰

    12/10/2020 23:46

  • Cristin Ronqvist

    Another well done and amazing chapter Jenny 👍❤️🌹🕊️

    12/10/2020 23:28

  • Lisa

    is the master maybe going to cause a love triangle?

    12/10/2020 23:11

  • Roseam

    Pizzaland! 😂😂😂 Loir is hilarious as usual. I wonder what's in the star? Intrigued by the holographic mat area.

    12/10/2020 22:27

  • Nicole

    This story always makes me crave pizza.

    12/10/2020 21:53

  • Aneta Panteleeva

    Nine LotR movies!? I can't wait to see the rest lol

    12/10/2020 21:16

  • MReinanda

    Cannot get enough.

    12/10/2020 21:12

  • Rosana D

    never had a book let me feel the action like i was watching a movie like this one has...amazing skill, Jenny!👍🏻

    12/08/2020 22:26

  • Auras Laura

    mistery helper👏👏👏

    12/08/2020 21:12

  • Ieva Igaune

    Her brother?? She does not know how the Master looks like. It has to be her brother....

    12/08/2020 19:57

  • Cristin Ronqvist

    Omg WOW what an intens chapter just wants more im so in love Whit what ever you give us to read Jenny, you are amazing 🥰❤️🌹🕊️

    12/08/2020 18:27

  • Kylee

    pepperoni hoe!!!!

    12/08/2020 13:57

  • NINJA

    Loving it ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    12/08/2020 09:03

  • Lizelle Nel

    Pan?

    12/08/2020 07:26

  • Taina Iosefo

    Oh man.... was that her master at the ending? I can’t wait for the next chapter!!

    12/08/2020 06:57

  • Twila Carter

    was that her master??? I wonder 🤔🤨

    12/08/2020 05:42

  • Lally Devon

    omg 😱 I almost 😅 feel off the chair yelling run 🏃‍♀️ kitty run this is so exciting Jenny 🦊 😘❤️❤️❤️

    12/08/2020 04:27

  • Lei Kela

    who was that? I'm dying to know.🤩 Jenny Fox you're so good at leaving us with cliffhangers.

    12/08/2020 01:55

  • Vidi

    very exciting dive! Ms Fox really knows how to get us all captivated 🤩

    12/08/2020 01:33

  • Mina Song

    omgggg I freaking love Loir 😂😂😂 Peperoni hoe 💀💀😂 I can’t with him. but ugh, that few sentences!! just who is that?! Her master or her brother who might still be alive?! or maybe someone who knows her from the core?!

    12/08/2020 01:21

  • Vesna Matić

    Every time I think a book by Jenny Fox can't get any better, I'm proved wrong with the next chapter.

    12/08/2020 01:20

  • Madeeha naaz

    I was very skeptical reading this book...but once I started it I am HOOKED!

    12/08/2020 01:19

  • PramG

    OMG! so exciting!!! Who was it? Her master or her brother???

    12/08/2020 00:42

  • Jessica

    so glad that dive is over I was so nervous for Eden

    12/08/2020 00:30

  • Katie Factor

    Peter Pan!!!!!!

    12/08/2020 00:18

  • Zaida

    Oh shoot is her Master back? Was he stuck inside the core??

    12/07/2020 23:49

  • Ayie AieSyah

    omggggg its pan rightttt!????!!!!

    12/07/2020 23:27

  • Roseam

    Teamwork! So was that her illusive master? Pepperoni hoe, Loir cracks me up! 😂😂😂

    12/07/2020 23:17

  • Anna Sota

    omg, I am out of breath, this tens room and speed:-)

    12/07/2020 22:47

  • Stephanie

    Is it Alex? Or Pan? I think it's Alex!

    12/07/2020 22:25

  • Winter Rose

    Oh how exciting. Can't wait until the next one

    12/07/2020 22:01

  • Nancy

    must be her master

    12/07/2020 21:57

  • Lisa

    is that pan????

    12/07/2020 21:55

  • Alicia Rodriguez

    omg! this was so stressful. dante needs to scratch that kitty lol

    12/07/2020 21:50

  • MReinanda

    Pretty sure that was her master. I was afraid for a few seconds that the book was taking a turn and the core would capture her.

    12/07/2020 21:49

  • Tara Holland

    yay!!!! crazy Loir did it again!! loved this chapter so intense and thrilling

    12/07/2020 21:47

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Oh! who was that??? Her Master??? Her Brother??? Who???!!! 😅😅😅

    12/07/2020 21:33

  • SvS 🐝

    I loved the chapter! 😍

    12/07/2020 21:10

  • Lattechia Powell-Minto

    Good job Jenny another awesone chapter you are so brilliant you can write any type of stories your characters for each story is so interesting only the best writer are able to write so many diffrent story and stay on top From HBMP to Flowers short stories you display to be the best on any plateform Love your works Jenny keep on writing

    12/07/2020 00:25

  • Taina Iosefo

    hahaha Loir cracks me up... lol let’s get Eden out safely.

    12/06/2020 13:15

  • Beth Wiles

    wow, now that’s a scary ride

    12/05/2020 18:49

  • Lally Devon

    Loir omg 😱 he’s insanely brilliant and Eden was amazing 🤩 😘❤️❤️❤️

    12/05/2020 12:15

  • Doina Nikita

    no words to describe my feelings!!! it is way beyond amazing, engaging, fun... ahhh! I want more😉

    12/05/2020 03:45

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    Love Loir! He’s so funny and brilliant!!! 🤣🥰😉

    12/05/2020 02:30

  • Zaida

    What tiger can fly Loir?!?!?! 😂

    12/05/2020 02:08

  • Robin

    Loir is completely insane, but brilliant

    12/05/2020 00:43

  • Ayie AieSyah

    hahahaha lolllll this is sooo scaryyyy hahahahah i bet i will have trauma to go to the amusement park if i was eden lol

    12/05/2020 00:41

  • rosie

    another great chapter ☺️🙌🏽

    12/05/2020 00:37

  • Winter Rose

    Loir, you crazy wonderful bastard

    12/05/2020 00:14

  • Roseam

    Love Loir's creepy laugh! OMG scary clowns, mindless bots and flying pink striped cars. ❤😂🐯

    12/04/2020 23:47

  • SvS 🐝

    can’t wait for Eden to be reunited with the big kitty ;)

    12/04/2020 23:29

  • Cristin Ronqvist

    Lol 😳😂😂😂😝 i LOVE LORI 😂🥰💪❤️ That face eat crazy guy i love it Jenny so mutch fun and laughing that tears streaming 😂 cant wait for more chapters 😍❤️🕊️

    12/04/2020 22:49

  • NINJA

    Loir is crazzzzzzyyyyy 🤣🤣🤣🤣

    12/04/2020 22:10

  • Luna_Lothal

    Loir is quickly becoming my favorite character after Eden of course. Loving this story!

    12/04/2020 21:56

  • MReinanda

    Wondering how she feels after this dive

    12/04/2020 21:40

  • Ludmila Bacova

    Good to read some explanation about the diving. Now let's run from the bots!

    12/04/2020 21:37

  • Cristin Ronqvist

    Amazing work as always Jenny, thank you SO mutch for al your Hard and Great work ❤️🕊️👑

    12/04/2020 17:50

  • Taina Iosefo

    Oh no I hope Eden gets out. And Dante better give her a break or thank her for going in. Also I hope she figures out what the star looking thing is.

    12/04/2020 15:10

  • Alicia Rodriguez

    i really am enjoying this book. it reminds me of thr Matrix

    12/03/2020 22:45

  • Lally Devon

    omg 😱 I hope Eden comes out of it run 🏃‍♀️ kitty run 🏃‍♀️ 🤣❤️❤️❤️

    12/03/2020 19:43

  • Lally Devon

    So interesting 😘❤️❤️❤️

    12/03/2020 19:29

  • Reader-939012

    so good!

    12/03/2020 14:25

  • Jessica

    yes run kitty run! 😻

    12/03/2020 04:38

  • Izzy_143

    Great chapter, can’t wait for more!!!

    12/03/2020 04:26

  • Winter Rose

    Wow this is so good!

    12/03/2020 03:18

  • rosie

    😱😱😱😱

    12/03/2020 02:58

  • Mina Song

    what if her master is leaving clues for Eden to pick up? hopefully we get more info on him!

    12/03/2020 02:09

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    This thrill is killing me!!! 😱😱😱 I also think that the Architect would be her father or he’s one of the team in charge of the Core’s creation. I also think that her brother is alive 😅😅😅 I’m just eager to know more about this amazing story!!! 👍👍👍

    12/03/2020 00:39

  • NINJA

    this really puts me on the edge! I actually want to run too!!!

    12/03/2020 00:03

  • Edina Owens

    omgggg I'm dyinggggg the thrill is killing meeee😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

    12/02/2020 23:55

  • Alicia Flores

    I think her master Pan is the architect and maybe also her father... she mention she never knew her father... but for now Run Kitty Ruuuuun 😱

    12/02/2020 23:20

  • Zaida

    Run Eden!!!

    12/02/2020 22:51

  • SvS 🐝

    run, kitty, run 🥰

    12/02/2020 22:45

  • Auras Laura

    more please👏😊

    12/02/2020 22:25

  • MReinanda

    I'm on the edge of my seat once again

    12/02/2020 21:59

  • Anna Sota

    Peter pan? why i have the feeling that he was one of the architects of the core system m?

    12/02/2020 21:59

  • Spectral Beauty

    Love this book! ugh!

    12/02/2020 21:52

  • Reader-555364

    loved it! so exciting!! 😁😁😁❤️

    12/02/2020 21:35

  • PramG

    OMG! I hope Eden get out. Such an exciting chapter! Can’t wait for the next update!

    12/02/2020 21:08

  • Lally Devon

    Edens mentor and her brother I can’t wait to find out more about them love 💕 ya Jenny 🦊

    12/02/2020 07:03

  • Alicia Flores

    I hope Loir is Eden's brother it would make sense why her Master guided her to him and the gun shot could have left him paralised from the waist down and also the torture scars maybe from when they took him 😱😱😱 if that is so I wonder if he remembers Eden... to many if's hahaha I just love these story

    11/30/2020 16:30

  • Alicia Flores

    I love how Dante always keeps his cool and Loir is so crazy and funny... I wonder why after all these time Eden found sometging from her Master that is not a coincidence... can't wait for next chapter I do hope they can get there hands on one of those scaner drones

    11/30/2020 16:07

  • Anne Embery

    Love this chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

    11/30/2020 12:00

  • Alexandra Madalina

    loveeed it and the fact that Dante helped Eden in there was just ❤

    11/30/2020 09:53

  • SvS 🐝

    hahaha I just love Loir 😂 so sassy

    11/30/2020 08:07

  • Beatriz Astorga Morales

    I need to read more and more!!! 🙏🙏🙏 It’s great! Dante is so sweet!!! 🥰🥰🥰

    11/30/2020 05:35

  • Edie Gyorki

    enjoying this story. wishing there was more interaction with Dante

    11/30/2020 04:52

  • Mizz Meka

    Dante guiding her and she trusted him!

    11/30/2020 03:53
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