The Songbird's Love Comments
Geraldine de Leon
OH SHITT! OH MY GOSH!😱
09/04/2023 08:02Patsy Leyva
wait wait wait. but I thought Adam was her brother?? isn't that incest?? or did she just call him her brother.
09/04/2023 08:02Katie Factor
Oh Loir, you crack me up! 😂 And I love Eden and Dante together 😍😍😍 They are so imperfectly perfect together!
09/04/2023 08:02And she is the owner of the Edge?
09/04/2023 08:02Miriam TG
I know the story is going through a kind of reboot, but I was loving it so much that I check daily to see if there is any update 😅, so I have read the intro like 7 times already! Can't wait to read again about Eden, Dante, Loir, and see the changes Jenny is working in.
09/04/2023 08:02Karine Provencher
😂 the way he kills Rose... shut up bang 😂
09/04/2023 08:02Psylocke
at first I thought no don’t tell him all your secrets, keep something to yourself... but then, as sad as it was for her to learn this I’m glad he told her.
09/04/2023 08:02Kelly Kearby
well didn't see that coming.
09/04/2023 08:02Taina Iosefo
It’s so crazy how things happen and it’s life. Please be patient and kind with Jenny redoing the story. Me, being a minority, I didn’t think anything was offensive or hurtful. I was just enjoying the book. As much as people like to tear down others, I think and believe if you don’t like it don’t read it. But with Jenny being an amazing author and person, she takes what people write into consideration, however it is to a point. We are all humans, so please be kind to any author because they work so hard to bring us stories for us to read. Have a great day everyone!!
09/04/2023 08:02Katie Factor
Dang... poor Eden. She just can't catch a break can she. Dante, give her all the love she needs and deserves!
09/04/2023 08:02Alicia Flores
chuky and godzilla mix hahaja Loir you crack me up 😂😂😂😂😂 Also so impress for Eden real look 😱😱😱 I wonder if Dante has seen her like that wen she was almost death 🤔🤔🤔 not that he is going to care that much I think 🤔
09/04/2023 08:02Satrupa Mohapatra
❤️❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:02Roseam
Dante's being sweet again, gotta love him. The Core is going down! Eden has spoken.
09/04/2023 08:02still the best in here I have read this far! and the only one of three that keeps me coming back!
09/04/2023 08:02SvS 🐝
Great work Eden! totally avoided the L word 😂😂
09/04/2023 08:02Beatriz Astorga Morales
So impressed!!! 😱😱😱 Can’t wait for Dante to get Eden! 🥰🥰🥰 Loir is just so adorable!!!
09/04/2023 08:01yesss i love the 2 of them ❤️
09/04/2023 08:01Reader-891000
I love this story!!! great job Jenny
09/04/2023 08:01Ahlie
who is C and hope eden and the girls will be alright... that's scary
09/04/2023 08:01Lei Kela
that non- animatronic is not accounted for. 🥺😲 I'm getting worried if their plan will succeed. I wonder who is "C" exactly. she looks suspicious 🤔
09/04/2023 08:01LittleGoldie
great story, HORRIBLE editing.
09/04/2023 08:01Katie Greco Cole
loving this story. your such a good writer. I love all the twists and turns always keeping us on our toes. can't wait for the next update! have a nice break.
09/04/2023 08:01Reader-397104
wow another great twist love your writing Jenny!
09/04/2023 08:01oh snaps! lmao I was smiling to myself like an idiot about jack’s situation. I hope he’ll be alright!
09/04/2023 08:01Alicia Rodriguez
this has been one of my fav Jenny’s stories. I love Dante
09/04/2023 08:01rosie
I’m here for jealous Dante 😍 lol and of course loir cracking me up as always 😂
09/04/2023 08:01Auras Laura
just love the story👏🥰
09/04/2023 08:01Maika Pertille
ohhh really? such an episode and cliff hanger there, love it!!!
09/04/2023 08:01Reader-575963
I absolutely love this book can’t wait for it to be back Jenny! Eden and Dante are my favs ❤️
09/04/2023 08:01Reader-397104
great chapter Jenny! can’t wait for the meeting
09/04/2023 08:01I wonder why Dante is so drawn to Eden. I feel like there is more to this. Also thank you for the tasteful make out/sex scenes
09/04/2023 08:01Carrie Jurgens
just loved it! every time I read a new story I say this ones my favorite love story! But then I think back on the others and realize that Jenny Fox is just that good a writer!
09/04/2023 08:01Alicia Flores
😮😮😮😮 this is intense.... I hope that information doesn't change the love they have for each other but make it stronger... happy to know they are not really related 🤔🤔🤔
09/04/2023 08:01Reader-986715
freaking Loir 🤣🤣
09/04/2023 08:01Cristin Ronqvist
Oh hoo dame what a chapter wow i so love it Jenny its amazing work and well wrighting as always 👍❤️🕊️
09/04/2023 08:01Beatriz Astorga Morales
Seriously, dear JENNY, I love ALL your stories!!! 🙏🙏🙏
09/04/2023 08:01shanaaz shaz
amazing
09/04/2023 08:01loir is the best 😂
09/04/2023 08:01Deanna Smith
Great story, I don't usually like 'Future' or 'Mafia books but this one is good Thankyou Jenny ❣❣❣
09/04/2023 08:01Maria Chi
holy moly !!! so good 😊 I can’t wait for the next chapter, nail bitter.
09/04/2023 08:01Hollstar
Loir is hilarious! 😂 I love how Dante and Eden are getting closer too! ❤️❤️❤️
09/04/2023 08:01Reader-555364
Very, very good 😁👍👍👍 This is going to be sooooo awesome!
09/04/2023 08:01Maria Rotir
I don't understand the fuss. I get that there are mayor issues in the world concerning racism, but this is just riddiculous. It's a story. And if all the Zodiacs are named after animals, why are you getting offended?! I don't know if you are aware, but gorillas are amazing, strong, smart, beautiful and powerful animals, yet you are offended that a mafia boss calls himself The Gorilla. It's as if there was an uproar because of M'Baku from Black Panther.
09/04/2023 08:00Taina Iosefo
oh man... cliffhanger.. hahaha can’t wait for the next update!!
09/04/2023 08:00Maria Patricia
I'm so glad for the couple!
09/04/2023 08:00OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 08:00Taina Iosefo
They should start planning what yo do about the Core. Love how Eden and Dante are with each other.
09/04/2023 08:00Bonib2
I love the arguings
09/04/2023 08:00Makes sense the Architect’s daughter would lead the new army of hackers, The Edge 2.0. 👍🏽 He was responsible for the last assembly. I am hoping once the Zodiac meeting/plan is concluded, Eden has an opportunity to get more background from Pan in private. He made a promise to keep her safe, to who? ...and his similar looks, could he be related somehow? And why does “A” and the Dragon seem to know more about her past then she does? “A” can’t be her dead brother. Nope! why would he leave her to survive alone? He’s a Zodiac and hacker too. This story just keeps getting better though.
09/04/2023 08:00Cristin Ronqvist
Boom yes lori 😂👊 awsome 🙏❤️
09/04/2023 08:00Psylocke
I love love love these two 😍
09/04/2023 08:00Gotta love Loir!
09/04/2023 08:00Reader-875591
OMG so good 😍
09/04/2023 08:00Beatriz Astorga Morales
I’m so nervous!!! 😱😱😱
09/04/2023 08:00Gosh I hope Dante didn’t know... and I am scared that she is going to react badly about it and distance herself from him please dont let that happen 🙏🏻🥺❤️
09/04/2023 08:00Alicia Flores
Dante is her sage place 💖💖💖 that is so sweet😊 yes Eden you truly are on Love with the Tiger and he loves you back 😍😍😍
09/04/2023 08:00Beatriz Astorga Morales
Omg! So interesting!!! 👍👌☺️
09/04/2023 08:00Marija Marković
it's so stupid issue, I just can't believe it. I can't believe that people can find problem in anything! it's good story, without anything that cnn be such a issue. some people just imagine things even where theh don't exist. so sorry that you have to deal with this.
09/04/2023 08:00Psylocke
more...more...I need more!!!!
09/04/2023 08:00PoisonedPix
omg I can breathe!
09/04/2023 07:59Ieva Igaune
Hm... 🤔
09/04/2023 07:59Lattechia Powell-Minto
I think Eden lie about her mom being dead previous chapter state she is alive not to mention that she also sold her legs and become apart to help her mom with her sickness im not a hundred percent sure but her mom is alive
09/04/2023 07:59I can only imagine having all that news being told to Eden was like a hard painful slap to the face and with it, came a new fire to fuel her. another war and hopefully one that will crush the core and unite all the people into one again.
09/04/2023 07:59PoisonedPix
gawd I want the core’s end too.
09/04/2023 07:59shanaaz shaz
❤❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 07:59bet she didn't see that coming!
09/04/2023 07:59Christina Nevarez
OMG!!! great work Jenny, loving ebery update, I am at the edge of my seat waiting for more!!!
09/04/2023 07:59Pey Phang
omg cliffhanger.. so good Jenny thanks for the update hope u had an amazing break
09/04/2023 07:59Est7711
I'm glad to read this story again, even from the beginning again. I just don't get it. This is a fiction story and amazing too, I think this story isn't racist and hello it's just fiction. If don't like it, just don't read it. But Thank you Jenny for up date this story. keep up writting a great and amazing story😍❤❤
09/04/2023 07:59Tessa Koekkoek
yesss some Dante Eden action
09/04/2023 07:59Jessica
I love a jealous Eden lol
09/04/2023 07:59Stephanie
Just when I couldn't love him anymore, he goes and does that! 😂
09/04/2023 07:59jen
😲😲😲
09/04/2023 07:59Ahlie
can't wait for PAN and Eden to meet in person
09/04/2023 07:59hpearce15
So excited it’s back!!! Can’t wait to read it again!!! Love this story 💕
09/04/2023 07:59cool bro
May be those people feel jealousy of ur craze , writings, fame so they r making trouble to u no matter what happens Jenny we will always with you.......
09/04/2023 07:58Christina Nevarez
so in love with this story! and all pf the characters!!! specially Beer and Bullet 😍
09/04/2023 07:58rosie
oh no! 🤭
09/04/2023 07:58totally read your comment and totally agree about spoilers… this is. great story and for once even if I could I would mot want to skip to the end:)
09/04/2023 07:58Sof1235 Djgyj
What the what to the what?!?!?! WHATTTTT?!?!?! LOVE IT
09/04/2023 07:58linda
Used to the dragons, werewolves and vampires but this was so new, in the beginning I didn't think I would get hocked the same way as to your other books, shame on me, it's like 3am and I need more! 😂😱🙈❤❤❤
09/04/2023 07:58Robin
Where did Circe go? She knows to much to leave
09/04/2023 07:58Reader-555364
Loved it!
09/04/2023 07:58Maria Rotir
I really wish for a chapter with pov. from Dante. Only to better understand his motives. I love him the way he is (tall, dark, mysterious), but I would like to know more about what is going on in his head.
09/04/2023 07:58nemone van Der bliake
poor Eden, that's so 😥 sad
09/04/2023 07:58Patricia Hooda
can not wait for next chapter!!! You did it again Jenny!
09/04/2023 07:58Reader-555364
Pooe Eden 😢
09/04/2023 07:58oh... can't wait to find out what happens next! This story is amazing!
09/04/2023 07:58shanaaz shaz
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
09/04/2023 07:58Edina Owens
hahahahha dante seems better in pissing off eden nowadays 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 i love them!!! n i love jenny the most! ♥️
09/04/2023 07:58PoisonedPix
lol I can kill him after. so epic
09/04/2023 07:58SuperWhoFly
Chapter 15: Awesome! Love hearing about the history of The Core!
09/04/2023 07:58Sanah Soliman Lestat Hym
ohmygod! Eden finally meeting Pan!!
09/04/2023 07:57Me encanta esta historia!! por favor Jenny sigue escribiendo 😢😢
09/04/2023 07:57Taina Iosefo
Oh man... Dante’s really gonna be having fun pissing Eden off with Rose being there and willing to give Dante what he wants. But I know he won’t let her cause he really likes (maybe loves) Eden.
09/04/2023 07:57Reader-397104
watch out Loir kitty might sic C on you lol😅😂🤣
09/04/2023 07:57Gabzzz Rodzzz
Hope Circe turns to be useful. Glad Dante gave Eden a proper welcome
09/04/2023 07:57Alicia Flores
Interesting Loir part of the Edge... I wonder how is Dante going to make Eden not mad at him any more, is going to be hard with her being jelous of Rose
09/04/2023 07:57Psylocke
the plot thickens!
09/04/2023 07:57Sheetu Zutshi Bhat
Loved it 💕
09/04/2023 07:57