The Songbird's Love Comments
Lisa
I am in love with this story,I am so gutted it does not get more recognition. it certainly deserves it. it is new and fresh and so unique, I am so over the usual stories on here....
02/04/2021 12:25Pey Phang
ππ that was so good Jenny
02/04/2021 11:02Cristin Ronqvist
Oh hoo dame what a chapter wow i so love it Jenny its amazing work and well wrighting as always πβ€οΈποΈ
02/04/2021 09:43Auras Laura
well done Jennyπππ
02/04/2021 07:15Taina Iosefo
Why canβt Eden just open up her feelings towards Dante. Canβt wait for the next update!! woot woot
02/04/2021 05:49Psylocke
I think Dante was trying to make Eden jealous which worked I might add, only for that to backfire on him lol. A jealous Eden going into another zodiacs liar to lure them ... look out!
02/04/2021 05:06Psylocke
more...more...I need more!!!!
02/04/2021 05:03Winter Rose
So good! I love Eden's attitude towards Dante
02/04/2021 04:59Beth Wiles
OMG it just keeps getting steamier and steamier
02/04/2021 02:39Sheetu Zutshi Bhat
Loved it π
02/04/2021 02:08Edie Gyorki
Jenny, I have no interest in fighting scenes or the "dive" world of your books, HOWEVER, I still LOVE your books. Your writing is beautiful, conversations between characters witty and real and the internal dialogue brilliant. You are so talented. I wait daily for your updates and love the worlds, situations and characters you create. they have depth and soul. And sometimes as a bonus manhood sex life. π
02/04/2021 01:14Edina Owens
hahahaha thats so cute lol
02/04/2021 01:00rosie
ππππ this book is giving me life
02/04/2021 00:59MReinanda
Jack is amazing
02/04/2021 00:02PG25
Dante is SO in love with Eden π Eden is too but she just canβt admit it. Actions speak louder than words! And Rose, eurgh - have come across many girls like her in real life. Dante needs to put her in her place!
02/03/2021 23:34Roseam
Dante being all tender and swee, awww.... Rose doesn't know when to leave well enough alone. Jack dressed up as a geisha, hahaha, and into Rolf. Loir being his usual crazy self. Can't wait to see how it all goes down.
02/03/2021 23:07PramG
Seriously Dante want to make Eden jealous??? Well, guess he got it, she is now jealous enough to go in a different car...π¬
02/03/2021 22:42Beatriz Astorga Morales
Omg! Eden is so jealous... But sheβs also childish because Dante is giving in her and she doesnβt want to... π€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈ I hope both of them can have a better relationship π₯°π₯°π₯° And really work together πππ
02/03/2021 22:33Lei Kela
is Dante intentionally making Eden jealous with Rose? He could've ignored Rose or not be too close to her or reject Rose's flirting. hey Rose, go flirt with other mafioso and leave Dante alone
02/03/2021 22:24Lei Kela
uh-oh looks like Eden is jealous
02/03/2021 22:21Drawkser
I want another chapter πππ how I wish that the book was finished so I could devour it in a single day
02/03/2021 22:08Reader-497949
So exciting π€©ππ»
02/03/2021 21:36Heather B.P.
ugh I hate Rose flirting with the Tiger! so rude ! get your own guy Rose
02/03/2021 21:16Maria Patricia
ohhhhhhhh so funny! they jealous each other ao much! I'm loving it! poor George... he may also wanted Rose to ride the same car!
02/03/2021 21:00Alicia Flores
Eden is so jelouse hahahah but I think Dante is not in to Rose at all π€
02/03/2021 20:58Satrupa Mohapatra
πππI can imagine poor Tiger's condition ...
02/03/2021 20:54Louise Van Berghen
This is getting better and better! π₯° more pleeeeease ππ
02/03/2021 20:37Cristin Ronqvist
π³ππππOMFG this is hillerius and amazing just amazing Jenny β€οΈποΈ
01/30/2021 21:33Maria Patricia
I'm so excited with this story β€οΈ it's amazing!
01/30/2021 20:15Allison Elizabeth Patel
Jenny this book is amazing and I can't believe your not charging for it. I will glad pay for all your work! look forward to this one coming out to hard back as well.look forward to the next update. thank you again jenny!
01/30/2021 13:27Winter Rose
Uh oh, Dante doesn't like to share
01/30/2021 04:16Drawkser
so good π I canβt get enough of this book
01/29/2021 22:17Psylocke
You just never know whatβs gonna come out of Loirs mouth! Girl Scout Cookies π―ββοΈπππ This is gonna be so good! I love a jealous possessive Dante π. And I think Eden lied about her mum being dead - still protecting her.
01/29/2021 19:51Beatriz Astorga Morales
And... Of course I enjoy a jealous Eden towards Rose as she βmeawsβ on Dante!!! π π π π€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺ
01/29/2021 18:38Beatriz Astorga Morales
Well, as Iβm intrigued about Edenβs βdeadβ mother I was rereading chapter 14 and Dante in fact investigated about her, he knows about her! So I think that if sheβs Edenβs mother perhaps Eden tells about her as βkilled by the Coreβ because she is mentally sick, with no memories π€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈ or she is an adoptive mother to Eden π€π€π€
01/29/2021 18:35Taina Iosefo
Oh man... Eden is just as crazy if not worse than Loir... thatβs saying a lot. ππ But Dante doesnβt seem too happy about it. His smile went to anger or frustration. I canβt wait ... whenβs the next update.
01/29/2021 14:14Auras Laura
love itπππ
01/29/2021 08:44Roseam
Girl Scout cookies. πππ I think the girls will make excellent bait! Dante isn't happy!
01/29/2021 08:35Madeeha naaz
Indeed a crazy idea but if anyone can pull it off it would be Eden just like no other author i know could have done justice to such a futuristic story as you have Jenny Fox . Bravo π
01/29/2021 05:35Alicia Flores
Rose telling Eden to better mark her territory hahaha Dante got Eden written all over him π π π besides he's a flirt but doesn't care for any one other than Eden since the moment he laid eyes on her πππ
01/29/2021 02:55MReinanda
Dante cares for her, maybe more then he wants to admit
01/29/2021 02:27MReinanda
huh I'm a bit confused. I thought her mom was still alive in a carehome having some sort of dementia.
01/29/2021 02:15Edina Owens
damnnn she n rose going to be the bait??!!! π±π±π±π±π±
01/29/2021 01:03rosie
Iβm here for jealous Dante π lol and of course loir cracking me up as always π
01/29/2021 00:49Nikolina Nebrigic
Can't wait to see a possessive Tigerππ
01/28/2021 23:51Zaida
Ooooh a jealous Dante will be a sight to see for sure!
01/28/2021 23:03Beatriz Astorga Morales
So funny! Except for Dante who lost his smile as soon as he realized what Eden is planning π π π I was rereading chapter 3, Iβm sure Loir is the one who helped Dante to get Eden, or better said The Ghost... π€π€π€ Heβs crazy but not an idiot... π€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈ
01/28/2021 22:48Mina Song
I bursted out laughing when jack proposed that Loir should go on with his idea and bam, about selling cookies and jack is like πΆ ππππ but I canβt wait for the next chapter!
01/28/2021 22:33Reader-555364
Am rubbing hands together with glee at this plan! πππ
01/28/2021 21:39Alicia Flores
Oooooo Dante really doesn't like the idea of Eden going inside to hack the system he can't protect her there.
01/28/2021 21:27Lally Devon
π€£ Loir cracks me up he is hilarious π ππ
01/28/2021 21:02Maria Patricia
I can't stop laughing with Loir! I'm the only one finding him so funny, cute, crazy and adorable?
01/28/2021 11:35Lattechia Powell-Minto
I think Eden lie about her mom being dead previous chapter state she is alive not to mention that she also sold her legs and become apart to help her mom with her sickness im not a hundred percent sure but her mom is alive
01/27/2021 23:50Winter Rose
I still think Pan is her father, he just didn't want her to know. But something happened two years ago when he disappeared, when supposedly the Architect disappeared, too. But now I'm curious about her mother. Was she brought back to life by Eden, but she has to pay to restore her back to normal?
01/27/2021 17:29Di-Kay
I thought her mother was still alive but with some mental health issue, and that's why Eden was working so hard to pay for her Mother's care!!! How many Mothers does Eden have?
01/27/2021 13:56Taina Iosefo
I wonder if the architect and PAN is one in the same, her father?? π€ I love that Eden is opening up more to Dante and how respectful he is with Eden. I mean they have their moments but he has figured out more about her than anyone else has. I so wanna know what her plan is.. yay!
01/27/2021 12:01Lally Devon
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01/27/2021 05:25rosie
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01/27/2021 03:40Roseam
So what is Eden's bloodless takeover plan? I'm intrigued. I'm also confused like everyone else about her mother. Not surprised the architect was her father. Who really is Pan?
01/27/2021 02:18Mina Song
damn! I mean it adds up with the arch being her real father and Eden wanting to forget that part since sheβs somewhat being hunted or would be if the word spread. but Iβm so long this book!
01/27/2021 01:34Reader-939012
the mother story is really bothering me - who was the woman she was talking to as her mother earlier than if she was shot and killed on the spot? so confused.
01/26/2021 23:33Cristin Ronqvist
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01/26/2021 23:32PoisonedPix
wait... her mother got shot or killed? omg did she get tortured thatβs why sheβs in an facility?
01/26/2021 22:40Beatriz Astorga Morales
Dante, oh! what a man... now with blue eyes... I really think he cares about Eden and not only is using her to achieve his goals... π₯°π₯°π₯°
01/26/2021 22:33Beatriz Astorga Morales
Iβm a little bit confused. If I understood well, I thought her mother was sick, so if that woman is really her mother perhaps the Core made her to get mad, or she is another woman who rose Eden π€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈ I think that The Architect and Pan are the same man if her father pretended his own death. I also think the Zodiac A could be her brother and because of the shooting he didnβt remember anything π€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈπ€·π»ββοΈ
01/26/2021 22:31Alicia Flores
wasn't her mom on a hospital with memory loss? and why she nevwr mentions her brother when she tells thestory of her running away? are they people who took care of her back then and that is why she loves them like family? Also I think Dante is super handsome with any eye color he chooses πππ
01/26/2021 21:52Reader-555364
Loving it all!! π
01/26/2021 20:58Faai-iezah Baradien Adams
wait...how is her mother dead? eatler chapters suggests she was alive
01/26/2021 20:36Maria Patricia
I love it , love it, love it! did mention that I loooooovvveeee it?
01/26/2021 16:08Lizelle Nel
Could the Architect be Eden previous master? I assume se is about 20 years or more
01/25/2021 07:22Winter Rose
So did the Architect disappear 2 years ago, when Edge was arrested, or 10 years ago, roughly when Eden escaped? π€
01/23/2021 05:05Satrupa Mohapatra
o God Loir and his antics πππππππ
01/22/2021 21:09Auras Laura
naughty boy π€£
01/22/2021 12:59Roseam
Loir is so naughty and unrepentant. Sounds like he got the Edge arrested. I'm thinking Pan is the architect, possibly Eden's father as well.
01/22/2021 08:52Cristin Ronqvist
Omg amazing just splendingπ€£β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
01/22/2021 08:39Trisha R
Hmm wonder if it's Pan or Edens father
01/22/2021 06:02Izzy_143
Wait, so does that mean Lori was the one who got them caught because he informed his βfriendβ the president? He said they got caught right away and beforehand he asked his βfriendβ for a nice place to stay. If so, no wonder the edge is mad at him π. Loving the story, great work author!!! ππΌππΌ
01/22/2021 02:54rosie
lmfao oh loir π€£
01/22/2021 01:45Edina Owens
hahahahhahaahha this chapter is so chaotic πππππππππππππ eden is the boss here guyssss kitty interrogating in the place of big kitty..! ππππππππ gosh loir is just too unique ππ
01/22/2021 01:24NINJA
This is great! So detailed and so many good characters π
01/21/2021 23:49monteange
is the architect eden's absent father. she had to leave at a young age from the core with no warning. maybe he is Pan too which is why he is so good and taught Eden everything. fang too many theories in my head now.
01/21/2021 22:14Zaida
I feel like Master is the architect and it's only his subconscious or an AI version or something of him that's floating around in the core lol
01/21/2021 22:08Sandra HO
this book is so good. i wish we ciild comment on each chapter. it would avoid the spoilers for people that aren't up to date
01/21/2021 22:04Beatriz Astorga Morales
π€£π€£π€£ blonde twins!!! LOIR is an incredible and crazy character!!! Love this story!!! πππ
01/21/2021 21:58Auras Laura
just perfectππππ
01/19/2021 22:47Cristin Ronqvist
LORI is one of a kinde π€£ great chapter πβ€οΈ
01/19/2021 20:32PG25
Loir π
01/19/2021 17:42Sandra HO
this book gets better by the chapter. I NEED MORE!!! π€£
01/19/2021 17:41Lillianne Huntley
Loir! Loir!! Loir!!!
01/19/2021 11:00Roseam
Will Loir being part of the Edge be an asset or a problem? Tanya terrifies him. He actually likes the smell of gasoline and rubber? Ewwww....
01/19/2021 02:12Lally Devon
Wow wonder what happened to Loir π
01/18/2021 23:52Taina Iosefo
Nice to know a little bit more about Loir and his story. This is all getting more interesting with Loir. I think Eden and Dante should just make it official already that they like each other. lol
01/18/2021 23:41Winter Rose
Oh Loir, quite the nutcase. I'm not surprised that he was part of the Edge
01/18/2021 23:41Beatriz Astorga Morales
Iβm wondering how Loir got to be disabled, was it because of the Edge or Tanya? π§π€π΅
01/18/2021 22:07Alicia Flores
Interesting Loir part of the Edge... I wonder how is Dante going to make Eden not mad at him any more, is going to be hard with her being jelous of Rose
01/18/2021 21:31Zaida
Wait for real??? Loir was part of the edge???
01/18/2021 21:27MReinanda
Wonder what he did....
01/18/2021 21:15Reader-555364
LOVE it!
01/18/2021 20:51Auras Laura
conqueror... Danteπ
01/18/2021 09:59Taina Iosefo
Oh man... Danteβs really gonna be having fun pissing Eden off with Rose being there and willing to give Dante what he wants. But I know he wonβt let her cause he really likes (maybe loves) Eden.
01/18/2021 02:09