Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
ChumiChuu
I really enjoy the story so far. The plot is well described and it has interesting characters. The flow of the storu is smooth and not too fast nor slow. The girl mc has good traits for an omega though she is a bit too submissive but that is totally fine. The boy mc has good alpha traits and you can definitely tell he has dominance over others. I would like to continue reading the story but sadly I am... kinda broke. But keep up the amazing work!
08/20/2020 16:20ChumiChuu
I really enjoy the story so far. The plot is well described and it has interesting characters. The flow of the storu is smooth and not too fast nor slow. The girl mc has good traits for an omega though she is a bit too submissive but that is totally fine. The boy mc has good alpha traits and you can definitely tell he has dominance over others. I would like to continue reading the story but sadly I am... kinda broke. But keep up the amazing work!
08/20/2020 16:20
Nacht eule
I think this book is very good and it is not like the other books, that are about this sort of thing.
08/20/2020 16:12Nacht eule
I think this book is very good and it is not like the other books, that are about this sort of thing.
08/20/2020 16:12Nacht eule
I think this book is very good and it is not like the other books, that are about this sort of thing.
08/20/2020 16:12Nacht eule
I think this book is very good and it is not like the other books, that are about this sort of thing.
08/20/2020 16:12Chelsea Manto
i read a few chapters on wp was recomended by someone. and those few chapters did catched my attention. i wish you'd put this on wp thought. but indeed it really is a great story. keep it up for the writer and the editors. thank you for giving me the opportunity to discover your book. more books to come. and stay safe.you all saved me from boredom.
08/20/2020 15:57Chelsea Manto
i read a few chapters on wp was recomended by someone. and those few chapters did catched my attention. i wish you'd put this on wp thought. but indeed it really is a great story. keep it up for the writer and the editors. thank you for giving me the opportunity to discover your book. more books to come. and stay safe.you all saved me from boredom.
08/20/2020 15:57rb cris
The editor of this book recommended me your work Ms. Ami and I do not regret reading this story of yours. Each chapter of the story is exciting. Thank you again because I am one of your choice. Good luck and God bless. Love from the Philippines😊💕
08/20/2020 15:56rb cris
The editor of this book recommended me your work Ms. Ami and I do not regret reading this story of yours. Each chapter of the story is exciting. Thank you again because I am one of your choice. Good luck and God bless. Love from the Philippines😊💕
08/20/2020 15:53rb cris
The editor of this book recommended me your work Ms. Ami and I do not regret reading this story of yours. Each chapter of the story is exciting. Thank you again because I am one of your choice. Good luck and God bless. Love from the Philippines😊💕
08/20/2020 15:53Sudarshana Karthikeyan
The writer contacted me through Wattpad and sent me sample chapters to review. I really enjoyed them and can’t wait to read the full story!!
08/20/2020 15:49
ames0723
I was requested to read it by the author, and I’m glad I did. it’s great!
08/20/2020 15:44ames0723
I was requested to read it by the author, and I’m glad I did. it’s great!
08/20/2020 15:44Ash Kerby
I found this book from one of the writer through wattpad and I am so happy that they recommened it. The story just flows with each word it is nothing like I have read before and I mean that in a good way. I have trouble getting into stories like this but I have to say it was VERY enjoyable and easy to understand. Nothing too complex and very straight to the point. thank you for recommending it.
08/20/2020 15:37Maria Jose Herrera Palomino
i loved Thank you very much to the writer for recommending me
08/20/2020 15:36Maria Jose Herrera Palomino
i loved Thank you very much to the writer for recommending me
08/20/2020 15:35Maria Jose Herrera Palomino
i loved Thank you very much to the writer for recommending me
08/20/2020 15:35ms._ diamond
I love it, enough I just started it
08/20/2020 15:35ms._ diamond
I love it, enough I just started it
08/20/2020 15:35Gurvinder Bharaj
Came across this on Wattpad fell in love with it and the way that the story flows
08/20/2020 15:30Gurvinder Bharaj
Came across this on Wattpad fell in love with it and the way that the story flows
08/20/2020 15:30Gurvinder Bharaj
Came across this on Wattpad fell in love with it and the way that the story flows
08/20/2020 15:30Gurvinder Bharaj
Came across this on Wattpad fell in love with it and the way that the story flows
08/20/2020 15:30Adrielle Fernandes
oh my god congratulations on history I loved it I love this context this plot I am wattpadd's drikalovecalzona I really loved your story
08/20/2020 15:25Un gatito en bicicleta
I love it, the story has so much details and it's awesome, it make me feel like if I could be there and I really like it.
08/20/2020 15:04Un gatito en bicicleta
I love it, the story has so much details and it's awesome, it make me feel like if I could be there and I really like it
08/20/2020 15:04Un gatito en bicicleta
It's awesome the way that the autor describes everything with so much details, it make me feel if I would be there listening her thoughts, I really love it. 💐💐💐
08/20/2020 14:59Un gatito en bicicleta
It's awesome the way that the autor describes everything with so much details, it make me feel if I would be there listening her thoughts, I really love it. 💐💐💐
08/20/2020 14:59Un gatito en bicicleta
It's awesome the way that the autor describes everything with so much details, it make me feel if I would be there listening her thoughts, I really love it. 💐💐💐
08/20/2020 14:59Un gatito en bicicleta
It's awesome the way that the autor describes everything with so much details, it make me feel if I would be there listening her thoughts, I really love it. 💐💐💐
08/20/2020 14:59Satan
i really like the story! the editor approached me on wattpad about it and it reads like a dream. love the story and I'll be sure to recommend it to my friends
08/20/2020 14:52Satan
i really like the story! the editor approached me on wattpad about it and it reads like a dream. love the story and I'll be sure to recommend it to my friends
08/20/2020 14:52Satan
i really like the story! the editor approached me on wattpad about it and it reads like a dream. love the story and I'll be sure to recommend it to my friends
08/20/2020 14:52Satan
i really like the story! the editor approached me on wattpad about it and it reads like a dream. love the story and I'll be sure to recommend it to my friends
08/20/2020 14:52NamjoonTheCrabKing
I’m confused is the MC a girl?
08/20/2020 14:52Angela Kruso
I was also recommended by the author to read this book and I'm glad I said yes. I've only read a few chapters but I can't wait to read more.
08/20/2020 14:51Angela Kruso
I was also recommended by the author to read this book and I'm glad I said yes. I've only read a few chapters but I can't wait to read more.
08/20/2020 14:51Angela Kruso
I was also recommended by the author to read this book and I'm glad I said yes. I've only read a few chapters but I can't wait to read more.
08/20/2020 14:51Angela Kruso
I was also recommended by the author to read this book and I'm glad I said yes. I've only read a few chapters but I can't wait to read more.
08/20/2020 14:51
Gracieglu123
is really good
08/20/2020 14:51
Iyangsksk
this is so beautiful! I just red a few chapters but I already love this!! thank you for recommending this kind of masterpiece. xoxo
08/20/2020 14:45Iyangsksk
this is so beautiful! I just red a few chapters but I already love this!! thank you for recommending this kind of masterpiece. xoxo
08/20/2020 14:45Iyangsksk
this is so beautiful! I just red a few chapters but I already love this!! thank you for recommending this kind of masterpiece. xoxo
08/20/2020 14:45VnTally *-*
I'm really happy about the fact, that the author contacted me and asked me, if I could look over their work, because if they would‘t have done it, I wouldn't had have the chance to read this book. I wouldn‘t even know that this book exist and that would be sad because it‘s really well-written and the storyline is also really good!
08/20/2020 14:34
fate du preez
Well fuck me , If the alpha wasn't a major dick he goes after her , yet again the isolating mannerisms he's starting to show hmmm seems like an abuser but yet again that might only be my way of thinking but yet again i could be right anyways moving on they didn't reject each other but he's being possessive and that makes him a threat -_- so anyways he doesn't have the right to make a move on her cause he doesn't 1 fucking deserve her she's to good for him and now I've gotten a deep loathing of his character -_- nevertheless the story is getting interesting and I don't want to think too far ahead or overthink it too much
08/20/2020 14:23Raluca Rn
It's a very captivating story, as much as I could read it I really liked. It's a beautiful story for my taste as well.
08/20/2020 14:21Raluca Rn
It's a very captivating story, as much as I could read it I really liked. It's a beautiful story for my taste as well.
08/20/2020 14:21
Roserina Draw
I honestly love it! I loved how it flows, entertains and keeps you hooked!
08/20/2020 14:15Roserina Draw
I honestly love it! I loved how it flows, entertains and keeps you hooked!
08/20/2020 14:15Roserina Draw
I honestly love it! I loved how it flows, entertains and keeps you hooked!
08/20/2020 14:15Maira Heart
Very unique and wonderful story. I just read prologue but I enjoyed. Nice author huh.
08/20/2020 14:12
knbllllll
The editor recommended me to read this story and every chapter is fascinating.
08/20/2020 13:59fate du preez
Ahhh yes there it is like I said she has other outlets and the "secret" of sorts that only she knows about its great to know that in some way or form she doesn't take shit from no one even if its just in the ring where she can take all those bottled emotions and just whip the shit out of someone that's most probably bigger , faster and probably stronger then her Ohh and very well played author very well played indeed , making the omega a great fighter that's a very nice touch love a strong female character but let's see there's going to be a situation that no matter her prowess she will be scared and even a little bit terrified . . . that's usually what happens we shall see indeed what kind of character development she's going to have in the end since since she's already been introduced as of lesser status but she's already proven in this chapter that she's more then meets the eye she's more then just an omega no she's a fierce queen in her own right that should not be messed with keep up the great work
08/20/2020 13:49Thủy Tiên Đỗ
i'm here from Wattpad, the writer recommended this to me. Tbh, it's really interesting to read, tho it only the 1st chap. now i'm gonna continue the reading
08/20/2020 13:43
GrumpyCat1305
An editor for this story recommend it and personally I'm not into books like this but just after the prolog I was hooked wanting to see what would happen. You have done an amazing job with this story, it gets readers hooked just from the prolog.
08/20/2020 13:39GrumpyCat1305
An editor for this story recommend it and personally I'm not into books like this but just after the prolog I was hooked wanting to see what would happen. You have done an amazing job with this story, it gets readers hooked just from the prolog.
08/20/2020 13:39Arria the Dragon
Catches you write at the start and follows through. Amazing writing and a great story right off the bat! Can't wait to see how this turns out.
08/20/2020 13:32Cakepopalice
The editor sent me here and I already love this story!!!!
08/20/2020 13:31fate du preez
Alright then let's start with the basics . * She's an omega that gets rejected by her alpha mate * She might seem like a very timid omega that gets bullied a lot but she's actually a strong character that has other outlets for (example training to get stronger or making changes in her form or personality , for instance if she's shy and then she becomes more outspoken with a fuck off attitude / more flirty something like that ) * I'm willing to bet that she's got some kind of secret * She's either going to accept the rejection but then yet again it only stated that she ran it didn't state that he had rejected her as a mate only that he didn't want her (BTW : it's a loss for him anyways and if he doesn't have a second chance mate he would have screwed up something special )moving on * The alpha mate think she's beneath him cause of her status (still he's a jackass) * The same alpha that's probably going to have some realization (for example she gets a second chance mate and then suddenly he wants her back cause his wolf's pissed off at him for it etc. ) that he had screwed up and that he will take her back with or without her consent just because he can and that she's his mate hmm yet again some of these are only speculation of course , but it's fun to think of what might happen , but so far its interesting and well written so keep up the great work :)
08/20/2020 13:26fate du preez
Alright then let's start with the basics . * She's an omega that gets rejected by her alpha mate * She might seem like a very timid omega that gets bullied a lot but she's actually a strong character that has other outlets for (example training to get stronger or making changes in her form or personality , for instance if she's shy and then she becomes more outspoken with a fuck off attitude / more flirty something like that ) * I'm willing to bet that she's got some kind of secret * She's either going to accept the rejection but then yet again it only stated that she ran it didn't state that he had rejected her as a mate only that he didn't want her (BTW : it's a loss for him anyways and if he doesn't have a second chance mate he would have screwed up something special )moving on * The alpha mate think she's beneath him cause of her status (still he's a jackass) * The same alpha that's probably going to have some realization (for example she gets a second chance mate and then suddenly he wants her back cause his wolf's pissed off at him for it etc. ) that he had screwed up and that he will take her back with or without her consent just because he can and that she's his mate hmm yet again some of these are only speculation of course , but it's fun to think of what might happen , but so far its interesting and well written so keep up the great work :)
08/20/2020 13:26fate du preez
Alright then let's start with the basics . * She's an omega that gets rejected by her alpha mate * She might seem like a very timid omega that gets bullied a lot but she's actually a strong character that has other outlets for (example training to get stronger or making changes in her form or personality , for instance if she's shy and then she becomes more outspoken with a fuck off attitude / more flirty something like that ) * I'm willing to bet that she's got some kind of secret * She's either going to accept the rejection but then yet again it only stated that she ran it didn't state that he had rejected her as a mate only that he didn't want her (BTW : it's a loss for him anyways and if he doesn't have a second chance mate he would have screwed up something special )moving on * The alpha mate think she's beneath him cause of her status (still he's a jackass) * The same alpha that's probably going to have some realization (for example she gets a second chance mate and then suddenly he wants her back cause his wolf's pissed off at him for it etc. ) that he had screwed up and that he will take her back with or without her consent just because he can and that she's his mate hmm yet again some of these are only speculation of course , but it's fun to think of what might happen , but so far its interesting and well written so keep up the great work :)
08/20/2020 13:25fate du preez
Alright then let's start with the basics . * She's an omega that gets rejected by her alpha mate * She might seem like a very timid omega that gets bullied a lot but she's actually a strong character that has other outlets for (example training to get stronger or making changes in her form or personality , for instance if she's shy and then she becomes more outspoken with a fuck off attitude / more flirty something like that ) * I'm willing to bet that she's got some kind of secret * She's either going to accept the rejection but then yet again it only stated that she ran it didn't state that he had rejected her as a mate only that he didn't want her (BTW : it's a loss for him anyways and if he doesn't have a second chance mate he would have screwed up something special )moving on * The alpha mate think she's beneath him cause of her status (still he's a jackass) * The same alpha that's probably going to have some realization (for example she gets a second chance mate and then suddenly he wants her back cause his wolf's pissed off at him for it etc. ) that he had screwed up and that he will take her back with or without her consent just because he can and that she's his mate hmm yet again some of these are only speculation of course , but it's fun to think of what might happen , but so far its interesting and well written so keep up the great work :)
08/20/2020 13:25fate du preez
Alright then let's start with the basics . * She's an omega that gets rejected by her alpha mate * She might seem like a very timid omega that gets bullied a lot but she's actually a strong character that has other outlets for (example training to get stronger or making changes in her form or personality , for instance if she's shy and then she becomes more outspoken with a fuck off attitude / more flirty something like that ) * I'm willing to bet that she's got some kind of secret * She's either going to accept the rejection but then yet again it only stated that she ran it didn't state that he had rejected her as a mate only that he didn't want her (BTW : it's a loss for him anyways and if he doesn't have a second chance mate he would have screwed up something special )moving on * The alpha mate think she's beneath him cause of her status (still he's a jackass) * The same alpha that's probably going to have some realization (for example she gets a second chance mate and then suddenly he wants her back cause his wolf's pissed off at him for it etc. ) that he had screwed up and that he will take her back with or without her consent just because he can and that she's his mate hmm yet again some of these are only speculation of course , but it's fun to think of what might happen , but so far its interesting and well written so keep up the great work :)
08/20/2020 13:25fate du preez
Alright then let's start with the basics . * She's an omega that gets rejected by her alpha mate * She might seem like a very timid omega that gets bullied a lot but she's actually a strong character that has other outlets for (example training to get stronger or making changes in her form or personality , for instance if she's shy and then she becomes more outspoken with a fuck off attitude / more flirty something like that ) * I'm willing to bet that she's got some kind of secret * She's either going to accept the rejection but then yet again it only stated that she ran it didn't state that he had rejected her as a mate only that he didn't want her (BTW : it's a loss for him anyways and if he doesn't have a second chance mate he would have screwed up something special )moving on * The alpha mate think she's beneath him cause of her status (still he's a jackass) * The same alpha that's probably going to have some realization (for example she gets a second chance mate and then suddenly he wants her back cause his wolf's pissed off at him for it etc. ) that he had screwed up and that he will take her back with or without her consent just because he can and that she's his mate hmm yet again some of these are only speculation of course , but it's fun to think of what might happen , but so far its interesting and well written so keep up the great work :)
08/20/2020 13:24Imaan Raza
wow! no words to explain how well it is written
08/20/2020 13:02KarolinaMarchenkov
I'm so glad that the author send me a message about my opopinion because I really enenjoyed the storyb
08/20/2020 12:51Jessica Monroe
I'm normally not to one to read werewolf or vampire stories but reading this story made me pleasantly surprised. I've only read a few chapters but this is actually really enjoyable and interesting. It's easily one of the best paranormal stories I've ever read. Great job!
08/20/2020 12:49Gia Hibbert
This book was recommended to me by the author and I must say I'm glad I had the opportunity to read it. It is well written, flows easily and the plot is a breath of fresh air. It is a must-read.
08/20/2020 12:47KarolinaMarchenkov
I'm so glad that the author send me a message about my opopinion because I really enenjoyed the storyb
08/20/2020 12:46Kizzi Aristide
I was recommended to review this book through Wattpad and its honestly fantastic from writing to details!
08/20/2020 12:40Kizzi Aristide
I was recommended to review this book through Wattpad and its honestly fantastic from writing to details!
08/20/2020 12:40Kizzi Aristide
I was recommended to review this book through Wattpad and its honestly fantastic from writing to detail!
08/20/2020 12:40Kizzi Aristide
I was recommended to review this book through Wattpad and its honestly fantastic from writing to detail!
08/20/2020 12:40Kizzi Aristide
I was recommended to review this book through Wattpad and its honestly fantastic from writing to detail!
08/20/2020 12:39CrazyKnifeBitch
I was asked to share my opinion on this story on Wattpad. I’ve only read a few of the chapters and am currently not able to read past the point of needing coins, but as far as I’ve read it’s really good! There are still a few errors but only minor like an extra word very rarely or maybe a missed comma in some places. But overall, it’s great and definitely my kinda book!
08/20/2020 12:32CrazyKnifeBitch
I was asked to share my opinion on this story on Wattpad. I’ve only read a few of the chapters and am currently not able to read past the point of needing coins, but as far as I’ve read it’s really good! There are still a few errors but only minor like an extra word very rarely or maybe a missed comma in some places. But overall, it’s great and definitely my kinda book!
08/20/2020 12:32MastuHana Kagehina
I found this story through wattpad and I can honestly say this story is very well written even though I’ve only read a little of it so far I’m interested to see where it will go
08/20/2020 12:16MastuHana Kagehina
I found this story through wattpad and I can honestly say this story is very well written even though I’ve only read a little of it so far I’m interested to see where it will go
08/20/2020 12:16MastuHana Kagehina
I found this story through wattpad and I can honestly say this story is very well written even though I’ve only read a little of it so far I’m interested to see where it will go
08/20/2020 12:16MastuHana Kagehina
I found this story through wattpad and I can honestly say this story is very well written even though I’ve only read a little of it so far I’m interested to see where it will go
08/20/2020 12:16MastuHana Kagehina
I found this story through wattpad and I can honestly say this story is very well written even though I’ve only read a little of it so far I’m interested to see where it will go
08/20/2020 12:16MastuHana Kagehina
I found this story through wattpad and I haven’t read too much of it but I can tell it’s very well written and am very glad for the recommendation 😊
08/20/2020 12:15Kuri -chan
it's beautiful! i've read just this for now but it's beautiful QwQ
08/20/2020 11:57
Paperplain Purple
I got the invitation from wattpad. so far very good book. it's Intertaning, interesting and beautifully written. sadly I at the moment don't have the money to purchase the chapters but if I could I definitely would
08/20/2020 11:56Paperplain Purple
I got the invitation from wattpad. so far very good book. it's Intertaning, interesting and beautifully written. sadly I at the moment don't have the money to purchase the chapters but if I could I definitely would
08/20/2020 11:56Paperplain Purple
I got the invitation from wattpad. so far very good book. it's Intertaning, interesting and beautifully written. sadly I at the moment don't have the money to purchase the chapters but if I could I definitely would
08/20/2020 11:55Hannah Schmit
I'm so glad that the writer contacted me through Wattpad, i'm only a few chapers in and I love it already
08/20/2020 11:32Hannah Schmit
I'm so glad that the writer contacted me through Wattpad, i'm only a few chapers in and I love it already
08/20/2020 11:32
Lizzie Naboo
Hi guys, I'm from Brazil and I need it to find the time to talk about this precious and amazing book that Amina wrote. I've read the book on Wattpad and wrote a review there but I don't care about writing it here if it's going to help you. Completely loved the book, the story, the backstory, the heat, the hate, the plots, you really put your heart and soul in it and you deserve the world ❤
08/20/2020 11:31Cinetchi
Hi, I'm from Wattpad (Cinetchi) An editor for this story had recommended it to me on Wattpad and after reading the Prolog i got so hooked I had to come here to check it immediately.
08/20/2020 11:26Cinetchi
Hi, I'm from Wattpad (Cinetchi) An editor for this story had recommended it to me on Wattpad and after reading the Prolog i got so hooked I had to come here to check it immediately.
08/20/2020 11:26Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
08/20/2020 11:26Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
08/20/2020 11:26Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
08/20/2020 11:25Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
08/20/2020 11:25Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
08/20/2020 11:25Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
08/20/2020 11:25Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
08/20/2020 11:24Molly Molly
Just started reading this book and I'm really happy I took the time to read this when it was recommended. It's not my usual read, but I love it already. 10/10 would tell my friends to read as well!
08/20/2020 11:24
