Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
WolfDemon777
EVERYTHING DIPSHIT BECAUSE OF YOU. Sorry
08/07/2020 23:48Norachan _chan
man, I read the first half of this prologue on Wattpad. So when I came here to read the second half, I found it so unexpected and I love it!! π
08/07/2020 23:36Norachan _chan
man, I read the first half of this chapter on Wattpad. So when I came here to read the rest, I found the second half of this chapter was so unexpected and I love it!
08/07/2020 23:33Audriana15
I love how first chapter instead of crying she beats someoneβs a$$π€£π€£π
08/07/2020 23:29Melokimdie
It's very interestingπ
08/07/2020 23:14Awesome
I actually found out about this book by the author on wattpad I'm so glad the writer recommended it to me because I'm already hooked on this book is very different from some of the books on wattpad I really enjoyed and it was very entertaining..I really how they writer show a image while you read the book.
08/07/2020 23:13Wolf Shanahan
so far, I am really enjoying this book. Typical werewolf stories don't usually spiral around other supernatural beings. I'm glad to see the author is indulging in more supernatural races^^
08/07/2020 23:10Wolf Shanahan
I want Ms Jessica to be my teacher xDDD
08/07/2020 23:09clxwnxryvxbes
This is really good, I loving the plot the way itβs builds up,along with characters development. Your story is an attention grabber, this a big Yes in my opinion.
08/07/2020 22:52victoria aza
Wow! I love this. Is so well written and descriptive... Can't stop reading!!!
08/07/2020 22:07Dg Sya
Thank you for recommending this book to me.. I really enjoyed it.. I don't know how to write a review.. but.. I really recommend this book to those who are yet to read it.. You won't regret it.. π
08/07/2020 22:00Gon β’ Freecss β’ HXH
someone contacted me on Wattpad, asking if they could share samples of a chapter to me. I said okay. They sent it and I wasnβt disappointed in the least! itβs super interesting. Iβd definitely read and recommend it. it also kind of... inspires me!
08/07/2020 21:57Reader-433074
the writer introduced me to the book and I canβt get enough of it, I hope to read a sequel later on. You did an amazing job with this one
08/07/2020 21:51Maxine Joseph
I really enjoy the book so far
08/07/2020 21:50iswallowkids
this is gonna be good
08/07/2020 21:37Peyton Zoe
this story is beautiful, I wish I could read the whole thing I wanted to just keep reading it
08/07/2020 20:58Mac Rogers
Jett is awesome
08/07/2020 20:57Kate Masenga
I have read this book on wp but I never got the chance to finish reading it. Thanks to the writer sending a link am able to finish it. it's really great,I like the storyline and how you get to know as well as understand each character.
08/07/2020 20:53TwinkleFox
I know this story from someone on Wattpad who ask me to read it and give my opinions. when they give me a peek of the prologue, well I suddenly INTERESTED. So, I decided to read it and yeaaaah! THIS CERTAINLY GONNA BE NY FAVORITE BOOK (qο½₯Οο½₯q)οΎβ‘ Good working on your story! this is a really great book that I ever read about Omegaverse so far! ( ββΏβ )β‘
08/07/2020 20:36Sailor Harmony
that looks amazing π»
08/07/2020 20:33Anonymous122005
The story is really quite interesting and fascinating to read, and I've read quite few chapters, they're very good and the stories flows are very awesome. I love it. Keep up the good work, I'll always support. πβ€
08/07/2020 20:19Faithlyn Bowers
this book is really good I love it!!
08/07/2020 20:15Mac Rogers
I should thank one of the coauthors for suggesting this book. The descriptions are very detailed, which is great. Also I like how her faerie friend was introduced
08/07/2020 20:14Yanna Ricafranca
I found out about this story through wattpad when it was recommended to me by the people responsible for this amazing story! I'm hooked and I am so excited to read the whole thing!
08/07/2020 20:09Obrien Odri
I really loved your storyπ€π€ Keep going the good work.
08/07/2020 19:54Sailor Harmony
wow so amazing π
08/07/2020 19:48NuGgEt666
HEEEEELLO!its me(Viv-draws)from Wattpad!I have to say I LOVE this story!thank u for pointing this book out!i love how easy it is to get hooked and the flow of the book! have a good day!;)
08/07/2020 19:37WolfDemon777
oh my god HOLY SHIT THIS IS AWESOME
08/07/2020 19:25WolfDemon777
excuse me WHAT?
08/07/2020 19:20WolfDemon777
I feel bad for the ground that supports the troll
08/07/2020 19:17Alicia Reddington
I like this story
08/07/2020 19:15WolfDemon777
Ian is such an ass imma kill him XD
08/07/2020 19:14WolfDemon777
holy-
08/07/2020 19:05ThatisRelateable
This is amazing!
08/07/2020 18:56WolfDemon777
why are guy bullies never ugly? seriously
08/07/2020 18:56MckaylaChinyamaQueen
Great start to the prologue! I'm already invested in it, I have high hopes for this book so fingers crossed it goes well from here..im diving in head first..with no regret.. (Mckaylachinyamaqueen) from wattpad
08/07/2020 18:53WolfDemon777
I like this Ian guy XD
08/07/2020 18:49WolfDemon777
atta girl. lying is very easy to me
08/07/2020 18:43Monique Robinson
it's a really great book
08/07/2020 18:41ash
gets a little confusing when they do flashbacks
08/07/2020 18:35Tashiya Long
I love this book so far great work
08/07/2020 18:30WolfDemon777
what an ass-hat. I hope he dies :)
08/07/2020 18:29WolfDemon777
no way you can become a comic artist if you keep fucking up your hand like that but good luck π
08/07/2020 18:23WolfDemon777
do the humans know about the werewolves there?
08/07/2020 18:20My Day A. R. M. Y
I really got into this story, I wish I could read further, I'm intrigued! I don't think I've never read a supernatural book up until now.
08/07/2020 18:20WolfDemon777
I like this girl
08/07/2020 18:18WolfDemon777
damn sheβs a badass
08/07/2020 18:15WolfDemon777
you canβt choose right? it all just happens. seriously I hate this guy XD
08/07/2020 18:10WolfDemon777
this guy is an ass
08/07/2020 18:08Monique Esterhuysen
This is so heartbreakingπ
08/07/2020 18:06Reader-399552
Cool
08/07/2020 17:354804066836Bebe
I got this book recommended to me on Wattpad and I said sure why not. I didnβt expect myself to be so interested. I read the book and I have to say it is amazing. The characters reaction to the events are great. Itβs a good book.
08/07/2020 17:05RamenNoodles
And it can be very relatable to a lot of people who have been bullied in their life (I being one) and it makes you have a connection with the her because you know what sheβs going through
08/07/2020 17:01RamenNoodles
AMAZING! Iβm already getting into it and just the way you write and set out paragraph and such are well done!
08/07/2020 16:59horse milk
i found this through wattpad after being messaged and honestly I'm into it, standard werewolf stories really aren't something im into but this has good writing and a genuinely interesting plot!
08/07/2020 16:53Molly Diaz
Don't regret clicking that link! This story is fabulous!
08/07/2020 16:43Ravenfire 177
I only read a few of the chapters and I think this story is amazing. Itβs really creative
08/07/2020 16:41Imogen X
I was asked to review this story and I must say itβs intriguing, I love the amount of detail and descriptions included. Your writing seems to flow very nicely :) π€
08/07/2020 16:32Harima-Hates-You
Honestly, Iβm loving this book so far! π
08/07/2020 16:25OoW3inoO
Hi! I was recommended this book on wattpad through the author, and the paragraph they sent me was enough! I really like where their going with the story/series. Its captivating, and is very well written. I hope you keep up the amazing work that your doing. π
08/07/2020 16:05Isabel Silveira
I love this story, from what Iβve read of it so far it is amazing. The plot, the characters. It seems as if it is professional writing. I quite enjoy it.
08/07/2020 16:05Li-lovesbangtan
Hey it's me I'm already starting to like this storyβΊβ€β€β€β€
08/07/2020 16:04Maia M Griffith
Iβm only like.. one chapter in, and I love it already! itβs so enjoyable!
08/07/2020 16:03j Mae
guess anyone gathered here for same reason i read a few chapters its like portraying real life of a creature
08/07/2020 15:52Kksia Arora
Found this book through Wattpad... amazing it is.Really love the story... intresting.ππππ
08/07/2020 15:29The Mistake
Is it wrong, that if I was Ember, I would have thrown him under the bus? Honestly. I don't want to marry a Troll.
08/07/2020 15:27ThePokΓ©tato
hello. I definitely hate him already. As I said, a kick in the crotch.
08/07/2020 15:11The Mistake
I need a friend like Aster. I'm the friend who is Aster, ready to kill, but I have a feeling my friends couldnt care less about me sometimes...πππ
08/07/2020 14:46The Mistake
Why, Wilder? Why must you be a bitch?!
08/07/2020 14:38The Mistake
This chapter was also really good! Would I be correct in assuming, our girl, is a badass fighter, who can kick but, but is also an Omega at school?
08/07/2020 14:22Lillylovee01
I am absolutely in LOVE with this book. the writer keeps you in suspense and everything fits together. I am so glad that the Writer got ahold of me to read this. I cannot stop reading this!
08/07/2020 14:20The Mistake
This was well written! I really enjoyed it! All I have to say is- Kane is a bitch, with a 22 foot pole stuck up his ass, who needs an attitude amusement. I mean- Like Hell, my girl is going to kneel! Anyway, it's really good so far! (If you'd rather I don't cuss, I wont!)
08/07/2020 14:13Dilshanath Rufana
its amazing
08/07/2020 13:54Anuoluwa Aiyegbo
Ian is a lot like my bastfriend. He's definitely my favorite character πππ
08/07/2020 13:02Marilena Durant
This book is really good
08/07/2020 12:31GreenGummies
A well crafted story about overcoming less than stellar circumstances with a supernatural twist.
08/07/2020 12:19Blaise Alcantara
The author has recommended me this book on wattpad.And I'm so thankful that she did because I'm so inlove with it now.
08/07/2020 12:14Writer TiffanyAnne
same it's a really good book
08/07/2020 11:32Indrani Sen
I really liked this book. 'Enjoyed it' is the best word for it. A page Turner ofc
08/07/2020 11:25Satrun . .001
it's soooo good well done really β€β€
08/07/2020 11:25Dilshanath Rufana
the prologue is sooo exciting . its making me to read further. i feel like im in the hall watching the scene myself. awesome writter. such a creativity. god bless you
08/07/2020 11:13ash
okay so, I'm absolutely loving this book it's great, you've done really well with introducing your readers to the characters and world your book sets in and that's something other books lack, although you've had a stereotype of rejected mate you're quite unique so far with the way you have gone about it, she isn't being completely consumed with it and you've shown her life outside of her struggles with her mate and it's honestly a breathe of fresh air that gives her individuality and a personality past her relationship with her mate, which is again something other books lack. Your character introduction is also really solid because as you introduced each character I could feel the break in dialogue and got introidcued to their personality even if it was in one line which is sometimes hard to do with the amount you have already introduced so kudos to you!!! the only real constructive feedback I would have is with your world building, you are doing astronomical but at the moment as you I trofuce new world points such as the fact that there is trolls, it is quite abrupt. I'm not asking for a big paragraph explaining the world because that would be boring and would drag down your story, what I'm suggesting instead is that perhaps you focus on these points a bit more, so for example when you introduce the troll take a few sentences to subtly explain what it is like "we arnt supposed to go there" "yeah well (info on trolls)" you did do this when they got there and through the trolls dialogue and some readers may enjoy that and I definitely do it was just the only thing I could really not pick haha. Overall I absolutely love your story and I'm really sad I can't read on because I'm broke and can't afford to pay per chapter but I'm proud that you are making BANK!!! I love your main character and she's such a fresh breathe from normal stories because although she is "weak" she is actively fighting with herself to change that even if she know her status can't really change. Again, love it and I'm sorry to not be able to support you but I wish you well!!!!
08/07/2020 10:39emily
this isnβt really something I would really read, but it was very captivating to me. I was approached by an editor on wattpad and honestly it was so worth it!
08/07/2020 10:31May Wattaon
This book was recommended to me by the editor and author and I must say that I absolutely love this book even though I just finished chapter one. The way it is written is good, the characters are perfectly described and wowie, I look forward to the rest of the amazing plot.
08/07/2020 10:29Adhira Parus
I'm absolutely in love with this story, so far its amazing. what she's going through is not something any teenager should have to go through but still do..... oh well You fight girl!!!!!
08/07/2020 09:47Rio Joy Cruz
Hahaha omg so cute chapter 4. I need a friend like Ian hahaha
08/07/2020 09:10Rio Joy Cruz
I knew there were vampires and werewolves based on the tag at the start never knew there were other creatures as well hahaha (i thought when it said "Giant" earlier it meant just a really bulky and tall guy never knew it was the real deal hahaha HAHAHA)
08/07/2020 08:57Sophie swadil
lovely!!
08/07/2020 08:44Anagha Bhat
Hello. Thanks for the recommendation on Wattpad
08/07/2020 08:01Miss. Bangtan
I found out abt dis from Wattpad! UwU lol it's a fucking gud story... Can't wait to read all the chaps!!!!! It's superb! Awesome! Thanks for telling me dis story in Wattpad! β€β€β€
08/07/2020 07:19MagicTrash89589.
I absolutely love this. I wish I could read more of it.
08/07/2020 07:11Mischievous Her
Just reading the first chapter is interesting. Warewolf caste systems are not really my cup of tea but it's interesting. This is a good way to start your story.
08/07/2020 07:05brches2000
I love it β€οΈ
08/07/2020 06:41Kiki Mimi
Already from reading the first two paragraphs Iβm hooked!
08/07/2020 06:38Richa Sharma
this already seems so interesting πππ
08/07/2020 06:03Elizabeth Hall
this is so amazing! thankyou for recommending it too me:)
08/07/2020 05:42LittleChillax
It's been 2 chapters, unless you don't count the Prologue as a chapter, and I'm already hooked. Sounds like something I would read, though I would like to point out that Kane, that's his name right?, is a bit rude. Kinda a bad start since he is a main character, but it's fine! ^w^ It's only been 2 chapters anyway. Character development and all. -w-
08/07/2020 05:29Shamara Glynn
I was reccomend this book by the author on wattpad, I realized I read most of this already, and would highly recommend reading this book. The plot is extremely well built and the story is very captivating.The story's filled with action and excitement which doesn't drift off from the main plot and makes you eager to read it. I think everyone should give it a try.
08/07/2020 05:16Everybody Say NO
As someone recommended me this book and a sample of the prologue, I was pleased on how good the start was. The flow of the prologue wasn't to aggressive like any other prologues I have red. So far so good it made me want to finish it all in one sitting. And it juat happens that i think this will fit my werewolves stories craving lol if it makes sense. Overall, it's a good start. Im rooting for the female lead. I'll another comment after I finish the storyπ Stay safe!
08/07/2020 04:44Megan Smerf
This story is really interesting and pulls you in as you read along. I don't really read many stories like this so from reading part of it, i found myself actually enjoying it. i would totally recommend it to any of my friends. I'm thankful to the writer and editor who recommended this lovely story to me. keep up the hard work on this story and any of your other works.
08/07/2020 04:33