Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • boxer at heart

    I just want to let u know I think your book is amazing it’s everything I want it a book I just love it you did an amazing job you a very talented write :)

    08/22/2020 23:13

  • Diana Akenzua

    wow, I love this story so much. I hope I can read all your chapters. :D

    08/22/2020 22:33

  • Screaming19Banshee

    darn lord 😂 I never though in my whole life I would read warewolf stories. tbh this one is my first ever warewolf story that I read and liked it only 3 chapters to made someone like me down DeadShot. Damn it i love it 😍 this women is amazing and the story going pretty well I am not disappointed at all l am glad I get to read such a good story. Totally worth my time HELL YAA💕 thanks for the recommendation or I would nvr knew such a stories like this one exist. thanks♥️😌

    08/22/2020 21:32

  • Maryam Saidu

    It was recommended by someone from wattpad. just from the first chapter, I was already drawn to it

    08/22/2020 20:58

  • Jacqueline Tapp

    I was told about this story through Wattpad where the author kindly messaged me asking if I could check it out. And I’m so glad I said yes because it was so good to read. I just wish I coulda read more, but the parts of the story I got to read were really good and intriguing.

    08/22/2020 18:14

  • QueenVal1234

    this is a great book so far I’m really liking it

    08/22/2020 18:07

  • Luz Sanchez

    The story is fantastic it has meaning and I loved the way the author’s vocabulary,grammar and phrases. It’s a well written book.

    08/22/2020 18:02

  • Monalisaa

    so does this mean she is an Alpha but pretend to be omega

    08/22/2020 17:53

  • Monalisaa

    so he doesn’t want an omega for a mate but he never said the whole I Kane reject you but he just said I don’t want you.

    08/22/2020 17:45

  • Monalisaa

    wow so he doesn’t want an omega for a mate, but did he reject her the usual or just said he doesn’t want her.

    08/22/2020 17:43

  • Lydia Beard

    I love the story I only got through six chapters but it was awesome!

    08/22/2020 15:50

  • angepersaud

    Hi, I'm from Wattpad(angepersaud) An editor for this story recommended this book and reading the Prolog it was interesting... after reading some chapters it was well done and very captivating. I can tell you're a good writer keep up the good work.

    08/22/2020 15:33

  • babyy koo

    so happy the writer recommended this book. it’s so hard to find good omega verse books and this one is the best one i’ve read yet ☺️❤️

    08/22/2020 15:27

  • ItzLaffyTaffy

    I found out about this book on Wattpad. The first six chapters were well-written, and the main character is pretty interesting. I'm not a huge fan of werewolf books, but I would definetly read the rest of this if I had the coins. Great job on writing such an amazing story.

    08/22/2020 14:50

  • Lenessa Abraham

    This is a really good book. This book was recommended to me by the editor. Superb work

    08/22/2020 14:21

  • Damien Luksus

    I found this book trough wattpad recommendations. I'm really glad it was recommended as it really is amazing. I've only read a few chapters but I know it's good, really good. The story flows and I like the way the characters are written.

    08/22/2020 13:49

  • brianna harris

    same but WHY IS 7 TO THE END BLOCKED

    08/22/2020 13:14

  • xiaohui chang

    hello, im from wattpad too (aestheticsyoongs) one of the editor has dropped me a message on wattpad and recommended this book to me, I'm really happy that she did because this book is really drawing me in. I absolutely love the way the words and phrasing are being put in place in the book. I was so absorbed that I had to come here to read more of it

    08/22/2020 13:06

  • Summer Lyric

    I'm so glad I pursued reading this, the descriptions are so well done and I can literally see a whole bunch of images appearing in my head. Keep up the amazing work!

    08/22/2020 12:30

  • Fox Lulee

    Hi... umm it's Park Seohyun... you asked me if I could review your book from wattpad... it's actually really good... I love it.

    08/22/2020 12:28

  • Natasha Dominic

    this story is WOW.. I love it

    08/22/2020 11:03

  • Ye Zhi

    Hi, I'm from Wattpad. (Ye Zhi) Editor.. Tbh, I'm Fujoshi^-^. So, I think that you recommend to me a BL-stories. 😅😅 But, sometimes, I also read straight stories. First of all, I usually read Danmei and novels from the East state. So, I don't really understand about the Western fantasy story. I just read the Prologue. After reading the Prologue, I feel this story is good. (That's intuition😁) [Ah.. I feel very upset and feel it should complete my glossary about Western Fantasies.] Thanks to the Editor, for recommending this story. 😁😁 For the Author, it's a good story, I like that. 😘

    08/22/2020 10:55

  • Roro Herawati

    light language and easy to understand. tolerable conflict. everything is good. the style of the writer makes the reading like immediately the main character. my imagination dances over my head.

    08/22/2020 10:31

  • Call_fiz

    Thank u so much for the author that directly pm me at the wattpad... The story is amazing and fantastic ...It was one of my favourite genre involving werewolf...Highly recommend to those who love this genre... The story is a kind of different than other story because it was like he reject her in the prologue but anyway i will keep read it...😍😍

    08/22/2020 09:20

  • Sarah Jane

    Love it

    08/22/2020 08:57

  • Heather Neumann

    It has been a long time since a ware story caught and held my attention to the point that I stayed up to the wee hours of the morning to read it. This one did that. I found myself unable to put it down

    08/22/2020 08:41

  • fara aqasya

    if a writer dont recommended to me i think i dont know if have a another apps like a wattpad😂

    08/22/2020 08:23

  • Nathalie Jules Fontanilla

    I was contacted by one of the editors of the book though wattpad and I have to say that I enjoyed the first 6 chapters. The prologue was well written as it jumps straight into the story and captivates the reader. I think that it’s a nice switch up from other werewolf books out there, enough to the point that this book is different and refreshing yet familiar at the same time. I was thoroughly surprised by where the book is going so far and can only imagine how well written the rest of the book is.

    08/22/2020 07:20

  • Yovanda Astuti

    Thanks to the Author, for recommending this story to me. I love a well flowing storyline, an interesting groove, and a good characteristic in this story 🥺

    08/22/2020 07:19

  • Nuratulai WL

    I also found this novel through wattpad when the writer recommended it the synopsis was great and I'm looking forward to the real story I've given up on paranormal stories these days but I do hope this story can change my mindset

    08/22/2020 05:52

  • lenzjay bauzon

    I found this book through Wattpad when the author recommended this. When the author sent me the prologue it really got my attention and it intrigued me. So overall, this story was amazingly written and it is really enjoyable to read. Great job.

    08/22/2020 05:42

  • Anna Hurtado

    Read it all in one day. Can’t wait to read the 2 book to find our what happen next to Alpha Kane and Ember.

    08/22/2020 04:24

  • Anna Hurtado

    Love this story.

    08/22/2020 04:20

  • some-scott

    this is great; the story starts out with a light, somewhat comedic tone and the whole thing flows very nicely

    08/22/2020 03:38

  • Fallen Angel

    this is a great book I also found through Wattpad. the author is super talented and this book is great. the story is so intriguing and amazing. I would definitely recommend this piece of literature to others

    08/22/2020 03:19

  • Brandy C

    I really enjoyed this book and I’m glad I got to read it thanks for messaging me on Wattpad!! ❤️

    08/22/2020 02:47

  • HS55

    Although I’ve only read the first few chapters, the beginning alone really drew me in. The descriptive details of every paragraph and the small splash ed of humor can conclude that this book is beautifully written. I’m really glad someone requested me to read this book ‘cause I enjoyed every minute of it. Thanks author for the amazin book!

    08/22/2020 02:47

  • Novitasari A

    Good story! I love every detail of what character feels and do. But, the place setting is poorly explained. So, I can't imagine it. I will read the next chapter hohohoho

    08/22/2020 02:36

  • Saray Beltran

    poor: '(but the emotion he had at the beginning was gone:' 0

    08/22/2020 02:05

  • Saray Beltran

    who would have imagined that the little omega turned out to be quite a beast jajaja very interesting XD

    08/22/2020 01:34

  • Chloe-Poof

    wow this is really good, I'm happy the author showed me this

    08/22/2020 01:26

  • Saray Beltran

    It would only lack more emotion, I mean, more exclamation marks, commas and other things are also important for stories: '0

    08/22/2020 01:15

  • Saray Beltran

    ok that was unexpected: '0 but it was good !! XD

    08/22/2020 01:14

  • Zahrawords

    Hello! I'm from Indonesia and still learn about english. I was read the prologue and after read it, honestly, from the way the writer explaining it made me understand what the cast felt, even though I little bit didn't understand English:" the story was interest! i like it so, maybe i'll read it all of the part soon hehe, nice job! for the writer:)) oh! and hope you understand what i said hahaha:"

    08/22/2020 01:01

  • kim ayunaa

    helloo,I'm from wattpad😊(kimayunaa) Anyway when I saw the first chapters,I already love it!the story is amazing 😊 It's not make me boring at the first chapter,instead It's make me wondering and Interested to read the story!😍🥰one word : amazing!🥰

    08/22/2020 00:47

  • Meg Kent

    I was asked to take a look at this book by the editor or author and I'm very glad he or she did because it is very good I am definitely going to get coins to read the rest but other than that I recommend this book 100%

    08/22/2020 00:34

  • Allyson Ratcliff

    I was told about this story on Wattpad and I love this!

    08/21/2020 23:57

  • Magui Flores

    llegue acá por Wattpad, y me encanta

    08/21/2020 23:28

  • rawesstadrii

    this is honestly a great book the author recommended it to me and i’m so glad i checked it out and started to read it ! i don’t usually read straight stories because i find it boring but this one will definitely get finished read!

    08/21/2020 23:20

  • nor adiba nadia

    This book is very interesting, I really like the storyline of this book ,love it very much and I really mean it... thanks to the author for recommending, by the way I'm @noradibanadia

    08/21/2020 22:24

  • Marti Jara

    i just read a couple of chapters and I'm already obssesed with it! The story is so interesting on the fantasy and the romantic side. Thank you so much to the writter for suggesting the story!😁❤

    08/21/2020 22:19

  • Angel__Black25

    I got a message on Wattpad telling me to review this story. Well, you write very well !! I loved the synapse , and l love supernatural stories. I loved it 👍💓

    08/21/2020 21:46

  • Selene Castillo

    I downloaded this app just to be able to read this story, thanks for the recommendation, it's a fantastic story

    08/21/2020 21:43

  • Maggie

    I found this book because the writer recommended it to me on wattpad, and I am glad. it's great uwu

    08/21/2020 21:23

  • Shybanks 43ever

    Is shyllys_half from wattpad, this is amazing so far and I'm already in love with it and its only the prolouge. i love how everything is beatifully written!

    08/21/2020 21:18

  • Reader-268775

    Una historia que atrapa hasta a los latinos <3 arribah

    08/21/2020 21:16

  • Kayla Dow

    I dont understand the wolf mask

    08/21/2020 21:16

  • Moskeelah Hicks

    I am so happy the author asked me to give this a look see. I'm really enjoying this

    08/21/2020 20:48

  • Crazy Girl

    Keep it that way. Well done :)

    08/21/2020 20:45

  • didtheyfindher

    this story is so good I'm glad I read it the writing style is something you don't find often but it works so well with the story

    08/21/2020 20:33

  • hello_ME758

    I got reccomened on wattpad and I had to download the app and I got hooked immediately.im not really into werewolf story's but this is great.

    08/21/2020 20:12

  • GB Hall

    I was surprised when I read this. I did not expect her to fight her mate. so I was very excited to read the rest. I even like that there are other magical beings other than werewolves in the story. Amber is an interesting character but she's not very active in the story later on. Things happening to her and it makes the story feel slow.I just don't know what her goals are but still it was fun to read.

    08/21/2020 19:44

  • Suitgnailytz

    Ah, yes~ the editor to this book ask me to check it and I don't like it at all, I really, really love it! 😘💞 Ember is sweet girl with humble personality but behind the mask she is a strong werewolf. The plot and twist is heart and mind confusing, at the same time amusing and enjoyable!😊 Even if I only read the first six chapter, this book easily reach the first place between other books I have read before. If you like heart warming fluff, funny twist and heart beating moment then I greatly recommend this book!! you will definitely love it!!

    08/21/2020 19:42

  • Gemini-Fantasy

    Hello, I came here from Wattpad after your editor asked me to check out this story. You are a very talented writer and I am enjoying this story very much.

    08/21/2020 19:29

  • Suitgnailytz

    Ah, yes~ someone recommended this book to me through wattpad and I really found it interesting, the heroine is sweet girl with a humble personality but behind the mask she's a strong werewolf. I don't like this at all, I really, really love it.😘💞The plot and twist is really heart and mind confusing, at the same time enjoyable and amusing. I have only read a few books like this and this book easily reach the top place between them. If you like heart warming fluff, funny plot and quite embarrassing moment, then this book should be your guest for today!!

    08/21/2020 19:28

  • MissR

    I was recommend to read this through Wattpad. So far I am enjoy it.

    08/21/2020 18:44

  • Thandi Tia

    i am hooked on this book it brought me back on my warewolf phase love how the whole story flows and how captivating it is

    08/21/2020 18:40

  • Juliana Macias

    I usually don’t like to read supernatural books like these on Wattpad but I really appreciate the author’s creative writing style. It allows me to view the story differently than other stories like this on Wattpad. I’ve only read half of the first chapter but I really like your ideas for this book! keep writing!

    08/21/2020 18:32

  • Tomura’s Player 2

    I’m glad I found out about this book

    08/21/2020 18:26

  • Tomura’s Player 2

    I found this book through wattpad and I’m so glad I got that message cause this story is awesome so far

    08/21/2020 18:26

  • Zee

    I love that she mentioned buzzfeed unsolved:)

    08/21/2020 18:15

  • TheRevivedWriter

    got a hint for this book and I'm actually glad!

    08/21/2020 17:40

  • Rachel Pedro

    I remember hearing about this book through wattpad but completely forgot about it, it was then brought up again by the author and I began reading it, instantly regretting to check it out in the first place because it really pulls you into the book within a few chapters, which is what I’m always looking for when reading books.

    08/21/2020 17:30

  • Do Kyung So Tata

    My advice is that you shouldn't use a school background because I think it's been used too often by other writers. It's good for you to make omega and alpha meet when they were kids and be friends but because there is a problem with one of their parents that requires them to separate and then meet when They grow up at a work meeting or something, when the Alpha is looking for a partner he marked as a child that's all my complaint as a new reader😂😂 moreover I really enjoy reading this story really

    08/21/2020 17:15

  • Jennifer Deemer

    The writer contacted me through wattpad to read this book, honestly I was so invested in reading it. Although the downside is I wished it was on Wattpad cause I don’t have the money to pay to unlock the other chapters. But, so far the book is amazing.

    08/21/2020 17:12

  • Ken.dh

    wow, thank u to the person who reccommended me this thru wattpad

    08/21/2020 17:11

  • Leah rey

    Being only a few chapters in, I gotta say, I’m already captivated. The different sentence lengths, the adverbs at the start of sentences, the authors not over-explaining each detail/action, the micro focus on the character’s actions/feelings and then zooming out to view the situation as a whole e.g relating to the character’s internal thought process and then examining their surroundings via cinematic description. Even just the maintaining of tense! You wouldn’t believe how many books on Wattpad I’ve read where it goes from present to past tense in one paragraph. The only thing I would say needs editing is simple grammar mistakes. But that’s easy to fix. The talent is there and that’s what matters.

    08/21/2020 17:09

  • Stellou DDV

    Hello, I'm StellouDDV from Wattpad. So. Good start for the book. I will say more things during my reading, of course ;)

    08/21/2020 17:01

  • cathrine dimanno

    It's a really good book, interesting character dynamics and the characters are well developed. The plot is interesting, as soon as I started reading I couldn't stop. So glad the author asked me to read it and leave a review, best book I've read in awhile.

    08/21/2020 16:47

  • Lucky Nacha

    I'm soooo glad the author recommended this story to me. I only read a little but i love what I was reading I'm sooo looking forward to reading the rest.

    08/21/2020 16:43

  • Ingrid Remess M

    I knew about this book because of wattpad and I'm very pleased with this recommendation, i just started to read it and I'm already obsessed, it is really good and interesting

    08/21/2020 16:43

  • Ruy Jsag

    Hey! i'm Raredreams, a user of Wattpad, the editor of this story share me this and it's really interesting ! I can't speak perfectly English but I'm gonna make my best for read this, for that ( my english isn't good at all how i said before ) maybe this could be misspelled and for that I apologize. But hey, the story looks good, I hope to read it should without having to use the translator much, heh.

    08/21/2020 16:43

  • Paulina Jasińska

    ahhh amazing😍

    08/21/2020 16:31

  • Iris

    I have never heard of this app, but glad that I now do! The story seems amazing, I hope you keep up such amazing work!

    08/21/2020 16:08

  • Lazy_Potato

    A editor for this story approached me on wattpad, and I’m glad they did! After reading the prologue it got me hooked and wanting to read more.

    08/21/2020 16:05

  • hi_netflix

    the writer herself asked me to read it and give her feedback back on Wattpad and now I’m so glad she did because it already so good

    08/21/2020 16:04

  • Jenn

    I found this book through wattpad and the little they told me about it sounded so good!!!!

    08/21/2020 16:03

  • IwontTellMy Name

    Hey ^^ some girl on watti wrote me and shared this story its absolutely amazing, you write wonderful

    08/21/2020 15:49

  • Consider Duduku

    this is Konsyda12 from wattpad. this is my first time using this app and I really like your book👌

    08/21/2020 15:46

  • Nefertiti

    Hi, this is Cumbers from Wattpad. Was a bit hesitant to read the story in different platform, but the excerpts sent by the editor peaked my interest. Now on to the sample chaps... I like that the story presents itself in 1st person POV. I know it's not easy, especially when it can be too much and too cringey to read (at least for me), especially when the protagonist is explaining his/her situations. I'm glad that is not the case with this story. Each sentence and dialogue written intertwine organically, bringing along the readers throughout the journey. And I especially love how the author describes the background setting of the story. "The air was indeed pleasant cool and sweetened by the lilies and roses the leaves of the orange trees moved with the wind, a soothing rustling." Now you know I'm a sucker for poetic writing! This is a major bonus point, and just totally enhanced the reading experience. From the sample chaps I've read, the plot is uncomplicated, but by no means simple. I'm not a fan of teenage/young-adult storyline, but I must say this one is now one of my exceptions All and all, kudos for creating such a delightful story!

    08/21/2020 15:46

  • Tifa Woods

    Great story so far now I have to

    08/21/2020 15:33

  • Sara Hilton

    So far I’ve only read the sample and I’m very excited to read more!!

    08/21/2020 15:23

  • FeelinKindaGeeky

    Yaay so happy she messaged me on Wattpad, I’m lovin this book🥰

    08/21/2020 15:03

  • Aiena Maisarah

    to be honest , it is such a beautiful plot of story , unexpected and really enjoying . it make me become more curious on what will happen next , thanks to the author for the recommendation at wattpad . you wrote a great story

    08/21/2020 14:48

  • Eden Ashendorf

    The writer reached out to me on wattpad and sent me the first chapter ish. I was immediately hooked. Can't wait to start reading more :)

    08/21/2020 14:32

  • Alejandra Franchi

    i found out about this book on Wattpad, the chaps i read was amazing, very easy yo understend. I love this book!!!!!

    08/21/2020 13:47

  • Alejandra Franchi

    i found out about this book on Wattpad, the chaps i read was amazing, very easy yo understend. I love this book!!!!!

    08/21/2020 13:47

  • Alejandra Franchi

    i found out about this book on Wattpad, the chaps i read was amazing, very easy yo understend. I love this book!!!!!

    08/21/2020 13:47

  • Alejandra Franchi

    I found out about this book on Wattpad. I love the chaps that I read. Its very easy yo read even when i'm not english speaking Its very easy yo understend

    08/21/2020 13:39

  • Alejandra Franchi

    I found out about this book on Wattpad. I love the chaps that I read. Its very easy yo read even when i'm not english speaking Its very easy yo understend

    08/21/2020 13:38
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