Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • JustKidding Shay

    this book has been a good send. it’s mine blowing and creative that I can’t stop reading

    11/30/2020 03:09

  • Hollow World

    Just got until ch 6 and yes, I'm hooked. Though the prologue flow kinda bugged me a little; that went a tad too fast from my POV, the flow of introducing the meeting with the mate was somewhat rushed. However, I love the subtle details of the characters that pops up every now and then, like the thing that MC likes to bring with her everywhere, her skin tone (oh, she can be white, black, tanned for all i care), her name (her full name isn't often said during the 6 chap i've read), and many more. A job well done, I have to say :)

    11/29/2020 16:55

  • Jesscarrot

    Honored to have been sent this, so good!

    11/29/2020 14:42

  • Libby Ward

    having so far read only a few pages, I think it’s amazing! I was asked to review the book on Wattpad and I must say it’s great! I look forward to reading more! :)

    11/29/2020 11:55

  • Reader-343252

    it was an overall good story plot but the author was all over the place..there was no flow to the next chapters and then the Halloween chapters..wth it made no sense to write it!!

    11/28/2020 20:17

  • Reader-670952

    This is of the storyline but it needs to go into more detail in order to really wrap everything together . there were too many strings left hanging like did she meet her father what’s going on blah blah blah

    11/28/2020 18:05

  • Kate Daniels

    what is with the coins. can't buy any

    11/28/2020 17:45

  • Kathleen Quinn

    I want to continue reading but won't let me buy coins

    11/28/2020 02:26

  • Ifunanya Kayla Osondu

    just a few chapters into it,and I’m already loving it

    11/26/2020 17:58

  • Kate Austin

    this book doesnt have a payoff.... its like its half written, it needs another 40 chapters where you get to experience the resolve. its frustrating and a shame as I was invested in what could be

    11/22/2020 21:32

  • Leisa G Epps

    the book so far is great.. the buying of coins not so much. it wont let me buy any. keeps giving some kind of error

    11/22/2020 20:00

  • Bukie Tovia

    I love the way you write like your words, the descriptions are so easy to picture. I like Ian's character.

    11/22/2020 16:09

  • Bukie Tovia

    So far I'm liking the book, it's interesting and doesn't give all the story in one chapter, leaves you with questions that engage you to read further.

    11/22/2020 16:00

  • Sherri Williamson

    The prologue caught my attention. You have an alpha rejecting his mate, that we the readers, are assuming is a female. I understand you are writing in first person character, but we don't know for sure. Then we go to chapter 1, where the character is in a cage fight. But we do not know, until mostly toward the end, that it is (we still assume) the female. Then we get to chapter 2 and suddenly everyone is in college. But how many years has it been? Because in the prologue they are still in high school. I think you should write a new prologue, explaining more about the characters. Especially the female that the story is coming from. I am liking the story so far, but I think it needs a little straightening up (characters and timelines), and a little revision of the beginning.

    11/21/2020 21:10

  • Danielle Betts

    So I was asked to give this a read from wattpad and give my feedback. I've read upto chapter 6 and so far im liking it, its really well written but I think the characters should be introduced at the start as I got confused where Ember is an omega in one chapter then the next shes fighting like she's not, so wasn't sure if it was the same person. A bit more structure at the start would make it flow better. I didnt realise you had to purchase coins to continue reading further, which is a shame as it was getting good and would of liked to read what happens next, but I'm not paying per chapter as it gets expensive 😔 would rather pay for the book. Thank you for sharing your story though 💕

    11/21/2020 17:00

  • Olivia_Taco

    Welcome to my school This isn't highschool This is the thunderdome

    11/21/2020 13:46

  • Sharika Haque Mumu

    has there any other option for reading this book?🙂

    11/21/2020 07:35

  • Muhsana Ahad

    An amazing book, keep up with good work. Really enjoyed this

    11/20/2020 23:23

  • Lisanna Ioteva

    I Think This Is The Best I've Seen Till Now This Book As Caught My Attention As I Can Not Get Enough Of It!!! Looking Forward To Reading More Of Your Work!!! Thank You So MUCH For Recommending It!

    11/20/2020 10:08

  • Samantha Casil

    I was also asked to read and review this book. I just recently downloaded the app, so I’m looking forward to it. Thanks for introducing me to it author-nim

    11/20/2020 08:46

  • Kimaiya Harris

    I was asked to read and review this book and I must say it cought my attention and has so far kepted it the more I read the more I can't get enough of this story! I've been cought and I don't wanna be set free!

    11/20/2020 07:03

  • SavageGummy

    I love this book already! Tysm for introducing me to it!

    11/20/2020 01:03

  • Krisandra Ward

    I'm only a few chapters in but it got my attention since the first character. Characters are well thought out and portrayed. And a exciting story line.

    11/19/2020 22:04

  • Elisabetta Uzzau

    Wow! I came here from Wattpad. I just started reading this story but i'm already loving it ♡_♡

    11/19/2020 21:47

  • LilithDecay31

    I was asked to read and review this book and I adore it. I can create a clear scene in my mind as I fall deeper into the web of words that the author spins with each word! I can wait to keep reading!!!

    11/19/2020 20:09

  • Lisa Fraser

    why am I so in love with the intrigue of the story. great plots and twists and turns love it

    11/19/2020 09:50

  • Chante' Cumpston

    i was asked to read this book and give my opinion. well to put it simply this book is not only an attention getter but it has a good storyline and the characters are really well-thought-out and portrayed I think and I've only gotten I don't know something like 20 chapters or so in and I love it this book is just one of those that you continually read any chance you get that you can't put it down it's really well written. i love it!!!🥰👍

    11/19/2020 06:28

  • Crysta Sanchez

    love this book so far!!!

    11/18/2020 08:35

  • Kimaiya Harris

    I'm just a few chapters in and I'm loving this book so far it's gotten all of my attention now.i just can't take a break from it!

    11/18/2020 08:05

  • Izzy_143

    I’ve barely started reading this story but I’m in love. Great job author, keep it up. 😊👍🏼

    11/18/2020 00:17

  • RoseQuartz Serenity

    hmmmm, alpha's son is interesting!? It's a new plot that the alpha's son rejecting his mate. I love it.

    11/17/2020 18:26

  • Legend of Gru

    I really like the references to famous Sci-Fi classics

    11/17/2020 18:02

  • Akinjise Bamishe Deborah

    a wonderful story so far

    11/17/2020 17:58

  • Lotus_flowergirl

    This book has all my attention. Thanks for sending me the chapters. As for the Alpha's son, why did he reject his mate? Can they not compromise. She may be stronger than he thinks and more wise and powerful.

    11/17/2020 05:53

  • Patricia Emerain

    This book got my attention from the moment you send me those chaps. Ngl this will be my new favorite werewolf book. Great job author ❤️

    11/17/2020 01:56

  • Daniela Castillo

    The book so far has sucked me in. I like seeing a different approach to mating and rejection. So far this book has bought my interest.

    11/16/2020 01:21

  • mystique9925

    Very talented writer, great carachters that will grew to your ❤️ very fast.Mix of supernatural creatures pack nicely in amazing story. It will get you hooked for sure.😊

    11/15/2020 19:56

  • my lioness

    I am really loving this book ❤️

    11/15/2020 14:53

  • Nikki Cruz

    Sad life.. I really love the story, but sadly, i don't have enough coins to continue reading it. This is a good book author, keep it up.

    11/15/2020 10:40

  • sacrycute❤️

    The story is so great! The plot the the characters are so honest like yeah men! The author is also generous! Sharing this story! 🤩😘😍

    11/15/2020 10:40

  • Dya Moy

    so far so good. Even my english is bad but i still understand the flow of this story.

    11/14/2020 15:15

  • Lefki_Fotia

    Super, I love these genres.

    11/14/2020 15:02

  • Lynda Patterson Valdez

    love it so far

    11/14/2020 07:48

  • Arpita Mondal

    added to library already.. I'm waiting for more from you dear.. u r a amazing writer

    11/13/2020 16:03

  • Christina Floyd

    This book is so hard to put down! It is definately one of my new favorite supernatural books, great job Amina Admou!

    11/13/2020 11:27

  • Hayley Van Den Berg

    this book is so amazing I highly recommend it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    11/13/2020 07:53

  • Saher Malik

    My interest has been spiked after reading the preview you sent me but the content here is oolala. I am glad you asked me to review it for you. Can’t wait to start reading.

    11/13/2020 05:38

  • Alexa Tapia

    I was asked to review this book and it’s soooo good the story is so addicting❤️❤️

    11/12/2020 15:49

  • maricar gonzales

    i must say this an excellent story and you're such a good writer...., Keep on writing more story.... God Bless You Now And For Always.....😊😊😊😊😊☺☺☺☺☺😍😍

    11/12/2020 14:58

  • Aminat Tijani

    I was asked to review from wattpad and so far it's good I cant wait for the ending if Kane will bring Ember out of her boring life and make a baddas girlfriend to Alpha son

    11/12/2020 12:46

  • Mariska Kuhn

    The prologue only introduce the Alpha's son. And his mate as a person falling into his arms which he rejects. In the first chapter the person fights a male, and they call the first person the Alpha in the cage, but in Chapter 2 the first person is talking about themselves as Nerdy. Then Kane got the person up against a wall. There is still no indication that the first person is male or female. They haven't been properly introduced to the reader.

    11/12/2020 11:51

  • hana qirezi

    I'm liking the story. i just think it needs a little bit of editing to make it run more smoothly. Also, if she's bewn fighting for awhile I think it has to show on her body.

    11/12/2020 10:05

  • Hemritha Isaac

    lalala love it

    11/12/2020 06:56

  • Malissa Shepard

    this is such a good book!

    11/11/2020 20:53

  • Mm T

    nice writing! it flows really well, and I love that! it also seems like an interesting plot. nice first chap!

    11/11/2020 20:16

  • kara_wish

    erm plz reject kane he doesn't deserve her

    11/11/2020 06:48

  • Vasiliky - Maria Lyra

    A very enjoyable story nicely written with an interesting plot and characters

    11/10/2020 16:47

  • Vamprica R

    wow! this is really good and I just started 😊

    11/10/2020 12:44

  • RelentlessWords

    I thought she were fighting long before she were rejected by kane? This story needs a proper time line. It jumps often and can be confusing. But I like the plot. Tidy it up, work on some sentence structure at times and it will be fantastic

    11/09/2020 19:34

  • Mechelle Johnson Riley

    I payed for the chapters but now it will it let me reread

    11/08/2020 08:04

  • tree #2

    wow!

    11/07/2020 16:56

  • Kim haining

    I can't keep up with the story, it jumps around a lot. they were freezing in the woods being chased by cannibals, then all the sudden they're at McDonald's, reverted back into high school and dating? what is this??

    11/06/2020 23:27

  • Maria Bianca Toader

    Just started and i can say: this story is very good 🥰

    11/06/2020 21:13

  • Julie Alexandra

    Two words... Am hooked

    11/06/2020 19:07

  • Samira Kargbo

    This story is amazing even though am unfortunate to read all chapters You really good and awesome

    11/06/2020 18:50

  • Faith Adams

    Just started and I’m already hooked !

    11/06/2020 03:41

  • Susmita Shrestha

    even though i couldn't read all chapter but each chapters i read are awesome.smooth plot and thrilling to read.amazing characters

    11/06/2020 03:01

  • Maike Gane

    thank you for this book. I also came from Wattpad. aka Story-Times.👌🏻😊

    11/05/2020 23:18

  • Giding Banal Sarmiento

    This is a beautiful, beautiful story. It reads like a fable. The atmosphere is wonderful just the way it is. even in those places, the meaning is clear, and the phrasing is beautiful, almost poetic.

    11/05/2020 19:25

  • Jam T

    I came here from Wattpad and I was skeptical at first. But once I started reading it I was hooked. It’s pretty hard to find a book with grammar as good as this, as well as an intriguing and distinctive plot. I plan on reading more of it, it’s honestly a really good find.

    11/05/2020 09:33

  • Hemritha Isaac

    I was asked for a review for this book from Wattpad and so far its great and you really did a good job on making this. I really like it and I will keep reading this .

    11/05/2020 07:18

  • RisingLovely

    I was asked to review this book also! I think it's great so far and it's not like other supernatural books I've read. It has more to it than just werewolves and it kept my attention. keep up the good work!

    11/05/2020 04:56

  • Jordan Williams

    I was asked to review this story from Wattpad (@theunknowndepths). I haven’t read any supernatural stories in a while and I was a bit skeptical since it was werewolves, but it has actually blown my mind how good this book is. It’s subtle but it latches onto you and pulls you in. You want to know more about Kane and his hidden true self, you want to know more about the supernatural world, you just want to know more as the Alpha picks his mate. It’s wonderful, and would recommend it to people who are fans of this genre.

    11/05/2020 03:00

  • Rachel Katherine

    I was aked to review this book. I have to say you did a really good job creating and keeping interest with this story. Many werewolf books I have read before have the same general theme and can get a bit dull after reading them for a bit. Even though this book has simaler senerios to the previous werewolf books I have read, I never got bored while reading it. You added twists and character development where I didn’t expect any to happen and that kept the book interesting to me. Good job!

    11/04/2020 13:31

  • Notha Shoto

    i was also asked to review ... and im so glad this person did ... You are a good writer man... above all.This was just amazing to read honestly 💖

    11/03/2020 22:30

  • Aleeyah Khemraj

    I was asked to review this and it's just amazing over all the werewolf stories I've read this out stands them all keep up the amazing work

    11/03/2020 18:15

  • Shiella Mae Francisco Ada

    ❤️

    11/03/2020 15:17

  • Emily Gonzalez

    i was asked to review and i must say tha its a really well written story with a good plot, and let me tell u that i would know as i have read over a thousand werewolves storys like this one and not alot of them can keep me wanting to come back and read more.

    11/03/2020 05:35

  • LayD Zhang

    what I want about your story is doesn't use any useless scenario just to lengthen the story but it was all awesome. Talking about bullies, I can relate to the main character and the male lead, the bad boy one is my type :)

    11/03/2020 04:55

  • LayD Zhang

    I don't usually read much but I'm still here reading Hey you're a very good author, thanks. Sorry for the late comment.

    11/03/2020 04:51

  • Who Cares

    loving it

    11/03/2020 04:28

  • Kylie Mason

    I want to keep reading but I cant

    11/02/2020 19:20

  • irumi

    Fast paced..intriguing plot ..one of my favourite trope.. I like it :)))

    11/02/2020 10:45

  • Emmy

    I was asked to review, and I once I started reading, I couldn’t stop. This book is fast paced and unique, you get into it right away. I have no spelling or grammer problems with this book - which makes it very easy to read. The word choice is discriptive, while not being to wordy to understand. I added it to my library, and once I’m done with my review, I’m going to go finish it. I absolutely recommend, and suggest you start reading only when you will have no interruptions. You definitely can’t put this book down, and it will keep you wanting to read just one more chapter.

    11/02/2020 02:33

  • Sarah Mellor

    ask to review .it has a good flow just a lot going on at once but not it a bad way. not rushed or feel like im missing parts . also refreshing not like every other book has its own original thoughts .

    11/01/2020 17:36

  • zodiacsigns

    💕💕

    11/01/2020 11:49

  • zodiacsigns

    i really like it

    11/01/2020 11:49

  • Jana Love

    There is another book called “Once Rejected Twice Desired” on another app. Is this book on another app also??

    10/30/2020 22:07

  • YOURMIMEOW

    💕💕

    10/30/2020 13:34

  • Marie Jamora

    😍😍😍

    10/30/2020 10:35

  • Kimberly Romo

    I love this part

    10/30/2020 05:11

  • Cristal Perez

    he's alpha which I hope he makes her luna pronto !

    10/29/2020 16:25

  • Robee Gwyneth Pareja Jabien

    ❤️

    10/29/2020 12:32

  • lunakitty227

    i cant read chapter 10 on wards how do you read it without coins

    10/29/2020 11:07

  • Jona Cahilgan Fabillar

    👍🏽👍🏽

    10/29/2020 11:01

  • Silvana Maretha

    👍👍

    10/29/2020 05:27

  • nobody’sbusiness

    what does she mean by wolf’s mask?

    10/29/2020 03:05

  • Ky'Iana Collins

    okay. I like to read books all the way before I critique them. So, a few things. if your gonna do a flashback italicize it so we the readers understand it's the past or a text message. Just so we know it's not the present tense. I personally thought there were too many because I would get confused every once in awhile as to what was even happening some moments. So, that kinda sucked. Almost didnt finish reading it because I though what's the point. I was that confused

    10/28/2020 02:59

  • Beltine Bih

    my fingers curled into a fist...🥺👌

    10/28/2020 02:32

  • Joonie

    you can’t say that I never hungry for attention. M alz in my wolrd n I never had a friends in my high school. They are afraid to me to talk. Btw m female but not a gangster or goon.😋😋😋

    10/28/2020 00:51
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