Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • Ziana_lenne Annie

    I like the story so far....I didn't expect that you would be this good in writing... I'm really impressed... congrats writer! keep it up!!

    10/02/2020 10:52
  • Sleepy Witch

    this is really good! this is actually little bit different in POV than other werewolf book I have read. canโ€™t eat for more!

    10/02/2020 10:16
  • 241Cookies

    YOU GO YOU MASSIVE AND AMAZING PIECE OF ARTWORK!!!

    10/02/2020 09:28
  • 241Cookies

    Iโ€™m nervously sweating lol H E L P XD

    10/02/2020 09:24
  • Sue Shi Vam

    Keep it up ๐Ÿ˜Š

    10/02/2020 07:13
  • Sue Shi Vam

    Wow. This is amazing. I am a fan of werewolves stories so I will probably gonna love this. The prologue got me.. ๐Ÿ˜Ž

    10/02/2020 07:12
  • Shanti Andriani Mela

    wah nice kill

    10/02/2020 04:23
  • Monica Wanjish

    This book is amazing even though my coins are over.Thanks author for sharing the story

    10/02/2020 03:39
  • Rosabella G

    Have not finished yet but so far very good. I enjoy the different species unlike other werewolf mate stories where they all become so familiar with each and it feels like you're reading a repeat. The characters are enjoyable, there are parts that make me feel the emotions the characters feel. I'm able to immerse myself into the "pages". Good job!

    10/02/2020 02:44
  • Khadija Mohammad

    love this book the writing is so professional and easy to read and really hooked me

    10/01/2020 20:42
  • Cherry Mae Barrioquinto

    thankyou author for sharing this story. ๐Ÿ˜

    10/01/2020 17:28
  • John Jemimah

    amazing book. i fell in love with it the moment I read the prologue on wattpad . brilliant writing from a great writer

    10/01/2020 14:43
  • Cherish Wallace

    Iโ€™m loving the story so far a very interesting l plot line

    10/01/2020 13:21
  • Aniya Khan

    I got hooked when I first read the prologue on Wattpad ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ this story is amazinggggggggggggggggg๐Ÿ˜

    10/01/2020 10:48
  • Teeigh

    I'm writing an important exam tomorrow. One that will determine my future but yet here I am, getting addicted to this story. I'm doomed!

    10/01/2020 08:33
  • Anabelle Nicholas

    I got the prologue on Wattpad and it got me interested. The story is very well written and I love what I've read till now.

    10/01/2020 07:12
  • Isabella Baeza

    I just started reading this and im hooked i dont have anymore coins to read more chapters though. but so far the book is amazing i love it

    10/01/2020 05:34
  • ItsBreezyBihh

    I can already tell this story is amazing. Just by this chapter. Keep up the good work, iโ€™ll definitely be checking in. โค๏ธ

    10/01/2020 04:27
  • Reader-960551

    I got the prologue on Wattpad and was given 100 free coins, then I bought more so I could keep reading, I seriously loved this story and need more immediately

    10/01/2020 00:37
  • Kitsune Fangirl

    as promised im here to review! I dont have the money to buy all the chapters but what I have read i like. However, I've noticed quite a bit of run-on sentences, and grammer mistakes. There are some terms only avid readers will understand, so make sure you explain things in your work. Also, the story seems rushed with not enough details. Needs more descriptive words. You tend to also start sentences the same way, add variety. The plot is also overused, but that is true for most stories. What are you going to do to keep yours different from others? Can you see yourself buying this book off the shelves? Or do you have ten of them already and decide to pass over for another romance? I hope you find this helpful! Please continue writing and remember to experiment with your style!

    09/30/2020 23:49
  • Hellen

    This is the best story ever. And the writer is so nice and kind with all of her fans. I particularly recommend to read this magical love story. It became a drug just in the first chapter!!!

    09/30/2020 17:15
  • heleina daus

    oh my godddf

    09/30/2020 14:48
  • Nicole Lionel Thomas

    Amazing book. Definitely worth it. It will keep you engaged and wanting to read more. Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ’ฏ

    09/30/2020 12:00
  • Emjay Junetin

    darn it๐Ÿ˜ฉ I wish I didn't read this, then I wouldn't feel so tortured that I have to wait till payday to finally read the next chapters. It sucks being so darn broke๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I'm just kidding. Everything was amazing. Thank you for introducing your book to me. It was worth my time. Once I read it, I couldn't stop until I had no choice but to stop. Thanks, by the way. You stopped it at the worst possible situation and I wouldn't be surprised if many spent cash just to continue reading the rest. Thats just how great your story is. Keep up the good work!๐Ÿ˜

    09/30/2020 09:27
  • Liyah Kent

    the book was really good, except the part of having to pay to read each chapter but i understand

    09/30/2020 04:27
  • Jerin Ann

    Amazing story line and I really appreciate the one who sent me this book ...tho it's not free :( I'm happy the plot is amazing. Keep going sister โค๏ธ

    09/29/2020 21:07
  • sharon imerion

    lovely book with an interesting plotline ๐Ÿ˜ very exciting to read

    09/29/2020 20:27
  • cait

    Amazing

    09/29/2020 18:17
  • Kimberly Marhefka

    You've got to be kidding with the ending!? Talk about leaving it unfinished, a book without an ending is the worst ๐Ÿ˜–

    09/29/2020 17:37
  • AYESHA SIDDIQUA

    Very interesting story loving it. Thx

    09/29/2020 17:09
  • Weir__baconnn

    I love it so far. I think itโ€™s a unique story and thanks for sending me the prologue!

    09/29/2020 16:20
  • deija123

    So far it is amazing! You sent me the prologue on wattpad and im glad I read it. This story really just hooks you in and makes you want to read more, and keeps you wanting more. It is really well written and im excited for what's next honestly. And I'm glad you didn't keep it just about werewolves and you added trolls etc. Im excited to continue reading!

    09/29/2020 12:06
  • cutiebun

    love this story a lot ๐Ÿ˜Šโค

    09/29/2020 11:22
  • Brenda Faye Carter

    Loving this โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’™ Story , it so good I can't put it down thank you

    09/29/2020 03:43
  • Kalene Estey

    amazing story this is as far as I can read. I ran out of coins lol. but your are very talented

    09/29/2020 00:43
  • Robin Igbo

    I had to download the app to finish this book๐Ÿฅฐ

    09/28/2020 20:53
  • Robin Igbo

    Iโ€™m loving this book

    09/28/2020 20:52
  • Rupal Khandelwal

    well written book, liked the characters but feel like the plot is quite rough and need more smoothing.

    09/28/2020 19:06
  • HNC Krstl

    It's beautiful~ I really like how strong and determined Ember is. Thank you for creating characters like Aster, Ian and Jett. โค I loved reading their parts the most.

    09/28/2020 18:49
  • Nae Nae

    dang why he do her like that

    09/28/2020 17:20
  • Yeyelove Peter

    can I just say that Kane is confused

    09/28/2020 17:11
  • Yeyelove Peter

    dude please decide whether she's yours or not and stop torturing her ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ก

    09/28/2020 16:51
  • Yeyelove Peter

    magnificent plot and setting

    09/28/2020 16:47
  • Yeyelove Peter

    l'm already in love with the characters๐Ÿ˜

    09/28/2020 16:45
  • Yeyelove Peter

    the prologue is rather captivating and the way you began not many have the ideas to start but I really impressed you're even better than me when it comes to writing what I'm trying to say to say is that the fact you can print the idea from your mind is really excellent

    09/28/2020 16:44
  • sky shadow

    your writing style is really nice authornim. Thank you for the story

    09/28/2020 16:06
  • gloryfavour jeremiah

    you write like a pro. thank you โ™ฅ๏ธ

    09/28/2020 15:00
  • Iuliana BOZKURT

    The plot is quite ok and the author has some potential, BUT the passage from one narrative block to the other is so abrupt, that you no longer understand anything. The events go into a certain direction, then we are taken back in time, then we return to the present moment... the transition is not smooth and we keep wondering what point in the story we are at. So, the writing technique is still poor. But hey, feedback helps one improve, right?

    09/28/2020 08:09
  • Just K80

    This book is incredibly well written. Everything has been thought through and has me hooked on what will happen next! I love the way it has more characters (faeries, trolls...) and isn't focused on one supernatural being like most books. I can't wait to continue my journey through the protagonists eyes- great job!

    09/28/2020 07:47
  • Bree

    I just started reading this and it is such a good read! ๐Ÿ’œ

    09/28/2020 07:38
  • Joleen Akrofi

    Lovely book. A very intriguing storyline๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    09/28/2020 03:15
  • Ara Galang

    I love it! I just started reading and I got hooked just by the prologue. I'm honestly not into this kind of genres but this got me. You sent me the prologue but I just read it because of schoolwors. The story is interesting I wish I read it as soon as you sent it to me. Also thanks for the gift coins you gave me ๐Ÿ’•

    09/28/2020 02:10
  • Kem E

    Was quite unsure when I started reading it, but now I am so into it

    09/27/2020 22:58
  • Angelica Niรฑa

    I Just started reading and Iโ€™m quite impress, the story is intriguing - the author did not solely focus on werewolves. Iโ€™m quite curious How the characters Will develop as the story goes specially the female protagonist. The authors choice of words is better than I expected. Canโ€™t wait to read more of the the chapters. I hope It doesnโ€™t disappoint. Well I Think It wonโ€™t cause Iโ€™m starting to endulge myself into the story. And Iโ€™m liking It so far.

    09/27/2020 22:52
  • Daniel Etana Magdalene

    I love this book ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ canโ€™t get enough

    09/27/2020 22:28
  • cursed_one_

    you sent me the prologue and I gave you a review but I didnโ€™t get my coins ๐Ÿ˜ข

    09/27/2020 20:08
  • Ainoa Rodrรญguez Dopazo

    I like how she channels that anger into something productive. Good for her.

    09/27/2020 18:42
  • Ainoa Rodrรญguez Dopazo

    This has started really good. Keep it up!

    09/27/2020 18:37
  • Veronica Wilson

    What I havs read so far is great

    09/27/2020 15:13
  • Traci Fox

    love this

    09/27/2020 14:08
  • cait

    Amazing ๐Ÿ˜

    09/27/2020 10:31
  • mhyz-serena

    I love thisโคโคโค

    09/27/2020 10:06
  • Jaris Rogers - Wright

    I like how things are beginning to unfold. This story is really captivating... Keep it up!โฃ๐Ÿ’ฏ

    09/27/2020 09:32
  • mhyz-serena

    ๐Ÿ˜

    09/27/2020 08:31
  • miku hatsune

    This is going to be amazing!

    09/27/2020 08:24
  • Coraline Aragon

    this is very well written and I love it, sadly I canโ€™t read on bc I have no more coins ๐Ÿ˜ข

    09/27/2020 07:52
  • Esther Theko

    wow I love it!!!

    09/27/2020 06:24
  • EIKYL

    As I prdicted, your story is amazing as you. thank you for letting me read such a masterpiece

    09/27/2020 04:58
  • Talisha Pieters

    I love it, a few chapters in and I feel like I've known the main character for years. This book is right up my alley in terms of writing and setting.

    09/27/2020 02:19
  • Stephanie Laurence

    hey! you sent me a part fo the story and i'm not really one who reads werewolf books but i read the chapters you sent me and it made me want to know more. Normally i expect ever werewolf book to have the same plot as i have seen on some websites, some even hav the same characters, attitude and settings, but yours has a unique plot and i'm very excited about it and thrilled to know more about the book...it's a story well done, keep it up.

    09/27/2020 00:12
  • Bono Baa

    Hi! Bono Baa here! Your story is INCREDIBLE. I enjoy basically EVERY SINGLE chapter! This is high quality writing. Love it.

    09/26/2020 21:49
  • SweetLemonTealol

    Love the story!

    09/26/2020 19:02
  • Victoria Sinning

    good story so far, but the writing is messy...

    09/26/2020 19:01
  • Purvi Agarwal

    This is amazing!!

    09/26/2020 17:10
  • Jasmine Kabir

    amazingggg

    09/26/2020 15:04
  • Shanchai Gulfan

    Hi! You've sent me a part of the prologue and I gave a review, remember? Thank you for giving me coins! I really appreciate it. As I've said, this story already gave me a hint that the whole plot would be amazing. But it was far from what I expected. At first I thought this would start in a romantic way but I'm glad It didn't! Now I can say that this is nothing familiar. It has it's own unique plot. I am very thrilled and excited! And I thought the female lead would be a very shy and fragile girl... But hell! The baddass girl was killing it! You made the right choice for pairing two badass individuals. It really is well-done. Congrats!

    09/26/2020 12:24
  • Fire heart

    This is one of the absolute best books here. The plot and story line are incredibly interesting and you feel the need to keep reading โค๏ธ GREAT JOB!!

    09/26/2020 11:20
  • Elluyskya Reinhard

    It's really interesting, the prologe too... it was intense... i like comedy and Ian are funny.. tho sometimes I feel confused at a time while reading... that maybe because english are not my native language... and, thank you for reaching me out, even giving me coins... keep up your good work and don't push yourself too much...

    09/26/2020 08:45
  • Ambria Massa

    I love it great story line,AMAZING characters,and overall a fantastic story 10/10โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

    09/26/2020 06:14
  • maricel golosinda

    Superb Prologue ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘ It was intense already. Got me hooked ๐Ÿ˜

    09/26/2020 05:56
  • lovefaya

    I love the prologue

    09/26/2020 05:11
  • Reader-662065

    great!! I would have just liked more get back at her mother and at the pack as a whole - more apologies&explanations for knowing she was being bullied and doing nothing, and more of her showing them she was nothing like what her mother had told them. anyway, a good one!

    09/26/2020 00:02
  • Foolish Donut

    *chef. she says chief when talking to kanes buddy

    09/25/2020 18:50
  • Arisu527

    love it ๐Ÿ‘Œ

    09/25/2020 18:33
  • jesselly vazquez

    book is really good so far. and Iโ€™m from Wattpad

    09/25/2020 18:01
  • Celestial Grey

    This is amazing! I'm absoulutely IN LOVE with this book! Congrates on getting this far!โค๏ธ

    09/25/2020 17:12
  • blackbluebells

    I just started reading and I can't help need to know what happens next, plus I'm also a sicker for werewolf fiction ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    09/25/2020 17:06
  • Stacey Gough

    wow, can't wait for you to finish this story ...

    09/25/2020 16:46
  • Alwina Lopez

    Thanks for letting me inside Kane's world! Wishing this story all the best โค๏ธ

    09/25/2020 15:57
  • ishveen kaur

    i love ittt ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    09/25/2020 14:38
  • Oblomovissad

    The stream of consciousness is fascinating. ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿคโœจ

    09/25/2020 14:21
  • Oblomovissad

    I loved fiction. Immersive... The stream of consciousness is fascinating.๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ

    09/25/2020 14:16
  • Nikki Labuschagne

    09/25/2020 09:37
  • Suhani Jagdhari

    the story is very interesting. There are twists and turns in the story which is amazinggggg

    09/25/2020 08:01
  • Khadijah Tijjani

    hello its me from wattpad thank you for the coins and the story, I love it

    09/25/2020 06:57
  • Khadijah Tijjani

    ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

    09/25/2020 06:56
  • Abby Wise

    I loved it......and I will re-read this often

    09/25/2020 02:16
  • Nicole Weber

    I got recommended to review this book, I donโ€™t have coins to finish it, but omg itโ€™s awesome!!!

    09/24/2020 21:52
  • GAYLE BEIN

    HELLO!!! ITS ME FROM WATTPAD I HOPE YOU'RE HAVING A GREAT LIFE AND I WANTED TO SAY I LOVE THE STORY IT WAS VERY SATISFYING AND I ENJOY EVER BITS OF IT ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

    09/24/2020 15:40
  • Azzahra Cahya

    i already read some chapters, yeahh.. this is good! I enjoyed this story

    09/24/2020 15:35