Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

Ziana_lenne Annie

I like the story so far....I didn't expect that you would be this good in writing... I'm really impressed... congrats writer! keep it up!!

Sleepy Witch

this is really good! this is actually little bit different in POV than other werewolf book I have read. can’t eat for more!

241Cookies

YOU GO YOU MASSIVE AND AMAZING PIECE OF ARTWORK!!!

241Cookies

I’m nervously sweating lol H E L P XD

Sue Shi Vam

Keep it up 😊

Sue Shi Vam

Wow. This is amazing. I am a fan of werewolves stories so I will probably gonna love this. The prologue got me.. 😎

Shanti Andriani Mela

wah nice kill

Monica Wanjish

This book is amazing even though my coins are over.Thanks author for sharing the story

Rosabella G

Have not finished yet but so far very good. I enjoy the different species unlike other werewolf mate stories where they all become so familiar with each and it feels like you're reading a repeat. The characters are enjoyable, there are parts that make me feel the emotions the characters feel. I'm able to immerse myself into the "pages". Good job!

Khadija Mohammad

love this book the writing is so professional and easy to read and really hooked me

Cherry Mae Barrioquinto

thankyou author for sharing this story. 😁

John Jemimah

amazing book. i fell in love with it the moment I read the prologue on wattpad . brilliant writing from a great writer

Cherish Wallace

I’m loving the story so far a very interesting l plot line

Aniya Khan

I got hooked when I first read the prologue on Wattpad 😍😍 this story is amazinggggggggggggggggg😍

Teeigh

I'm writing an important exam tomorrow. One that will determine my future but yet here I am, getting addicted to this story. I'm doomed!

Anabelle Nicholas

I got the prologue on Wattpad and it got me interested. The story is very well written and I love what I've read till now.

Isabella Baeza

I just started reading this and im hooked i dont have anymore coins to read more chapters though. but so far the book is amazing i love it

ItsBreezyBihh

I can already tell this story is amazing. Just by this chapter. Keep up the good work, i’ll definitely be checking in. ❤️

Reader-960551

I got the prologue on Wattpad and was given 100 free coins, then I bought more so I could keep reading, I seriously loved this story and need more immediately

Kitsune Fangirl

as promised im here to review! I dont have the money to buy all the chapters but what I have read i like. However, I've noticed quite a bit of run-on sentences, and grammer mistakes. There are some terms only avid readers will understand, so make sure you explain things in your work. Also, the story seems rushed with not enough details. Needs more descriptive words. You tend to also start sentences the same way, add variety. The plot is also overused, but that is true for most stories. What are you going to do to keep yours different from others? Can you see yourself buying this book off the shelves? Or do you have ten of them already and decide to pass over for another romance? I hope you find this helpful! Please continue writing and remember to experiment with your style!

Hellen

This is the best story ever. And the writer is so nice and kind with all of her fans. I particularly recommend to read this magical love story. It became a drug just in the first chapter!!!

heleina daus

oh my godddf

Nicole Lionel Thomas

Amazing book. Definitely worth it. It will keep you engaged and wanting to read more. Keep up the good work. 💯

Emjay Junetin

darn it😩 I wish I didn't read this, then I wouldn't feel so tortured that I have to wait till payday to finally read the next chapters. It sucks being so darn broke😭😂😂 I'm just kidding. Everything was amazing. Thank you for introducing your book to me. It was worth my time. Once I read it, I couldn't stop until I had no choice but to stop. Thanks, by the way. You stopped it at the worst possible situation and I wouldn't be surprised if many spent cash just to continue reading the rest. Thats just how great your story is. Keep up the good work!😁

Liyah Kent

the book was really good, except the part of having to pay to read each chapter but i understand

Jerin Ann

Amazing story line and I really appreciate the one who sent me this book ...tho it's not free :( I'm happy the plot is amazing. Keep going sister ❤️

sharon imerion

lovely book with an interesting plotline 😍 very exciting to read

cait

Amazing

Kimberly Marhefka

You've got to be kidding with the ending!? Talk about leaving it unfinished, a book without an ending is the worst 😖

AYESHA SIDDIQUA

Very interesting story loving it. Thx

Weir__baconnn

I love it so far. I think it’s a unique story and thanks for sending me the prologue!

deija123

So far it is amazing! You sent me the prologue on wattpad and im glad I read it. This story really just hooks you in and makes you want to read more, and keeps you wanting more. It is really well written and im excited for what's next honestly. And I'm glad you didn't keep it just about werewolves and you added trolls etc. Im excited to continue reading!

cutiebun

love this story a lot 😊❤

Brenda Faye Carter

Loving this ❤️💙 Story , it so good I can't put it down thank you

Kalene Estey

amazing story this is as far as I can read. I ran out of coins lol. but your are very talented

Robin Igbo

I had to download the app to finish this book🥰

Robin Igbo

I’m loving this book

Rupal Khandelwal

well written book, liked the characters but feel like the plot is quite rough and need more smoothing.

HNC Krstl

It's beautiful~ I really like how strong and determined Ember is. Thank you for creating characters like Aster, Ian and Jett. ❤ I loved reading their parts the most.

Nae Nae

dang why he do her like that

Yeyelove Peter

can I just say that Kane is confused

Yeyelove Peter

dude please decide whether she's yours or not and stop torturing her 😤😡

Yeyelove Peter

magnificent plot and setting

Yeyelove Peter

l'm already in love with the characters😍

Yeyelove Peter

the prologue is rather captivating and the way you began not many have the ideas to start but I really impressed you're even better than me when it comes to writing what I'm trying to say to say is that the fact you can print the idea from your mind is really excellent

sky shadow

your writing style is really nice authornim. Thank you for the story

gloryfavour jeremiah

you write like a pro. thank you ♥️

Iuliana BOZKURT

The plot is quite ok and the author has some potential, BUT the passage from one narrative block to the other is so abrupt, that you no longer understand anything. The events go into a certain direction, then we are taken back in time, then we return to the present moment... the transition is not smooth and we keep wondering what point in the story we are at. So, the writing technique is still poor. But hey, feedback helps one improve, right?

Just K80

This book is incredibly well written. Everything has been thought through and has me hooked on what will happen next! I love the way it has more characters (faeries, trolls...) and isn't focused on one supernatural being like most books. I can't wait to continue my journey through the protagonists eyes- great job!

Bree

I just started reading this and it is such a good read! 💜

Joleen Akrofi

Lovely book. A very intriguing storyline😊😊😊

Ara Galang

I love it! I just started reading and I got hooked just by the prologue. I'm honestly not into this kind of genres but this got me. You sent me the prologue but I just read it because of schoolwors. The story is interesting I wish I read it as soon as you sent it to me. Also thanks for the gift coins you gave me 💕

Kem E

Was quite unsure when I started reading it, but now I am so into it

Angelica Niña

I Just started reading and I’m quite impress, the story is intriguing - the author did not solely focus on werewolves. I’m quite curious How the characters Will develop as the story goes specially the female protagonist. The authors choice of words is better than I expected. Can’t wait to read more of the the chapters. I hope It doesn’t disappoint. Well I Think It won’t cause I’m starting to endulge myself into the story. And I’m liking It so far.

Daniel Etana Magdalene

I love this book 🥰🥰 can’t get enough

cursed_one_

you sent me the prologue and I gave you a review but I didn’t get my coins 😢

Ainoa Rodríguez Dopazo

I like how she channels that anger into something productive. Good for her.

Ainoa Rodríguez Dopazo

This has started really good. Keep it up!

Veronica Wilson

What I havs read so far is great

Traci Fox

love this

cait

Amazing 😍

mhyz-serena

I love this❤❤❤

Jaris Rogers - Wright

I like how things are beginning to unfold. This story is really captivating... Keep it up!❣💯

mhyz-serena

😍

miku hatsune

This is going to be amazing!

Coraline Aragon

this is very well written and I love it, sadly I can’t read on bc I have no more coins 😢

Esther Theko

wow I love it!!!

EIKYL

As I prdicted, your story is amazing as you. thank you for letting me read such a masterpiece

Talisha Pieters

I love it, a few chapters in and I feel like I've known the main character for years. This book is right up my alley in terms of writing and setting.

Stephanie Laurence

hey! you sent me a part fo the story and i'm not really one who reads werewolf books but i read the chapters you sent me and it made me want to know more. Normally i expect ever werewolf book to have the same plot as i have seen on some websites, some even hav the same characters, attitude and settings, but yours has a unique plot and i'm very excited about it and thrilled to know more about the book...it's a story well done, keep it up.

Bono Baa

Hi! Bono Baa here! Your story is INCREDIBLE. I enjoy basically EVERY SINGLE chapter! This is high quality writing. Love it.

SweetLemonTealol

Love the story!

Victoria Sinning

good story so far, but the writing is messy...

Purvi Agarwal

This is amazing!!

Jasmine Kabir

amazingggg

Shanchai Gulfan

Hi! You've sent me a part of the prologue and I gave a review, remember? Thank you for giving me coins! I really appreciate it. As I've said, this story already gave me a hint that the whole plot would be amazing. But it was far from what I expected. At first I thought this would start in a romantic way but I'm glad It didn't! Now I can say that this is nothing familiar. It has it's own unique plot. I am very thrilled and excited! And I thought the female lead would be a very shy and fragile girl... But hell! The baddass girl was killing it! You made the right choice for pairing two badass individuals. It really is well-done. Congrats!

Fire heart

This is one of the absolute best books here. The plot and story line are incredibly interesting and you feel the need to keep reading ❤️ GREAT JOB!!

Elluyskya Reinhard

It's really interesting, the prologe too... it was intense... i like comedy and Ian are funny.. tho sometimes I feel confused at a time while reading... that maybe because english are not my native language... and, thank you for reaching me out, even giving me coins... keep up your good work and don't push yourself too much...

Ambria Massa

I love it great story line,AMAZING characters,and overall a fantastic story 10/10☺️☺️

maricel golosinda

Superb Prologue 😍👏 It was intense already. Got me hooked 😍

lovefaya

I love the prologue

Reader-662065

great!! I would have just liked more get back at her mother and at the pack as a whole - more apologies&explanations for knowing she was being bullied and doing nothing, and more of her showing them she was nothing like what her mother had told them. anyway, a good one!

Foolish Donut

*chef. she says chief when talking to kanes buddy

Arisu527

love it 👌

jesselly vazquez

book is really good so far. and I’m from Wattpad

Celestial Grey

This is amazing! I'm absoulutely IN LOVE with this book! Congrates on getting this far!❤️

blackbluebells

I just started reading and I can't help need to know what happens next, plus I'm also a sicker for werewolf fiction 😍😍

Stacey Gough

wow, can't wait for you to finish this story ...

Alwina Lopez

Thanks for letting me inside Kane's world! Wishing this story all the best ❤️

ishveen kaur

i love ittt 😍😍😍

Oblomovissad

The stream of consciousness is fascinating. 💥💥💥🤍✨

Oblomovissad

I loved fiction. Immersive... The stream of consciousness is fascinating.💥💥💥

Nikki Labuschagne

Suhani Jagdhari

the story is very interesting. There are twists and turns in the story which is amazinggggg

Khadijah Tijjani

hello its me from wattpad thank you for the coins and the story, I love it

Khadijah Tijjani

😀😀😀

Abby Wise

I loved it......and I will re-read this often

Nicole Weber

I got recommended to review this book, I don’t have coins to finish it, but omg it’s awesome!!!

GAYLE BEIN

HELLO!!! ITS ME FROM WATTPAD I HOPE YOU'RE HAVING A GREAT LIFE AND I WANTED TO SAY I LOVE THE STORY IT WAS VERY SATISFYING AND I ENJOY EVER BITS OF IT 🧡🧡🧡🧡

Azzahra Cahya

i already read some chapters, yeahh.. this is good! I enjoyed this story