Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • Nuri Flix

    This story was recommended to me by the editor, so I wanted to leave a review as requested, the storyline is certainly interesting, the words and flow of sentences is great, I liked it! personally, I'm not exactly a fan of werewolves/supernatural stories, but this was different! I couldn't read the entire story, hope your book gets published on wattpad and gets some great reviews! have a good day/night!♡

    08/09/2020 07:11

  • Sami F.

    This story is amazing. If you like werewolf stories, this one is definitely for you. There are amazing twists and turns that keep you on your toes.

    08/09/2020 07:09

  • Inu Ookami

    damn Ian stop teasing this poor girl! Also he give me the vine of the big brother for ember :3

    08/09/2020 07:02

  • Tala Dalmacio

    kudos to the writer for the amazing story. 😘🤩

    08/09/2020 06:44

  • Isya Lee

    woahhh idk that have apps like wattpad in appstore😍 thanks to the writer that recommend me at wattpad about this story. i love this

    08/09/2020 06:27

  • Inu Ookami

    aw don't be sad about it ember! aster saw potential in you and want you to bloom as the most magnificent flower you are!

    08/09/2020 06:13

  • Alexus AP

    From what I was able to read, the story seems to be interesting. There's some parts that don't entirely make sense, but they'll probably be explained in the paid chapters. Even though this story began to interest me, I think I'll stick to Wattpad and the free full stories on there. I'm sorry if that sounds unfair or rude, but that is simply my opinion as well as what I can actually afford. The story is good, though, from what I could read. If I could afford it, I would most likely continue to read this. That is just my honest review, since the editor asked me to read it and comment. I still wish you luck.:)

    08/09/2020 06:12

  • Atarah Heartfilla

    The author reached out to me about writing a review. So I hop here and read some chapters. First of all I really enjoyed reading this book. The writing in the book is wonderful and the writ g of details feels like you can create an image of the story as you’re reading it in you head. The story is very easy flowing and has a great storyline. I do feel like ember doesn’t stand her ground, she however seems to have a strong character. Moving on I personally love werewolves stories so I did enjoy the chapters I read and will certainly continue reading this book. I would highly recommend this book

    08/09/2020 06:07

  • Inu Ookami

    this wilder guy is like a mix of an yandere and a tsundere but implied it by an 100! i mean you don't want her but you still want her? dude make up your mind because this girl already have her own future to think of with or without you on it!

    08/09/2020 06:03

  • Stardust

    heya there! someone on wattpad approached me and asked me to give some feedback, so here it is. sorry if its a bit short and all; im not the best at giving feedback and i dont rly have anything bad to say about it ^^ the prologue is the only thing i’ve read at the moment, but it seems intriguing so far! i could tell im gon be hooked into this. i’ll be sure to binge-read the rest of the book! 😊

    08/09/2020 05:45

  • nomic skeleton

    i knew this story from someone on wattpad, and asked to write a review. let me just say, when i read some part of the prologue, im hooked already XD

    08/09/2020 05:42

  • MakaTheNerd

    Thanks Creator for recomending this story to me! I'm already hooked!!!

    08/09/2020 05:25

  • Alexandra Camacho

    I was sent here to review this book, and honestly a very good decision to come here. This book already got my interest just from the prologue.

    08/09/2020 05:13

  • Inu Ookami

    Interesting chapter love the end of how the character is just imagine beating up her mate XD

    08/09/2020 05:06

  • Rexy Rex

    I really love this book and can’t wait to read the next one!

    08/09/2020 05:03

  • Xx_Mizuki-Ashley_xX

    i have been chosen to write a review for the story on wattpad ((3Xx_Ashley_xX3)) and here is my 2nd review: the story so far is exciting and intreasting. The description of what the characters are doing is great but what caught my eye is the details of the characters, now ive said this before and all say it again, YOUR CHOICE OF WORDS IS AMAZING!! it makes everything easier the description of it fits the characters and stuff. welp that would be my review for now thank you again for giving me a chance to write my thoughts of the story ciao~

    08/09/2020 04:18

  • N E T F E L I X

    DAMN OKAY THANK YOU FOR BRINGING ME TO THIS BOOK ITS GONNA BE ONE OF THE BEST IVE EVER READ DJDBDMDJSH

    08/09/2020 03:16

  • _Wolfie_ _Pup_

    This is amazing! Great work!❤

    08/09/2020 02:44

  • Emily Heckman

    I like it so far it's really good

    08/09/2020 02:24

  • TORM_FAN

    At this moment I have only read the prolog and I like it so far but I do think that you should introduce the character we are in the point of view of

    08/09/2020 01:20

  • AMO TimePlayer

    I also discovered this book through the writer contacting me on wattpad. I have to say this story is very well written. I'm not really the type to be into books about werewolves, but this book is an exception. I also appreciate how it doesn't just revolve around werewolves, it has a well mixed diversity which is something I highly praise in books. This is a wonderful story and I can't wait to read more of it. If I had to rate the book on what I've read so far it would be a 10 out of 10.

    08/09/2020 00:21

  • Estela Castro

    I love it!

    08/09/2020 00:07

  • SilverAnimeWolf 2.0

    I don't get it. How the story started? Who's Kane? Is the main character a werewolf as well or just a human?

    08/08/2020 23:30

  • Kayla Zoe

    I love this I love this I love this I love this I love this

    08/08/2020 23:12

  • Chocolate5441

    I want to start by saying that this book has wonderful plot development and excellent characters. I normally don’t read books like this, but it’s so unique compared to others I’ve read in the past. I was recommended this story by the author and from majority of what I read from the prologue, it made me want to continue further into the book. This definitely deserves more praise and I’m glad to have had the opportunity to read it. Thanks for the recommendation!;)

    08/08/2020 23:03

  • Kayla Zoe

    when he’s possesive 😍😫🤰

    08/08/2020 22:54

  • SleepyLilacFox

    I’m enjoying the character build. it’s stereotypical but at the same time not so much. I’m enjoying that the omega is leading a double life- somewhat like the ‘nerd is actually a badass’ type. I can see much drama happening, greatly enjoying this!

    08/08/2020 22:46

  • SleepyLilacFox

    This is pretty great, I enjoy the clarity and the in-depth details. I remember seeing glances of this in Wattpad, happy to finally get around to read it thanks to the editor recommendations.

    08/08/2020 22:38

  • Panda Smile

    🤣😂🤣😂🤣Ian in real life would be my best friend ever.im laughing so hard rn. I learned about this on wattpad from a random person. I'm glad they did. I am absolutely loving this story by far

    08/08/2020 22:21

  • Rosie ßß

    An editor recommended this to me, from Wattpad. I downloaded the app and to be honest I don't regret it. I've read 9 chapters so far and it was the best. It's unique and golden, thank you for sharing!

    08/08/2020 22:02

  • Melissa Norton

    I got this recommended to me through WP and it’s really good.

    08/08/2020 21:42

  • sekaisse

    i downloaded this app just for read this and it was worth it.

    08/08/2020 21:41

  • Victoria Thompson

    Oh my gosh! I love Aster!!

    08/08/2020 21:26

  • Soul-stealer

    Wow! What I have read for free is amazing.

    08/08/2020 21:07

  • Victoria Thompson

    Oh man! I know who Kane's enemy is. At least I think I do...this will be interesting either way.

    08/08/2020 21:03

  • Raquel Gulley

    This is the best story! I love it!

    08/08/2020 20:40

  • Goodness Abodunrin

    well I got to know this book through the editor on wattpad and with just the few chapters I've read,I must say I love the story already

    08/08/2020 20:24

  • Paszionique Kelly

    its a really good book! highly recommend

    08/08/2020 19:37

  • Victoria Thompson

    I don't know why but I like the fact on her first shift that we observe, when she bites her lip and then her canines come through it causes her to bleed. It's a new form of imagery in werewolf books. Very unique.

    08/08/2020 19:35

  • Taquiria Day

    In really loving the way this stories playing out so far I’m glad I found it 💯

    08/08/2020 19:23

  • Kriti Kumar

    Ohh this is so much fun.... I loved it

    08/08/2020 18:40

  • survivorwithavillain

    this is amazing !!!

    08/08/2020 18:32

  • Simsim

    an editor approached me on wattpad to read this book and give a reveiw (what i didn't realize until too late was that it wasn't free😤) at the beggining I thought this will be another boring werewolf story so i was a little bored to be honest. but ththe story was really refreshing (well the First 6 chapters I read of anyway) . it takes an old idea and gives it a refreashing twist. I absoultely hate Kane btw and am I little curious by how the author justifies his brutality at the end or if he ends being the antagonist. In the few chapters that I read I really fell in love with Ian and Ember and couldn't help but get hooked on it. Definitely would have spent my money on if had any

    08/08/2020 18:15

  • Shy Adams

    Im really glad the author recommended the book to me and I had to keep my word and check it out and I am very glad I did ❤️ outstanding 🤗

    08/08/2020 17:47

  • YoungboySuckedMyToes

    I like this

    08/08/2020 17:42

  • Ashlynn Live

    I really like this story!! It’s well-written and has a good flow. I don’t have any coins or money right now to read past the initial chapters but I enjoyed reading them. The characters and their relationships play out well and aren’t all over the place. Even though I don’t read as much fantasy and werewolf-centered stories as I used to, I still enjoyed this one A LOT. Thank you for messaging me & recommending it :)

    08/08/2020 17:38

  • Dreanagurl246 Dreanagurl246

    I truly enjoyed the story! The friendship between Ember and Ian is wonderful. I imagine this is not the first time Ian has gotten them into a situation😄😄😄. It seems like Kane is regretting his initial decision of rejecting Ember. It's gonna be an interesting ride. I remember having a crush on someone in school. When he found out it was not pretty. As it turns out, it was a good thing that he didn't return my feelings. He's in jail now for DV. Grammatical errors aside, your writing style is clear and the momentum is building nicely. I hope there are some answers to why Kane behaved in the manner he chose and why he changed. Does he actually want Ember or just the pull of being mated? Thank you for the suggestion/invite.

    08/08/2020 17:18

  • Shae Bae

    The editor recommend this book to me and I have to say it is an amazing story thank you so much for sharing this with me. 🤩🤩

    08/08/2020 17:18

  • Caroline Rose Marcon

    I was just told about this story on wattpad and it is the only reason I downloaded this app and I'm really glad I did so far. this sounds like its going to be really good.

    08/08/2020 17:17

  • Taylor Snow

    🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩

    08/08/2020 16:51

  • Liv Steventon

    this is so good already! I like that you've clearly done a lot of world building and the characters have been established nicely! the ONLY thing I'd change is the use of "orbs" to describe eyes - there are plenty of other synonyms to consider; apart from that everything else is well written and I can't wait to dive deeper 😁

    08/08/2020 16:51

  • Lorna Hayes

    I really like this book. like really like it. wow

    08/08/2020 16:47

  • OMI-OMI-KUN

    The Author recommended the story for me and I like the plot and the story is super entertaining!

    08/08/2020 15:33

  • Kaz

    Absolutely amazing read! Couldn't put it down till I'd finished it! So captivating and enjoyable! Look forward to more reads from this author!

    08/08/2020 15:30

  • Naya Clark

    I love this story they did a great job on it and it’s very eye catching and intriguing

    08/08/2020 15:16

  • Devine Mattis

    damn my heart is racing for her

    08/08/2020 14:56

  • Sana Khatoon

    I am glad when writer asked me to read this story, I was captivated with the story description. so far I like the story plot. I love this story so far...

    08/08/2020 14:36

  • Rikku Teletran

    the book was recommended to me from wattpad as well. the way the story begins caught my complete attention, I'm glad I was recommended this book, and interesting read

    08/08/2020 14:04

  • CEOofBoredom1024

    I was actually sent from an DM on Wattpad (my account is CEOofBoredom1024) and I have to say, this is DEFINITELY one of the best stories I've read! I immediately fell in love with the characters, and the plot is just amazing! I may end up trying to get coins just to continue reading, haha!

    08/08/2020 12:21

  • mononokewolf1969

    This is an amazing story. Captures your attention from the first sentence and keeps making you want more

    08/08/2020 11:34

  • Kaniah Ciel Chapman

    So far Ive only read the first Chapter and i got to admit that it sounds like a really good story. I might continue even tho i rarely read stories like theses.

    08/08/2020 11:33

  • Sabrina Abid

    Amazing writing skills and I'm sooo thankful that the write has recommended this book to me! Great job guys ❤

    08/08/2020 11:08

  • Cheshiii

    Hey It's me ya boi (sorry I couldn't help myself lol) Anyways i'm Cheshiii from wattpad. First off I would like to thank you so much for pming me and suggesting you're book. I knew from those sample paragraphs I would be in love with it. So much so that I've been up since about 2am reading, It was like I was in a trance because I could not stop reading. Reading this book brought me so much joy and left me on the absolute edge of my seat the entire time, It was so well written and basically had everything I look for in a book. I definitely give this book a 10/10!

    08/08/2020 10:58

  • Isabella Galindo

    The story and plot line are pretty good so far, consistent and detailed, flowing along. I'll say my only concern so far is that you never really explain the whe wolf mask thing. is it a cheap halloween wolf mask? is it her transforming into wolf form? half wolf face with a human body?

    08/08/2020 10:56

  • nataki florentville

    Amazing job I recommend this to everyone and I will be promoting this amazing story

    08/08/2020 10:48

  • Katherine Westfall

    This book is a captivating read. You'll get hooked by the end of the first chapter per se. The writing style is genuinely good; keep writing :)

    08/08/2020 09:47

  • tzuwinkle

    Oh that's so good. I found out the book though wattpad. I am glad that I've been asked for a review and opinion, you are doing a great job author!

    08/08/2020 08:43

  • francine

    I've been approached by the editor on Wattpad where they privately shared a part of this story to me and I was instantly hooked and decided to check out the whole story, unfortunately I don't have the money to continue but I wish I could continue because the writing is really good and the plot I could tell would be amazing.

    08/08/2020 08:26

  • francine

    I was approached by the editor on Wattpad and they gave me a few samples and I can't say I'm disappointed, I was honestly reading another story before they gave those samples and with only those I got hooked and decided to read it. It's really good, I could tell the plot would be amazing

    08/08/2020 08:19

  • Aria Will

    Brah you either want her or you don't make up yo mind

    08/08/2020 08:17

  • ohgrass

    I was sent the prologue on wattpad and I absolutely loved it. Now I’m hooked 😅. Fantastic story

    08/08/2020 08:12

  • JKS_bbybuneyes

    I LOVE THIS BOOK I'VE READ THE WHOLE BOOK IN A DAY. it's wonderful thank you for suggesting your book to me on Wattpad 😊

    08/08/2020 08:01

  • Day Dreamer

    he don't want her but still he is reminding that she is his. what the fudge he think he is doing!!

    08/08/2020 08:00

  • random army

    Alright, so I was reached out to on Wattpad and was asked to give a review of this book, so here it is. I’m going to be completely honest and say that after reading the prologue, I went into the story thinking it was going to center around the played out, rejected-mate story trope/cliche you see all the time on Wattpad, so it kind of made me roll my eyes a bit. While I have to say that the supernatural characters and their evident personalities are painted very vividly, and the balance of information in each chapter is good and keeps me gripped, I couldn’t necessarily enjoy it to the fullest with the thought of the main protagonist eventually ending up with Kane in the back of my head. (I’ve only read until chapter 23, but I accidentally spoiled myself in the comments.) I’m not the author, so I can’t tell them how to write their own book, but I was hoping for a different outcome than her giving into Kane, so that was a disappointment. Overall, Werewolf books aren’t really my thing, but I think that this one is a lot better than the others I’ve ever read so far. Keep it up.👍

    08/08/2020 07:52

  • _manan_01

    This is a well written work and the amount of words in each chapter are perfect. Did not wear me out while reading. The description was so amazing and the must cliffhanger was soo well.

    08/08/2020 07:42

  • rmia xr

    OMG... THE STORY IS INCREDIBLE. Finally, I wasn't lonely during quarantine!!....I'm very happy... I found something amazing!! Thank you very much for your recommendation....

    08/08/2020 07:32

  • Shazia Karim

    I think I've read this in wattpad. it's a good story so will read it again.

    08/08/2020 07:27

  • Fiza Noor

    I found out this book through wp when it's writer recommend to me. Thw book is really good and well written and I love the character development in it

    08/08/2020 07:07

  • Amy_Marie514

    I've only read 2 chapters. I love it so far!!

    08/08/2020 06:25

  • J.J. puma

    I'm kinda bummed that she's so submissive still when it comes to him .. its kind of the norm for these a/b/o books and I wish it would get switch up a lil bit. otherwise, this story is sooo good. very well written and it keeps me on my toes

    08/08/2020 06:24

  • Rekishi hitoshi

    I honestly really love this story it flows together so well, and the story building is well done. for the chapters i got to read were a 10/10

    08/08/2020 05:58

  • tiger lily

    I actually really enjoy reading this book it’s really interesting

    08/08/2020 04:38

  • Fubuki_Sumie 19

    I love it 💜 I’m already on chapter 6

    08/08/2020 04:33

  • Audrey Davidson

    The beginning caught my interest and it's really affect fascinating book to read. Its written, well versed, and it keeps you on the edge of your seat till the end and I can't wait to see what happens next.

    08/08/2020 04:18

  • Zenia

    This story from what I can tell is a very incredible and complicated love story between the characters

    08/08/2020 03:56

  • Sabrina Marie

    excellent job

    08/08/2020 03:37

  • zaylizayre

    The story line is goooodddd. I thank you very very much to wattpad especially the writer who recommended this~ I was actually finding a story with this kind of plot~

    08/08/2020 03:11

  • Timiyah Johnson

    This book is one of the best books I've ever read, I haven't seen even one mistake relating to the grammar, or anything at all. The plot is really interesting, and the main character seems really awesome, I can't wait to see what happens next! I would recommend it to anyone who is in need of a good book.

    08/08/2020 02:36

  • Kroto Zelle

    i love this story and Awesome story and enjoyed your story

    08/08/2020 02:27

  • Layke Bug

    I really enjoyed this story a lot. I love how descriptive it was. it made it so easy to picture in my head. Awesome job!

    08/08/2020 02:23

  • TheyCallMeDr.

    I'm only a chapter into this book and I am in love! The writing is crisp and the attention to detail is one you don't typically find in stories like this. I can already feel the chemistry between characters and the chapters length is perfect. Giving me the perfect balance of suspense and introduction without giving the whole life story of the character away in the first paragraph. Can't wait to read more!

    08/08/2020 02:17

  • Strawberry Body

    It's good so far.

    08/08/2020 02:10

  • doooonut

    LOVE IAN

    08/08/2020 01:39

  • doooonut

    omg I can't stop laughing

    08/08/2020 01:39

  • Shaylee

    hi you contacted me through Wattpad. Don’t get me wrong, you’re doing great as a beginner. However, you’re punctuation format lacks correctness. You have run-on sentences that no explanation. Other than that, it’s a little cliche. But overall, good.

    08/08/2020 01:20

  • Moon of Morrigan

    The story reads easily with a consistent flow. After a few things are ironed out with it, I believe it will be exemplary in its genre.

    08/08/2020 01:20

  • Bts__Is__ Bae

    my oh my. this book seems to be very interesting and I can’t wait to read more 😌

    08/08/2020 00:59

  • Ciara Williams

    The author sent me to review this but little does he/she knows I already read it and I absolutely loved it

    08/08/2020 00:14

  • Shunta

    Okay... it was very interesting. At first I was skeptical and partly rolled my eyes from it being a werewolf book, the mate rejecting the girl and the girl is heartbroken (I can feel this way because I wrote it before). With the character being the cliche omega and getting pushed around, it definitely caught me by surprise with her character traits. Yes, she was the cliche I’m not that pretty and wear baggy clothes all the time but, she was also someone who took her heartbreak and used it to make her stronger which was fighting to be strong. Even though I tend to stay away from these kind of books and it gives me horrible scarring flashbacks, I can’t help but want more. To be honest I didn’t have high hopes for this book but it is something that could compete with these generic books with millions of views. You two have done an amazing job with it starting off cliche but not continuing the cycle. I think you guys are bringing something new to the table and, I can’t wait to be one of your viewers. Amazing job. I wish you the best of luck and success and I hope it doesn’t disappoint with the typical; I see that you can fight and are stronger than I expected, I want you back and she takes him back without batting an eye. *sigh* P.S. Just followed you and thank you for the opportunity to review your work.

    08/08/2020 00:05

  • Ponda Alemba

    I dont get how bullying and humilitying someone passes for love.

    08/08/2020 00:00
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