Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • Articwolf158

    the book was very awesome with mix of drama, romance, and advebture, even some comedy I might recommend this to one of my friends

    08/10/2020 18:55

  • toxic_wrath

    Unfortunately I can't read passed the sixth chapter because I need coins and I literally just created this account to read what was available, but from what I've read so far, I really like it. It isn't the type of story I would typically read, but I can definitely see myself reading this if I could. You did a wonderful job!

    08/10/2020 18:43

  • Lucy lenerd

    I believe black people won't be able to be werewolves, especially omegas because we are just to stubborn and dramatic. So in this situation we would be like "I will talk to whoever tf I want" and then walk away sassy 🤣🤣

    08/10/2020 18:18

  • Kahleesi Elisabetta

    I do not want her to always kneel to him. the fact that he don't want her angers me, because he keeps messing with her head. I need her to be a fearless woman and beat the shit out of him and everyone who dear try to pick on her again. don't like that she's submissive to a shit hole like him

    08/10/2020 18:11

  • Mixtakes Come Up

    The editor approached me through Wattpad to get a review and I gotta say. Checking this out is worth it. A few chapters in and I am into it already! I am definitely reading this the whole way!

    08/10/2020 16:34

  • Crystal Heart

    it's pretty well done and I loved the sample chapters

    08/10/2020 16:23

  • Jasmine Howell

    I wish there was a way I could like the story. it's good so far!

    08/10/2020 16:06

  • Celine Vaillant

    the story is off to a perfect start you have the insidont incident here right in the first chapter. there are a few technical fixes for sentence flow but it's a very good start to what could be a pretty increidible story. very good work and a strong idea, just try to fix little things such as the placement of the hands and the shirt wouldn't be under but over his hard muscles. jidt a few technival problems, but very enjoyable and intriguing to read.

    08/10/2020 16:01

  • Kriti Kumar

    Hey.. Is this story on wattpad and by what name?

    08/10/2020 15:58

  • yohanna Sika

    The editor sent me the prologue on Wattpad and I really liked it. Even if the other chapters are not free, it makes me want to read this book.

    08/10/2020 15:48

  • Yoongles

    I found out about this book through wattpad and I'm glad that the writer messaged me recommended it! It's entertaining and just a great story in general. But I won't be buying anymore coins to finish the book.

    08/10/2020 15:25

  • Wendy Price

    I like the characters and the plot. The story flows smoothly and is very interesting. I would honestly post it on Wattpad, you have a lot of fans there.

    08/10/2020 15:15

  • Megan

    This story is well written with plenty of description but I am not a fan of the actual plot itself. The male rejecting his mate because she's a omega, and basically tries to control her life at school. He has already made her cry and feel depressed. So, I am not a fan of the main male character. He already seems toxic. And the female character is beating up people in her spare time?

    08/10/2020 15:13

  • Sasha Anggrahini

    The story is amazing. I think there are too much complicated things in Amber's mind which is good for character building. But I think it's enough to explain about how Amber's family conditions and etc... and it would be more nice to focus on Amber-Kane Relationships, more desire things that could blown up the readers. Overall, this book could be an amazing recommendation for supernatural readers. Good job!

    08/10/2020 14:53

  • Shamira Jones

    This is really good. Usually I don't buy coins to read chapters....but I might have to with this story. Lol. It takes alot for me to spend money on certain things. And the plot so far is really good and interesting. I'd definitely recommend this to other supernatural fans.

    08/10/2020 14:45

  • coolgirl

    one of the authors got me here through wattpad and I’m glad that I read more. the overall plot is really good, plus how the characters develop and change. I would 100% recommended this to anyone who’d be interested.

    08/10/2020 14:36

  • Yasmine Dicks

    I'm sorry to say but I was confused throughout the whole book. Either chapters were missing or this is a squeal or something because I was confused the whole time. The plot felt rush and seemed to have parts misplaced, characters popped out of nowhere with no backstory or explanation, the world building wasn't too clear, and the main leads' relationship seemed to be full of cliques and dramatic on and off again scenes. Not hating on the book. just leaving a critique so the author can better themselves. The first chapter was writing amazingly, but from onwards it seemed like a lot was put into the plot. But small details to weave it all together were misplaced. So the main focus would be on pacing and making sure you add minor details to tie it all together 😊.

    08/10/2020 14:27

  • LostEchos291

    This book is wonderful! So glad I was reached out to, to read it! Just wonderful! <3

    08/10/2020 14:20

  • Xiulan Co

    This was so enjoyable!! My thanks to the author for the recommendation!,🦋 Awesome work although I do wish it was on Wattpad. 🌺

    08/10/2020 14:04

  • Mystical Books

    I found this through WP and just by reading the first few chapters I am already enjoying it. Normally this is something that I don't read all that often. Great job keep up the good work!

    08/10/2020 13:58

  • NightmareCrystal Moon

    I’m glade the Author contacted me through Wattpad .... I’m already enjoying it

    08/10/2020 13:49

  • Tiffany Rivera

    I never knew I would enjoy a book like this, It actually got me hooked on to it. 💖👌🏻

    08/10/2020 13:41

  • Krystal Gennova Madrid

    Hi there! I already read the free chapters from the app and I can say it's a really good book. The prologue is such an attention catcher which is a nice style if writing, since it can hook up the readers easily with the story and let them want to read more. Also, I can say that the characters were well-planned off. Not just because of the consistency of their attitude is present in the preceeding chapters, but also their developments and change as a character. These I can say makes the story interesting since each character is like a mystery waiting to be known who they really are. This also makes the reader felt the excitement and the mystery of the story. With this kind of start, I recommend to market or share this book to young adults since for sure this type of book is what they mostly like of. Anyways, that's all I can say for now since I cannot avail coins to read more of the chapters. P.S. I am KaiserL18 (account on wattpad) and this was recommended to me by your friend who was an editor PINKIE_SUTT on wattpad. This is my review and I decided to share it here so future readers may know what a wonderful book this is.

    08/10/2020 13:34

  • Junghinj

    l likel it

    08/10/2020 13:26

  • Grace Phillips

    I've only read the first few chapters but it so well written and has such a good story. I'm so glad the writer recommended this to me.

    08/10/2020 13:09

  • Nana's BookReviews

    I read the free chapters. The storyline is very interesting. It is well written and descriptive. I highly recommend it.

    08/10/2020 12:45

  • Tassian Campbell

    I found out about this book through wattpad, I was recommended to read and I'm so happy for that, this story got all the kicks and chills

    08/10/2020 12:43

  • Victoria Santizo

    Kane, is real prick and doesn't deserve her as his mate. I can't believe he didn't properly reject her, now she stuck knowing he doesn't want her and can't seem to stop her feeling towards him. Aster is the best, and wish Ember would listen to her and expected her offer to trained her. Ember really, I just can you a good fighter please try to stand up for yourself more when it come to kane. I know it hard to overwrite your fear but you can't let your fears control you forever. Don't let kane downgrade you worth, you deserve so much more then that ass can give you. My reviews for 1-3..... Hopefully kane changes but at this point don't see that happening any time soon. Got to say, wish he rejected properly so she could get another mate or just so she can get over this fool.

    08/10/2020 11:50

  • Harley

    Hi, im the one on the wattpad, EiffelTower11,

    08/10/2020 11:31

  • Morgan Harrison

    I love this already! A writer from Wattpad asked me to check it out and I gotta say this is really good. It's really captivating and full of mystery. It draws you in and makes you wanna read more. This is an amazing book and I know everyone that will read it will love it. Highly recommend it.

    08/10/2020 09:46

  • Jess Grey

    I would happily recommend it to anyone

    08/10/2020 09:39

  • Jess Grey

    I have had a couple of chapters now and I cant put the book down

    08/10/2020 09:39

  • Jess Grey

    I have just completed the first two chapters and cant put the book down

    08/10/2020 09:38

  • vantaestoes

    So glad I found this! It’s so good and I can’t stop reading!

    08/10/2020 09:27

  • jeonxvk

    dang I’m loving this book, it’s lowkey so good

    08/10/2020 09:20

  • mummajay05

    so far I've enjoyed reading this story, very entertaining. thank you for the recommendation xx

    08/10/2020 06:52

  • Loki~Lovee

    I found it through whattpad, someone private messaged me to proof read a couple of chapters and then said if I wanted the rest to come read it here

    08/10/2020 06:50

  • Jessica Flanagin

    I like the story too

    08/10/2020 06:35

  • Jazz Song Cool

    I love it so far :D so detailed and clean, I can picture it in my mind perfectly, keep it up writers, thank your for recommending me to read yalls work its soothing.

    08/10/2020 06:16

  • Adorable Adviser

    I been recommended this book and I gotta saw I like what I’m reading so far.

    08/10/2020 05:46

  • SUNITA BEHERA

    The story is really entertaining... i love the story...

    08/10/2020 05:02

  • Mickaela Marie Sauro

    (WP: @babybluemicka) My Review: The story is amazing(my first werewolf story btw), the more I read the story it became more interesting and enjoyable. The Writing, Plot, The Story Flow, and The Characters are really good. This story is definitely worth reading. (Btw your creative writing is amazing)❤❤❤

    08/10/2020 04:49

  • Isabel7789books

    From the bumping into one another to the suspense of what will happen next is greatly written and naturally executed. I'm hooked on the first chapter, which is very important because it needs to get straight to the point.

    08/10/2020 04:22

  • minnie_dlucca

    omg plot twist already

    08/10/2020 04:14

  • Synthia Lupin

    The writer reached out to me on Wattpad to get an opinion and honestly I like it. Usually I'm not into werewolf or supernatural romance in general, its it's my friend's thing, but I really like so far and I could definitely see myself getting deep into this.

    08/10/2020 04:14

  • Nene Moron

    I like how the story is going itS amazing the author has done great work on it ❤

    08/10/2020 04:11

  • Enya Scarce

    I was asked if I could review the first chapter and I was so glad I agreed! It draws you in right away! Would recommend

    08/10/2020 03:51

  • Reader-926770

    Found out about the book on wp and I am so happy the author reached out. Can’t wait to read it:))

    08/10/2020 03:13

  • Ma Gic

    this is story is just amazing 😃😃 I like it.... keep going 👏🏼👏🏼👌🏼👌🏼

    08/10/2020 03:05

  • La'Naya Simmons

    it's really amazing I can't wait to read more

    08/10/2020 02:51

  • wolfhardsink

    I discovered this through Wattpad , and it had me at the edge of my seat. it was one of those books where you get attached to the characters and are actually feeling involved in the story

    08/10/2020 02:33

  • Scarlett Kim

    This is really good, I liked it. I found it out from wattpad and I'm happy that I did, the story is super interesting and intertaining.

    08/10/2020 02:25

  • Janera Windham

    I can’t wait to read this 😊 the author of the book gave me a little snippet of what’s it’s about. so far I like it

    08/10/2020 01:47

  • itsmaelorrie

    Well Im a Filipino who loves tagalog stories.. but Im now starting to like english stories.. Thank you For the message on wattpad Ms. A😊.

    08/10/2020 01:10

  • Monifah

    I can already tell this is going to be good

    08/10/2020 00:30

  • Piper Procanin

    hey it’s piper , and I just wanted to say this story is fantastic! it’s literally the best . plz continue doing stories like this !!

    08/10/2020 00:08

  • Callme Auguri

    I'm happy the editor reached out recommended this to me! If not I wouldn't have read this since I only found out about this app.

    08/10/2020 00:02

  • Lils is here

    I was recommended this book by someone on wattpad. From what I have read, the pace is splendid. It's not excruciatingly slow, while also making sure that we're not hoping from action scene to action scene. I am also happy to see that there are almost no spelling or grammar errors to be seen. I find it hard to read stories that constantly have something wrong in their writing. The characters are nice as well, being more than just a one noted tune. Overall I think that this would be a good read for someone who is looking for some nice angst with a bit of comedy in the mix.

    08/09/2020 23:35

  • alica gamergirl

    this is really a good book to read

    08/09/2020 23:33

  • cool girl faithful

    The main character is very relatable and she knows how and when to pick or choose a fight. Though her life has been tough she gets through the struggles and is very head strong even when she second guesses her choices. Some things you can’t win and she takes knowledge to that but also thinks of different ways the situation could have gone. the sample chapters I have read so far have entrigued me and I hope to be able to put money in for the coins so that I’m able to continue reading Alpha Kane and to also help the author and editor profit more from this book. If their is a paper back of this book I will gladly buy it.

    08/09/2020 23:30

  • Francesca Follin

    I’m really liking this,I’m sad be rejected her tho T_T he doesn’t deserve her,glad the author recommended this to me on wattpad ^^

    08/09/2020 22:57

  • Zahara Waretigii

    Thus book is amazing. Character development, plot, everything. The storyline is interesting and engaging. I love this. Chef's kiss. (^o^)

    08/09/2020 22:54

  • Nasihah Rahman

    It's a good book so far, immediately got hooked and wanted to read more (but don't have coins) I really like the further fantasy concept of faeries and trolls, I barely see this element in normal werewolf books so well done!! I wish I could read more it's really good :) I also got messaged by someone on wattpad to read and review it :)

    08/09/2020 22:11

  • Beth Harrison

    I think your story is great and I can’t wait to finish it x it may take a while as I’m not able to buy coins just yet x x x x

    08/09/2020 21:42

  • Ruth Ukah

    wow so I’ve come from wattpad as somone messaged me this stormy and a few chapters and I never realised it was this big I’m impressed I’m not so much a werewolf fan but love how the book is going to far

    08/09/2020 21:39

  • saffrijn huijzer

    anyone know what is meant by 'wolf mask'?

    08/09/2020 21:32

  • yoonminbts1995

    Here to drop a review ( yoonminbts1995) love the story! thanks for asking for my review❤️

    08/09/2020 21:28

  • ThePokétato

    We eat quiche, brioche, croissants or something the likes. Many things, actually.

    08/09/2020 20:22

  • suiicons

    Hey! I must say that I really liked the book and the way you’ve displayed the character’s emotions through describing what’s happening to them physically. I struggle to do so, so I was really impressed by your ability to portray them. I do recommend just skimming through and clarify some sentences by fixing the grammar here and there, but I ultimately enjoyed the book!

    08/09/2020 20:18

  • VBE 2003

    *holee heq- mehn- iz so kewl I cri ;A;✨

    08/09/2020 19:27

  • Abbie Sadler

    I found out about this book from the writer on Wattpad and I’ve only read a few chapters so far but I’m really enjoying it

    08/09/2020 18:42

  • The Science Messiah

    so far it's a nice story｡◕‿◕｡

    08/09/2020 18:40

  • Siraiya Uchiha

    loved it just do not have money to buy the chapters ahead

    08/09/2020 18:14

  • darkcat j

    I honestly think this book is really interesting so far. I'm glad I learned about it, I don't usually read books like this but honestly I'm glad I read this!

    08/09/2020 17:56

  • ThePokétato

    faeries can't draw. They can't create anything, since they would perish if they tried a human craft.

    08/09/2020 17:49

  • Jessica Slater

    it’s really good I enjoy it alot

    08/09/2020 17:32

  • Jessica Slater

    I think there should be a second book

    08/09/2020 17:31

  • Phantom Trap Queen

    It's so good. I'm sharing it with my mom

    08/09/2020 17:08

  • Rizka Amalia

    This is my first time reading about werewolf, it's very interesting to me. Although I'm not very fluent in English, but I can understand and enjoy to read it. I've only read three chaps, but this storyline is amazing. Great job 👍

    08/09/2020 16:09

  • anneissane

    I'm enjoying the story. I like how the characters are imperfect and not all powerful even with all the magic and fantasy setting. It's refreshing.

    08/09/2020 16:02

  • Blessing Sunday

    it's cliche but interesting you want to know what's going to happen next even if you can guess it... but at the end reading the book gives a fulfilling type of desire...like I'm happy I chose to read it

    08/09/2020 15:51

  • Sash Henderson

    I've just started to read this book and I most say I'm enjoying the parts that I've read so far....... I've also found out about this book through Wattpad and I really do thank the author for recommending it for me.....it's amazing and enjoyable....keep up the good work and I wish you all the best.......😊

    08/09/2020 15:46

  • Sarajens Desir

    I like the story so far

    08/09/2020 15:41

  • J angels

    is it bad that i kind of want to see him get beaten for being so mean. like alpha or not you don't bully people 🤦‍♀️

    08/09/2020 15:02

  • anime.lover

    This story is amazing I would totally would recommend to new readers!

    08/09/2020 15:02

  • J angels

    daammmn this is crazy and so amazing. im hooked onto it already. they way everything is written so well and described excellently . it feels as if im reading a book I can buy in a store. hell id buy this book if it was in store😁 so far so good! keep up the excellent work!

    08/09/2020 14:44

  • CRTmanahan

    The story is good. Loved the plot

    08/09/2020 14:17

  • berbear2000

    from just reading the couple of free chapters, the book has an interesting storyline and a world in which is an fantasy timeline where there are humans and magical creatures living it together in modern day Seattle USA. The characters I’ve meet so far were intriguing, especially the young wizard Ian who seems to get into a lot of trouble. if I had to nick-pick one things about the book is that I wish I knew the main character, Ember, name from the start. you are introduced to her, but her name is not given to at least chapter 3 or 4. when reading a book, I like to be introduced to my main protagonist from the start and slowly start getting to know this character as the book moves forward. after all, the book is very eye catching and keeps you going to see what is happening next.

    08/09/2020 13:47

  • ItzMistyChan

    Henlowww peoples! Just like others here i came from wattpad too, I was asked to read the story and stuffs, tbh I'm actually glad that the author recommended this! The storyline is great, the plot is very interesting and it leaves you wanting for more! I'm actually sad because i don't have coins and i can't read the full story but as far as i have read/red the story is great! Tbh, i'm really happy that i decided to read this wonderful story~sooo I fully recommend this story to anyone who's looking for something to read~!

    08/09/2020 12:48

  • Ynna L. Ballesteros

    now i want to punch Ian AND THAT STPD MTHR FCKR HELEN GRR

    08/09/2020 12:43

  • Rose lover

    As I review I like to review piece by piece so I don't leave any critic out. I really enjoyed this prologe. The writing is clean and detailed and the explanation of how wolves act was just as good. But if I can give some critic. I was confused if the protagonist was female untill she met her mate. I also feel it needed a bit more intensidy when her Mate rejected her. But other wise great prologue. I'm intrigued. 🌹

    08/09/2020 12:20

  • drachoe

    i actually found out about this through wattpad and paranormal stories and aob aren’t really my cup of tea but the writing and grammar is really good! pretty entertaining so far as well :)

    08/09/2020 11:31

  • Rowena Koisen

    Very recommended story. I don't see any mistakes or misspellings so far and i think its a great story. The storyline is very interesting and intriguing(is that the same thing??).This story definitely gets a yes from me. Good job writing.👍👍👍

    08/09/2020 11:17

  • HANIYA NAVEED

    honestly this story is soooo good. The author recommended me the story through wp and i don't regret coming here to read this. The plot is showcased in a very great way which doesn't make the reader loose interest in the story. I am looking forward to the more chapters that I still have to read. Keep working hard author-nim.

    08/09/2020 11:09

  • readerhhh

    (orenjihelena from wattpad) I want to say thank you to the writer that recommended the story for me. Book is well-written and enjoyable, I enjoyed the plot as well. It’s very interesting so I’ll read ‘Alpha Kane’ and its second book too. Thank you for recommending this for me. :>

    08/09/2020 11:00

  • andromache

    found this story through wattpad because the writer asked me to. I'm vv glad that I said I'll read this. I'm not yet done reading this but I know this is a great story. Kudos to the writer who finished this amazing work ✊

    08/09/2020 10:31

  • Haenami

    hello! I'm from wattpad, you asked for my review for your book. I'm not good with words, but I like the book so far, although it's a bit confusing at first (but maybe that's just me). The pace is good though, and it's pretty well written. That's all I could say really. I haven't read the full book, just a few chapters but overall, it's good! :3

    08/09/2020 10:29

  • NikkiTheOtaku

    Author told me about it on Wattpad and I’m glad they did, the book definitely did not disappoint. Great writing style and storyline. I would definitely reccomend to anyone looking for a good read!

    08/09/2020 09:29

  • crackhead ace

    I got a message from the author of this story so I decided to read it! And I think its very good. I enjoy the details you put into the story and I love the main character's thoughts. I don't really read werewolf stories but I really like this one. I thoroughly enjoy the flow of the plot. For anyone who likes to read werewolf stories, I'd recommend this one. This is by bigratdaddy from wattpad.

    08/09/2020 07:19

  • xx8kitty8xx

    Wow, I have to admit that the part of the prologue I was sent on Wattpad sucked me in. I went over to the link and continued to read the book here. I will be honest, I am not a big fan of the ABO genre. Simply because of all the negative ideas it connotates as a whole, and the societal 'norms' that occur in the ABO world because of it. But I do give the odd two or three a read, mainly if the premise is good enough. Now, the first few sentences had me a bit iffy with the cliche start. However, I was ultimately glad I kept reading. You can just tell how much time, love and editing was put into this story. From the vivid and detailed characteristics that don't feel 'forced,' to the descriptive fight scenes. You can tell by the main character who was wonderfully put together and is more than meets the eye, and lets not forget about how the plot just flows so smoothly. Now, the main character is a quiet girl named Ember, shes an omega and considered 'weak' because of her status as the weakest of the pack and she is often picked on. She is a character that I would consider to be like the game 'pass the parcel', the more that you unravel (read) about her, the more you will understand about her and her actions. Ember is secretely a beast, who is quite fiery, and despite her outward appearance as a 'weak nerd' she fights for a living and she is really good at it too. A characteristic I liked about her, she doesn't give up. She was never weak to begin with. Another thing I really liked about Ember was how she did not try to focus on the negatives in her life, but she chose to ignore them and move on the best she could at the time. She is quite a relateable character, and I am positive as the plot develops the readers will learn more about her, through her reactions and thoughts to the point where they empathise with her and fall in love with her even more. The readers may even form a better understanding of Kane too, since he is practically a mystery at the moment. However, I have only read up to chapter 6, so I can not concur this to be anything more than a guess. Moving on, I loved how it wasn't just exclusively werewolves. I love how faeries, wizards and trolls were written in as characters too and not just as 'background fluff'. It is truly an interesting concept that makes the world the book is set in more magical. I would definitely reccommend this book to the ABO genre lovers. It's definitely a book where the plot, thought about characters, and writing style absorb you almost immediately. Plenty of good subliminal messages too!

    08/09/2020 07:18
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