Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • OliveJuuiice

    So I was asked by the author (on Wattpad) to do a review on this story. and so far I’m loving it. The writing is descriptive and allows for clear imagery. I appreciate the author bit dragging out the point where the love interests finally acknowledge that they are mates in front of everyone. But I’m hesitate to see how this will all unfold. And will those who hurt Ember in the past be revealed to Kane and killed or not. I’ve got to keep reading. and I’m excited to.

    02/10/2021 09:14

  • OliveJuuiice

    this is too good!

    02/10/2021 09:10

  • Alicia Shannon

    is the second book out yet I loved this story.

    02/08/2021 02:44

  • Wendy Ream-Reevesk

    can't wait to read whole series. love me some wolf love😍

    02/07/2021 18:16

  • Cery Mouse

    the story is really well written and well paced in my opinion.

    02/05/2021 08:59

  • gem lover2

    Amina Adamou, It's me gemlover2 from WattPad! I have been working on my own story on here, and reading stuff too. You got me into this sight and I hadn't gotten an response when I inboxed you. Then it said that The account karma_hemler_aug31 was no longer being in use. I do wish to put what I think though about your story. I'm really excited for you and how well you're making a name for yourself!!😎👍😊✌️I hope that you check out my story and tell me what you think too. I'd like to try and get more people to read it though, but I do still start the chapters on WattPad first before putting them here.

    02/05/2021 00:58

  • Sterline Saint G

    you go girl

    02/04/2021 21:38

  • Maria McCarten

    love this book so far but how to collect coins is a mystery.

    02/03/2021 00:01

  • aestheticallydun

    this is super good! the writing is very clean and well written, loving the characters and plot so far!

    01/29/2021 19:04

  • BabieGyrl

    really really really loving this book so far. hate that I have to pay to finish reading it but I feel it’s going to be so good and worth the money. guess I have to find some extra cash so I can finish it.

    01/29/2021 02:55

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 2: woah she was much stronger than anyone thought. still don’t see how deserves to have her at all. he’s basically a bully. bully are evil deserve a horrible painful you know what

    01/23/2021 00:46

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 1: that just cold and you’re gonna give him a second bite at the apple. personally he make me want limp di.ck werewolf for dinner

    01/23/2021 00:38

  • Dedra

    I was asked to do a review of this story and I absolutely love it. It has a good plot, interesting characters and is overall a good story to read.

    01/22/2021 00:46

  • Emmaline Fadaini 🦋

    I'm new here tho

    01/21/2021 14:14

  • Ryanrossfan

    love aster😍

    01/21/2021 07:52

  • Janet Godwin

    very good so far

    01/21/2021 01:12

  • Rina Miller

    Wow. Didn't see that one coming. 😓 So detailed, though! I felt the pain.

    01/20/2021 03:32

  • Kell Eliz

    I loved this. The betrayal, the twists and turns, it all kept me on my toes

    01/18/2021 10:21

  • Mackinzie Hale

    PLS HE THINKS ITS A WEDDING IM DONE AUAHWHHD

    01/18/2021 03:42

  • The Oreo

    so is he a wizard?? sorry I'm a little confused but it's amazing

    01/16/2021 12:51

  • Kimberley Jones

    I got sent a bit of the book on Wattpad and was immediately immersed into the story and couldn't wait to read the rest, it truly is an amazing book.

    01/15/2021 11:53

  • Ophelia

    this is... confusing.

    01/14/2021 23:52

  • missayadji

    I am totally bewitched by the few chapters I received on wattpad that I decided to install the app to proceed with my reading...I lost track at a certain level since I could not make a difference between Ember's flashback and present but with the next chapter everything became clear. lot's of courage in your writing, never give up and most of all, always consider negative comments as a challenge!

    01/14/2021 20:54

  • Keiry Tenorio

    I like this story,in my opinion it's nicely written

    01/14/2021 07:02

  • Eric plays

    Personally I think that Ember is a bitch and should stop being so childish and try to forgive and except her mate. Personally I cant stand her and she deserves to lose her mate for the way she treats him. She deserves to lose her friends for the way she treats them.

    01/10/2021 06:47

  • Alavina Lealiiee

    😢

    01/07/2021 07:33

  • enri_ rose

    im not more on english story but this one keep me interesting but i dont have enough coins to continue .. if you have more coins . i glandly recomended this just understand it deeply and you will get it ...ciao!!

    01/06/2021 07:01

  • Niaselli Dunco

    This story is literally amazing. Once I get more money I'll read the entire book. 😍

    01/06/2021 04:36

  • Caroline J Hodges

    too many characters to keep track of and also very confusing read too much happening not a lot of explanation. sorry

    01/06/2021 03:59

  • Tiffany Sturdivant

    I did like the story at the beginning. Honetly, there is a lot of missing information and it bounces around with out any natural direction. Its hard to figure out what happened, is happening or where they are in the time line. It could be a fairly decent book, but at this point I’m very lost on what’s going on.

    01/05/2021 01:32

  • reenal ragani

    i don't like the story. its so confusing. everything is all over the place. i wasted my coins on this story

    01/05/2021 01:29

  • Yebembe Koggie

    from what you sent on Wattpad and what I've seen here, hmmmm, I LOVE IT‼️‼️❤️❤️keep up the good work 🙌🏾❤️

    01/03/2021 15:38

  • Tecla Muthoni

    Hey I really liked the few chaps you sent on wattpad.The story is totally amazing

    01/03/2021 04:23

  • Dina A.El Enien

    from the chaps u send me on wattpad , its interesting... I liked the way you write. its simple but not weak.. I like when the written don't use complicated words but insane time his writing is with depth ... keep up I will continue reading in this app ... well done 👏

    01/02/2021 18:45

  • lj baquero

    hey! this is lheaszufpakiira02 from wattpad. Got interested from the sample chaps that you sent. I think this is a good read. Will be reading more. Keep it up!

    01/02/2021 14:56

  • Ramat Usman

    I have read this book before in wattpad and I enjoyed it soo much although I didn't comment then but I'll gladly give it a good review here.

    01/02/2021 08:05

  • Alice Ali

    I had no idea this app existed until I saw the author's message on Wattpad. And like she knew the books I liked.... I'm loving this already

    01/01/2021 23:56

  • Valentina Oliveros

    I am Valentina from wattpad. To be honest I am not a real fan of werewolves stories.However chapter 2 and 3 kept me interesting and I wanted to read more. The prologue was very confusing and kind of long for my taste. I think the story has a lot potential if you keep that amazing dynamic the leading characters have going on.

    12/31/2020 23:02

  • Elesa King

    im alittle lost still in the begining

    12/31/2020 05:52

  • Reader-763098

    I’m BooXD30 from wattpad and you are a amazing writer. The only thing I would maybe change is that this story is a little fast paced, meeting the love interest just like that. But I’m not you so I don’t know your vision but that’s my feedback.

    12/30/2020 17:15

  • chimttae

    I'm chimttae from wattpad. this story is quite interesting really. im a fan of werewolves fictions and this story adding the fantasy creatures and all expands the imagination of the readers and i quite like it. in terms of narration i think its great and the story being just one point of view is just as great because it makes me wonder if there would be Kane's POV in further chapters because whats in his mind is still a mystery for us and ofc we would want to know someday. i do feel this story will have a great plot towards the ending. goodjob! <3

    12/28/2020 12:07

  • Jeon Kook

    Hi. I’m here after u send me few paras in Wattpad. it looked interesting.

    12/27/2020 07:33

  • Zainab Khan

    Hi after I read those paras u sent to me I wanted to read more of it despite my uninterest in alpha ,met stories and all but I am happy that my expectations were fulfilled I liked ur story and I hope u keep on doing an amazing work . one thing more the transition was so quickly that I had to read the previous lines again to understand but overall I like it💜💜

    12/27/2020 06:29

  • Angela Johnson

    Hi, the sample chapter you sent me through Wattpad was very good and made me want to read more. I do think you should work on your transitions from one scene to the next. Other than that, I think this story is on the right track. Thank you for reaching out and asking for my opinion. It shows a willingness to learn and better your writing so good for you and good luck.

    12/27/2020 06:12

  • Waynie Huervana

    Hey, I'm from Wattpad and was asked to review this story. The story and amazing and despite the cliche situations like bullying and rejection, you managed to make it interesting so that people can get hooked and looking forward for what will happen next. I like your writing but there are parts wherein it abruptly changes so it can be kinda confusing. Keep it up!Also, thank you for the coins.

    12/25/2020 15:27

  • Rebecca Farmer

    wow what an amazing story!!!

    12/24/2020 21:52

  • kalakomababaw

    this is sooo amazing! :))

    12/24/2020 11:57

  • Nicole Rogers

    I love it

    12/23/2020 04:47

  • Orapa Perocho Roseanne

    woah amazing

    12/22/2020 02:48

  • Michelle B

    I don't know who's the bigger idiot, Ember for trusting Ian enough to face a troll and not questioning knocking on the sidewalk, or Ian for stealing from one and then admitting it in front of said troll. Even still, well written so far.

    12/21/2020 07:53

  • ZiZo ELF

    Hi i love u book

    12/20/2020 08:37

  • ZiZo ELF

    leas Invite

    12/18/2020 00:34

  • G L

    why are y’all lying????? this story was trash. how could keep up with all the bouncing around - one minute we’re fighting for lives at a party,next in the woods, then at a dang McDonald’s. There are no clear transitions from place to place, thought to thought. I mentally exhausted from trying to make it all make sense. PLEASE DO NOT WASTE YOUR COINS. enjoy the free chapters cause once you start unlocking it downhill from there.

    12/18/2020 00:34

  • Kade Knight

    Hi! This is Killer_Diva666 from Wattpad. This is a very engaging story and I cannot put it down! I have never read a wolf story before, I hesitate because they weren't interesting nor did the writer have enough experience. I am extremely picky. I am anxious to see what happens next in the story and I look forward to see what else you come with. Keep up the amazing work!

    12/17/2020 23:37

  • Divija Kumar

    Hey, I'm loving the story, and the characters. Love the description and the emotions displayed. great work!

    12/17/2020 16:58

  • Cindy Tran

    Hey it’s Geekishlycute from Wattpad. I really liked the book! I especially love your writing technique; very thorough, very detailed. Keep this up!

    12/17/2020 13:38

  • Reader-753612

    hey It’s Airreca from wattpad. I liked the book so far. Never stop writing

    12/17/2020 12:02

  • gimmeicecreamplis

    hey, it's gimmeicecreamplis on wattpad but I change my username on wattpad to spicyleafe now. Thank you for dm me on the amazing story and the Thank-you gift <3 I was just opened your dm about the Thank-you gift because my phone was being mean to me to not get notification, I'm so sorry 😔. But once again thank you and keep up the good work <3

    12/17/2020 09:16

  • Dayna Afton

    hey you asked my opinon on a chapter my name was Daynasmith1

    12/15/2020 21:50

  • LandiBug

    I am absolutely amazed!! You've outdone yourself!

    12/14/2020 11:40

  • Aniyah Bledsoe

    This my third time reading this book I’m just in love with it.😍😍

    12/13/2020 22:35

  • ZiZo ELF

    Omg so beautiful

    12/12/2020 05:25

  • del valle idrogo

    Questions I'm new here (I'm from Wattpad) it's there any way to like the chapter? or something like that? Or you keep reading?👀

    12/12/2020 03:13

  • Kay Cuthill

    hey thanks for sending me some of your work over on wattpad. I hadn't know about this site (which I'll definitely be back to. I was so grabbed by the first chapter that... here I am, I love it my friend.

    12/12/2020 00:42

  • Nadia Marguérite Nel

    I am also from Wattpad and I absolutely love this story don't ever stop writing😁🌻❤

    12/12/2020 00:12

  • abx4281

    abx4281 here from Wattpad. Thanks for all, I owe you a lot. ❤

    12/11/2020 21:48

  • Linda Hernandez

    This is one of the best werewolf stories I've read. I've browsed storries from wattpad, fanfiction.net, and Ao3. This has the best plot, is a real page turner, and is so unlike any normal rejection story that it just captures your attention within the first few paragraphs. - bleach366-angelbeats on wattpad

    12/11/2020 18:45

  • ¿Confusion?

    I'm from wattpad and I don't get a chance to read good stories like this all the time...

    12/11/2020 16:25

  • Berry Bubblez

    Berry here from wattpad, just started reading and am only on chapter one. But my god the plot 😍😍 I'm already addicted to this book! Awesome job so far, I just know it's going to be an outstanding book!!

    12/11/2020 16:22

  • Mia Vallely

    Mia here from watt pad, absolutely LOVING the story 🤩🤩🤩

    12/10/2020 17:00

  • divine nwokeji

    its so wonderful.....love the plot..😍😍😍

    12/10/2020 16:09

  • Juzmake

    ilove this story. I do not regret that I searched for this story for a long time.

    12/09/2020 10:28

  • alpha

    you have done so well good job

    12/09/2020 03:05

  • EmpressQueenB

    so poorly written. all over the place and no flow...

    12/08/2020 06:54

  • Hills

    I wasted money buying coins to read this book because it was so supposed to be a super steamy read. Don’t waste your money!! I read to chapter 36 and finally called it quits not wanting to waste anymore of my money. There’s not a single steamy thing about this book!!! Don’t waste your money!!!

    12/08/2020 00:14

  • soup with a fork

    just finished chap 16 and im hooked but i cant continue as ive run out of coins😭 im gonna invite like a bunch of people tho and try to get at least one to actually click it

    12/07/2020 14:47

  • Hope Elmore

    I love how she embarrasses herself even more than just apologizing and going about her day😂

    12/07/2020 08:56

  • soup with a fork

    anyone else here from the person on wattpad getting reviews?

    12/07/2020 06:05

  • liseth svnchez

    I really like this book and hopefully it will let me buy some coins soon. Very good book from this writer !!

    12/07/2020 05:31

  • GirlyGamerForever3 Gamer

    wow I didn’t know your work made it this big! I’m so happy for you two! crogratalations!

    12/07/2020 01:28

  • Yoan

    love this story. it has a little of everything I like can’t wait to keep reading the next chapter

    12/06/2020 23:22

  • aries

    this book is quite interesting I love it a lot

    12/06/2020 09:29

  • Nadrienne Hunter

    Unable to purchase coins, transaction will not go through.

    12/06/2020 05:39

  • Kathleen Quinn

    enjoyed what I've read so far,but can't buy any coins so can't finish reading

    12/04/2020 21:32

  • Min Yoongi

    I was enjoying reading it but I ran out of coins

    12/04/2020 13:24

  • Reader-892089

    although I haven’t had a chance to read thoughtfully and thoroughly yet, I can already see what talent as been showcased

    12/04/2020 01:29

  • Min Yoongi

    Damn, I'm reading this rather than doing my homeworks.It really shows how amazing this story is.

    12/03/2020 21:56

  • TheShootingStar

    okay, so can I just say that you are amazing! I mean wow!!...thank you so much for your gift and your talent...💕 from your Wattpad fans

    12/03/2020 12:33

  • Vânia Melo

    I'm already hooked to the story but won't let me buy coins! please help!!

    12/03/2020 08:48

  • Reader-698813

    love love this story

    12/03/2020 01:29

  • Kimberley.6ixx

    you sent me a chapter on wattpad and I am just invested into your story now ! thank you for sharing your work with me x

    12/02/2020 22:09

  • Laura Mercado

    so far I’m pretty invested. story flows nicely. I love it

    12/02/2020 14:49

  • lalarxse _

    im also here to review so far it’s a worthy read

    12/02/2020 10:27

  • Jana

    I will give this a shot from reading the comments

    12/01/2020 23:58

  • Mahek Hussain

    I haven’t read it all yet but I can say that the first scene that was sent to me was great and it had beautiful imagery! Can’t wait to read more :)

    12/01/2020 23:32

  • Harman Kaur

    it was honor to get this sent, so good!!!

    12/01/2020 19:19

  • Nuella Nimi

    Nice story 👌

    12/01/2020 09:27

  • Nuella Nimi

    Aww wish I could continue but can't pay. I like the progression so far though its a little over the place but I guess it will all come together.

    12/01/2020 09:26

  • Fran Moritz-Booth

    y'all suck can't purchase the $4.99 option so you force the higher cost down our throat that isn't right😒😠

    11/30/2020 21:16

  • Torimaried69

    Seems a lot of people on here are from Wattpad, who r reading and going to review afterwards. I'm glad I was asked to read this and to review it cuz I'm also from Wattpad.

    11/30/2020 07:49
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