Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • Kaysper28

    I'm glad the editor asked me to read and review this book, because so far it's great, it's easy to read and it's really entertaining..I really love how this story keeps you guessing and wanting to know more. I look forward to reading more ~Kaysper28

    08/18/2020 00:35

  • rainbowhwa

    i found about this book on wp! although this isn’t my preferred genre, the story is very captivating and the plot is detailed and beautifully built. i def recommend this to anyone who is looking for a read :) -rainbowhwa

    08/18/2020 00:24

  • Carmela Espiritu Gasis

    So I started reading this today. The few chapters I've read totally had me hooked!The story has very good pacing, u won't even have the time to think 'the story is dragging', cause ur probably scrolling for the next chapter already. The characters and settings are very well-written(not too much info dump/less words, enough details)enough for me to picture it really well in my mind. I like how the main character refuses to accept 'weakness' that was inherent for omegas as the world sees. This rebel-against-the-world kind of plot is a gem among other cliched alpha-omega stories that portrayed omegas as someone to be ALWAYS protected, u go girl.The slight touch of angst shot through my kokoro, i won't comment on the alpha's assholishness, bc we all know what lies behind that 😉. Overall, im broke af right now, but its a story worth coming back here for. Good Job Author-sama, kudos to you👊

    08/18/2020 00:11

  • Helena Cattherine

    The plot of the story is really good and the way it flows just shows how good the writing is. I’ve read many werewolf books but this has definitely got to be one of the better few

    08/18/2020 00:07

  • Ally Forrest

    I love this so much.... its thrilling and draws you in so much 😊

    08/18/2020 00:01

  • Bee_

    I was recommended from wattpad. It is very interesting and I really like it. Also the story is full of action and fun. I want to read it to the end but I don't have any more coins🙁

    08/17/2020 23:57

  • Shaniqua Green

    the intro is so good im already hooked on to the book

    08/17/2020 23:54

  • Shaniqua Green

    oh wow the intro is so good im already hooked on to the book

    08/17/2020 23:53

  • Yenifer Arevalo

    This is an amazing book. You should continue doing more of these. I also found out about this book through Wattpad. I recommend more readers to read it.

    08/17/2020 23:53

  • AnUnknownIndividual

    Aw, that would hurt so bad!

    08/17/2020 23:51

  • Shallow

    Heeyyy thanks for recommending this for me on Wattpad! -Shallow

    08/17/2020 23:51

  • Luckystar751

    don’t mind them Ember. He will see you out soon

    08/17/2020 23:43

  • Hart Aszonia

    o

    08/17/2020 23:42

  • AnUnknownIndividual

    Hey! I made the account! You have my previous recommendations, are you wanting me to give you the comments through Wattpad?

    08/17/2020 23:39

  • Stephanie Abbott

    great story really well written

    08/17/2020 23:34

  • Luckystar751

    yes very weird 🎁

    08/17/2020 23:26

  • Chilling Mcdonals

    I also found this book though wattpad I just started and love how the story flows through , thank you for recommendations it's entertaining :)

    08/17/2020 23:25

  • DiamondSavage12

    I was asked to review this from wattpad and I’m at a lost for words. I can tell I’m going to love this just from reading the prologue. This has an amazing hook to it! It has detail but not too much where it’s exhausting to read. I’m definitely reading the rest of this book! I can tell this is going to be extremely entertaining for me! I hope this wasn’t too much to read all I know is I really didn’t want to stop reading. You’re an amazing writer! Good luck and keep up the good work! Thank you so much for sending this book to me!

    08/17/2020 23:24

  • Nessa Williams

    thank you for reading out to me through wattpad

    08/17/2020 23:21

  • kassidy renosa

    I got recommended to read the story through wattpad. Then, I started reading it and so far its very intresting. I'm eager to continue!

    08/17/2020 23:21

  • Luckystar751

    🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 yes imagine it and it will give you strength. good

    08/17/2020 23:13

  • LoveAnime5891

    this has more depth and sentimentality in this story. 💜 I can't wait to read this book.

    08/17/2020 22:54

  • Eylaf Neyaz

    I really like it it's amazing 😍

    08/17/2020 22:20

  • makayla reese

    One of my favorite things about stories is when they flow and get to the point and I feel like this story captures both of those points perfectly. Also the main character is a little bit funny because he has all these nice remarks to say on the inside.

    08/17/2020 21:40

  • Dasha Crow

    someone DM me and told me to read it. It's a great book so far, though I've only read a couple chapters. I don't have the money to read the other chapters but the story line is great so far. The chapters aren't super long and it's entertaining so far. again I don't have enough money to read the rest but best of luck to you author

    08/17/2020 21:38

  • Lea Franceschini

    omg it's not even the first chapter and I'm already in love 🤩. I literally can't stop reading now

    08/17/2020 21:36

  • MylovefromTataplanet

    The story is very intriguing and fascinating and i am glad that the author recommended it to me.. i just love how the story contains not only the werewolves but other fictional creatures too

    08/17/2020 21:36

  • Rose

    Someone told me about this book on wattpad.Its what does it for me :) girls. I rlly informative the story is . Its and entertaining story to read. I think it keeps ya hooked and wanting to know whats gonna happen after. Thanks for the writer for tellin me :)

    08/17/2020 21:26

  • Leanora

    So I was asked on wattpad to check out this story here and to give a review (I'll try my best as a non-native English speaker). I've read the Prologue and chapters 1-3, if there's anything in the future I'll have to say, I'd add it later on, because I'll definitely continue reading this (surprisingly) The first and biggest plus point is the fact that the characters feel rather genuine to me. Most highschool or college stories I've read seem so weird because the characters are so unfitting or weird, but especially the main character already hooked me in within the first few paragraphs because of the way she's written (I really like it). Something that bothered me at first was the way the story started out. To put it in simple words: I felt like I was thrown into the cold sea without any clear expectations, just confusion. However, that what I believe pulled me into it the most, the urge to find out more, so that's a personal plus point. This is getting a bit too long, so I'll shorten it up now: there are some minor things like having to translate some words or tiny things that bother me personally, but they don't play into an objective rating. I'll give this story 9 out of 10 apple pie slices.

    08/17/2020 21:24

  • ArMoa_Rica

    It's so enjoying. it's like I'm reading Wattpad also. thank you to the author for this amazing story. I Hope you can create more than this. I expect that.

    08/17/2020 21:19

  • Reader-590273

    i love this book , i got asked to read it on wp ( follow me army @ blowmybackout) i really like the characgter development and over all plot of the story. I think it gives a very nice theme as well , due to the fact that this sheds like on todays issues. Lastly, the author is very talented at keeping good grammar, which is usually my biggest critique in books. i must say although these kinds if books aren't my type , you did a very good job !! x

    08/17/2020 21:08

  • ✨Niku🌸Yu✨

    I’m in love. thankyou so much for recommending this to me 😁✨

    08/17/2020 21:03

  • raginglovesanime

    hey it’s me! I’m the person you message on Wattpad earlier, I made an acc just so I could read this

    08/17/2020 21:02

  • Ghost Silvaerna

    I must say when this story was brought to my attention I didn’t think I would be as invested in it as I am after having read the first six chapters. Of course I just got the app to read the story so I’ve no coins to continue, but I like it considerably. Keep up the excellent work.

    08/17/2020 21:01

  • ✨Niku🌸Yu✨

    I love the plot of this story😁✨ I’m so happy the writer recommended this to me✨✨😌🥺

    08/17/2020 21:00

  • MarshWrites

    I love the flow of the story ive only read a handful alpha/omega stories and they never really had a good flow and the storyline was always choppy. i was asked to review the story on Wattpad and i actually really enjoy it im glad i had the chnace to read it.

    08/17/2020 21:00

  • Chimin-xhi uwu

    I really want to thank the writer for recommending me this awesome work that I'll gladly read in my free time to enjoy it as much as I can :) also I admire so much the capability of the author when they write, it just makes me more go more into the storie :) thanks again!

    08/17/2020 20:55

  • Kristine Joy Pacsis Falalimpa

    The content of your story was good I like it really don't know why I haven't seen it on watty but I love the story

    08/17/2020 20:51

  • _weirdo_artist_

    holy crap, I- Yes. just yes. this is now my life, I can't wait to read more (im in the car, so I'll read it when I get home).

    08/17/2020 20:37

  • Ieisha Styron-Rosenboro

    I honestly like it

    08/17/2020 20:35

  • asdfghjkl

    i found this book through the writer on wattpad and i’m so glad they asked me to check it out! this books sounds really good and i’ll definitely be bingeing it soon

    08/17/2020 20:31

  • Jackie Lynn Mott

    The writer contacted me through Wattpad and asked me if I would be interested in reading a few chapters from this book. I’m glad I said yes! From what I’ve read so far, it is pretty good! It doesn’t feel rushed and the flow of the storyline is pretty well thought out. I’m hoping I can continue to read this book!

    08/17/2020 20:24

  • Y'all Might

    6th chapter is as far as I can read it (I'm too poor to have any coins 😗✌🏻) Got recommendation for this book on WP by the editor. I'm really bad at reviews but the story is really captivating and the character development is really good. I read some of the comments and to be honest I couldn't agree more with most of them. If someone decides to read this book I would say go for it.

    08/17/2020 20:23

  • Brie

    This book is really good thanks for recomending it to me. I really enjoyed reading this book to be honest I feel ember so much it's crazy 😁😊

    08/17/2020 20:21

  • Precious Opoku

    Wow.... I am honestly really surprised about how the first few chapters really captured my attention. I personally don’t really read books like this but this book might have just changed my mind! I don’t know what I was expecting going into this but it was not this, it exceed my expectations. Would 100% recommend although there were some parts throughout that I felt the wording was kinda off or maybe it was just me but I do feel like things could’ve been specified a little more. Nonetheless, this will definitely linger in my mind as the days go by. Thank you author for recommending this to me!

    08/17/2020 20:19

  • Faderera Quadri

    How come she can do these fights against huge werewolves and win, but still be the weakest in the pack??

    08/17/2020 20:13

  • Taylor Beckles

    Hello, Amina, I am one of the reader who you asked to read and review your story. I wrote a little piece of what I thought on wattpad, if you want to read it. I am a very fats reader, so I hope you make the epilogue to the strychnine just as interesting as the main, or I might skip through it, I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

    08/17/2020 20:08

  • jozlyn crespo

    The writer reached out to me and asked if I would like to read some parts of it, and I said yes of course, and asked if I would check out their book. I said yes, and am now loving this book. The story hooks you in and flows like a river

    08/17/2020 20:02

  • Sketchy Blue

    I was shown this story by the editor and this far I really enjoy what I've seen! it has some great story and very interesting well written characters. It by far has a beautiful way with it's description to get characters moods across. I don't find this stuff often so it's a one of a kind to me!

    08/17/2020 19:56

  • joonieuwuhobi

    Whoa i started read it .......its so addictive!!!

    08/17/2020 19:52

  • It's Jazzy

    I'm a few chapters into the story, from what I've read so far I really enjoy the way this was written, I really like this story I want to thank the writer for recommending this to me.

    08/17/2020 19:50

  • Romesa Naeem

    i found this story when the author asked me to try it out and its already got me hooked and I've only read the first few chapters...really professional writing and has already got me hooked

    08/17/2020 19:41

  • namtiddiestolemyjams

    Thankfully the author contacted me through Wattpad because it is amazing! Sadly I couldn’t get past chapter 9 but I loved reading it!

    08/17/2020 19:41

  • Wiktoria Adamska

    Hello, I came here from Wattpad (dumbleDAMN). As the author requested, I came to have a look on this story. I decided to analyze it in different spheres (it's only based on the prologue and first 6 chapters btw):

    08/17/2020 19:37

  • {{《I'm Brøken》}}

    I just read the prologue and the amount of detail that's in this story amazing! I'm now addicted even though I just read the prologue but it's amazing! Btw I had found out about this on Wattpad too.

    08/17/2020 19:33

  • Millie_likes_penguin

    i got sent a message to read this on wattpad i read the first 2 chapters it seems amazing

    08/17/2020 19:28

  • Ayesha Zahir

    it's very interesting plot I think it will be a big hit story I will love story

    08/17/2020 19:20

  • Malu

    The book was suggested to me through wattpad. He/she wanted to review the book after reading a few chapters. Honestly, the descriptive writing and flow of the story is amazing. It's neither too slow nor fast. I would definitely recommend this book to my friends 👏👏

    08/17/2020 19:09

  • aarya kurup

    great plot❤

    08/17/2020 19:04

  • אוראל צדוק

    😁

    08/17/2020 19:02

  • Shelly Armitage

    I love this story I want to keep reading but I have to wait for coins and I can't buy any coz I'm broke

    08/17/2020 18:58

  • Otseven Ritz

    This is my first time reading an alpha story,.. it's gud👍..and someone recommended me this, I was going to read only some chapters coz I have an exam soon but I find it interesting so kept reading it😭😅😅

    08/17/2020 18:51

  • Gizelle Rivera

    i was contacted on wattpad to take a look at the book and i thought it was good and so i came here and the book just took a whole turn for the best and im hooked.! FIVE STARS.

    08/17/2020 18:46

  • Michaela Villena

    i love the story! the plot is amazing and very creative, i'm really grateful that the writers contacted me in wattpad to reaf this.

    08/17/2020 18:45

  • Nelisse Dias

    OMG, I Love it

    08/17/2020 18:43

  • Yesha Guia

    I know alot of people said this already but hi! I also came from a DM on wattpad and I gotta say plot is great, and use of words is on point.... Tho i didnt get to read the whole thing due to the coin system, I did sneak a peak on the 2nd book and I can tell you're great at what you do.... Thanks for writing such an amazing book and stay safe 😘

    08/17/2020 18:42

  • Lover Leelee23

    I wish I had coins to continueeee😭

    08/17/2020 18:25

  • Broke Army

    the author or editor had actually recommended me reading this book I’ve only read a few chapters so far how ever the book flow wonderfully it is really captivating to read it like puts you in a trace they did really well on this and I hope they continue doing this I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys reading things like this or maybe anyone in general I think anyone would love reading these!!

    08/17/2020 18:16

  • Flame Heartnet

    I really like the story. I got a message on wattpad asking me for my opinion. I really appreciate it otherwise I wouldn't have found out about this story. it's a good story.

    08/17/2020 18:08

  • Hawin Ceran

    have the editor been writing this with another person cause the person that sends me it said that to me

    08/17/2020 18:08

  • KeyKey

    Hi! I’m from Wattpad(@AnimeIsLife1219)! Your editor friend @Rachal-Colomb asked me to give a review, and I must say I’m really loving the story! I’m 3 chapters in and it’s so interesting already, and I love how Kane is all like “I don’t want you” but he’s trying to control her. I have not gotten her name yet, but the Main character’s story and personality is also very interesting, especially knowing how tough she actually is. I’ve seen a few places where it may have been better to place a comma, but it’s not outright obvious and very easy to ignore because everything is easy to understand and the wording isnt complicated, but that’s really all the criticism I can give! keep up the good work!

    08/17/2020 18:07

  • Timmy B

    Hey I’m timmy7634 from Wattpad

    08/17/2020 18:05

  • Flame Heartnet

    I really like this story. I got a message on wattpad asking me for my openion. and I am glad I did. it's great.

    08/17/2020 18:04

  • Yasmeen Begum

    Superb mindblowing prologue.

    08/17/2020 17:51

  • Yasmeen Begum

    Superb mindblowing prologue.

    08/17/2020 17:50

  • MarlaSalinas9

    I don’t really read this type of books, but I really like this one. First chapter and I already got immersed into it. When I was sent the prologue to review about the book, it really got my attention of how well written it is. Love the flow of the storyline. Really worth the read and the hype.

    08/17/2020 17:49

  • Crazzy Shipper

    question is the omega a girl or a boy

    08/17/2020 17:36

  • Dominique King

    I really like it it has a seance if intrigue to make you want to read more

    08/17/2020 17:35

  • Why Nika

    i have been chosen to write a review for this story on wattpad (TotalFanofYou) and here it is it is really really well written. I read chapter after chapter and didn't wanted to stop. I also loved the choice of your words ... IT IS JUST FABULOUS Thanks for giving me the chance to write a review for this amazing story Lots of Love ~~Nika~~

    08/17/2020 17:34

  • Irene mwende

    this werewolf story is the best so far From the rest that I have read... thank you so much for recommending this story to me....it has such a great flow...the suspense in every chapter is quite interesting 😉... you've used the most eloquent words and it makes reading so easy...... this is a story that am telling my friends to read

    08/17/2020 17:33

  • Belén Valdez

    This book was recommended to me and i read it, i loved this book

    08/17/2020 17:33

  • Crazzy Shipper

    I like this book it’s new

    08/17/2020 17:32

  • Crazzy Shipper

    We stan a confident king, that’s right my dude you don’t need him

    08/17/2020 17:28

  • Heza Shahbaz

    Just wanted to say that even though I’m not done yet this is a great book and when the troll said ‘little wolf’ I started crying my eyes out cuz of Hayley from The Originals

    08/17/2020 17:27

  • ellencorston

    found this book through wp as the writer asked if I could read a part of it I will definitely be reading the rest!

    08/17/2020 17:22

  • Lauren•Mari

    I read a bit of the story after being sent it by the writer. Just from reading a short amount I knew this was going to be a great story as I was captivated by it from the beginining. I can’t wait to read more. Highly Recommend⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

    08/17/2020 17:21

  • Crazzy Shipper

    okay that Kane dude is an ass like that omega don’t want you eaither so sit down

    08/17/2020 17:21

  • madison .

    I was asked to read some sample chapters through Wattpad and let me just say—I am absolutely in love with this story. I read to further better myself at writing and this book is definitely one I would read over and over again to learn. Each chapter keeps me engaged with each character and the actual story. There’s just so much detail that I really aspire for in my own writing. I’m actually not that into those “Alpha” books, but, jeez, this one? I can’t stop reading it. A new eye-catching scenario is introduced in each chapter and makes you want more. I’m glad I was introduced to this—being able to experience a great story and to also learn from it!

    08/17/2020 17:21

  • Teanna Brain

    I was asked by the author to read a sample, and I was not disappointed, I look forward to continuing to read this, they are very talented

    08/17/2020 17:20

  • Lyssa Kriebel

    I'm glad you messaged me about your story I truly loved it!

    08/17/2020 17:20

  • GERALDIN VIDAL

    This book is so good!!

    08/17/2020 17:11

  • themxxnchiild

    this is such a good story, thanks for coming to me on wattpad

    08/17/2020 17:07

  • SpaceoutK

    This is a pretty great and I wouldn’t mind returning to continue reading this. I really enjoyed how you used a lot of figurative language to describe the characters emotions. While reading more into into the story didn’t really understand Kane and the main characters dynamics. For example how come he wants her but she’s also not for him. Also I’m curious does it go more into detail of why the main character feels that she needs to be needed by an alpha like the benefits. I think overall from the chapters I was able to read I quite enjoyed it and I would recommend it to many other people. The style of the writing was really great and it made the text get to the point but with more details to filter everything into places.

    08/17/2020 17:07

  • rubymichelle_

    Thank you the writer from recommending this book to me. The first chapter draws you in, that’s for sure. I like how she said ‘mine’ instead of the usually demanding alpha 😭

    08/17/2020 16:58

  • Your Local Coffee Shop

    This story is very good. I got here from Wattpad when asked to review it. And I can say that this is very well written. Great story :)

    08/17/2020 16:58

  • Ashita Kunjadia

    I just read few chapters but it's quite interesting 👍🏻keep it up

    08/17/2020 16:55

  • D'vorah Kingsley

    i’m happy someone recommended me it’s a really good book

    08/17/2020 16:54

  • Mika0301(from watti)

    it is a well written story and i love the Characters. i hope you do more of that and i will seek inspiration out of it :) (Mika0301 or Moony Lupin from Wattpad.)

    08/17/2020 16:53

  • hereforthecultstuff

    Found out about this when the editor asked me to read a few sample chapters through Wattpad. After I started I couldn’t stop!!!

    08/17/2020 16:50

  • Shuyang’s Wife Heheh

    it’s really good

    08/17/2020 16:50
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