Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • Martina Gargani

    love it

    08/14/2020 20:21

  • Meep Marks

    I also found this book via a recommendation from Wattpad. I love it, it is very intriguing and gripping, not to mention funny! It's an incredible book! ---FloofySugarCookie

    08/14/2020 20:09

  • Trish Le

    The author had asked me from Wattpad to write a review on this story. And from the small part I have read from was amazed by it. So I really can’t wait to start reading the whole book. From what I know it will be outstanding book.

    08/14/2020 20:09

  • Trish Le

    This book was recommended to me from Wattpad from the author for a review. I was so amaze by the small part I read from the book. The book is awesome can’t wait to read the whole book.

    08/14/2020 19:53

  • Taliyah Cooper

    it's a really good book so far the author personally messaged me on wattpad to check it out and tbh I don't regret it at all its really good.

    08/14/2020 19:40

  • Jason-Derulo

    The writer contacted me for some advice and I fell in love. The way the detailed are described sucks you in instantly and makes you want to read more. Very well done! 🙌🏼

    08/14/2020 19:28

  • Muminah Manuel

    It's the first chapter and I'm already heartbroken. That's a record. I like this book aready

    08/14/2020 19:23

  • hiverbrise

    Let's get into thisss

    08/14/2020 19:21

  • ImHereForYourSoul

    I like many others were recommended to read this by the author on Wattpad. And I got to say I was very intrigued. Even though I have read only a few chapters it’s been really really god so far.

    08/14/2020 19:08

  • Norasikin Supli

    i was suggested to read this book. it is a good book indeed. ive read a few chapters. im expecting the FL to actually be more badass and tough overtime. and perhaps any plot twist will drive the book out of the predictable type of book.

    08/14/2020 19:07

  • Michelle Julius

    Received a notification from d editor iinviting me wwith a sample. Read intro n was sceptical. One chapter I nn I'm hooked. Good writing love d ststoryline n characters already. Looking forward to to getting stuck inin.

    08/14/2020 19:03

  • bakugos_shoes

    hello there aurthor~chan😂

    08/14/2020 19:00

  • LuckPalRG20

    the author asked me from Wattpad to read the book and it is so intriguing I just want to keep reading it

    08/14/2020 18:53

  • Kriya Ch

    I really like the plot of the story. It was different and unique and immediately got my attention.

    08/14/2020 17:32

  • Nyna Chromaz

    I've only read books on WP and I've only downloaded this app to read this book

    08/14/2020 17:28

  • Nyna Chromaz

    Good plotting... Honestly I've never expected to view trolls in an werewolf book but I do like the element of surprise while reading...it's spikes up my imagination

    08/14/2020 17:27

  • A. D.

    The book has just enough detail in it to keep you drawn in but not so much that you start to lose interest. Great character development with little plot twist with some. I'm enjoying the book and drawn in to it.

    08/14/2020 17:23

  • Canderloro

    The writer asked me to check it out on watt pad and I find the story really interesting unlike most supernatural story that sometimes drags abit at points this one doesn’t

    08/14/2020 17:20

  • Blood-Crystals

    I loved it,I just love the whole flow of in,I got pretty sucked into it, I am very glad to have gotten check this book out it’s really good!!

    08/14/2020 17:16

  • Lele And Kaikai

    This was recommended to me from Wattpad, and I'm really glad because the story is awesome; but I'm also like broke so I cant read that many chapter, but what I did read was amazing and really well written!

    08/14/2020 16:54

  • Tyahara Cruz

    This is a wonderful story,I like it. It caches anyone who starts reading at the moment. I’m glad the recommended.

    08/14/2020 16:42

  • Maleeya Brown

    I already want to beat him up

    08/14/2020 16:01

  • Aria Ihah

    so far really love it

    08/14/2020 15:58

  • the_winter_loki

    This is a truly great story, I really enjoyed reading it! It has great characters, great storyline and it's a perfect blend of paranormal and romance. If you haven't read it already you definitely should 'cause it's truly worth your time!

    08/14/2020 15:58

  • Keziah Simms

    found out about the book from wattpad when the writer recommended I read it. Glad I did! I really like it so far!!!

    08/14/2020 15:43

  • PolariodPerfectPlots

    I came here from WP. I never really liked these types of stories before (Werewolves/Alpha, Omega, Beta universes) just because there were so many of them with relatively similar plots. However, I had only read a few chapters of Alpha Kane as I'm writing this and I'm already hooked. Interesting dynamic, the conflict is simple to see and leaves me wanting to see how it will be resolved, and it's not predictable. Props to the author.

    08/14/2020 15:35

  • Sneha Roy

    I found this book through a recommendation on wattpad and cheked the story and I'm really happy that i checked it. I fell in love with this story

    08/14/2020 15:30

  • Bo Austen

    This is really amazing

    08/14/2020 15:30

  • Azaliah Brockington

    This is a continuation of my previous review: All I want to say is give more detail and depth. Evem though the character in the story is the narrator, they do not know everything. Try switching between 3rd person and 1st person or just 3rd person entirely.

    08/14/2020 15:25

  • Jonette Lexine

    I got recommended to review this story from an editor on Wattpad. I got to say after reading the prologue it makes me want to read further. I love how you develop the senses of your main character it makes me feel the same as they are feeling. I have learned a little more about my senses that I may incorporate the technique into my own book. Great job!

    08/14/2020 15:24

  • llipphard

    the writer asked me to read a couple chapters of this book. when I first started it I was a little skeptical and uninterested, just because I read so many books. But as I continued to read the story made me want to read more! I would love to finish this book entirely! I think it is really good and I like the mix of supernatural in there! so far 10/10

    08/14/2020 15:22

  • wishie1000

    I have already read some few chapters and I am really enjoying reading it .I love the humour in it and the story line is also steady

    08/14/2020 15:21

  • Azaliah Brockington

    I liked the book and the samples I was given through private message. However, there is some flow missing when you (the author) give description and imagery to certain scenes. For example, the opening or introduction of the book in the first chapter was a little bit too much. It would be better to explain how the character is feeling in an ominous tone. There is also the fact that its seems rushed and/or mushed together with what she is thinking. It's more captivating if you write her thoughts as dialogue because thoughts are still considered to be so. It is also a little confusing how you describe the setting, I can't tell if this is the female character thinking or she's breaking a fourth wall. It feels like these characters are just floating around somewhere and barely talking. The dialogue is great but put in a little more detail. Talk about how the other's expression or tone makes them feel, how do they react not just with words but with bodily language. Also give description towards the werewolf spectrum. How do things work in this world? Are there only werewolves? Are there special laws? Explain Alphas and not in a rushed basic manner. Give us the "How, Where, When, What, Why, and Who" of the story and how the characters fit in all this. Describe the characters appearance with more than just two sentences and not in a, " This is this/this is that, done" sort of way. You gave more description in clothing and scent than you did in anything else. You have a knack for describing things with 'texture' and providing 'touch' when describing imagery. Try and use that along with writing the setting or a character or telling the mood.

    08/14/2020 15:19

  • Makaykay Holmes

    one of the amazing stories I ever read in awhile. I glad I read this book.

    08/14/2020 15:04

  • ♥︎book._.ish♥︎

    okay I’ve started the prologue and I’m officially HOOKED! Gosh! I looove supernatural stories especially werewolves🥺 ugh I swear I have a weak spot for these kinds of stories. ESPECIALLY those that talk about mates🥴 wouldn’t it be nice knowing that someone is your mate so that you don’t have to go through the trouble to date and stuff? apparently NOT that’s what the story says😂 can’t wait to read more! you can expect more comments like this in the future🥴♥️

    08/14/2020 14:52

  • Norma Nieves

    great story plot!

    08/14/2020 14:41

  • Danielle Davis

    This book is so good it has neon edge wanting more but I unfortunately don’t have any coins:(

    08/14/2020 14:15

  • noblemud

    i found out about this book through wattpad, the writer recommended. i read few chapters and i love it! but i think it would be better if it is not in this app because this is not the app i use when reading ~noblemud

    08/14/2020 13:48

  • Katerina Kavouklis

    I’m so happy this book was recommended to me! such an amazing read!!! absolutely love how each sentence just flows into the other! definitely worthwhile 🤩 hope to see more from this spectacularly talented author!!

    08/14/2020 13:35

  • Ruth Matthew

    the story is one of a kind

    08/14/2020 13:10

  • Ayu-chan

    I'm kinda picky when it comes to genre. Tbh, I'm not into vampires/werewolves genre but, I'd only read few and I'm looking forward for more because it's really interesting! I wanted to thank the editor recommending me a good story. I would recommend this to my friends too. To the author of this story, thumbs up for you!

    08/14/2020 12:57

  • C0ld_Karma

    Wow! I’m only a few chapters in and this book is fantastic!! I really want to thank the author for recommending it to me. The concept and ideas behind the story are original despite the genre being so used! I love the modern aspect behind it too!! I am definitely continuing this one

    08/14/2020 12:36

  • wildestdreamis520

    just like the majority of the comments, I was also approached by the "editor/friend" of the writer in WP I have finished reading the free chaps of the story and yeah it was worth it, very interesting story even though I'm not into this genre it still got me! I even tried to ask my friends to read this

    08/14/2020 12:33

  • WinchesterWoman93

    It is a very great book and I really like the writing style

    08/14/2020 12:07

  • Fanuel Akakpo

    This is one of the best werewolf book I ever read. The MC isn't overly submissive, dramatic, or worse of all stupid. This one of the few books I truly enjoyed in a while.:)

    08/14/2020 11:51

  • sleepykpopstanwattpa

    The book is so well written,the sentences match with everything,it's really interesting tbh. Thank you so much for this work! The sad thing abt this app,is that you have to have coins to find out what's next,since I've used all of em,I'm stuck on chapter 10 lol.

    08/14/2020 11:45

  • imjustapasserby

    at first i was like 'i think i already read this one a couple of months ago' but turns out it was actually in WP before and to be real i already read a dozens of stories like this that 'it starts when i met him in the hallway where lockers are place blah blah blah' and those stories are always like the guy saying 'gurl you are not my level get out of my face' then after he'll be like an Ahole which is really annoying i mean yeah we need those to get like dunno mad about that character and wish him to die but when he gets to the part 'your mine and i will protect' we are starting to like see his other self and he is just not an ahole and then author throws some truoble and sh*t and its done well basically the whole story is just about a guy who is just straight up possesive and an ahole but he change cause he meet her and then some little trouble then they are chasing each others ass again i kinda like this story cause it is detailed and the progression is slow the development of character is slow but it is not making u bored or whatever there is always something that makes u want to read the next chapter and if u are like me who easily get bored if u read something similar to this and that book read this one i think this is good and not your typical rejection and possesive alpha ( sorry for my wrong grammars or spelling cause gurl english is NOT my first language and im sorry if someone get offended by this comment i am just saying what i think and based on dozens of alpha books, Im not a professional thank u for reading this comment have a nice day and take care)

    08/14/2020 11:39

  • Angela Inzon

    This is a interesting story, not really a fan of warewolves stories or what but this story catch my interests. Thanks for the recommendations of the editor/author of this story. Good job ✔️💕👍🏻

    08/14/2020 11:19

  • Toufiqua Niha

    Thanks to the editor for suggesting me the book.. It's amazing and captivating. keep up the good work.

    08/14/2020 11:18

  • Mohsina Ishaq

    love it 🙂

    08/14/2020 11:10

  • Yolandi Putter

    okay i love this book every chaper it ceeps you wanting to read more if you have more stories like this pleas send it my way .

    08/14/2020 10:54

  • amir damien

    I found out about this book just now thanks to the author and thier friend and I regretted not knowing about it earlier, I would rate it 10/10 (might be a bit too biased by the werewolves) the story is super interesting and I love how descriptive it is so I can imagine the characters and such.

    08/14/2020 10:45

  • A R

    your writing flows so nicely and the character developments are amazing !x

    08/14/2020 09:47

  • ambre g

    i enjoyed reading these chapters and its amazing story. keep it up , i wish you good luck.

    08/14/2020 09:36

  • ZEE ZEE

    wait is this one of those books where the douchebag still gets the girl? I need ta know before I spend all my coins

    08/14/2020 09:32

  • Z_Aufhum07

    to someone, who recommended me this story. hi! here i am, already reading it :D

    08/14/2020 08:07

  • greenwolf0824

    this is an amazing book and I feel like it could be made into a series or something if not continuing on with Kane and Ember directly then possibly giving Jett, Darius or one of the other main characters while giving updates on what is happening with the mains through the interactions the other would have during their story or even if continued with the two mains it feels like there may be room for a continuation of their story but I would love reading more of this story it’s very well written

    08/14/2020 07:46

  • kaii marie

    thanks for sending this to me on wattpad girl i love itttt !♥️

    08/14/2020 07:32

  • Angel Paula XI bsn 2

    wow, you are amazing. this story is just like a pro

    08/14/2020 05:09

  • Angel Paula XI bsn 2

    wow, you are amazing. this story is just like a pro

    08/14/2020 05:09

  • Candelaria Geñorga

    it's interesting ☺️

    08/14/2020 05:06

  • Reader-552067

    I am SO happy that the author told me about this book on wattpad. it’s awesome, and beautifully written.

    08/14/2020 04:38

  • Vicki Trewella

    I'm kinda struggling with the story at the moment.. I feel like it's jumping around way too much... have enjoyed it until the last few chapters....

    08/14/2020 03:43

  • Keristin Lay

    I really enjoy reading this story. Thanks for the recommendation.😆😆

    08/14/2020 01:51

  • KookieBearXo

    the author reached out to me on wattpad and I’m so glad they did! I’ve just started and this is easily becoming one of my favourite books!

    08/14/2020 01:23

  • YuukiBear

    i found this book when then writed asked if i would check it out. honestly this story is so good, i've only read a few chapters so far and i'm glad i said yes to check it out. The character development is very cool, i just can't stop reading because the story is full of action and excitement that i love.

    08/14/2020 01:20

  • YuukiBear

    Saya menemukan buku ini ketika ditulis bertanya apakah saya akan memeriksanya. sejujurnya cerita ini sangat bagus, sejauh ini saya hanya membaca beberapa bab dan saya senang saya mengatakan ya untuk memeriksanya. Perkembangan karakternya sangat keren, saya tidak bisa berhenti membaca karena ceritanya penuh dengan aksi dan keseruan yang saya suka.

    08/14/2020 01:19

  • yoworld

    I found this book when the editor reached out to me on wattpad and asked me to review it. I normally hate anything with Alpha and Omegas since they are quite similar in plot most of the time. When I started the first few chapters I found myself really liking it. The writing is amazing! I’ve only read a few chapters and I’m excited to see were the story will go!

    08/14/2020 00:56

  • kabila

    Hi! I was the markleedeons that you asked for review on Wattpad. Honestly, i kinda glad that i say yes for it because now I have something interesting to read. This story is amazing and definitely going to recommend this story to my friends.

    08/14/2020 00:26

  • I'llDetroitSmashYou

    I'm so happy to be here! thank you for requesting this to me from Wattpad Author-chan!

    08/14/2020 00:08

  • Rani Animations

    I really like this story! It’s well written, has a good storyline, and, all in all, has me captivated from the first chapter. The whole story just works like a well oiled machine, and those little details that seem useless at the time come into play later on!

    08/13/2020 23:53

  • yongie yeheet

    Ayy here just from wattpad and i already love this, even tho i only read kpop or mxm books, im giving this one a shot, the sample the author sent me on wattpad just drew me in and imsnshh

    08/13/2020 23:53

  • Brett Richardson

    This story is beautifully done! I am a little upset we didnt get a few more intimate/fights between Ember and Kane, I felt like I needed more when it came to their relationship and it irritated me when it seemed like they were never alone, someone always comes popping out of the woodwork.. I love Ember and the strength within her, and the fact that they end up fighting over who gets to protect whom is just icing on the cake. I'm also shipping Helen and her little protege friend.

    08/13/2020 23:41

  • Quaneisha Veales

    This story is very exciting and eventful without the overwhelming feeling of too many things going on. The power dynamic was explained very well and the story remained cohesive. I would love to see this as a movie!

    08/13/2020 23:07

  • #reading

    I never heard of this story till the writer asked me to check it out! And I don't regret agreeing and clicking on the link at all! This story is an amazing and I love it

    08/13/2020 22:02

  • pimpdaddyrox tv

    im so glad the author recommended this book to me on wattpad cus now im in loveeee with the whole story

    08/13/2020 21:48

  • Teresa Huang

    The book was also recently brought to my attention through wattpad and I can thoroughly say that the book is probably one of the most well thought through stories I’ve read. Even after the reading the first chapter, I could already get a sense of how amazing the boom would be. It includes a lot of really good imagery and detail that helps me get a sense of the plot as a whole. The progression of the story as well as its build up into the plot didn’t drag on too slowly or jump into anything too quickly and which is really important in a book as a reader. I hope the review is helpful :)

    08/13/2020 21:22

  • Reader-689506

    how much do i need to spend to read all of it?

    08/13/2020 20:11

  • Andrea Jerue-Paulley

    Just full disclosure, a wizard, warlock, witch, Wiccan or Pagan, are unisex titles. I would know, I'm a Witch 😊. A warlock is also a traitor and should not be used interchangeably with the others. In fact, they all have their own meanings and similarities.

    08/13/2020 19:53

  • lil-Mz

    I love the story, I love the drama, I love the action, I love the romance, I love everything about this book. I'm so glad I was asked to check it out. it an amazing piece of writing😍 can't wait to read more of your books🥰

    08/13/2020 19:42

  • Bgirl-

    this story is so good, usually the same genre as this story make me bored, but when I read this story make me want to keep reading again and yeah i love it! 👍😊 sorry i'm not good in english but i I hope my comment can be understood 😊😊

    08/13/2020 19:31

  • aashi bhatnagar

    beautifully written chapters❤️❤️

    08/13/2020 18:41

  • _Spoinel_

    I found this book through Wattpad and, oh my this is actually really good! One of the best stories I’ve read in a while in fact. 10/10.

    08/13/2020 18:26

  • Jojo 3939

    i am so glad the writer recommended this story

    08/13/2020 18:07

  • Vee

    oh it means she is an omega bt i can tell she is not pathetic my view anyways loving this prologue

    08/13/2020 17:05

  • Vee

    hey i m gonna start reading then

    08/13/2020 17:02

  • Jemma Wilson

    love the book very intriguing

    08/13/2020 17:00

  • Asal Khanevadeh

    Although the subject of the story is repetitive in omegaverse genre, the author tells the story so beautifully and fluently. The storyline is so well built and so Characters are not two dimentional. Their dialogue is interesting and even thought provoking. I enjoyed the way that author described every single emotions and situations and for me personally, this is a symbol of a good book. I definetly would recommend it!

    08/13/2020 16:41

  • Ronald Basister Asor

    Let's start to read.. 😅😅😅

    08/13/2020 16:32

  • Elvianita 20

    I like your story, the story is very interesting

    08/13/2020 16:01

  • Syeda Afreen

    one of the best werewolf stories I've read so far💜💜

    08/13/2020 15:15

  • lightning 23

    Out of nowhere, someone messaged and asked me if I can read and give review to this story. I was hesitant at first but then after reading the prologue and coming here all the way, I must say I did the right choice! It's a very interesting and enjoyable story. I really love how it takes me to the different world. I must commend the author! Keep on writing.

    08/13/2020 15:06

  • Ritika Bansal

    It's an amazing story I am really excited about it. I really liked the starting and I will surely read it till the end

    08/13/2020 14:53

  • Crescentpaws5000Wolfpaws

    yas the boys are here UNSOLVED

    08/13/2020 14:39

  • Night Marchioness

    I have just started reading. I love it's well balanced so far. Descriptive, yet not too much. Just the right amount. I could see that the writer put a lot of effort on this. LOVE IT. Will recommend to my friends. ❤❤❤

    08/13/2020 14:38

  • Kaydance Barnett

    I am so glad the writer recommended this for me on wattpad! Its is so good!

    08/13/2020 14:37

  • mistyprose

    I am also here from wattpad and thanx to the editor for recommending me this...it is an excellent story...loved the plot... Keep going👍

    08/13/2020 12:55

  • Toruzero

    I'm actually really glad the writer contacted me through Wattpad and asked me to check the story out. It quite interesting as I haven't seen a lot of werewolf rejected mate stories integrating other supernatural creatures into the mix of characters. Though the pacing does seem a bit fast and filled with gaps from what I've read so far, and the emotion isn't emphasized so though the story is stating how the character feels it doesn't really back it up. Still a good story though and I'd definitely recommend to others.

    08/13/2020 12:51

  • Naralifa

    Thanks for your recommendation about this story. Your story is amazing and I enjoy it. Good Job! 👍

    08/13/2020 12:18

  • Teosha Legester

    I'm only few chapters in but the book is really great so far looking forward to see what happens next

    08/13/2020 12:13
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