Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
Lawry Rose
hey...what is it called on wattpad
09/02/2020 22:54Reader-566924
I really enjoyed this book. The author messaged me on Wattpad and asked for my opinion. It’s really well done, interesting take on the popular boy/shy-unpopular girl theme. I find paranormal stories a great change of pace. I don’t believe the book itself, other than perhaps a chapter, is on Wattpad, I believe the author used it as a way to attract readers. While I enjoyed the book, I’m not a fan of the “unlock the chapter” premise. Anyway, if you enjoy paranormal teen novels this is definitely your cup of tea.
09/02/2020 22:44Larisa Manole
it is a really good story and I want the author to write good story like this in the future too
09/02/2020 22:39Habiba Arshaad
The writer suggested me this on wattpad and I'm glad i decided to check it out. It has a really gripping start is very intriguing. The plot is well built the characters are captivating. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but all in all it's a good read for leisure times
09/02/2020 21:45Martha Huhta
I'm so happy that the writer recommended it to me through wattpad!! It was a very great book. I'm so happy that I got to find another reading app. It was a great book and I can wait to read more like this!!!
09/02/2020 21:34Loose Ramen
I also found out about this book through wattpad. and I’m glad that I took a chance on her recommendation to read it, I am thoroughly engaged and entertained by the pacing of the storyline. Also I love the diversity of the characters, i’m looking to forward to see how the story unfurls in the upcoming chapters.
09/02/2020 21:10Reader-418711
excited to read!
09/02/2020 19:59brokenmyear
Okay, I'm new on here. Editor suggested this book along with the app and now I'm mad that my reading was cut short due to running out of coins. Lol. Kane definitely is something straight out of a magazine. He's a curious piece of wolf. I find myself with utter dislike for him in the beginning even though we know he'll be sparking more than what he lets on. Also, I find myself relating to Ember. Low self-esteem is a real thing. I can't wait to see how their story unfolds, once I figure out how to afford this and work the app. I'll be crying in a minute.
09/02/2020 19:57brokenmyear
Okay, I'm new on here. Author suggested this book along with the app and now I'm mad that my reading was cut short due to running out of coins. Lol. Kane definitely is something straight out of a magazine. He's a curious piece of wolf. I find myself with utter dislike for him in the beginning even though we know he'll be sparking more than what he lets on. Also, I find myself relating to Ember. Low self-esteem is a real thing. I can't wait to see how their story unfolds, once I figure out how to afford this and work the app. I'll be crying in a minute.
09/02/2020 19:52M Wonder
This story is amazing! I wish I had more coins to read the rest but currently I don't have enough. It is incredibly well written that I binged till chapter 15 (before my lack of coins prevented me from reading more, which is kind of frustrating). If I ever get coins, I would totally use them on your book!
09/02/2020 19:51brokenmyear
Okay, I'm new on here. Author suggested this book along with the app and now I'm mad that my reading was cut short due to running out of coins. Lol. Kane is really something out of a magazine. He's a curious piece of wolf. Also, I find myself relating to Ember. Low self-esteem is a real thing. I can't wait to find out how their story unfolds. I'll be crying in a minute.
09/02/2020 19:31Jade St Pierre
I never want this to end
09/02/2020 19:29Jade St Pierre
like the story so far
09/02/2020 19:24Alyza Akya Harris
I found this book through the author on WP and I can honestly say I was not disappointed. I am only a few pages in but the work sounds so professional and I can already say I can truly feel the emoitions the author put into it. Like other comments I also noticed how the story flows perfectly and seemlessly. The plot, the build up? Honestly very impressed, and is now added to my favorites.
09/02/2020 19:21Jade St Pierre
I'm glad it's not just a short story and I can read more than a couple chapters
09/02/2020 19:20Starstruck Sterling
Boy, don't touch meh child!😡😡
09/02/2020 18:49YESKEVINISREAL
How do you read past chapter 6
09/02/2020 18:47Jasmine Knight
I send out my thanks to the Author and Editor for this book, you were right in assuming I would enjoy this novel! without your help I wouldn't be able to read such a wonderful story!!!
09/02/2020 18:35AMerope
So far, it’s a good introduction. However, it’s always a good idea to introduce your protagonist early on, especially if you’re telling it in first person perspective.
09/02/2020 18:05MaferDeSuga
This story catches you incredibly♡
09/02/2020 17:41Fukawa Touko
It was really fun, I loved it. <3
09/02/2020 17:38Persefone2002
I like it a lot!!! It's amazing! I don't have words to describe this! I really appreaciate it :3
09/02/2020 17:07Raven-fangirlXx
There are a lot of fics like this with similar character tropes and cliches, the only difference between them i found was how well written they were. Out of all the poorly written ones ive been unfortunate to find, this one is by far one of the better written ones with well placed thought for every detail. 👍👍
09/02/2020 17:04taeexkookk
I found out about this book through a creator on Wattpad! just started reading, so interesting already!👍👍
09/02/2020 16:40Mikaella Joycell De Guzman
i found it on wattpad im so glad that the writer recommended this to me im not so great at english but this is so cool thankyou writer
09/02/2020 16:33Zuleima A. Rodriguez
@Amina Adamou congratulations on your success. quite an entertaining book. 😁☺️😍❤️❤️❤️
09/02/2020 15:50kim bunny myeon
thanks to the author i get to know abt this story....nd i reallg really like it❤❤
09/02/2020 15:45wolfpack rocks
I found out about this on watpad and im glad I did!! I'm still currently reading it but I love the story!
09/02/2020 15:44Mary Pauline Mizal
The story is good,it's well written. I like what I've read so far. Different take on rejected mate. It promotes having self respect which is nice.
09/02/2020 15:36Anavel Anguiano
I really enjoyed this book thank you to the editor for suggesting it. It was very interesting. The different supernatural characters made it even more interesting.
09/02/2020 15:26ismath hajarah
Such an amazing story... The genre is not really my type but I'll make the exception for this one... It's such a good read....
09/02/2020 15:05Scourge777
hello! I finally got the app! can’t wait to read your story!
09/02/2020 14:30Daniella Haynes
This is book has an amazing plot, I love it
09/02/2020 14:29Jonelle Phoenix
Boogara in the building!
09/02/2020 14:26Pinki pinky
I'm loving this story..
09/02/2020 14:04Emi Lia
hey I am emi from Wattpad! you asked me for a Review and here it is again bc I cannot find my comment... I beginn with the Prolog. I like your choice of language, it is easy to understand for me as a german Reader and you describe the Situation very good and vivid! I also like the short paragraphs in which you divide the text, so can the reader easier follow your story. The only thing I wish is more Information about the narrator and why is the whole Situation like this, how it cames to it... maybe I am just to curious and have to read further more chapters! I really enjoy it to read your story thank you! and i hope my opinion help a bit!
09/02/2020 13:53Fateema Saad Gidado
reading here is harder for me but I must say your book deserves every ounce of love reads, vote and comments it's so amazing it flows fluently the grammar and punctuations we're just perfect even though your type of writing is the descriptive I still like the way your describe.bravo. excellent work
09/02/2020 13:45Luz Segura
I congratulate you, it is an incredible story
09/02/2020 13:34Rita Pinto
This story is to captivating!! It really got my attention in the first few lines. The way the author wrote the narrative makes you want to continuing reading and want follow more of the story. I love it, it’s highly reccomended!!
09/02/2020 13:30Rahma Ilham
I found this book from wattpad...I hope this app is equally good as wattpad
09/02/2020 13:16JuSforFun
The author reached out to me on wattpad, they are so kind and this book is great
09/02/2020 13:13Rania styless
I wish this book was on wattpad, since i'm always active there. I love it so much
09/02/2020 13:11Sana Zubair
Hi... It's really an amazing one... After a long time have enjoyed a book other than any typical one! Thanks for suggesting this work🙂
09/02/2020 13:08Husky The wolf Alpha
I already read some chapters on wp(wattpad) and this was amazing!! I recommend reading this if you haven’t ^^
09/02/2020 13:00Malavika Satheesh
really nice story I love it
09/02/2020 12:32Emi Lia
hey emi here from Wattpad, you asked me for a Review about this book :) If you do not mind I just beginn in this chapter. So I like your choice of language. For me a german reader is it easy to understand, you discribe the Situation very well and vivid but I wish for some parts more information for example a little indroduction (whose point of view we are reading, who is the narrator of the story) or maybe I am just too curious and I'll find out in the next few chapters :D I also like the small paragraphs in the text, so the reader can easy follow your Story. I am very curious to read further your Story and find out how it goes on! thank you to ask me to read it I really enjoy it! And I hope my little opinion helps you!
09/02/2020 12:29A_LadyCute
This is great! I love it! 💓
09/02/2020 12:18Livto18
I cant wait for her to stand up to him
09/02/2020 12:15Livto18
she is bad ass. So different from your typical omegas
09/02/2020 12:09Aira Absalon
Hello i come here from wattpad im Airaabsalon7 as the author requested icome to have a look on this story. So i read the whole book i loved it❤️🎉
09/02/2020 11:56Valentina Galano
i am glad the writer recommended me this story, i have already read some chapters and i can say it's written very very well (sorry if i written something wrong, but i'm italian)
09/02/2020 11:48Mei Kazuki
waw! so excited!
09/02/2020 11:47Julieann Soguilon Diaz
😊😊😊
09/02/2020 11:42The Demon Gamer14
I'm really glad that the author was able to ask me through Wattpad to read this book, i really like how the story developes with the begging of what could seem like a normal "wolf mate" story having a sudden turn in what you could expect, the personality of the characters and their appearance are really well described it doesn't Skip one bit in the introduction on each on them, i love how the story is well done, leaving some suspense in what's going to happen in the next chapter, but overall the author is doing a really good work of a book, and wish them to keep having the inspiration to keep it going.
09/02/2020 11:39tiha_adri57
the story is really good!! the way the author describes those characters really intrigued me to learn more about them. the fact that this story include not only the pack but also other creatures really interesting. The protagonist also makes me feel curious on her true nature since despite being like a submissive omega, she's actually something more than that! too bad I can't read the whole book since this whole coin things makes me confused... but honestly I love your writing Author!!! I'm glad to be able to read this gem even if not all of it. Thank you for recommending it in wattpad🥰
09/02/2020 11:23Healerwind Polancos Custodio
Thank you for this and about this book it was recommended to me on wattpad! I really like it so much and I appreciate it. the story is sooo👌👌👌
09/02/2020 11:16Astraea Selena
Honestly the first few lines in the prologue hooked my attention it's like the author of the story already published many books or really does. The flow of the story is sooo very interesting that you would not get bored or loss interest
09/02/2020 11:14Malina Everfree
I'm from Wattpad. The book is really well written. The storyline is also interesting and enjoyable. I love the character and plot details. Great book!!
09/02/2020 11:09Mei Kazuki
waw! i so love it!
09/02/2020 11:04Yanti S
this creator send me some chapter on wattpad and I'm glad that read these amazing work now❤❤❤❤
09/02/2020 10:48Choco Girlzz
To be honest, this is the first book with English languange I read. This story is too good. I really enjoyed the chapter by chapter. It just flows. I like it.
09/02/2020 10:37BladeSinner
Very well written. The omega getting a rush of the Alpha dominance in a way that really brings the emotions to reality.
09/02/2020 10:37Choco Girlzz
That story is too good. I really enjoyed reading chapter by chapters. It just flows.
09/02/2020 10:35BladeSinner
So glad this got recommended to me!
09/02/2020 10:33Ntando Mbali Zwane
❤️❤️❤️
09/02/2020 10:13Miss Sutcliff
I found this book, because the author recommended it to me though Wattpad, and I have to say that I was a little sceptical at first because I’m not keen on supernatural stories. But I gave it a go, and it’s actually a really good book, and brilliantly well written!
09/02/2020 10:07Divine Mozie
Hello. I love the book💖
09/02/2020 10:01Ntando Mbali Zwane
Now I can't continue cause I don't have coins:-(
09/02/2020 09:45Reader-441536
i found out about this story through wattpad and i’m really glad i did. i think it is really enjoyable and entertaining and the plot is amazing. i recommend it to anyone who wants to read a good story.
09/02/2020 09:40Lifeless Blood
💖💖💖💖
09/02/2020 09:37Annie Chan
Hello liqhtsjin here! I am really glad you contacted me to review your story because now I can't stop reading it! I stayed up all night to read it and find out that, nothing is wrong with your story and there's no need for advices anymore! This story is very entertaining to read! Please keep up the good work and thank you for contacting me because if that didn't happen I wouldn't know thos story! I am your supporter in everything, good luck and always remember to write because of your passion! I'll always support you so feel free to reach out to me in wattpad! Sincerely yours, -liqhtsjin
09/02/2020 09:35Mapsidoodledoo
Okay. So, first of all, the code didn't work so I was a bit disappointed but I was able to read some of the chaps sooo... I love it so far. It wasn't like those typical werewolf stories where they focuses only on the werewolves. I love that it features other creatures too. It has diversity. So thumbs up for that. Second, Kade is such a git. I know that he must have some "acceptable" reason for treating her like shit but I didn't really get to that part where they "reconcile" or he explains his part so right now I'm still angry at him. Haha It's just so annoying that he looks down on her for being an omega which is a shitty thing to do specially that they're mates. Ugh I'm still annoyed. But good job for that 'cause I love it when a story brings out emotions to the readers. Ember is such a strong person. She just feels weak because they makes her feel weak but she's very strong physically, mentally, emotionally. And I love that she didn't let that define who she is. She made that as a motivation to be better. I'm already inlove with her. I have only read the first six chapters and I'm already hooked. ❤❤ I'm not gonna whine about the locked chapters because I hate it when people do that. Before, people buy books to read and enjoy. Now, everything's basically served in a silver platter and people still whines about it. Grow up. Not everything is free. Just putting it there. Have a nice day everyone. 😊
09/02/2020 09:35Maya Caviera
I found this book through the editor and I really liked it. The story flows smoothly and since I love anything supernatural I really enjoyed reading it. 😊 I would surely recommend it to everyone who likes not only werewolves, but also other fantasy creatures.
09/02/2020 09:34Chaos Lupa
this book is Addictive. I LITERALLY cannyo put it down
09/02/2020 09:17Thư Huỳnh
That's like the werewolf world, but I think this outline has to demand colors... uhm This seem to be quiet a popular, . But your wording is simple, concise and that's really beautiful. I extremely impressive about that. Good luck
09/02/2020 09:10ambriel დ
I’ve just started to read this book when it was recommended, and I am so happy to ready the first chapter!
09/02/2020 09:06Kiwii5
I was asked by the editor to read the book and give a review. I was more than happy to. However there was no mention of the story being a paid story. if you ask people to review your story this should be discussed right at the beginning. They said they managed to get 100 free coins for me but to use the code fast as it may expire, I used it immediately within a minute of getting it and it was already expired. I’m not saying the book is bad, from what I read it’s well edited. A fairly typical rejection story but the way they have gone about this I don’t think it’s been handled right. The code was obviously an old one and from reading reviews it seems approaching people on Wattpad is common, there’s nothing wrong with this but please be honest from the beginning.
09/02/2020 08:56Ann Wina
thanks to the writer for recommending this to me I definitely love the plot and unexpected turn of events so far.
09/02/2020 08:52Hiya Pantvaidya
A friend of mine recommended this book to me on Wattpad and I'm really glad about it! This was a really entertaining and great book! :)
09/02/2020 08:47corny_sar
It's good that the editor of this story messaged me on my wattpad account or else I wouldnt get a chance to read it now. It's really interesting story.
09/02/2020 08:46HeatherHolmesSPNF Official
This book was recommended to me through an author on Wattpad. The book so far is amazing and if I had coins I would continue until the end. I do think this is a great book and deserves to be put on paper.
09/02/2020 08:42Angel UwU
ta' re bueno
09/02/2020 08:33_sora-chan
I also found this book trough wattpad because the author contacted me. And I looovee this story it's super entertaining, enjoyable and all the good things you can imagine. I'm so glad that the author recommended it. ( Sorry if there are some grammar/orthographic mistakes English is not my first language)
09/02/2020 08:29Kimmy
wow, I really like the story !!! this will be my favorite story. thank you for recommending it to me
09/02/2020 08:27Hyesun Im
I just read the first part and it already got my attention. Definitely will read the next parts.
09/02/2020 08:16Zakira Dabuda
I loved the first few chapters, Zakira Dabuda ♥️
09/02/2020 08:09astalebread
oh yeah this book is definitely cool for sure. I don’t read a ton of straight books though because I’m ✨lesbian✨ but I did enjoy the snippet provided to me by someone in wattpad! :)
09/02/2020 08:01Jariel Christopher
I thank you so much for the recommendation and being able to get a glimpse of the book before actually reading it! It’s wonderfully written and capturing!
09/02/2020 07:43Kosy Paul
this book is so interesting..💞 shena_claus(An editor ) recommended it to me🤭
09/02/2020 07:35!MoniWasHereBro!
This Book was recommended to me on "Wattpad". I was able to read the full book here and it is amazing! The storyline for this story is amazing, captivating, and overall wonderful. I am used to reading on "Wattpad" and this app was a bit diffucult to manage at first. This book was worth the binge. Send my compliments to the author! ~Signing off~ !Moni was here bro!
09/02/2020 07:34Herli na
The story is good, the plot and the way of writing are detailed, very easy to read. Someone recommended me via DM on Wattpad. High recomended!
09/02/2020 07:31Park Tsyu
Hi!! I am Tsyu77 on Wattpad! Remember me? I actually also found it from wattpad 😅
09/02/2020 07:14shellane mendoza
hello👋🏻its me from Wattpad!!! (reader😉). As you requested I came in to check out your books(sorry if it sound so formal😅) i do have to say that your stories are awesome the characters are interesting. i like it here o my goshhhh😇the one who recommend me to try this app and read lots of stories Thankyou so much, im honored that you notice me there on wattpad. Thankyou🥰
09/02/2020 07:04Melrose Norbe Cañaveral
I haven't read the whole story yet but based on the comments, I think this is a really nice story!!!
09/02/2020 07:01mariana rosa
This usually isn't my type of story but it sure got my up most attention.
09/02/2020 06:53chantong nasi
It is great, I love this
09/02/2020 06:49chantong nasi
I'm from Wattpad 👋🏻
09/02/2020 06:46Estelle Houareau
This book is honestly extremely well written. I enjoy it so much I honestly cannot express how good it was. It deserves its recognition. Honestly I’m just happy I got the chance to read it. I genuinely enjoyed it.
09/02/2020 06:46Ijeoma Esther
I saw this book on wattpad and just the first chapter captivated me. I'm not exactly into vampires and were wolves but this is entriguing, this is a work of art❤.
09/02/2020 06:33FireLeopard
Ahhh Im so glad I was reccomended this! I love this story so far, finally a good story with good plot and corect grammar. 10/10 would reccomend (EmoFireLeopard on Wattpad)
09/02/2020 06:33