Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Danae Sanchez

    wow it is really good!!

    11/22/2020 08:52
  • Rachele Pontanari

    Hi! (I'm A_Colored_Storm) As I said, it is a bit difficult to read but I really like it. Good job!

    11/22/2020 08:47
  • Reeves Aplomb Princess

    wow so nice and intriguing must read

    11/22/2020 08:38
  • x_XTaliaX_x

    Hi! I really do enjoy the story so far, i think it will be fun to read

    11/22/2020 06:55
  • Extacy925

    wow ok Gia is a bitch and he is an idiot. Men are so stupid.🤮

    11/22/2020 06:18
  • Agnes Mamahit

    it's locked😮😮😮..hmm curious..

    11/22/2020 05:46
  • Agnes Mamahit

    wow.. it's so recommended so far.. this story have a good imagination.. but next chp still locked😨😨 anw author, I'm from WP..

    11/22/2020 05:41
  • Extacy925

    Not bad of a start. I do like books like these with the whole Wolf Pack and Alpa Mate situation thing. As long it has lots of drama and slow burn because if they move to fast it just doesn't seem real to me and I just lose interest. So we will see 😉.

    11/22/2020 05:41
  • Fasuce Suaceb

    Hi! I come from wattpad and I really like how little I have of the story❤️

    11/22/2020 04:41
  • Leah Hernandez

    hello, i let yk in wattpad abt ur book and the rest of it was, Great!!! :)

    11/22/2020 04:31
  • happy aracely

    thank you for recommending this usually I will not like reading athere books because I can't find stories like this you have very good imagination hope this story will become something that everyone talks about

    11/22/2020 03:27
  • Fitri Nofianti

    Hi👋 i was the one you dm in wattpad @akurrrr I really like the story, the plot is so interesting from the first chapter it's been interesting and how you explain it is also very clear so that makes me always interested in reading every next chapter☺️🤗

    11/22/2020 03:01
  • Joyent Rivera

    Thank you for recommending this lovely story😊🤗I enjoy reading it. looking forward to read more of your stories😊Godbless and continue writing 🤗😊

    11/22/2020 02:45
  • Hazel Neri

    What a great story. Thank you for reaching out to me from Wattpad, I enjoy what I have read so far. God bless.

    11/22/2020 02:08
  • Sofia Caldas

    OMG it's one of the best stories I've ever read!!! I love the theme and it's very well structured. It's really worth reading!!!

    11/22/2020 01:43
  • Christe Campbell

    how do I access the next chapter?

    11/22/2020 01:42
  • erumevba vera

    I was one of the people you dm from Wattpad...@tiara4242 though I was skeptical at first, but I don't regret it. I really love what I have read so far, just wish I can complete it

    11/22/2020 00:51
  • Agata Nóvikov

    It was incredible, the story is very good, keep writing like that, you are very good and the story is very interesting.

    11/21/2020 22:19
  • Guadalupe Rubin Rodriguez

    I don't have the premium version to keep reading and that makes me feel sad because I love the storie! Keep going and send you good vibes. Wish you good luck from Argentina!

    11/21/2020 22:14
  • Melissa Coleman

    so far, i would get into the story but their is too much detail of explanations of how different characters are introduced in each scene. Some of the wording and sentences need to be fixed too. and plot line too. i hope you take my words as just constructive criticism and not me being mean or hurtful. i am just being honest and just want you to do better in becoming a book author. take care

    11/21/2020 21:07
  • Cheezy Potatoes

    not really my cup of tea but it was pretty good, definitely give this a read

    11/21/2020 19:34
  • bubble rice

    really love this story. it’s amazing. keep going.

    11/21/2020 19:24
  • Veronica Medici

    You made a good choice with Sebastion

    11/21/2020 19:17
  • Mal Chain

    I love this story it was worth watching thank you for telling me about this on wattpad amazing 💙💙💙💙💙

    11/21/2020 19:14
  • Sofia9679

    i love the story thank you for talking to me from wattpad im going to continue reading it i love it

    11/21/2020 18:01
  • Cassandra Torres Lozano

    I love her 🥺

    11/21/2020 17:20
  • Alysia Howlett

    SO GOOD! Definitely Worth The Read.

    11/21/2020 17:11
  • Lowela Pepito

    Hi!!i was the one you dm in wattpad..@lalabe..i love the story the high and low of turn of events..i was captivated..i unlocked some chapters coz it made me cliffhannggered!!but now im broke..😭😭😭but nevertheless the story is too good..i enjoyed so far..keep it up👍👍

    11/21/2020 16:42
  • vesachi561425

    That’s so exciting !!

    11/21/2020 16:22
  • LOL- MDR-

    I really love the first chapter, your way to describing things it's very captivating. I could read every chapters with joy ! Good job and fighting!

    11/21/2020 16:05
  • Dona Panayotova

    I was connected with you on Wattpad. I am Dona1504. Your story is amazing. I did not read stories of this kind very often,but I am definitely going to change my mind. The whole story is amazing.

    11/21/2020 15:55
  • ph4ntomtroupe

    This is such a gem! The concept is unique which is a plus. Also, the characters are each problematic on their own. Rayne, on her issues with the abusive pact she belongs to. And, Seb, on his angst as an alpha and spice with a stupid whore. The connection between the two is very evident because they each need a gap to fill for one another. Looking forward to the characters development. A good one, highly recommend. On the other hand, it would've been better if the words are more intense to build up more suspense.

    11/21/2020 15:55
  • Awawu Lolade

    loved it

    11/21/2020 15:51
  • Lena Locke

    I was connected with you on wattpad. I am @lena_locke. Your story is amazing and I like the plot very much. I hope Rayne and Sebastian get a chance to become mates, because that would be perfect. I like the action but you can do some more in the next chapters. :) Please continue with your writing style. I love it. <3

    11/21/2020 15:46
  • Sindy Hanifah

    fighting for you author 😁😁, this story so amazing 😊

    11/21/2020 11:21
  • VeniceBeachGurl

    great story! hope Rayne & Sebastian get a chance to spend some time together & fall in love.🥰

    11/21/2020 11:19
  • viola Daglio

    it's fantastic

    11/21/2020 11:15
  • viola Daglio

    i love this story

    11/21/2020 11:11
  • VeniceBeachGurl

    I was also connected to you thru Wattpad. I believe it may have been your editor that sent me a message... anyway, I’m loving the story so far but I’m really hoping that Rayne & Sebastian somehow get to know each other & fall in love. 🥰

    11/21/2020 11:08
  • Nguyễn Tuyết

    Hi my friend is 1314yeuanh on Wattpad Would you send me a little bit of his story it's really amazing I like. i love it

    11/21/2020 10:05
  • Victoirenews974

    whoa I start to read and this first chapter is amazing we've got a little action since the beginning and they're some suspens 🥺🥰😍🤯🤯

    11/21/2020 09:53
  • yaren sevde uysal

    hiii i was connected with you on wattpad. this is a captivate story in my opinion. you've done amazing. i am @uysallsevde 💜

    11/21/2020 09:40
  • Lentilvani

    It's a really great novel! It's worth reading and it's really addictive, I like the fact that it's very professionally written. Congratulations to the author, you are doing a great job 💗😊

    11/21/2020 08:56
  • _AARIA_

    I love itttttt omg

    11/21/2020 07:52
  • _AARIA_

    I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHH OMG

    11/21/2020 07:49
  • ADNOR Covers

    Just woww, love thisss sooo mucchh❤

    11/21/2020 07:09
  • Frida Meisa

    that's great . oh my god

    11/21/2020 06:46
  • Elizabeth Emrich

    Hello, I was connected with you on wattpad awhile back. Just wanted to say this is a lovely story. The connections between the characters are built nicely. You've done amazing. Its @Apollyon_66 just so ya know.

    11/21/2020 06:36
  • Ana Maria

    I just love it, everything is amazing, from to the begining. 🥺❤

    11/21/2020 06:25
  • Destiana Nur Anissa

    I don't know how it's really great. Damn, what are U?!

    11/21/2020 05:31
  • nanda loup

    THIS IS PERFECT!!!!!!

    11/21/2020 05:06
  • AlexM684

    I finally came, now this history got me. You doing it amazing. Excellent history....

    11/21/2020 04:00
  • Alex_n

    I'm here because a wattpad message, I like the plot at the beginning and about the characters, they are people you can imagine, so the reading is easier. (I'm sorry if I wrote something wrong, I'm better reading English than writing it) Good job

    11/21/2020 03:54
  • Ruslana1485

    I learned about this story from WP and am very happy about it. The story really attracts with its plot and special atmosphere. Thanks to the editor and writer for their work.

    11/21/2020 03:44
  • luna_30190

    Came here after u msged on WattPad. Great story! I like the writing though I think you could watch for some of the tenses. Would flow better in past tense, but generally a good story! WP (eternityrow / loononthemoon)

    11/21/2020 02:58
  • Isabelle Vitória

    i'm loving this story, it cought my attention since the beggining (sorry for any mistake, i'm not a native speaker)

    11/21/2020 02:42
  • Hanna Pratiwi

    You wrote to me in WP. As I thought, this is an omegavers genre story, I like this story. You're a great writer 💜

    11/21/2020 02:23
  • Rachna Verma

    The story looks good and interesting. Descriptions in the story are well written and crisp. I liked your writing style, few grammatical corrections needed but overall I rate this at 8.5 out of 10. You are a good writer and will definitely do good in this field.

    11/21/2020 02:13
  • Britney A Sterling

    I think that stranger is her father !!!!!!

    11/21/2020 01:02
  • Melissa Yoshie Ida

    this is so captivating

    11/21/2020 00:13
  • Anahi Flores

    It's a great and emotional stories. I loved it since you sensed me the sample chapter's in wp. There are just some spelling mistakes, but so far I have read it is great. LUCK!

    11/20/2020 23:50
  • Vanessa Luís

    i loved the outcome of Raine and Parker... they deserved to have each other as mates! love the story so far

    11/20/2020 20:44
  • Rumaisa Leal

    Its sooo goood👏👏👏💖

    11/20/2020 19:24
  • Adrianne Snyder

    I like what I've read so far. There are a few spelling mistakes, other than that everything looks good.

    11/20/2020 18:29
  • Patch Hernández

    You wrote to me in wp and I'm just almost done, it's an amazing story! you really are an excellent writer! XOXO 💖

    11/20/2020 18:17
  • BlackShiva_4

    Its sooooo great I really love it

    11/20/2020 18:00
  • Eyen Rossy

    hey you're a great writer♥

    11/20/2020 17:23
  • Caremi Arlette Reyes

    Hi, you asked me on WP to give you my opinion on this. I really liked this story, the way you developed the story, I really consider you to be a great writer

    11/20/2020 16:06
  • rhea fe lumactod

    Hi.. You dm me in wattpad ang i got to say.. You rock, you know... Your story is fantastic... I like it

    11/20/2020 15:55
  • Linsaen

    i think you is the best writer , because your story is very exciting and good😍🤗

    11/20/2020 15:20
  • North Rose 🌹

    For those new to my book, I have made a release date schedule for this one book 2 of the series. Mon/Weds/Friday are dedicated to Book 2, His Redemption. Tues/Thursday are dedicated to book one, Her Returned Mate. If you have Instagram you can follow me there for my updates or to ask questions @northrose28.

    11/20/2020 14:15
  • Andromeda

    Oh this is great story! Thank you writer!

    11/20/2020 13:46
  • NaiveRyn

    Received a dm on wattpad @naiveryn and I've to say it's got me hooked! Looking forward for more updates :)

    11/20/2020 13:04
  • Kingusia G.

    hi! there Kinga. you fot me interested in that part on the wattpad, sooo here I am! very interesting story and i am reading with pleasure i envy you your writing talent!

    11/20/2020 12:32
  • Rain Icyzel Torres

    hi? i'm the one you messages in watty !! your story is really great! its really amazing and cool!! i wish i had a courage to be like you in the future!!

    11/20/2020 12:15
  • Serupa Rasa

    Wow your story trending. the story was so good. i love rayne and bridgitte. ❤️♥️

    11/20/2020 12:07
  • pan chi

    heyy I'm from wattpad (@xxsjvx). i really enjoy the story so keep up the good work.. :)

    11/20/2020 11:42
  • Goreaaa C.I

    beautiful book, I love it. 🤩

    11/20/2020 08:47
  • Goreaaa C.I

    I hear about this book and I can't wait to read it. wish my luck! :)

    11/20/2020 08:41
  • Spider

    I am one of the readers who received chapters ! I added it on my library can't wait to read~~ -Wattpad name: HeIsLikeJayZ

    11/20/2020 08:25
  • Thabi Bopape

    i really can't stop reading ❤❤❤

    11/20/2020 08:11
  • Ntsoaki Tshabangu

    love it🤗

    11/20/2020 07:34
  • Mihaela Stefi

    I wrote a comment and forgot to say who I am that's why I decided to write another comment. I'm the girl on the wattpad who received some chaps from your book and I want to say that this book is wonderful, worth reading and voting for, I love it. Keep it up and do an extraordinary job. Kisses😘😘

    11/20/2020 07:29
  • Mihaela Stefi

    I love this book,it so beautiful

    11/20/2020 07:16
  • Runa yomotzuki

    is good wow❤

    11/20/2020 07:07
  • Runa yomotzuki

    wow~

    11/20/2020 07:05
  • Nindii Yani Syarifahh

    Ini from wattpad. And this is so fucking awesome!! 💋💙

    11/20/2020 06:24
  • Andrea Gabriela Rodriguez Vivas

    I'm from Wattpad, this is amazing continue making the story please Congrats 💙

    11/20/2020 06:12
  • Varencia Islean

    hey i'm from wattpad (ciaislean). i'm so exited when i read ur story. i can't say another word! soo impressive, i liked and i enjoyed ur story 😭😭❣

    11/20/2020 05:32
  • wanti yulianti

    hi i am here dear, i am from wattpad too. this is amazing story.

    11/20/2020 05:19
  • Tania R

    Hey.. I am from wattpad too.. I'm here to read the countinuation of the story that you already send to me.. I'm enjoying reading this story... cause the characters and the plot in this story.. it's really diffrent from fantasy story that i already read... your team is really do a great job!!!

    11/20/2020 04:45
  • Pallavi Joshi Dixit

    amazing story dear, I know you don't send that msg to me by reading your comments . but really nice story I love it

    11/20/2020 04:43
  • Maitri Bhatt

    great😊😊😊

    11/20/2020 04:34
  • Sun_Flower

    Hey!! I am from wattpad (@laurybrwm) I am so excited to see the countinuation of the story. I am enjoying it a lot🥺🥺. You Are Doing Great!!

    11/20/2020 04:25
  • Azelie Johnson

    hey.. I'm from Wattpad as well as many others and I can't really read this story as much as I would like to. It is really good I like the characters and the chapters. I may not finish the story but this is a really good one. 20/10❤️

    11/20/2020 04:19
  • Patricia Fonseca

    Heyy~ I'm from wattpad (Eonnieyah0111). I came here to see the continuation of the story. I really love it❤ Keep up the good work!

    11/20/2020 03:51
  • Maria Fe Omaña

    This is awesome 👍

    11/20/2020 03:47
  • peach plummpy

    hye, im from wattpad. you ask me to give the review. for me, even i only can read half of this story, i really like the character and this story is different for me because before this im not really into fantasy and this hit me different tho. thank you for suggestion !

    11/20/2020 03:07
  • Ari Amalia Syifa

    hey this is a very extraordinary fantasy story, the storyline is very good and also easy to understand

    11/20/2020 03:04
  • Raquel Ferreira

    Love this story

    11/20/2020 01:32