Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments
Danae Sanchez
wow it is really good!!
11/22/2020 08:52Rachele Pontanari
Hi! (I'm A_Colored_Storm) As I said, it is a bit difficult to read but I really like it. Good job!
11/22/2020 08:47Reeves Aplomb Princess
wow so nice and intriguing must read
11/22/2020 08:38x_XTaliaX_x
Hi! I really do enjoy the story so far, i think it will be fun to read
11/22/2020 06:55Extacy925
wow ok Gia is a bitch and he is an idiot. Men are so stupid.🤮
11/22/2020 06:18Agnes Mamahit
it's locked😮😮😮..hmm curious..
11/22/2020 05:46Agnes Mamahit
wow.. it's so recommended so far.. this story have a good imagination.. but next chp still locked😨😨 anw author, I'm from WP..
11/22/2020 05:41Extacy925
Not bad of a start. I do like books like these with the whole Wolf Pack and Alpa Mate situation thing. As long it has lots of drama and slow burn because if they move to fast it just doesn't seem real to me and I just lose interest. So we will see 😉.
11/22/2020 05:41Fasuce Suaceb
Hi! I come from wattpad and I really like how little I have of the story❤️
11/22/2020 04:41Leah Hernandez
hello, i let yk in wattpad abt ur book and the rest of it was, Great!!! :)
11/22/2020 04:31happy aracely
thank you for recommending this usually I will not like reading athere books because I can't find stories like this you have very good imagination hope this story will become something that everyone talks about
11/22/2020 03:27Fitri Nofianti
Hi👋 i was the one you dm in wattpad @akurrrr I really like the story, the plot is so interesting from the first chapter it's been interesting and how you explain it is also very clear so that makes me always interested in reading every next chapter☺️🤗
11/22/2020 03:01Joyent Rivera
Thank you for recommending this lovely story😊🤗I enjoy reading it. looking forward to read more of your stories😊Godbless and continue writing 🤗😊
11/22/2020 02:45Hazel Neri
What a great story. Thank you for reaching out to me from Wattpad, I enjoy what I have read so far. God bless.
11/22/2020 02:08Sofia Caldas
OMG it's one of the best stories I've ever read!!! I love the theme and it's very well structured. It's really worth reading!!!
11/22/2020 01:43Christe Campbell
how do I access the next chapter?
11/22/2020 01:42erumevba vera
I was one of the people you dm from Wattpad...@tiara4242 though I was skeptical at first, but I don't regret it. I really love what I have read so far, just wish I can complete it
11/22/2020 00:51Agata Nóvikov
It was incredible, the story is very good, keep writing like that, you are very good and the story is very interesting.
11/21/2020 22:19Guadalupe Rubin Rodriguez
I don't have the premium version to keep reading and that makes me feel sad because I love the storie! Keep going and send you good vibes. Wish you good luck from Argentina!
11/21/2020 22:14Melissa Coleman
so far, i would get into the story but their is too much detail of explanations of how different characters are introduced in each scene. Some of the wording and sentences need to be fixed too. and plot line too. i hope you take my words as just constructive criticism and not me being mean or hurtful. i am just being honest and just want you to do better in becoming a book author. take care
11/21/2020 21:07Cheezy Potatoes
not really my cup of tea but it was pretty good, definitely give this a read
11/21/2020 19:34bubble rice
really love this story. it’s amazing. keep going.
11/21/2020 19:24Veronica Medici
You made a good choice with Sebastion
11/21/2020 19:17Mal Chain
I love this story it was worth watching thank you for telling me about this on wattpad amazing 💙💙💙💙💙
11/21/2020 19:14Sofia9679
i love the story thank you for talking to me from wattpad im going to continue reading it i love it
11/21/2020 18:01Cassandra Torres Lozano
I love her 🥺
11/21/2020 17:20Alysia Howlett
SO GOOD! Definitely Worth The Read.
11/21/2020 17:11Lowela Pepito
Hi!!i was the one you dm in wattpad..@lalabe..i love the story the high and low of turn of events..i was captivated..i unlocked some chapters coz it made me cliffhannggered!!but now im broke..😭😭😭but nevertheless the story is too good..i enjoyed so far..keep it up👍👍
11/21/2020 16:42vesachi561425
That’s so exciting !!
11/21/2020 16:22LOL- MDR-
I really love the first chapter, your way to describing things it's very captivating. I could read every chapters with joy ! Good job and fighting!
11/21/2020 16:05Dona Panayotova
I was connected with you on Wattpad. I am Dona1504. Your story is amazing. I did not read stories of this kind very often,but I am definitely going to change my mind. The whole story is amazing.
11/21/2020 15:55ph4ntomtroupe
This is such a gem! The concept is unique which is a plus. Also, the characters are each problematic on their own. Rayne, on her issues with the abusive pact she belongs to. And, Seb, on his angst as an alpha and spice with a stupid whore. The connection between the two is very evident because they each need a gap to fill for one another. Looking forward to the characters development. A good one, highly recommend. On the other hand, it would've been better if the words are more intense to build up more suspense.
11/21/2020 15:55Awawu Lolade
loved it
11/21/2020 15:51Lena Locke
I was connected with you on wattpad. I am @lena_locke. Your story is amazing and I like the plot very much. I hope Rayne and Sebastian get a chance to become mates, because that would be perfect. I like the action but you can do some more in the next chapters. :) Please continue with your writing style. I love it. <3
11/21/2020 15:46Sindy Hanifah
fighting for you author 😁😁, this story so amazing 😊
11/21/2020 11:21VeniceBeachGurl
great story! hope Rayne & Sebastian get a chance to spend some time together & fall in love.🥰
11/21/2020 11:19viola Daglio
it's fantastic
11/21/2020 11:15viola Daglio
i love this story
11/21/2020 11:11VeniceBeachGurl
I was also connected to you thru Wattpad. I believe it may have been your editor that sent me a message... anyway, I’m loving the story so far but I’m really hoping that Rayne & Sebastian somehow get to know each other & fall in love. 🥰
11/21/2020 11:08Nguyễn Tuyết
Hi my friend is 1314yeuanh on Wattpad Would you send me a little bit of his story it's really amazing I like. i love it
11/21/2020 10:05Victoirenews974
whoa I start to read and this first chapter is amazing we've got a little action since the beginning and they're some suspens 🥺🥰😍🤯🤯
11/21/2020 09:53yaren sevde uysal
hiii i was connected with you on wattpad. this is a captivate story in my opinion. you've done amazing. i am @uysallsevde 💜
11/21/2020 09:40Lentilvani
It's a really great novel! It's worth reading and it's really addictive, I like the fact that it's very professionally written. Congratulations to the author, you are doing a great job 💗😊
11/21/2020 08:56_AARIA_
I love itttttt omg
11/21/2020 07:52_AARIA_
I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHH OMG
11/21/2020 07:49ADNOR Covers
Just woww, love thisss sooo mucchh❤
11/21/2020 07:09Frida Meisa
that's great . oh my god
11/21/2020 06:46Elizabeth Emrich
Hello, I was connected with you on wattpad awhile back. Just wanted to say this is a lovely story. The connections between the characters are built nicely. You've done amazing. Its @Apollyon_66 just so ya know.
11/21/2020 06:36Ana Maria
I just love it, everything is amazing, from to the begining. 🥺❤
11/21/2020 06:25Destiana Nur Anissa
I don't know how it's really great. Damn, what are U?!
11/21/2020 05:31nanda loup
THIS IS PERFECT!!!!!!
11/21/2020 05:06AlexM684
I finally came, now this history got me. You doing it amazing. Excellent history....
11/21/2020 04:00Alex_n
I'm here because a wattpad message, I like the plot at the beginning and about the characters, they are people you can imagine, so the reading is easier. (I'm sorry if I wrote something wrong, I'm better reading English than writing it) Good job
11/21/2020 03:54Ruslana1485
I learned about this story from WP and am very happy about it. The story really attracts with its plot and special atmosphere. Thanks to the editor and writer for their work.
11/21/2020 03:44luna_30190
Came here after u msged on WattPad. Great story! I like the writing though I think you could watch for some of the tenses. Would flow better in past tense, but generally a good story! WP (eternityrow / loononthemoon)
11/21/2020 02:58Isabelle Vitória
i'm loving this story, it cought my attention since the beggining (sorry for any mistake, i'm not a native speaker)
11/21/2020 02:42Hanna Pratiwi
You wrote to me in WP. As I thought, this is an omegavers genre story, I like this story. You're a great writer 💜
11/21/2020 02:23Rachna Verma
The story looks good and interesting. Descriptions in the story are well written and crisp. I liked your writing style, few grammatical corrections needed but overall I rate this at 8.5 out of 10. You are a good writer and will definitely do good in this field.
11/21/2020 02:13Britney A Sterling
I think that stranger is her father !!!!!!
11/21/2020 01:02Melissa Yoshie Ida
this is so captivating
11/21/2020 00:13Anahi Flores
It's a great and emotional stories. I loved it since you sensed me the sample chapter's in wp. There are just some spelling mistakes, but so far I have read it is great. LUCK!
11/20/2020 23:50Vanessa Luís
i loved the outcome of Raine and Parker... they deserved to have each other as mates! love the story so far
11/20/2020 20:44Rumaisa Leal
Its sooo goood👏👏👏💖
11/20/2020 19:24Adrianne Snyder
I like what I've read so far. There are a few spelling mistakes, other than that everything looks good.
11/20/2020 18:29Patch Hernández
You wrote to me in wp and I'm just almost done, it's an amazing story! you really are an excellent writer! XOXO 💖
11/20/2020 18:17BlackShiva_4
Its sooooo great I really love it
11/20/2020 18:00Eyen Rossy
hey you're a great writer♥
11/20/2020 17:23Caremi Arlette Reyes
Hi, you asked me on WP to give you my opinion on this. I really liked this story, the way you developed the story, I really consider you to be a great writer
11/20/2020 16:06rhea fe lumactod
Hi.. You dm me in wattpad ang i got to say.. You rock, you know... Your story is fantastic... I like it
11/20/2020 15:55Linsaen
i think you is the best writer , because your story is very exciting and good😍🤗
11/20/2020 15:20North Rose 🌹
For those new to my book, I have made a release date schedule for this one book 2 of the series. Mon/Weds/Friday are dedicated to Book 2, His Redemption. Tues/Thursday are dedicated to book one, Her Returned Mate. If you have Instagram you can follow me there for my updates or to ask questions @northrose28.
11/20/2020 14:15Andromeda
Oh this is great story! Thank you writer!
11/20/2020 13:46NaiveRyn
Received a dm on wattpad @naiveryn and I've to say it's got me hooked! Looking forward for more updates :)
11/20/2020 13:04Kingusia G.
hi! there Kinga. you fot me interested in that part on the wattpad, sooo here I am! very interesting story and i am reading with pleasure i envy you your writing talent!
11/20/2020 12:32Rain Icyzel Torres
hi? i'm the one you messages in watty !! your story is really great! its really amazing and cool!! i wish i had a courage to be like you in the future!!
11/20/2020 12:15Serupa Rasa
Wow your story trending. the story was so good. i love rayne and bridgitte. ❤️♥️
11/20/2020 12:07pan chi
heyy I'm from wattpad (@xxsjvx). i really enjoy the story so keep up the good work.. :)
11/20/2020 11:42Goreaaa C.I
beautiful book, I love it. 🤩
11/20/2020 08:47Goreaaa C.I
I hear about this book and I can't wait to read it. wish my luck! :)
11/20/2020 08:41Spider
I am one of the readers who received chapters ! I added it on my library can't wait to read~~ -Wattpad name: HeIsLikeJayZ
11/20/2020 08:25Thabi Bopape
i really can't stop reading ❤❤❤
11/20/2020 08:11Ntsoaki Tshabangu
love it🤗
11/20/2020 07:34Mihaela Stefi
I wrote a comment and forgot to say who I am that's why I decided to write another comment. I'm the girl on the wattpad who received some chaps from your book and I want to say that this book is wonderful, worth reading and voting for, I love it. Keep it up and do an extraordinary job. Kisses😘😘
11/20/2020 07:29Mihaela Stefi
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11/20/2020 07:16Runa yomotzuki
is good wow❤
11/20/2020 07:07Runa yomotzuki
wow~
11/20/2020 07:05Nindii Yani Syarifahh
Ini from wattpad. And this is so fucking awesome!! 💋💙
11/20/2020 06:24Andrea Gabriela Rodriguez Vivas
I'm from Wattpad, this is amazing continue making the story please Congrats 💙
11/20/2020 06:12Varencia Islean
hey i'm from wattpad (ciaislean). i'm so exited when i read ur story. i can't say another word! soo impressive, i liked and i enjoyed ur story 😭😭❣
11/20/2020 05:32wanti yulianti
hi i am here dear, i am from wattpad too. this is amazing story.
11/20/2020 05:19Tania R
Hey.. I am from wattpad too.. I'm here to read the countinuation of the story that you already send to me.. I'm enjoying reading this story... cause the characters and the plot in this story.. it's really diffrent from fantasy story that i already read... your team is really do a great job!!!
11/20/2020 04:45Pallavi Joshi Dixit
amazing story dear, I know you don't send that msg to me by reading your comments . but really nice story I love it
11/20/2020 04:43Maitri Bhatt
great😊😊😊
11/20/2020 04:34Sun_Flower
Hey!! I am from wattpad (@laurybrwm) I am so excited to see the countinuation of the story. I am enjoying it a lot🥺🥺. You Are Doing Great!!
11/20/2020 04:25Azelie Johnson
hey.. I'm from Wattpad as well as many others and I can't really read this story as much as I would like to. It is really good I like the characters and the chapters. I may not finish the story but this is a really good one. 20/10❤️
11/20/2020 04:19Patricia Fonseca
Heyy~ I'm from wattpad (Eonnieyah0111). I came here to see the continuation of the story. I really love it❤ Keep up the good work!
11/20/2020 03:51Maria Fe Omaña
This is awesome 👍
11/20/2020 03:47peach plummpy
hye, im from wattpad. you ask me to give the review. for me, even i only can read half of this story, i really like the character and this story is different for me because before this im not really into fantasy and this hit me different tho. thank you for suggestion !
11/20/2020 03:07Ari Amalia Syifa
hey this is a very extraordinary fantasy story, the storyline is very good and also easy to understand
11/20/2020 03:04Raquel Ferreira
Love this story
11/20/2020 01:32