Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

Fia Nurkhalifah

well..its my first time i install the app and first story i read.

Kirideku Todobaku

it's really good

Ishanee

Ohhh I'm so hyped for this

DaveSquash 13

it's a great book... i love it

mariah Gutierrez

Omg this is amazing I can't wait to read more

Reader-987095

I am kinda hoping that when Parker passes in the future, maybe rather and Sebastian find each other because they are friends and make a go. and I do not mean soon I mean in the future. maybe they end together.

Meagan Ehlers

you got me hooked North Rose. just waiting for my paycheck then will purchase more coins to keep reading

Roxana Husaru

I read just the introduction then the comments got my attention and I found out that I have to pay. I watched over the chapters and from the 4th chapter I have to pay to continue reading, sadly I can't do that, so I didn't start to read it cause if I can't keep going I'll be disappointed. I am disappointed that I can't read it, cause its my tipe of books and I'm sure it's a great one, and from the comments and introduction I'm really curious but I can't read it. Anyway, I know you did a great job with the book. Keep going!

Hype Girl

nice book really interesting

1234

I think your story is very good. But there is a little shortage. Look again at the storywriting guidelines well.

Julia Des noires

I'm starting reading it! And so far it appears to be that it's more than a great story. It's actually a sad fact that the free chaps are few, and there's no bonuses.. But I've managed to unlock one more chapter.. And I'm just excited 😁

Adelia H Trisna

hi I got a message asking for an opinion about this story in WP by an editor with an account BURMAMAKAREWICZ0408, I liked this story and was surprised that I wasn't the only one who got a similar message on WP

Little Reader

Pretty good! You did a really good job! don't give up writing

Aishworya Shrestha .

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Aishworya Shrestha .

Wonderful beginning dear.. keep up the good work!!😁😁❤❤🎉🎉

Rebecca Wilbanks

I don't have the money to buy chapters

Quarantined My Guy

I came here from Wattpad (the editor recommended the book) and I kinda like it. Wolves aren't my usual go-to, but this story might change things...

Jasmine Mcgarry

hi north rose, I'm just making sure you contacted me on wattpad to review your story... I thought I would double check since I've read these comments

Ryleigh DuBrey

I love the story so far and hope the author keeps writing stories like this one

Cari Jansen

please let me know when I can read the next chapter midnight and unwanted mates

Tyshae Brady

Your book is absolutely amazing! Thank you so much for recommending it to me and letting me review it!

Aveleen

Such a nice story ❤️

Ivory001

i thought Ray rejecting her mate was the right choice at first 5 years ago, but now, I'm bot sure. If I didn't read is POV that is. Throuple? HAHAHAHHA NAAAAHHHH

Patty Pirog

I was very intrigued by the book and the writing, although I am extremely disappointed with the Moon Goddess, Mate piece. The title was very misleading, it made sense in the first 2/3 of the book but not in the reminder. He does not return to her in the sense a mate would. My disappointment is such it will impact any continued testing, which is truly a shame because the writing was good.

Philippia

Someone from wattpad said that I should read their story, "Her returned mate" and I literally downloaded this app just to read it and I really liked it cause it's very good!

Junghan Kim

when the editor send me the first chapter in wattpad I thought that it was really good so I'm reading all of this right now and I can't stop saying that it was a wonderful

Gelyn Picardal

who is this Paola haussauer??? she contacted me at wattpadd saying she's an editor an in need of my review on this book to reach it as number 1 on paranormal genre🤔🤔🤔

Gelyn Picardal

and here I am🤣 just done reading the blurb so all I can say it pique my interest so far reading soon 😉

Freyjellaa

I think I'm in love with this story. Nice work, writer 😁👍

Tracy Hooley

I am annoyed as when I saw this story it said it was free on FB now it is asking me to purchase coins to finish reading it. I will not be using this app.

Baby Kitty

no wait, I’m young✌️💀

Baby Kitty

yo, my middle name is Lynn and Lynn’s description is literally me but I’m more of a dirty blond

NaTisha DeGraff

Love the book

Hanna

This was suggested to me, I like it!

Natalia Christie

i love this book. unexpected but still enternaining. goodjob writer!

Natalia Christie

hi lindsay

Vicky James

I love this story can not went to see what happens fantastic writing best book

Ivory001

Please be with Parker 🤞🏼

Samantha I Ruiz

I don’t have a problem paying for content, I do expect someone to proof read the content before posting. The errors in the book make it difficult to read. I won’t be reading the other books in this series. I also felt, the blurb for the book was misleading, it came across as a romance novel but the write says it’s not. Plus there is too much going on in this book that it makes it difficult to be invested.

Mika_chan

I really like your work. I don't read alot of vampire/werewolf fics or stories because there are so many different lore timelines to follow and it gets yo be too much. The first chapter was great, the next few that I read, however, I noticed an increase in grammatical, spelling and sentence structure errors; as well as some time discrepancies. A part in chapter 2 mentioned 15 minutes to midnight then jumped to 20 minutes 'till. Just take your time, and go back every few paragraphs to make sure everything makes sense. Like I said, great job!

K C

someone messaged me on Wattpad claiming to be an editor. Asked me to read the first chapter and review it. I have screenshots of the conversation. Otherwise great book!

Ma Ana Ysabelle Mendoza

I am just wondering.. is the book finished? because for me I love books that have lot of chapters and has some sequels but it's ok if there is no sequel... if the books is not finish it is ok if you are planning a sequel for the book lease make it a bit longer than this and hopefully not as expensive as this hehe

Wolf Heart

the story seems really good so far, I love the main characters personality and it’s written out really well. I love wolves and everything to do with them so this is a great story for people like me. I’m excited to read more!

Britt M Bliss

from the two chapters I read I'm impressed. sadly I can't purchase coins so I won't be able to finish this but hope to come back to it someday

Paulette Caceres

The truth is quite a compelling story, really great

Yuki-chan love

i'm upset someone on wattpad told me to read it and tell them what i think about their story and i can't even finish it. ughh stupid coins stupid money this is stupid. it was really good until i have to pay for chapters.

Ko Ke

I liked your description of the characters💖 Thank you for your effort in writing All this, keep writing💜

sandra jelley

I liked the story and how it flowed, but the spelling and English need to be looked at before publishing. it can be difficult to try and make sense of what is on the page and what should be on the page. why were the chapters not all the same price some of them were very expensive so I wont be able to continue with this series as I just cant afford to pay 800+ coins for a book everytime.

Widiya Astuti

this part is good, i like it

Cheryl Morris

, this will be the first and the last story that I pay for and read because I will delete this off my tablet

Hope Boulder

hiya just letting you know that on Wattpad I had someone called edengilgerfeb06 send me some chapters of this book to me on private message but they did direct to this site to see it . so don’t really know what to make of that but hope this helps

Halfway Foreign

SAME

Leia Cooper

I think its her dad! the man who carried her in 😭 i think he was hurt badly during the war but not killed 🥰 i hope ot is and thyre reunited, she deserves it!

Reader-334129

While somewhat chaotic (probably from being written chapter by chapter, and in serious need of an editor), it’s a great start for a series. I hope that you officially publish it on Amazon. Even if you sold it for $0.99 you could easily make a decent profit off of this. I wish you luck :)

Violet Night

I am enchanted, you have a loyal reader now <3

Angie Valladares

Have you thought of translating the book into another language such as Spanish? This book has its popularity in English but it could also have it in Spanish, imagine the millions of Spanish-speaking people who could love this book on wattpad or on another platform

fritzy

I'm really liking this book!

Daku Engel

There are some spelling errors, but, not many. However, the grammatical errors are atrocious. The price is super steep. I have paid way less for a much longer and more proper book. Some chapters are decent length while other a super short, yet, cost more coins to read vs shorter chapters. I've read this one book on this app, but, will not read any others. I will also be deleting this app once I submit this comment.

Chloe Smith

Love this book it's the best one yet love the ending

Tamela Babineaux

North I will do your editing for free. I’m reading your stuff anyway. You are a good writer, and I truly believe you could be a great one. However the grammatical and spelling errors can be a very distracting and frustrating for readers.

Tamela Babineaux

hey Ms North...girl I’m an editor. For the love of heaven, let me HELP with editing. I will do it for free. Im reading ur books anyway.

Selena Lloyd

i got one too from BRUNILDAWHISENHUNT

Rebecca Watson

Rayne has Arianne’s number memorized to call her at the bar when Sebastian was going crazy but not when going to Redwood? Not that the story is bad, but I just don’t feel satisfied - especially with the money spent to read this.

Lockie Moonee Hà

P3PP3R

Sent here by Wattpad:) Sorry it took so long to read the first chapter:(. So far, I like the premise. I can’t think of any complaints. Keep up the good work:)

Peace Tea

this chapter is amazing!! I’m so glad Rayne found someone as caring as Parker to live with

Gemma Therese Micallef

I think I'm hooked what's your Instagram name?

Maggots1010

does anyone know how to get more coins without paying any money? like is it daily or something?

Jeon Jungguk

idk if this person tells the truth, but https://my.w.tt/b5Spsu4MN9 says she/he is an editor who works on a story and blah blah blah too lazy to write sorry

Jeon Jungguk

its an ok story but not the most interesting one i have read

JCVee

@northrose who really is your editor? It seems that a lot of us have been receiving messages to our Wattpad accounts asking us to review your story and even gave us coins. Is this really part of promoting your story?

Emma Smith

Hi, so I was messenged on Wattpad, asking to review a few chapters, and I think there are people trying to claim this work as their own. I can give you their username if wanted. but they gave me a redemption code for gift coins today and when I came over here I saw this. Thought I’d let you know. I can also give the messages they sent.

Linda Garcia

what i have read so far is really good cant wait to read the rest hope to read more soon

moyna talukder

that Sean or whatever the fuck his name is a prick, that Gina or whatever the fuck her name is a bitch. there,, you got my review

Nadia Briones

I'm here because of the editor named 238-adrian-oliver send me here, is he really the editor of this story?

Ivory001

my heart is just breaking reading this ML POV 😭

Jude.H

just got a message of the first chapter on wattpad and it's amazing .looking forward to read it!

Camille Valdez Munar

There's someone too who messaged me through wattpad claiming that her friend, a writer and she as an editor is working on a story. She send the first chapter then after a few days she give me a code for the redemption of coin saying that it's a thank you gift

Karen McGuffey

I think you have a good story. I do not know if you get any money from this site, but I encourage you to get it in tip top shape and self publish. You can do it and you have already made us curious about other characters. So you have created a solid world. I would buy it.

FlipFlop

I don't really have any coins to continue on with the other chapters. though, it was nice reading the first parts.

Asanion Adriana Breaks

hey author I just want to say that the chapters you gave me are GORGEOUS!!! I CAN'T STAND IT, IT'S haay *fall down the floor unconscious* 😵

mwangui winnie

am loving it so far

Cecilia Christopher

it's good

evana

I found this book interesting thanks for recommending this book to me. But I was little disappointed they didn't told me that I need to buy coins to read further. Even though good luck with the book and it's interesting book to read.

lisa's LA FERA

Hello! Someone sent me a message in Wattpad that he/she was an editor and if I would love to read his/her story, so I was like yeah sure, the person sent me a sample chap, it seems like it matches my tastes, Although, I just wanna clarify if its you author...

Nickole Guzman

Hello, I read some of the comments from a previous commentor about being sent here by someone and I decided to just start my own. So, yeah. I was messaged by someone called Zana_Bohlman who is an editor to this story and after reading a few of the other comments about this same situation, I started to think I was also tricked into coming here. I was giving free coins today to read and I decided to download the app and read a bit. But I only read up to this first chapter rather than reading the next one. Anyway, point is, I don’t know if this editor was legit or not but your story is good in its own way. This first chapter was written well to capture readers’ interest (mine as well) but there were a couple of things that I want to question your story. It’s not that major though. I’m assuming that those answers could be explained in future chapters. Honestly, I wanted to question Alpha Wilson’s statement about how there’s a lucky wolf waiting for them in the ball but I got to thinking about humans since that had to be a thing in your story. Right? Or is it the plot twist in the story?! Ha ha ha! That’s all. Just keep on writing and I wish you the best, author!

Sandro Vargas

Beautiful

Reader-665163

I am honestly confused and a little irritated. I think I am buying a book to read and it’s full of typos and not finished and after every “chapter” is this commentary like you see in a elementary school book. The story is a decent story and would have loved to finish it even though 🙄. just disappointed

Michelle Laird-Palmer

the book is really good who wrote this book is a really good writer

Lorena Hessler

the story is really good so far. It is really interesting and special. I feel like in the middle of the story with all the characters

Estrella Bacelis

It is sad how Rayne and Sebastion ignore them wolf completely, if you are not capable of feal anything that is ok, but at least give it a chance to explore it, just pushing them away feel weak.

Quinn O

So will Sebastain find a mate? Also wondering if this whole mate thing is always heterosexual, like what if one of these werewolves were gay or transgender?

Cheryl Morris

, this book is all over the place

Katie Kraft

anyone know the 1st book? I read trail on Facebook but can't find it

Julia S.

North Rose, i would be honored to offer my proofreading services to you for free. I have an associate of arts degree from a Christian college in Nebraska. It's now a 4 year university, but at the time I graduated, it was only a junior college. I did the proofreading for most of my classmates. when I went back home to Kansas, I completed a 4 year degree in business with minors in accounting and English. Yet again, I did the proofreading for a lot of of my classmates' papers. Being in business/accounting, I didn't have any papers to write. I did have papers to write for my English minor (I took those courses on the weekend as there were so few). I can laugh about it now, but it wasn't funny then. My university required quarterly meetings with our faculty advisor to make sure we were taking the correct classes and were going to have enough credits to graduate. Between the middle of my sophomore and the beginning of my senior year, my advisor became dean of the school of business school. She was extremely hard to get a meeting with. I finally got in to see her around the beginning of November, too late to make changes to spring course selection. I sat down, and we made small talk. However, she looked really uncomfortable which was not like her at all. I told her to just say whatever she had to say, and I'd kill her later. I was kidding, but she acted like I was serious. Now I was worried because she had a rather sarcastic sense of humor like me. Turns out that someone in the 5 years I'd been seeing her for career advice and to make sure I had the right number of credit hours to graduate. Suddenly, just the day before, she realized she was off by one hour. One. Hour. She should figured that out figured out. i had to get up and walk out for awhile. Went back in. Her solution was for me to write about anything, and she would grade it. I told her I didn't think I should have to do anything since it was her fault, not mine. I lost that argument, but on the upside, she didn't really grade it. Long story incredibly too long I know. I would very much be honored if you would allow me to be your proofreader. Whether it's for an email, posts to your website, or chapters to your book. I won't let you be humiliated again. BTW, these people trying to say someone contacted them about your book, horse apples. If if were true, then you'd be contacted by the "writer". When that happens, and they can specifically prove everything they say, and until then, don't worry about it. Let's get your typos and your other issues fixed. You can DM me in messenger (reply with interest and I'll tell you my name. Good Luck!

Ruby Lee

it's a good read

Shannon S Zepeda

It’s a well written book. I love the plot and how both characters, Rayne and Sebastian, wanted nothing to do with there mates. I have to say it might have a chance on WP and other book apps. I hope this book will get the chance of being something big.

Monisha Mayo

Very great story!!! Love how it is going!

Angel

Another from the "Wattpad crew". I'm curious, are you a Shadowhunters fan? it's a good read! Surreal how well it lines up with my own little fantasy world, I was awestruck by the similarities. There are some grammatical issues, but they aren't too bad. I'm impatiently waiting for the rest, and I'm excited for the conclusion. Thank you for sharing your world with us.