Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Jamie Jamels

    hi I'm a new member here. I was contacted on Wattpad by a CristaLevy who is an editor and she asked if I'd read a few sample pieces of this story. I wasn't given the author's name but I found this story on my suggested stories. I'm really intrigued by this piece, Rayne is an independent wolf who has had a troubled upbringing since the passing of her parents and this alone sets her journey on a foundation of relying on herself and always having a plan for her life. she sounds like a very determined woman who is not going to take orders from a man and this makes it quite challenging as she meets her mate. I'm assuming she does because I haven't read past the preview chapters yet, but I'm hoping for it. This is one good story that has potential to reach multiple platforms and touch the hearts of millions when they read it. People will be able to relate to a few of the main points early on in the intro and this makes us readers want to discover more that is our main character Rayne. This is one for the books. y'all really put the work in and I cannot wait to read more😀

    09/12/2020 15:16

  • Candy

    also author your book is really good :D Imma keep reading it

    09/12/2020 15:16

  • Jae Ni

    OMG!!! This is amazing!

    09/12/2020 14:43

  • itsmemariyah

    someone recommended this story to me from Wattpad. Just gonna start reading this but i heard this one's good.

    09/12/2020 14:09

  • Aly Allan

    I had an edited on Wattpad send me this and, it is fantastic great job!

    09/12/2020 13:55

  • Crazy Quinn

    you gotta admit though..the way of advertising the story is great . Although a bit freaky XD

    09/12/2020 13:27

  • Karma King

    I really enjoyed the book I’ve finished reading the current chapters and love it but I to was also sent here by Wattpad people saying they were editors! 1986_janay_portee was the person, I wonder why they can’t put it on wattpad or something

    09/12/2020 13:24

  • Mell Smith

    i think this book is amazing so far of what i have read its so interesting tho i would have liked a little more actiln on the first few chapters

    09/12/2020 13:09

  • Mohor Ali

    amazing

    09/12/2020 13:07

  • Mohor Ali

    amazing

    09/12/2020 13:06

  • Min Sora

    The story, the plot, The character every thing about this story is amazing

    09/12/2020 12:42

  • Poppy's Plant

    so the message we all got from Wattpad was by people trying to claim the story or the actual author spamming?

    09/12/2020 12:01

  • MissBea Haven

    Love this story. It's hard to wait for updates. Happy that it is not the typical mush romance. Can't wait for the series. You are a great writer. Thank you

    09/12/2020 11:59

  • Valerie Kakoma

    I'm already loving the first chapter

    09/12/2020 11:07

  • Abigail Docchar

    I'm so glad he changed his mind regarding his son. He may not be his by blood but he is in every other way that counts

    09/12/2020 11:05

  • Keesha

    Hiii, I didn't know if you will notice me but I'm here because someone messaged me and sent me some chapters of this story and says that if I want to read more i could read it here, I just want to confirm if its you? thankyou!

    09/12/2020 10:36

  • _ZSOFIA_ Wattpad

    Are you lavone Murty on wattpad? Iam _ZSOFIA_. You send me a message for reading you book!

    09/12/2020 09:38

  • gugu lethu

    how is he her returned mate when the blnd is severed, they can never be together now and honestly it dies get boring

    09/12/2020 08:22

  • Tammy Russell

    Can I read this book anywhere else?

    09/12/2020 07:27

  • Tammy Russell

    can I find this anywhere else to read?

    09/12/2020 07:22

  • Ally Pisica

    It s a beautiful book 🥰Good luck!

    09/12/2020 07:13

  • Angel Co

    A writer & reader in Wattpad 828EARLEENAGORAS texted me saying both of them (her& friends) were writing a book called Her Returned Mate. So I access the link he/she gave me and ended up here so I check the book it was nice so I scrolled through the comments and found out that other readers were have the same problem as I do. I just want you to know, based on the comments I've seen it's like so many writers are plagiarism (as that's what I think it is) your book.

    09/12/2020 06:29

  • Sarah Jade

    ok so what ice read so far is very well written, easy to read and read the story. very well thought out and written

    09/12/2020 06:27

  • NJC99

    The slap tho...I can't

    09/12/2020 06:00

  • Aneesa :P

    I keep getting messages about this book from Wattpad and how the editors needed to know how it was...

    09/12/2020 04:35

  • laila hanum

    someone told me to read this book in wattpad, he said that he is editor

    09/12/2020 04:29

  • mung bean

    okay but im loving thisss

    09/12/2020 01:38

  • Reader-387982

    I’m loving the story

    09/12/2020 01:34

  • mung bean

    i wish i had more coinss i wanna readd the continuation ahhh

    09/12/2020 01:32

  • Pandita

    I found this story from a person on Wattpad, by Verna_Bermers_Jul08 who claims that she is an editor and that she knows the writer. Personally I love the story plot but I don't like being tricked people for their own personal gain.

    09/12/2020 00:44

  • Amii - Lavender

    Hi! I love the book SO MUCH, I hope you keep up the good work! Hope you have lots of love, Salut!

    09/12/2020 00:25

  • Monroe08

    I Love this story so much! Too bad I don’t have anymore coins🤣

    09/11/2020 22:41

  • Candy Daugherty

    im used to paying 7 for a book in the kindle store getting it downloaded and read it all without having to buy something else to read another chapter

    09/11/2020 22:37

  • Jaci

    It seems like a bunch of random accounts have been messaging people on Wattpad claiming to be an editor for this book and are sending ”sample chapters” to people. Extremely weird, but I'm glad I found this book.

    09/11/2020 22:08

  • outcast_island1

    The story has good characters, it's descriptive, I like that about this book but I'm not drawn into the story, I'm not interestend to something that doesn't catch my interest in the 1st chapter like other books do.

    09/11/2020 22:01

  • Sarah Mckeon

    I love this book!!

    09/11/2020 21:35

  • Arlet anime girl Rodriguez

    I think the story is going to be good

    09/11/2020 21:34

  • Daniela Black

    I love the story so far. yes parker and rayne are mates and together I think this is something she needed as well but honestly I'm hoping for some hope for sebastian and rayne as well. as much as I dont want anything happening to parker their line of work is dangerous. sebastian giving her a chance of happiness may cause some kindness between them and become friends. I want to hope that the moon goodness never gave up on them being together and has a plan that will bring them together.

    09/11/2020 20:56

  • Salsabeel Mohamrd

    I really like the book it's really great

    09/11/2020 20:28

  • Charline wanja Charline wanja

    this book is dope

    09/11/2020 19:20

  • Avery Smith

    it's amazing

    09/11/2020 18:36

  • Mary Dafter

    amazing first chapter I love it

    09/11/2020 18:16

  • Skylar Lopez

    why don't you guys put this story on here AND on wattpad. just make it a free story on wattpad. that way those who wish to keep reading it here can stay and those who can't afford to pay to finish the book can finish it in slower updates on wattpad.

    09/11/2020 18:10

  • Laci Krebs

    can you find this book anywhere else annoying that you have to purchase coins to read on!!

    09/11/2020 18:07

  • Izzy Batey

    I received a Wattpad message from someone with the username @EraAipperspach1212 who said they were the editor any whatevs to know what I thought of it. then they sent me the first chapter. is this the real editor is someone trying to claim they are?

    09/11/2020 18:06

  • Shizuka Yamada

    hi. someone from wattpad also messaged me but the guy didn't claim the story as his he also gave me coins to unlock the chapters of this story. the username is bobby-aument-0314

    09/11/2020 17:34

  • GOD'S INVOLVED FOUNDATION

    Trust me this story is so amazing, I read few chapters and I was just so pushed to read the rest

    09/11/2020 17:03

  • Melanie Arevalo

    Loving this story!!

    09/11/2020 16:39

  • Nakiyah Laney

    This is amazing!

    09/11/2020 16:35

  • Monroe08

    I absolutely adore this story and I’ve only read a few chapters of it.

    09/11/2020 16:17

  • Jennifer Ithal

    so far i love the story

    09/11/2020 15:58

  • LilMamaa14

    I Love This Story ! I Recommend Reading It Asap

    09/11/2020 15:16

  • Reader-661138

    so have i

    09/11/2020 14:57

  • Yhannie Trese

    thats so sad sebseb.😥

    09/11/2020 14:56

  • Laura Zd

    I never read ameizing story like this,I don't have any words to speak about this story just everthing is ameizing only I can say in one word GREAT

    09/11/2020 14:44

  • Neeha Khamkar

    Hiii... I want to know that these ur book is on another app

    09/11/2020 13:57

  • Humz786

    Didn't realise you had to pay to see chapters. I'll stick to wattpad.

    09/11/2020 13:48

  • Humz786

    That was explosive! Wilson needs to be shot! Can't stand abusive men. Nice of Arianna to show some support to reyne. She needs all the help she can get. Hopefully seb will kill wilson or throw him to the wolves and humiliate him.

    09/11/2020 13:46

  • Nikki B

    You should upload this story on a website that people dont need to pay to read it. like in wattpad or something. on another note this story is amazing, i dont remember wjen was the last time i read such a incredible story.

    09/11/2020 13:35

  • Humz786

    Wow.. That was interesting. Looks like reyna is Sebastian mate. She seems strong in character and won't take no bullshit from no one. Also, i think seb is infatuated with gia, not in love. Gia will definitely cause problems. Reyna will definitely sort gia out, if she ever accepts seb.

    09/11/2020 13:34

  • Shirley Nicely

    I do not like that you took his Seb. mate...I will stop reading this book

    09/11/2020 13:09

  • Sanda Sanda

    Love it. You're an amazing writer xx

    09/11/2020 12:00

  • Jada Williams

    I was hooked from the first Chapter alone. Keep up the good work 👏🏾👏🏾

    09/11/2020 11:50

  • Reader-311293

    I think the werewolf is her father or is that just me?

    09/11/2020 11:20

  • Ela Bela

    To verdie-bertus-1986 great reads here...thanks for suggesting these story it has been added to my library. though it may take sometime for me to read the rest of the lock chapters as am also trying to earn few cents. but sure it is interesting...

    09/11/2020 10:34

  • Autumn Daystar

    The story is awesome and Well Written but since Each Chapter gets more and more expensive to unlock I just can't afford to keep reading until the end which is heart breaking I do love it though

    09/11/2020 10:28

  • Reader-237666

    i am so upset, i really wanted Rayne to be with Sebastian, but i am excited to see what is next for him

    09/11/2020 10:14

  • Chimchim Wifeyyy

    Somebody recommend me this in the wattapad this.. So far I like the story... Good job thanks #1974-ethyl-killmeyer 🌸

    09/11/2020 10:07

  • Okonkwo Jessica

    It's a great book even though opening locked chapters is a bit expensive

    09/11/2020 09:21

  • Okonkwo Jessica

    I just started and I'm already way into the book, it's great so far and interesting. Can't wait to see how this turns out

    09/11/2020 09:17

  • @Bridgettehertel4

    I’ve been asked to review this so here it is. I really like it albeit I’ve only read like three chapters but that’s just saying that it’s a really good book. I really liked how they didn’t like the parties they had to attend even though they have different reasons. that’s it for now and I’ll comment more as I go along.

    09/11/2020 08:27

  • 👻SHORTIE👻

    Just finished reading demons family black magic ect... I like the story so far just hate that you had to have Rayne get raped by her Alpha!! It was bad enough she was being physically abused but why write her innocence taken away from her?? Does that have anything to mold her to who she is now?? And I was wondering how an Alpha became so blinded by love of a woman and not see her true colors?? But if he truly was why didn't he give her the title of luna?? Since he rejected his true mate and left her?? Was he a really dumb Alpha just was happy for sex with a blind eye?? Took him 5 years to see her true colors??And why didn't Rayne already get a second chance mate since she was rejected?Rayne stated she never wanted a mate so did Sebastian but he lied he did want a mate he just didn't want one assigned to him by the Goddess he wanted to choose his so your story started off wrong with that!!Because if he didn't then Gia would have just been a warm bedder!!

    09/11/2020 08:00

  • Miwi Moore

    love this book, I read a few chapters on wattpad from delilanlies (if I spelt it right) shared a few chapters to me n gave me the link to this. this book is really good it keeps you interested n invested on what's going on and going to happen. making you wanna read more which I enjoy alot. I cant wait to read more of this book n more of ur work in the future ^-^

    09/11/2020 07:48

  • E BYRD

    from what I have read this is a relatively good read.

    09/11/2020 07:16

  • Book Talks

    Just a helpful note you keep mixing up your perspectives you keep switching from third person limited to third person omniscient. Also it's a Diner not Dinner Not trying to be an asshole just trying to help honestly.😅

    09/11/2020 06:46

  • Donna Mills

    I’ve read this story before on Dreame, I think. I’m not sure who the author was.

    09/11/2020 06:32

  • Muojama chinaza Nellina

    The story is superb and amazing I couldn't continue because of lack of coins and it's so expensive .

    09/11/2020 06:30

  • Kim Dinh

    haha... I think i woul have liked this story more if Sebastian and Rayne end up together and Parker found his mate.

    09/11/2020 06:11

  • LittleAbby Wizard kid

    This story is really good so far! And it fits 4 of my 5 rules for a good book!

    09/11/2020 05:45

  • Amanda Chow

    I want to continue reading this!

    09/11/2020 04:21

  • Danielle Yazzie

    yay. good ending.

    09/11/2020 03:54

  • Amber Alderman

    so I’m i the only one not able to see this chapter?

    09/11/2020 03:14

  • Roseta Julie

    Hello! This is such an amazing book! But I have been reading the comments and realized the same thing happened to me on Wattpad, the account @Donna-Wygant-1977 dm me to ask for a review by sending a few chapter followed with the link to your book, not knowing it was not theirs. I even sent them a really good review and I am so sorry! I know how frustrated and hurt you must feel for having your work pit under someone else’s name. I stated that I didn’t have money to continue and they offered me just a couple minutes ago a free code of 100 coins. Just wanted to let you know so you could report them!

    09/11/2020 03:11

  • Jalexi Marrero

    it sounds amazing so far and i am excited to read more

    09/11/2020 01:54

  • Persais

    NORTH ROSE THIS REQUIRES YOUR ATTENTION Someone on Wattpad claims to be an editor of this book. their name is "tamara_oliveres" they followed me, dmed me the first chapter and led me here. said they were look ing forward to my review. wanted to let you know

    09/11/2020 00:36

  • Irene Mikuska

    Well me too they even gave me coins🤷‍♀️

    09/11/2020 00:27

  • Mikayla Perkins

    I really enjoyed the first chapter. It really got my attention and I’m so excited to read more. Thank you for the message

    09/10/2020 23:39

  • Nightcore_Daycore

    I’m not even finished with the story and I already like it!💖💖✨✨

    09/10/2020 23:26

  • Andy Kam

    I look forward to following everything that will happen

    09/10/2020 23:04

  • Andy Kam

    I look forward to following everything that will happen

    09/10/2020 23:04

  • may dior

    this is expensive

    09/10/2020 21:28

  • Becca90

    the title of the book should probably be changed to “her second chance mate” I held on hoping she would get back to “her returned mate” just to be disappointed. wasted so much money on such a disappointing ending. don’t mean to sound rude but everyone has their own opinion and is entitled to voice it, I’m just voicing mine. if you had known Parker was going to end up with her you should of had him as your other main character and left Sebastian out of it instead of disappointing so many readers. shame I can’t get a refund

    09/10/2020 21:22

  • Alexandra Dumitru

    Cool plot

    09/10/2020 20:57

  • Jade Farley

    I have never been so impressed before! I’m a creator on Wattpad and I had this sent to me by someone else on Wattpad! My only question is, are you SHARRONNOVERLEY on Wattpad?

    09/10/2020 20:56

  • Heather Shubert

    I got a message from Shawanna-Federowicz

    09/10/2020 20:06

  • Fatima Abubakar

    I love the suspense in the first chapter, keeps a girl on her toes😉 I haven't read any books about wolves before but I'm willing to give this a shot. keep up the good work 💪

    09/10/2020 19:28

  • second_star_reads

    Hey, someone messaged me on Wattpad (their name was 111-suanne-crown) telling me they were an editor working on this story and asking for a review. I just wanted to make sure this person actually is your editor before I give any sort of review to them. Could you tell me if this peron is telling the truth?

    09/10/2020 18:21

  • sleepy_fuck

    A person wrote to me on wattpad claiming they're an editor working on a story and wanted to send me some sample chaps to read and give feedback. They sent me this first chapter and said if i wanna read more i can click on this link and it sent me here lol. Also they gave me a free redeem code for 100 coins on anystories as a gift so i can read more chapters cuz i helped with the story? yeah

    09/10/2020 18:02

  • Pally Baltimore

    this story is so annoying, you really irritate me. but good job I know it’s hard work

    09/10/2020 17:09

  • K A K A I

    Darling, i love your stories thanks for the coin that you gave to me 😍 More more stories. God bless 🙏

    09/10/2020 14:37
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