Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Mariam Ahmed

    i can’t afford to get any of the chapters... 😭

    09/18/2020 19:21

  • Arvy Dutta

    awesome

    09/18/2020 19:19

  • Arvy Dutta

    keep it up

    09/18/2020 19:18

  • ExpiredReader

    I've only read a few chapters I don't have the time at the moment to continue reading however I will say that for someone whose read just about any type of story or book that these types have to be interesting enough to drag me in. This story so far has that. I feel the emotions that the characters are displaying. I say if and when I continue to read more of the story will emerge itself. I say keep doing what you're doing.

    09/18/2020 18:42

  • Lexie willanne Reyes

    I am happy to read thisss 💙 hoping to have book if this story will get its own hard copyy. bythewayyyy, I'm always willing to help for the improvements of your works author 💙💙

    09/18/2020 18:09

  • lunar kiss

    i think that the fight with wilson was too short...

    09/18/2020 17:36

  • chaengie twice

    it's a great book.. Makes readers wonder what will happen, It's very nice

    09/18/2020 17:33

  • Madonna Boyd

    great book

    09/18/2020 17:31

  • Mizzy Avon

    Kinda sucks being introduced to this book on a mostly free platform just to find out it’s a paid story. I’ll still try to support the author though.

    09/18/2020 17:28

  • End Game101

    I LOVE IT SO MUCH. ITS AMAZING HOW YOU WRITE SO WELL (bye its me from wattpad)

    09/18/2020 17:16

  • Alluring

    I've been. told about this book on wattpad and the person who sent me this room credit I'm not going to lie I really like this book but seeing some take credit for something they didn't do is annoying but here's there user: nova_mcgraph_303

    09/18/2020 16:01

  • Sabrina Wrinkle

    wow love it so far

    09/18/2020 15:58

  • Caressa Monique

    so u got to purchase coins to read the next chapter every time ? if so thanks for wasting my time

    09/18/2020 15:30

  • Isabella Nightshade

    I really like the plot of the story so far and I'm really interested to see where it goes can't wait to find out

    09/18/2020 15:27

  • Reader-284173

    I have been thoroughly enjoying each chapter that you have written and look forward to reading book 2.

    09/18/2020 15:11

  • Elly Abriyanti

    niceee

    09/18/2020 15:09

  • Ashlee Madriñan

    So nice! Cant wait to read more!

    09/18/2020 15:00

  • Mary Del Y Ramos

    worth_reading

    09/18/2020 14:43

  • Bre Johnson

    Never a romance novel?!?!? I just spent $10 for nothing.

    09/18/2020 14:19

  • Ana Maria

    Hi! This is a great book! I love this so much 💞💞💞💞💞

    09/18/2020 14:10

  • Kathleen Louise Mitchell

    i think this is a great story, just wish I didn't have to pay to read it.

    09/18/2020 13:36

  • Kashmyrr Deano

    this is really good

    09/18/2020 13:35

  • 77 Pyro

    Nice story and very interesting

    09/18/2020 13:01

  • Vanessa Annangfio

    I really love the book already

    09/18/2020 12:52

  • Joanne Guipetacio

    love it!❤️❤️

    09/18/2020 12:50

  • Nurnajiahh

    i have one person in wattpad saying that they are editors and send a few chapter to me and ask me to review that chapter. i just wanna know who is that person. is that you @NorthRose or not. Btw the person also gave me 100coins as a gift ☺️ sorry for disturbing you

    09/18/2020 12:42

  • Daniela Faraci

    25 coins??

    09/18/2020 10:53

  • Nur Jannah

    glad found this story 😌

    09/18/2020 09:34

  • queenie b.

    there is an editor who messeged me in wattpad to read this and give it a rating... so i'll just give it a rating.

    09/18/2020 09:15

  • MarkVictory

    great book but i can't continued to read, because of payment .

    09/18/2020 08:09

  • Sauna B

    great so far based what I've read.

    09/18/2020 07:49

  • Qamar

    someone sayed that she was an editor and now she gave me 100 free coins

    09/18/2020 07:40

  • Ryssah Alvarez

    honestly, I invested so much time and coins to the chapters to be disappointed at how the story line went. the author is creative but the storyline itself was disappointing.

    09/18/2020 07:33

  • Camila Fernanda Carvajal Ventura

    well is a excelent start

    09/18/2020 06:24

  • Srishti Ahuja

    North rose u r awsome I recieved first chap on Wattpad and came here to read more . no regrets

    09/18/2020 05:14

  • Auni Afifah

    I like to read your book

    09/18/2020 04:51

  • Auni Afifah

    Wow your work are so amazing

    09/18/2020 04:50

  • Angelia Weldon

    this is just ssssooo good!!! I've racked my brain though and can't think who would be coming after her?? or who the mysterious stranger was that showed up at her house?? ssssooo many questions right now!! LOL

    09/18/2020 03:27

  • anonehmoose

    hi I got message from a adah-klena-775 on wp saying their an editor and the writer is working on an amazing story and sent me a sample chapter. It lead me here, I don’t know if that’s your pr but I noticed everyone else had the same message but with different people. just wanted to give you a heads up, I was going to message you but Idk how.

    09/18/2020 03:16

  • 𝖗 𝖔 𝖘 𝖊 𝖘

    I knew this story will be very good💕

    09/18/2020 03:16

  • bunny

    ok 1. I love these story already and I started to read it last night. I have to say your writing is great and I mean that 2. I can't wait into the need chapter like I'm read it again in two days 3. I just wanted to let you know that someone messages me about these book and told me it was there's. I didn't believe it because it looked like they copied and pasted it. I got a message from them and it's not just me that gets them 4. I got the book from a friend that told me about it I love these book and hope you luck on finish

    09/18/2020 02:46

  • Angelia Weldon

    North Rose, i came across this book/app on fb and must say, I'm extremely intrigued!!! I have a feeling I'm not gonna be able to put this down until I finish it!! 🤣❤

    09/18/2020 01:58

  • Ashley Hartman

    is there anyway I can find this book somewhere else?

    09/18/2020 01:16

  • Ashley Decker

    This book had me hooked at first but I am so disappointed with where the story went!!

    09/18/2020 00:08

  • leah mccullough

    i really like this story so far! a person on wattpad asked me to review it and i do not regret saying yes! its detailed and has a good plot.

    09/17/2020 23:16

  • Hya Shanney De Leon

    There is someone who send me the part of the story in wattpad. When I read it I already doind the story good.. I an looking forward to the other chapters, I hope it is also good

    09/17/2020 23:13

  • Reader-261686

    im new to this app so yeah but I don’t like the fact that we have to pay for the chapters x the story is great so far though

    09/17/2020 22:00

  • Cheri Taylor

    great story so far

    09/17/2020 21:29

  • Ash Nicole

    I wonder if one if them is her mate who is looking for her

    09/17/2020 20:38

  • Park Agust

    North Rose is an amazing writer. She found me from Wattpad and she sent me the first chapter. I have never had a story like this hook me so much in so long! I'm craving to read more

    09/17/2020 20:35

  • Valerie Judd

    love this book you are writing it keeps me on edge wanting to keep reading the next chapter ... keep up the awesome writing

    09/17/2020 20:34

  • Esraa Ahmed

    well done 👍 , I really like the storyline and I already read the first chapter , I haven't read the rest yet but I can tell it will be very good , please continue ♥️

    09/17/2020 20:10

  • Cari Jansen

    is there any other way to get the rest of your book without having to unlock the chapters

    09/17/2020 19:41

  • God save the Queen

    OMG @justinelouise Same Here! This person messaged me on Wattpad too!! but this story is so great! really! but I rather have some BL Story's, that's my taste... but yeah this one is a Winner Brooke

    09/17/2020 19:35

  • Hannah Gall

    north Rose a person on wattpad gave me the story and they are 337-mia-beissel just an FYI

    09/17/2020 19:25

  • Quanisha Pool

    it's great

    09/17/2020 19:13

  • Dalia Esquivel

    It's been about two hours since I was reached by your editor and do far I am very very interested in this one. I try to find books that catch my attention and this one did so I really like this one

    09/17/2020 18:19

  • Fox Lou

    I will say this book has a way of pulling you in but after chapter 4 the plot takes to many turns to tie up open endings left in previous chapters that could of happily been left unanswered or been developed further. I felt the main characters and plot could of been developed further if there was less plot twist and if the book was written and published as a whole rather than chapter by chapter. ( this would of helped with grammatical errors and helped the writer figure out what parts where dependent on the story line or was just filler) I felt the story jumped around inconsistently and put flashbacks in places that didn’t cohesively play well with the entirety of the story. Like others I didn’t much love the ending but that wasn’t due to who she ended up with. It was dependent on the lack of development shown between the R and P and the lack of maturity of their relationship with it going back in forth with being fuck buddies to friends. Their relationship seems more of a codependency to evade the loneliness they feel of having little to no family and feeling like outsiders. It also confuses me on their relationship taking a sexual overtone due to R past with being raped/abused by those around her and that her first introduction to P is breaking down her door. I just found their relationship to be very unhealthy in many aspects and kind of be more about their codependency on each other than a real all consuming love.

    09/17/2020 17:41

  • Reader-134577

    wow I am bit disappointed in the story, and spend $10 on this book, I kept reading for the end to be good but nothing clicked

    09/17/2020 17:36

  • Vivi Bii

    wow, this is a very interesting story that males me want to always read it, i hope this story is Made of the film series and spirit of working for the writer

    09/17/2020 17:11

  • Skye Cooper

    people are claiming that this is their book

    09/17/2020 16:06

  • Skye Cooper

    I like the story its really good

    09/17/2020 16:04

  • Heidi Stancliffe

    this book started out awesome! I loved it and couldn’t put it down! However, the quality of writing has gone down as the book has gone on, it’s just a disappointing waste of coins.

    09/17/2020 15:59

  • Cmg27 G8

    its so good you should read it

    09/17/2020 15:54

  • Claude de Alger Obelia

    AAAAAAHHH someone from Wattpad sent a message to me saying that they're the editor of this novel and asking for opinion on some chapters. they even complimented my taste in books💀I was so happy as it was the first time someone said that to me. So their goal is just to get some free coins by doing that stuff jeez

    09/17/2020 15:00

  • Alyssa Savolainen

    One person saying I should read the story, so I did. Not every but the short part I'd was so nice. Normally I never read English story's but this one is something that I would buy.

    09/17/2020 14:49

  • Reader-907353

    so far so good. some typos and grammar errors but not to bad. the story is engaging

    09/17/2020 14:29

  • Paula Esther Ibarra Villalaz

    Is a very excitant history drama. Thanks 😀

    09/17/2020 13:58

  • Amy Michelle Santana Villacrés

    Super interesante, pero si estuviera en español fuera el éxito jajajaja literalmente sólo entiendo partes partes (mi inglés no es tan bueno)

    09/17/2020 13:38

  • princess yolimar

    I also got a message from a author claiming they wrote the book. Their username is 1987-Wanita-Gins

    09/17/2020 13:34

  • Luna_Lothal

    I love the story. And I think the direction you took with Rayne and Sebastian was the right one. When she needed him the most he turn his back on her. Plus she did need to be on her own to grow strong and find peace. Sebastian chose his path albeit the wrong one but he made that choice freely. It was Rayne's turn to chose for herself. I cant wait for your series. I'm loving every character.

    09/17/2020 13:31

  • Andrea Clark-Johnson

    good read

    09/17/2020 13:17

  • Dee Rose

    hey just so you know I think the "editor" on wattpad that keeps messaging everyone is a bot. they asked me if i wanted to read it and I said if this is about her returned mate, ive already read it then it sent me the first chapter. and its different account names each time they contact someone because i have 2 accounts and got a message on each, same message, different users

    09/17/2020 12:57

  • Queen Surbhi

    Beautiful story 😍 I like it

    09/17/2020 12:47

  • Genie Weicksel

    anyways i’m glad Rayne got out of that mess so far

    09/17/2020 12:07

  • Night_dragon _Night

    its good so far. sad I cant read the other chapters but its a really goid read.

    09/17/2020 11:33

  • laura pullen

    good story so far only thing it is extremely expensive

    09/17/2020 11:05

  • Erica_Juno

    I Can say you are a very curious writer. I mean how you are replying everyone’s questions .Thats very impressive.I also got an Advertisement in my Wattpad account.And I am very glad I got that .This story is Fascinating.Keep it up .I want stories like these...

    09/17/2020 10:45

  • BeautyWolf

    good book, but this last chapter about rayne and her father... there’s not a lot of detail. if toy meet your astranged-believed to be dead father, more than just acceptance of amnesia would be going on. anger, betrayal, sadness - plus shock and awe and a lot of confusion. it needs to be more detailed. lastly, some of the grammar and spellings need looking at - the sentences don’t flow. but the story is a really good one, great concept and has potential for possibility of being published. Good luck :)

    09/17/2020 10:21

  • Bella Hill

    the books great I really enjoyed it :)

    09/17/2020 10:03

  • Savanna Woodson

    idk why but I feel like the mysterious man is Alec, either it’s false hope or he’s actually alive. it’s just strange to me how the big alpha, not to mention he was the one alpha that seemed the nicest in this book so far, is dead. I’m just hoping that it’s him and he has no memory of what happened to him.

    09/17/2020 09:59

  • Cassie Anderson

    This is a really good story I enjoyed reading the chapters

    09/17/2020 09:57

  • CandySmiles

    Looks like I wasn’t the only one that got that message then. I was asked by 338–mei-shotwell to read and give feedback on this story. It’s a beautifully written story so far, though I would recommend going through what you’ve done so far, just to correct a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes. That’s just because I’m persnickety, but other than that, this is actually a really gripping and exciting plot and I actually can’t wait to find out what happens next. Best of luck North Rose ❤️❤️❤️

    09/17/2020 07:45

  • RENATA LOZADA VARELA

    I have also been sent from Wattpad an editor who says q is his book the truth I do not know, the only q is sq is very difficult to read the book since I do not speak English I do not understand anything :'v

    09/17/2020 06:01

  • Caitlin Sainsbury

    i think this is a really great story and that you did a really good job writing it

    09/17/2020 06:00

  • Little Uchiha

    o.m.g I'd love the story the plot and the charather are Beyond, what I was thinking before starting to read it. o o

    09/17/2020 05:20

  • Rose Davidson

    @North Rose is this your wattpad account: alizatuzzoloaug07 ?

    09/17/2020 05:13

  • seema paliwal

    awesome novel I wish I could read it but I can't read paid ones but author you surely knows how to use emotions u made me cry in second chapter only keep it up all the best I still wish to know who is Ryan's mate and who protects her

    09/17/2020 05:04

  • Vicky James

    thanks so so much for updating love this story amazing writing thaki for letting me read your story

    09/17/2020 04:46

  • Rose Angieleah Chan

    This is an amazing stories and i hope this will help a lot the author and the editor😊

    09/17/2020 04:27

  • _ eqnoiaa

    Someone sent me this in wattpad, its really good tho. I hope they arent claiming the authors work.

    09/17/2020 04:20

  • Achu

    I like this story..... it's amazing

    09/17/2020 03:57

  • Roxana Hernandez Garcia

    No don't sever the bond ! I cant

    09/17/2020 03:53

  • Destiny Doyle

    Can from wattpad love this story

    09/17/2020 03:41

  • Miya Shoo

    I don't know how the author think about the ideas, but I found it so great!! Thanks to the editor who recommend this story. Already in my library and I'll read the rest🖤

    09/17/2020 02:59

  • Reader-692350

    The “rejection and determination” chapter is not pulling up.

    09/17/2020 02:58

  • Kerri Horsley

    So sad to have spent that much time reading this book in hopes Sebastian would make it up to Rayne and their true mate bond would prevail. Such a disappointment! Will not be continuing to read. Such a waste of money! This book made it seem like it was a romance novel from the beginning and then the author letting you know after it went sideways that it wasn’t what it was intended to be is frustrating!

    09/17/2020 02:55

  • Giselle Mitchell

    Team Sebbie. Rayne is the daughter of a Mokn Warrior she should be paired with an Alpha.

    09/17/2020 02:27

  • Putri Novita

    wow this is a very extraordinary story but there are some parts that i think need a little improvement ... but some parts of it are not really obvious because the story is perfect from the start

    09/17/2020 02:19

  • Roxana Hernandez Garcia

    I'm so pissed at sebastian hypocrisy, he slept with another when he found her 5 yes ago n he's mad she moved on? I still want them together but he has no right to be mad at Parker

    09/17/2020 02:13
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