Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Laura Marcela Corrales Marchena

    This is a great story, you have created a very strong female character (she is my new favorite).

    09/28/2020 23:29

  • Deepika Khanna

    I see how there are only positive comments. C’mon you should post and take the critical comments too. it’ll tell you what your readers want and where you’re lacking and help you grow as a writer.

    09/28/2020 20:49

  • Deepika Khanna

    okay so I just realised that I am gonna pay around 10-11 US Dollars to read this story ie if there are 40 locked chapters in it. if there are more than 40, then I’ll be paying even more than that. I wouldn’t pay this much for a full fledged well written and edited novel of a famous author that has no grammatical errors. Then why am I paying such an exorbitant amount for these small chapters that have so many grammatical errors. No I will not be fooled and Conned into this. But if you guys want to be, of course it’s your choice. Peace.

    09/28/2020 20:41

  • Natalie Kruger

    Looks like a great story so far

    09/28/2020 20:37

  • Boba Attempts Gacha

    This book is absolutely amazing,great work :)

    09/28/2020 20:27

  • Cecilia Lainez

    amazing story!

    09/28/2020 20:08

  • Sophia _

    I'm not really into this werewolf theme but this story catches me and I like the way you write.

    09/28/2020 19:50

  • Merna Sleiman

    loved the book. πŸ‘πŸ»

    09/28/2020 19:39

  • Nina Astra

    It is a really interesting story. Full of suspense and plot twists with the right dash of emotions. Wonderful!!!

    09/28/2020 19:37

  • Melani Harun

    nice☺

    09/28/2020 19:29

  • Melani Harun

    so cool

    09/28/2020 19:29

  • Katie O'Brien

    the title shouldn’t be β€œhe returned mate” it should be β€œthe second chance mate” honestly useless to bring Sebastian in it at all then if she’s not destined to be with him.

    09/28/2020 19:21

  • keeshagguks

    i love this book, its so beautiful❀️

    09/28/2020 19:01

  • monica reyes

    AMAZING πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

    09/28/2020 18:52

  • Creppy die Afton

    cool

    09/28/2020 18:47

  • Creppy die Afton

    woo

    09/28/2020 18:46

  • Ioana Petrea

    I really really am in love with this book. I simply love the plot β™₯️β™₯️

    09/28/2020 18:44

  • Bailey Yamilex Valladares

    what did she mean by stole her innocence? I hope its not what im thinking 😭😒

    09/28/2020 18:23

  • my_musik for school

    I'm really in love in the story . amazing!

    09/28/2020 18:21

  • Zainab Irfan

    amazing.!!!

    09/28/2020 18:12

  • NAYA JK

    Wow very nice and the combo is awesome

    09/28/2020 18:09

  • szpilka

    Awesome! written short story! One of the best stories I have read! From the very first chapters mega liked it!

    09/28/2020 17:43

  • xXxRamen kingxXx

    Amazing!!!!!❀❀😻

    09/28/2020 17:36

  • crystal hudson

    I looked up the name on ig and it does show

    09/28/2020 17:35

  • Lee Hyebi

    this book is really good, i love this. I can feel the feelings experienced by the characters. This book is highly recommended for you werewolf and vampire lovers

    09/28/2020 17:22

  • Ariana Ramos

    I'm loving this, thanks to the one who recommended it to me

    09/28/2020 17:19

  • becky wu

    amazing!!

    09/28/2020 16:46

  • Jelena Trebjesanin

    I like it ☺️ thank you. I'm Soo excited to see what you write next πŸ€— wonderful!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

    09/28/2020 16:26

  • Cas Davis

    what is the point of the vouchers if you cant use them on a book you are reading can someone please answer this for me

    09/28/2020 16:21

  • IsolatedSadKeiko

    I love this story already and I’m kinda picky with my choices of stories.

    09/28/2020 16:18

  • SAMINXXX

    love this story ❀️.

    09/28/2020 16:05

  • ishay-shy

    To the one who recomended this story, omg i love it already😍

    09/28/2020 15:58

  • Rae

    I love your story. gosssh thank you to the person who recommend me this story❀️

    09/28/2020 15:23

  • Irene Orario-Lorico

    full of introduction.

    09/28/2020 14:36

  • Rachael Aidoo

    Love the story already

    09/28/2020 14:29

  • Nerezza Velasquez

    I'm curious about this story. Thank you to the person who recommend me this story.

    09/28/2020 14:10

  • Lyn lyn Gaspar

    I love this one....😊curiousity kills me.thank you writer for the link.☺

    09/28/2020 13:58

  • Hope Ingham

    such an amazing story just reading the first part I can already tell it's going to be exciting you done awesome North Rose

    09/28/2020 13:56

  • Lis Lee

    I like it:)

    09/28/2020 13:37

  • S. Alkinbee

    Parker's brother's name: Owen. then you called him Connor. now it's back to being Owen.

    09/28/2020 13:31

  • S. Alkinbee

    wait. earlier in the book you said that Rayne had Arianna's phone number memorized. Now you're saying she can call ahead of arriving in Portland because she lost Arriana's phone number years ago. Noth Rose. You need an editor.

    09/28/2020 13:28

  • Favour Odemwingie

    This story is amazing and it's definitely worth your time

    09/28/2020 13:14

  • Somebody McSurname

    I like it but it needs editing. e.g. diner (the shop) is spelt with one N while dinner (supper) is spelt with two. I am loving this book tho. it's really good!

    09/28/2020 13:00

  • Naruto Uzumaki

    amazing

    09/28/2020 13:00

  • Syailalz stars

    Wow.. Thank you for asking me to read the story, This is cool!XD

    09/28/2020 12:45

  • Vicky James

    I love this story thanks for letting me read it

    09/28/2020 11:58

  • πŸ’œCuTeReAdErβœ¨πŸ’œ

    this story is soooo exciting 😍😍😍

    09/28/2020 11:14

  • fari

    this is just amazing and imma is very pleased yo read this!! 😍❀

    09/28/2020 11:01

  • Cakkara

    It is a really well written story and pleasant to read. Everything, beginning with the actions of the characters, the details and their surroundings fits perfectly and let's the reader dive into this story.

    09/28/2020 10:22

  • Abir Agrebi

    I'm soooooo excited !!! I signed in only because of this book !!

    09/28/2020 10:17

  • Hazel Misal

    heyyy im here hehe i like it your story i will continue reading later

    09/28/2020 10:01

  • Calista Lee

    i like the story

    09/28/2020 09:46

  • Sybil Alpha

    The story is splendid and gets better after every single turn it takes..I can completely confide myself into Rayen except the trauma and abuse part...your story touches almost many points such as a little romance, friendship; lots of drama, independence, responsibilites and finally that realistic touch where the line to imagination and reality cuts down very thin...because of the way you write . I couldnt complete the whole thing but the ending I came to know about ....(I would be completing it )made me feel more connected..because not every story needs to be a love story or a story with a predictive ending.. I would love to buy if it ever gets published! There is no looking back girl! Way more to go!!😊😊😊

    09/28/2020 09:14

  • Ruta Tarangauea

    I like it as it is coming very exciting but hope it continues to the end

    09/28/2020 09:02

  • Iuliana Odagiu

    I like the story.Very well written.❀

    09/28/2020 08:43

  • Rosario Dalisay Catuburan

    well I just read the free chapters, the story is really great and well written, keep up the good work! I will try to continue reading on my free time.

    09/28/2020 07:46

  • Paige Taylor

    I’ve only just started reading this but it’s really good so far loving the story. x

    09/28/2020 07:43

  • Criztal Kukku

    Sebastian is pathetic....girl I support you.

    09/28/2020 07:20

  • Hannah Schuman

    I thought Rayne's mother was named Mia? then suddenly changes to Maya?

    09/28/2020 06:50

  • Ellie Lousie

    I have only read a few chapters so far but a very good book.

    09/28/2020 06:43

  • ed Giri

    I love this story but I want her to find new love not that jerk Sebastian

    09/28/2020 06:43

  • Yolanda Marcelina Torus

    I thing it's a good story and I want see in the movie soon

    09/28/2020 06:37

  • Renalyn Nicopior

    This story is so good. First time to read the paranormal story but I appreciate now.

    09/28/2020 06:32

  • Rene Du Preez

    this story is GOOD.

    09/28/2020 06:24

  • DΓ‘wn _ΓΏt

    πšπš‘πš’πšœ πšœπšπš˜πš›πš’ πš’πšœ πš˜πš—πšŽ 𝚘𝚏 𝚊 πš”πš’πš—πš, πšπš‘πš’πšœ πš’πšœ πš˜πš—πšŽ 𝚘𝚏 πš–πš’ πšπšŠπšŸπš˜πš›πš’πšπšŽ πšœπšπš˜πš›πš’ πš—πš˜πš  ❀️❀️❀️ πš”πšŽπšŽπš™ πš’πš πšžπš™!

    09/28/2020 05:44

  • Rosalina Diaz

    This Story is AMAZING I would LOVE to see this in an actual movie.I actually love this story and its storyline

    09/28/2020 05:16

  • Uniquesoul1600

    Love love love love love love looove it!! Aaah character details *chefs kiss* storyline just beautiful. At the beginning I was sure Rayne was going to reluctantly take Arianna's offer before getting driven away by the she-wolf but she stuck with her goal and I love thatπŸ’™πŸ’™

    09/28/2020 04:58

  • Jackie Garcia

    ok this story is amazing I can see this in a movie I love it

    09/28/2020 04:39

  • Natalie Sales

    This story is very exciting and we'll write.Got hooked on the free.I can't wait too see the nextπŸ˜‹

    09/28/2020 04:02

  • Hamidah 12345

    keep up the spirit πŸ’ͺ don't give up😘😘

    09/28/2020 03:58

  • PlatinumWriter

    I'm lost for words and I feel so confused. Sebastian is pretty much every single type of male characters that I hate... I want him and Re to be together but on the other hand, I just want him to f*ck off and then regret everything sooner or later.

    09/28/2020 03:52

  • Mafu_cchi

    i'm only reading the free chapters because i'm poor as heck ( οΌ›βˆ€οΌ›) but i can tell it's a really realllyyyy good story, the way the author write it amaze me i read some of the comments and i can very roughly know where the story's going the main character rayne is too pitiful, orphan, all alone, treated as slave..... i really hope i can read the other chaps i also hope the main character will get the freedom and happiness she deserves

    09/28/2020 03:32

  • sugarkiller

    ok....I just readed like four chapters and it's a good book. the thing that I don't like about this book is Gia, I hate her soo much and I don't like her at all but without her there's no book hahaha. I love ariana, she's such an angel. This is not the type of books that I read but is not a bad book. actually is really good but there's to much drama and my heart can't stand it hahaha

    09/28/2020 03:30

  • HANNAHABELLANNA

    I'm starting to read your story, thank you for everything I really think you know what I mean XD

    09/28/2020 03:13

  • Gloria Dietz

    Hi! I finished reading this book and I was really fascinated. I have no words to describe because the book is very very good, because of the way it is written and somehow makes you feel that you are inside the story, sharing each unique and special moment with the characters. When I started this story, I couldn't stop reading it and in less than a day I managed to finish it, and to be honest I would read it over and over again, because the truth is that this is one of the few books written on the internet that has the essence and in no time ends. I really recommend it once and for all. I catalog this book as "the best paranormal story you can read" Cheer up guys! That is very good and they will not regret it! Instead they will be fascinated by such a magnificent story that they will want to buy them one day if it is published in physical form, I would not hesitate for a second to buy it.

    09/28/2020 02:59

  • Raquel MacArthur Forrest

    I really enjoyed this story until you broke the bond and I found out that was permanent. I was extremely disappointed by this turn of events and I am really annoyed I paid to read this. You should also seriously consider changing the name of the story because the current title doesn’t at all reflect what actually happens. I hope your other stories go well and I wish you the best of luck for your future endeavors.

    09/28/2020 02:29

  • Aleece Hasty

    liked what I read but im not going to pay for each chapter.

    09/28/2020 02:07

  • Mira Pbm

    wow..what a great story..the way you describe the figures and what happening to their life makes me feel that i am in the story...looking forward for the next...

    09/28/2020 01:35

  • Dylan Huntt

    I was sent this book by a friend, I absolutely love it! I've read many different mate and werewolf stories and this is by far in my top ten!!

    09/28/2020 01:21

  • Jane Connors

    Well written but needs an educated individual to proofread. Too many mistakes throughout to reference!

    09/28/2020 01:17

  • Mystic Angel

    wonderful story, it could brought a lot of emotions and anticipate on what would happen next

    09/28/2020 01:01

  • Star Mua

    Given the fact that I only read the first three chapters of this book, this is my review. First, I think there should be a warning for readers because it can be traumatic for some readers to read about abuse. In addition, I did not expect to read explicit content, and it would have been nice to know that as well. Spoiler for those who haven’t read it - I really liked the characters. Especially seeing Rayne’s character develop. The author did a nice job on narrating her backstory of losing both of her parents at a young age and being hired by Alpha Wilson who has abused her for years. My favorite character is Arianna. Already readers can tell that she wants the best for her twin brother and she fights for those who can’t.

    09/28/2020 00:34

  • Happiness Udoetuk

    I love this book. well written β™₯️β™₯️

    09/28/2020 00:29

  • amy.

    I enjoyed your story very much! I was kind of disappointed when we learned that they wouldn't be together as mates, a little sad for a few chapters towards the end. But the last chapters really brought everything together and I'm happy with how your book turned out😊 excited & nervous for the stories to come from this one!! love how you set stuff up for future stories within this oneπŸ‘πŸ»

    09/28/2020 00:26

  • Natalia VM

    good story so far! im loving it! I can't wait to find out what happens next ;)

    09/28/2020 00:09

  • Coral Figueroa

    Is more good.

    09/27/2020 23:51

  • AnaSmile410

    This is good , the details are quite amazing some misspelling but the rest is amazing, the "omegaverse world" is one of the things I wanted to read in a story and this one is my favorites right now. So good job.

    09/27/2020 23:24

  • Mira Smaha Bousaleh

    love it

    09/27/2020 22:09

  • Juxliaxs

    Honestly, all the stories of the "omegaverse world" that I have read the protagonists are always homosexual couples, so I don't have much experience when it comes to reading heterosexual couples, I am not saying that the story is bad, on the contrary, it seemed like a good story. It has all the features that a book on "Omegaverse" should have. With regard to errors, I will not give it much thought since I understand you are a new writer. YES, you have grammatical errors but it is nothing that you cannot understand, there are very few that I did not understand and I had to read again, but if you are a new writer it is obvious that you will not have an editor so it is to understand. Also, even the best writers with professional editors have grammatical error as well. Regarding the author's notes, the warnings of sexual content and violence, it was the first thing I looked for when reading your book, in my experience the first thing you should do is warn about this type of content, there are people with a fragile mentality ( Not to say exaggerated) that when reading a scene where there is abuse of any kind, you are bombarded with negative comments, insults, etc. You are very explicit at the time of writing the parts of the abuse, I have nothing to say besides that I like it and it impresses me. Regarding the characters I don't have much to say because I still haven't read the whole story but for now I could say that "Alpha Wilson" ... if it sucks and everything else but I think there's more to his story, maybe I I'm wrong and heΒ΄s a real son of a bitch, but in my opinion no one is like that just because. For now is all I can say, your book is good, do not doubt that, but keep in mind that there will always be people who for the slightest mistake will call you a bad writer, do not spend yourself with shitty people like that, I will continue reading your book. And I am very sorry if I have grammar errors in this comment, my English at the time of writing is disgusting. I haven't used it for a long time. Thanks for taking the time to read all of this.

    09/27/2020 22:08

  • Elin Carlsson

    This story has a ton of misspellings and grammatical errors. Even the word 'Pack' was 'Back' somewhere in there. And it's "they need a home" not "they need home". (from the most resent chapter I read.) Maybe reread your story before posting? Or let someone else read it first? Just a helpful tip to improve story telling and make you look more professional.

    09/27/2020 21:22

  • Matilde Guarnieri

    wonderful kind of writing... so fluent, love this

    09/27/2020 20:41

  • Megan Alexander

    This book was really well written. I can picture all of the scenes and emotions that the characters have just by the way you describe them! The book is really addicting to read and I personally love fantasy so I’m happy that you recommend this book to me! Thank you so much and continue the amazing writing!

    09/27/2020 20:34

  • Thedreamywander 0502

    Writer Do you have a girlfriend ? Aaah pls be single !!

    09/27/2020 19:05

  • Thedreamywander 0502

    i have a crush on this writer tbh .🧦🧦

    09/27/2020 19:02

  • Ren GarcΓ­a

    I still love this πŸ’•

    09/27/2020 18:41

  • Missy

    Sorry *Hope you keep updating

    09/27/2020 18:34

  • Missy

    I am still in Chapter 4 but I wanna kick Sebastian's ass. I love the novel till so far you have written. It's well written and quite interesting to read. How you keep updating..........

    09/27/2020 18:34

  • Alexandra 22

    The fact that I saw "Greek and French" made me smile my countries πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    09/27/2020 18:13

  • ishmel

    I like this book, it is very well written to my liking and the plot is very interesting, I read the first chapters and it is irresistible to continue reading

    09/27/2020 17:40

  • xAnt0nia

    This book is great! Even though I haven't read everything yet, I really like the way you described the different scenes and each character. I'll definitely make sure to read the rest of this book when I'll find the time to do so. Keep up the great work and thank you for recommending it to me! (:

    09/27/2020 17:23
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