Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Janice Ezell

    the book is so good, but sad that I can not finish it, don't have the funds to buy more, on a fix income.

    09/14/2020 16:38

  • Mukatimui Kachofwa

    enjoying the book...Debbie deserved what he got...I wouldn't go back to him as well..

    09/14/2020 16:27

  • Alec

    very different from most Werewolf romance stories i've read. I like it.

    09/14/2020 16:11

  • Reader-074376

    I too received the same message from this user 👉🏼 GOLDIGATESY408. I do like what I read, so I’ll continue reading it. however, I won’t be responding to that user

    09/14/2020 15:24

  • Cultist Muerte

    Wonderful book, I'm looking forward to reading more.

    09/14/2020 15:22

  • LeiserWolf

    I got one from sierra_degro_1024

    09/14/2020 14:55

  • Morgan Bargh

    This story is great I love books like this and I was easily able to get into the book unlike some books I’ve read keep up the good work can’t wait to read more

    09/14/2020 14:30

  • Nuha Queen

    first of all. i also got the message too on wattpad. secondly, this story really interesting. and i can't stop reading

    09/14/2020 14:21

  • sara khan

    by the way, editor was 1985-Toshia-Raborn, on Wattpad..

    09/14/2020 13:50

  • sara khan

    I am here because your editor asked me for a review, but as I see all these comments, I guess you have so many editors.. what actually is going on here?

    09/14/2020 13:47

  • Michelle Scott

    Thank You! after some major losses, I haven’t been about to keep focused enough to read anything over the last few years. I started this book and it has held my attention, I’ve been able to focus. I love the story and can’t wait for more. Again, Thank You!!

    09/14/2020 13:03

  • Amazen Brooks

    Well I am just speechless🤯at how fast I got attached to the story but it rarely happens because I usually have to read a bit more to really get into but I guess this story is different from others. 🌹⚘🤯💞💕😃🤗❤💛💚💙😀🥰💗💟💗💟💗🌹🤯⚘💞💕😃🤗❤💛💚💙😀

    09/14/2020 12:55

  • Myrakal Hamilton

    hello I'm new to this and I just want to say your book is amazing!!!!♥️❤️

    09/14/2020 12:43

  • thatonehpnerd

    Hi erm this is my first time one here and a person from Wattpad recommended this book saying that they are the editors and that they are hoping to learn what are my views are and continued to post two chapters from the story. Is this you? i don’t wanna accuse u or anything but i just wanna make sure that they are not taking credit ... (great book tho :))

    09/14/2020 12:16

  • Samasaurus rex

    The character interactions kept me really intrigued. Overall great story

    09/14/2020 11:22

  • Thet

    Not bad, good to read ... I think it will be interesting..

    09/14/2020 08:27

  • anushka choudhary

    this book is awesome and not some typical romance I love ittt🙌🙌❤️❤️

    09/14/2020 08:19

  • Nicola Taylor Holbrook

    are Rayne and Sebastian not going to get back together? I don't want to finish if not.

    09/14/2020 08:02

  • Lunarwolf24 *

    I've only read 3 chapter but so far I'm hooked

    09/14/2020 06:33

  • Kat Nay

    timmysimson0509 on Wattpad sent me the link. Maybe its somebody doing it for the free coins?

    09/14/2020 06:00

  • Vicky James

    I love this story can stop reading fantastic writing can not went to see what happens

    09/14/2020 05:27

  • ☆Lily_The_Reader☆

    This beautiful! of all werewolf genre stories i've read, this one is the best! I love it!! Thank you for writing this Author-san!

    09/14/2020 05:17

  • ace joker

    it's really good so far I like it a lot.

    09/14/2020 04:19

  • Ikhlaas Noor

    is there anywhere I can read this book for free?

    09/14/2020 02:12

  • Shelley Hernandez

    already enjoying the book

    09/14/2020 02:08

  • molly benjamin

    omg water in my eyes as the writer made it feel so real ...good job

    09/14/2020 02:02

  • Kayla Mills

    great book cant stop reading

    09/14/2020 01:56

  • Lilium Album

    The story is lovely and while I do find it weird that I was asked to review from another website I'm afraid I can't read the rest of the story since I don't have coins and from the looks of it we can't earn coins other then buying it. It's great start. I'd probably buy the rest of the chapters if I had money I could spare.

    09/14/2020 01:54

  • Kayla Mills

    cant wait to c what happens next hope she finds a new home where will b treated better

    09/14/2020 01:52

  • Kayla Mills

    great book

    09/14/2020 01:42

  • Cara Matthews

    Someone shared the link to get more coins so they could read more of the story

    09/14/2020 01:38

  • Kayla Mills

    Poor rayne

    09/14/2020 01:36

  • Marian Jones

    First off, thank you for this opportunity to read a few chapters. I enjoyed reading it. I love the characters attitude a lot, they spice things up. From what I have read I can imagine Rayne as someone who is a fighter even though she was never given the chance from a young age to show who she really is. I was really excited to keep on reading and find out what was going to happen next. Really exciting.

    09/13/2020 23:57

  • Ash Merlin

    Wilson is a real asshole

    09/13/2020 23:53

  • Ash Merlin

    Sebastian sounds like Rayne. Maybe they’re mates

    09/13/2020 23:52

  • Ash Merlin

    This is getting interesting

    09/13/2020 23:51

  • 1800 weeb dot com

    pretty good! 👍

    09/13/2020 23:27

  • Kayla Mills

    good book

    09/13/2020 20:44

  • Shari Lee

    First of all the "teaser" says free;start reading , get part way through and you're SUPPOSED TO BUY coins to continue to continue. That does not equate to FREE to me. Another bait and switch offer. Uninstalling.

    09/13/2020 20:14

  • littlewolf420

    I love the chapters you have sent to me and I can’t wait to read the rest of the story u did an amazing job on this book if I may ask if your would read some of the stories I’ve written on Wattpad

    09/13/2020 20:12

  • Viriviana Garza

    When is the next chapter up

    09/13/2020 19:55

  • Joselyn Olivar

    oh I’m so glad I came here from Wattpad thank you so much for bringing this new content to my attention, I’m not really familiarized with this type of stroy buts it’s definitely interesting I enjoyed it!!

    09/13/2020 19:55

  • black bunny

    love it ❤❤

    09/13/2020 19:25

  • black bunny

    keep going .. the idea of the story is amazing .. 👏👏 love it

    09/13/2020 19:11

  • JoJoDoll13

    I find the flashback chapters unnecessary, feels like mostly fillers. other than that the book is great.

    09/13/2020 19:02

  • ppoggirl

    I’m so not happy with how this story turned out.. if Sebastian is no longer Rayne’s mate.. then there is no need to mention him any further.. the story is really about Rayne’s journey ☹️

    09/13/2020 18:14

  • M K

    Its great so far and I want to read the rest but, I think its ridiculous you have to use coins for each chapter. If I were you, then I would post this story on wattpad. You get way more readers and more support from the Wattpad team when it came to someone trying to claim your story was theirs.

    09/13/2020 16:55

  • VkyRuby

    This is so entising I love it

    09/13/2020 16:43

  • Maryrose Trinidad

    Im so excited to read this, cuz the editor send me some chaps and i absolutely love ittttt!!!!

    09/13/2020 16:24

  • Storm Skyler

    Someone say they are editors on Wattpad and ask for my review so here, It was very interesting and i love it. Tbh i never knew this app exists ^^'' Im glad that they show me ur book since i really love werewolf \(^ヮ^)/ (Im sorry for my bad English. Im still trying to correct my grammar ^^'' hope u understand what im saying)

    09/13/2020 15:56

  • Mina_015

    Me gusta es interesante, la trama

    09/13/2020 15:17

  • Karime Preciado

    Sorry, this is just my opinion but I think the dialogue is a bit too formal. I've only read the first two chapters, though. I do find this book intriguing, and I want to know what happens next. I like the idea of Rayne possibly being Sebastions mate, and maybe if there is a plot twist. I'm not sure yet. Some of the ideas are a little overused, and expected. I hope to see more things that make this book different than all the other werewolf books. Keep up the good work!

    09/13/2020 15:09

  • Nikolai Fullbuster

    I think your advertising department should come up with a new way to advertise. Most the comments here are people talking about how they feel tricked in a way. Honestly the way the department does advertise is really shady. No where in the messages I got mentioned that this book required coins and they don't do a good job of getting across to people that its on a whole different app. Like I was asked to give my feedback and reached out to for that. But I have to pay to help you. I don't even know if I'm even actually helping you. Its like if someone says hey can you help me with my homework but you have to pay me a dollar for every answer you give me. That doesn't even make sense so yeah people here are gonna be mad and the fact you think that is fine is concerning. Bro you're about to become like J.K. Rowlen and make a lot of people mad. Big oof my dude.

    09/13/2020 14:54

  • Gisselle Vargas

    I came from wattpad, and I don't really know if the one who sent me the first chapter is really the editor of this story, but I read it anyway, it's a great story with great plot!

    09/13/2020 14:53

  • Yuki Kanjirose

    This book is very interesting and I like it and I can't wait to read more of the chapters.

    09/13/2020 13:14

  • Jessica Thompson

    I liked the start of the story, but I won't be able to finish it. (I am not paying nearly $40 for a book that I am unable to keep and page through.)

    09/13/2020 13:11

  • ALİME ÇELİK

    i am starting now iam so excited

    09/13/2020 12:34

  • Reader-660039

    good writing overall, but you have comma splices everywhere, and your tenses keep shifting from present to past. I like the storyline, and the characters have okay development, but the grammar issues and occasional punctuation mistakes are distracting. Using third person omniscient can also be disorienting for readers, so it is good when you announce the shift in characters. My one thought is that if your editors aren’t calling you on the formatting and grammar mistakes, they are not doing their jobs properly.

    09/13/2020 12:27

  • Kim Cerceo

    the book unwanted mate is good and would like to finish reading but ì will be deleting this app due to having to purchase coins to finish the book

    09/13/2020 11:10

  • Rhian Dela Cruz

    nice work and good job. hope you continue to be a successful writer 🙂

    09/13/2020 11:00

  • Sarah Amin Soha

    @North Rose , hey I wanted to ask, are you KrystaNewgardSep30 in Wattpad? this person claimed that they are an editor.

    09/13/2020 09:33

  • theunnikornn

    Hi, I recieved a fake message claiming this book was from someone on Wattpad. They asked me for my opinion and I pressed the link they sent me. I am a very picky reader/writer and I have some things to say. If you’d like some advice, feel free to message me.

    09/13/2020 09:08

  • KC Chizek

    I love this book. It is really well written. There are a few grammar mistakes but only the common ones. I thought this book is going really well and would love to see it continued.

    09/13/2020 08:29

  • bethan baillie

    I have someone saying they are the editor threw wattpad so I came to check it out. I love this book and I think that the further you get the better it becomes.

    09/13/2020 07:51

  • Inuy. Cosplay

    Excuse me, I had a person named 'paulinelady' from Wattpad message me claiming to be an editor for you. They said that you and them were working together, I'm not sure how true or incorrect that is but I thought I should let you know.

    09/13/2020 07:47

  • Leota May Martin

    I would love to purchase a hard copy of this story, im loving it so far. is there somewhere I can buy it?

    09/13/2020 07:41

  • Britania Brown

    im honestly loving the story and ik that her an Sebastian didn't have the most ideal start but i really hope they end up together at the end im a hopeless romantic n love happy endings n gia got wat she deserved she's mad selfish n it pissed me off.

    09/13/2020 06:25

  • Kim Almendarez

    So done reading this story. I was completely hooked in the beginning and could not wait for more. However, the way the book has dragged and dragged makes me think it’s more about getting people to pay more tokens. The book is titled her returned mate. Which the first half of the book entailed. Now it’s just all over the place. Definitely wish I would have seen this coming so I would not have spent so much.

    09/13/2020 06:13

  • Alicia Marie

    I agree with this being expensive. this app does not even give the option to by all the chapters at once. ☹️

    09/13/2020 04:11

  • thalia9885

    Ok! So, I caved and purchased more coins to read all the chapters that have been released. The story is an intriguing one that catches your attention, but I am growing confused as the story develops. There are some things in the storyline that don’t make sense. It’s almost like a walk in a beautiful garden, but being focused on all the weeds. The premise of the story is good, there are parts that could be developed more, while there are other parts that simply could be left out, because they create unnecessary chaos and confusion. Like how are the same people who captured Cya now fascinated with Sebastian and Arianna? Like what decade is the story taking place where sideshows are a thing to make money? Like of all the things the twins have to worry about, now they have to worry about being a circus attraction? Like there are enough elements already introduced to create conflicts than to throw trafficking in the mix. I feel like there are multiple books here to the main story and a collection of other books, because of all of the other elements and characters being tossed in the mix. I digress. I’m going to do my best to hang in there with you North Rose as you finish Sebastian and Rayne’s story, even though it is all over the place. Like when did Rayna and Parker become these world-reknowned supernatural wranglers? Just too much is going on and nothing at all...all at the same time...

    09/13/2020 03:45

  • L. .G

    not going to lie, this book is pretty good so far since this isn't the type of books that I read. I like how the shade is thrown around with the other characters and how Rayne is with her rebellion on finding a place where she belongs.

    09/13/2020 02:31

  • Kemberly Cardiente Villasor

    Its a very interesting story. I love it.

    09/13/2020 02:27

  • Taylor

    You brought me here to review your book, but how can I when I'll go broke on the 5th chapter?

    09/13/2020 02:27

  • Roxana Hernandez Garcia

    I want Rayne with her true Mate... not parker. I can't take it I just want them together

    09/13/2020 01:30

  • maca gutsi

    hey! i came from wattpad, someone said that he ir her was an editor of this story an send me the first chapters of this story tellimg me to do a Review. i don't know if the person is really an editor so i Will not give a Review top him/her on wattpad

    09/13/2020 00:32

  • Reader-001708

    I’m a bit questioning rashionality of this story. Ok it’s fantasy I get that. Now the goddess pairs two people... they don’t want each other ... so they lead separate lives after like 10 minutes encounter they had and never even got a chance to get know each other... Sebastian story is so depressing like his childhood friend turned lover is just completely fake person who tried to kill him. His son was introduced like not being his son but at the end yeah surprise, surprise the son is his own. Sebastian kinda rejected his mate but in the same time he did not rejected her so she could rejected him instead... and there is this Parker who has thinking about his true mate from very beginning of the book but he has not met her yet soo he kind of replace her with temporary mate 😂😂 Oh and let’s don’t forget about our heroine. She kinda manage to overcome all childhood drama, that’s cool. She kinda grown cold towards her fated mate, all understandable and then whe she thinks he is dead and she is like: oh I feel sudden emptiness and in the split of the second she is like hey I got new mate 🤣👍 that’s what I call let’s move on ...

    09/13/2020 00:22

  • Rose SB

    well, since I was looking for a romance, all’s well ends well story and my coins are use up, I’m done.

    09/12/2020 23:38

  • Jessica Shannon

    I literally feel like Parker was robbed of meeting his first mate just because he was in love with Rayne. She had her opportunity to have a first mate and he didn’t smh poor thing

    09/12/2020 23:08

  • thalia9885

    Well, I just finished the last chapter I am willing to pay for at the moment. the story is very interesting and I am definitely interested in what’s going to happen next. However, after exhausting nearly 600 coins, which would be equivalent to purchasing an entire book on Amazon for my Kindle, I hope I am still interested when and if I decide to continue on with this story. This is not the best way to offer your story to readers, because it can be rather costly and honestly not the best time during a pandemic.

    09/12/2020 22:57

  • Ana Anushki Shonia

    wow I love it great job 🖤🖤🥺

    09/12/2020 22:40

  • big oof

    Really? Creating spam bots for wattpad to advertise your story is kinda scummy

    09/12/2020 22:05

  • Gabrielle Saavedra

    I came because an editor on Wattpad Elenore_Andary_Jul10 asked me to read some sample chapters...I’m skeptical on if the editor part is true now but this is a really really good read!!! I can tell everything was very thought out perfectly. it’s rare that I find stuff like this and I’m enjoying every second of it! KEKEKE

    09/12/2020 21:34

  • BizEB

    I was really digging this book at first, starting to lose me a bit. The book title is a little misleading for the direction the story is going. I think everyone was trying to not get attached to Parker because we are all assuming she will end up with her mate. Bodega Bay is a strange location for this story if you’ve actually been there.

    09/12/2020 21:29

  • Gladys Phiri

    This is a really nice book I'm enjoying it....

    09/12/2020 21:06

  • Autumn Vaughn

    I love this book so much !!!

    09/12/2020 20:48

  • Bossy Rodriguez

    so by skimming through your comments, I see you have a really adequate scheme for sending people DMs and imploring them to read over a few chapters in hopes that they'll follow here to finish reading. not a terrible notion but a little conniving.

    09/12/2020 20:36

  • Lorena Costa

    North Rose people are trying to say that you were booked is theirs and I also got a message from someone on Wattpad saying it's their book by the way this is a very great book

    09/12/2020 20:06

  • joesmama

    only straggots would like this book

    09/12/2020 18:01

  • joesmama

    STRAIGHT MEN ARE SCARY

    09/12/2020 17:48

  • joesmama

    Lol the writer keeps deleting my comments cause they’re too scared to admit that it’s a straggot book for straggots

    09/12/2020 17:48

  • joesmama

    This is why straight men scare me 😌

    09/12/2020 17:43

  • joesmama

    Rayne isn’t like other girlsssss she’s a straggot 🤭

    09/12/2020 17:40

  • joesmama

    this book is very straight

    09/12/2020 17:40

  • crystal_miller75@yahoo.com

    I purchased the chapter titled Awakening, but there is no content.

    09/12/2020 16:33

  • lunar kiss

    so far so good! I’m just sad that read this is too expensive. dunno if keep reading and expend real money or just quit... but don’t want to cuz is too goooooood

    09/12/2020 16:23

  • Aaysha K

    Hey... Sherill dilmore.... Excited for Ur new story.... Loving This... Superb work

    09/12/2020 15:40

  • Morkedfish :3

    Unfortunately, I can't buy the book. I also received the message from Wattpad, but I downloaded the app to review the book, so I'll do so. The wording and description of the story is absolutely amazing and I love the plot up until now. I wouldn't really read many fantasy books(as in werewolves, vampires..), but I do really love this book. I'm actually happy it costs money, even if I can't afford it, because it deserves the cost. Either way, fantastic work and thank you to the person who sent me the link. Maybe one day I can read more but for now I'm happy simply knowing the book exists. Love the book and hope the best for you!

    09/12/2020 15:37

  • Ashley Marie Ritniez

    Hello! this book is amazing. I was really not quite fond od this kind of genre, but I find my self enjoying this book.

    09/12/2020 15:36

  • cosplaybo. friend

    North Rose the person who texted me on wattpad didn’t claim that it was their story but that they were your editor to me, if you are saying you don’t have an editor then I think someone is either trying to help you l, or gain popularity from your work.... I don’t know what is going on but I am trying to figure it out as well

    09/12/2020 15:28

  • cosplaybo. friend

    okay I just had someone by the name of 451_Marybeth_Ouren send me the first chapter saying that they were the editor on wattpad, I’m so confused?

    09/12/2020 15:24
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