Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Rena Lee

    The more I read the more I want, thanks for the storry 😉

    11/01/2020 04:24

  • Мария Перезолова

    Hiii, thank you so much🥺 I love your story🥰

    11/01/2020 04:04

  • Reader-633156

    hii thanks to invinting to read this interesting story I love it!

    11/01/2020 03:37

  • Melinda Abaño

    Hi I'm from wattpad and like I said I'm really hooked up with the flow of the story. Good job!😊

    11/01/2020 03:24

  • Stefi Kimbal

    Hi I'm from Wattpad, thank you for inviting me to this app, I really respect and like your story.

    11/01/2020 03:16

  • Nuttapak Apinanthanakorn

    hello I'm from wattpad. I'm really respect your writer and thanks again for your invited me to this app. 🍑☁

    11/01/2020 02:42

  • Angie Barrientos

    Hi I am from Wattpad. I don’t get this app. I have to pay to read your story? the free chapters were great! so please let me know if I’m doing something wrong on this app, I have never used it before

    11/01/2020 01:53

  • 나탈리아

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    11/01/2020 01:24

  • Alicia Rodriguez

    I’m deleting this book. the title is deceiving and I am not enjoying the story at all

    11/01/2020 01:13

  • Jemejeme

    I'm just new here

    11/01/2020 01:06

  • Abigail End

    hi I'm also from Wattpad, and must I say this first: Wilson and Gia😡😡😡😡😡😡💀💀💀💀💀💀🧟‍♀️🧟‍♀️🧟‍♀️🧟‍♀️🧟‍♀️🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🗡🗡🗡🗡⚔⚔🔫🔫🔫🔫🔫⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰⚰ second : I'm so glad that Bridgette changed so much and has a lovely husband who is so tall🤗🤗💖💖💖 third: ah my heart is aching because I want Rayne and Parker to stay together. It was so peaceful🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️🤦🏾‍♀️🤧🤧 fourth: I like Area better than Sebastian because Sebbie is a f* asshole, one big d*ckhead who is like a selfish, spoiled f*ckboy😤😤😡😡🤺🤺🤺 he had the audacity to hurt Rayne like that. Boy I would have so beat the heel out of your Gia not caring about your opinion. An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth sir😤😤😤 like I said on Wattpad, English is good, story is easy to follow,, very interesting for one to picture it and it's very detailed. keep up the good work. the rest might be interesting but since I can't pay or buy coins I could only read like 5 chapters, but it was worth reading.

    11/01/2020 00:09

  • ina laporte

    Hello, I'm from wattpad, this story was recommended to me and I don't regret reading it. It is a great story

    10/31/2020 23:55

  • lvesrtys

    hi, it’s lvestrys from wattpad. I’ve read the first few chapters but couldn’t continue because of the coins. whatever, I think that this is a great book! I wish I could find such a book on wattpad since you don’t need coins there (for most of the books)

    10/31/2020 23:39

  • Na Dia

    Hey! I'm *theyarejustillusions* from wattpad. This book is absolutely amazing!!! You're a good writer. Thank you for send me this story! Keep it up. ☺️

    10/31/2020 23:10

  • clyrizeee

    This story was also recommended to me and thank you for the effort for making this story. Keep it up author :)

    10/31/2020 21:27

  • 예쁘다유라

    You're writing really captures the essence of storytelling. I love how it's got me hooked!! ❤️❤️

    10/31/2020 20:42

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    10/31/2020 20:15

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    10/31/2020 19:38

  • Maud Vercoustre

    Hiii ! So, I'm from Wattpad too. Thank you for send me this story ! I love it 😍!! Like Woodward keep it up

    10/31/2020 19:21

  • Yesha Micu

    Hi i'm from wattpad!!! thank you for recommending this story i love itt and i'm excited to read more about it tysm💖

    10/31/2020 17:57

  • Sara Ivančić

    Hey!! Thank you for sending me the code! I'm so grateful, i love this story🤩 I'm from wattpad too, keep it up❤️🥺

    10/31/2020 17:38

  • Rizaline Grace Torio

    Hi!! I'm from Wattpad too!!! thankyou for recommending this story ahhh ilove it!! thankyou very much keep it up🥰

    10/31/2020 17:22

  • anka 85

    love it! i'm so glad you send me the first chapter on Wattpad

    10/31/2020 17:17

  • Prattsmine Garraud

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    10/31/2020 16:48

  • lalou22453

    ❤❤

    10/31/2020 16:45

  • Ashley S.

    i have only made it halfway through the first chapter and I've already made up my mind. This books is absolutely amazing!! Those that found it, READ IT!

    10/31/2020 16:38

  • lalou22453

    Love it

    10/31/2020 16:23

  • Lua

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    10/31/2020 16:15

  • Tebah Shahbaz

    only read a couple chapter and I'm completely hooked cant wait to see what happens next -- editors doing a great job too ❤

    10/31/2020 15:36

  • Lily Chan

    omg I'm totally in love with this book ❤ I'm here from wattpad either

    10/31/2020 14:51

  • Peace Giann

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    10/31/2020 14:42

  • bellatrix

    Hey, I'm from Wattpad too! And I like your story. It's easy to read. You're a good writer 💜💜

    10/31/2020 14:36

  • Meon Green

    I felt like crying in here. Why does the FL seems so weak and hopeless.

    10/31/2020 13:44

  • Y Lee

    This is so good, a excellent story, you're so good writer. your work I love it, I here from wattpad too, thanks for show me you work, keep going

    10/31/2020 13:34

  • María esther Vargas Pereira

    It is a topic that has already been widely used but this book is incredible, I love it, I highly recommend it. It's wonderful.

    10/31/2020 13:20

  • Eliot Rivera

    OMG love this 😘

    10/31/2020 13:11

  • Phạm Ngân

    I love this story♡

    10/31/2020 13:10

  • Noe Chan

    this history is very interesting

    10/31/2020 12:54

  • Bi Vero

    This is a wonderful piece. This is my first time reading such a work in English. I'm Russian, but I like it ♡

    10/31/2020 12:46

  • Julia Silva

    🤩🤩

    10/31/2020 12:26

  • Hannah Mensah

    Sebastian is a jerk

    10/31/2020 12:20

  • ShellyTheWriter

    wow, i really like this, even if english it's not as easy to read for me as spanish, i will read this because it's really thrilling, I LOVE IT, KEEP ON GOING ❤ pd: from wattpad :3

    10/31/2020 12:18

  • Aliza_38

    Hello I also come from Wattpad and I love the story

    10/31/2020 10:49

  • Rosyl Kate Mirasol

    😍

    10/31/2020 10:49

  • بنت الأكابر.

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    10/31/2020 10:40

  • بنت الأكابر.

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    10/31/2020 10:39

  • Abigaielle Dorothe

    hi i'm from wattpad nice story keep going i enjoy it😘😘

    10/31/2020 10:34

  • Genny Mae Abella

    ❣

    10/31/2020 10:21

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    10/31/2020 09:48

  • Tatiana Sven Vitale

    from wattpad. good to read your story here💕

    10/31/2020 09:23

  • Egged Tomato

    Dios mio almost everyone is from Wattpad 🤣 ngl it was suprising. The writer definitely has excellent advertising team. Anyways, it's too bad that interested readers have to pay for further chapters. However, they do need to understand it's to support the writer. Can't keep writing if you're hungry, right? Without further ado, here's the stuff I came here to say. The story is already #1 in trending. It means that the book is promising enough and I agree although I've only read the sample chapters (I look forward to when I can finally buy it on paperback instead of here). The delivery of the introduction was smooth. It doesn't fall in the typical tiring category of info-dumping intros. Readers are left craving for more and THAT is truly a sign of good writing. However, there are a few things I'd like to point out. 1. It needs a little more polishing. Simplification of the complex sentences. E.g. "He knew that there was no way that he would give Gia up the same way that he knew that his mate would probably not accept his mistress." The redundancy of the word "that" made it more confusing at first read. 2. Typos and correct punctuations. Only needs a proofreader so no problem at all. 3. General tropes. Though they can be useful as basis for a writer's storyline, some readers still might find them a wee bit tiring. The less cliches used, the more unique your story can be. E.g. biological parents dead, mean sister, abusive parent etc. 4. Physical abuse. Better put on a trigger warning at every chapter that has violent scenes, I guess. I might actually be wrong idk. Maybe this is actually normal in werewolf fiction. Who am I to question, if it is then? 🤣 In conclusion, the storyline is intriguing, the characters are clearly distinct, and the heroine is heavily flawed that I am left wondering how well she'd develop as the story progresses and trust me, characters without flaws, characters with thick plot armor are a BIG turn off in contemporary fiction. All hail for Miss North Rose in writing the most promising werewolf fantasy today!

    10/31/2020 09:01

  • Ali Ross

    I'm here from wattpad it was amazing keep up the amazing work!!

    10/31/2020 08:47

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    10/31/2020 08:43

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    10/31/2020 08:04

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    10/31/2020 07:56

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    😢😭

    10/31/2020 07:31

  • Maisarah Faiz

    i just can read 4 chapter

    10/31/2020 07:31

  • Maisarah Faiz

    cool story😉

    10/31/2020 07:28

  • Princessa x33

    I thought maybe it's her Father? It could be that this Man is Immortal and lost his memory when he died. Maybe someone tried to kill him and that happend afterwards. That's my Theory 😊

    10/31/2020 07:15

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    10/31/2020 07:03

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    10/31/2020 06:51

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    10/31/2020 06:49

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    10/31/2020 06:49

  • Annie Walker

    Why are there so many people from wattpad? I'm also from wattpad and though it has a few typos it's good!

    10/31/2020 05:05

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    10/31/2020 05:03

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    so expensive:( I’m broke right now:(

    10/31/2020 04:38

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    10/31/2020 04:26

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    10/31/2020 03:41

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    10/31/2020 02:59

  • Mary Vianney

    someone invited me here from wattpad. the story is good. kudos to the author

    10/31/2020 02:38

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    10/31/2020 02:09

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    10/31/2020 02:09

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    I'm here from wattpad and I loved the chapters so much

    10/31/2020 01:53

  • Alexis Arzaga

    I am from wattpad and the summary sent me by shaunta_losco. Btw. i am Black_Aise

    10/31/2020 01:44

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    10/31/2020 01:35

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    10/31/2020 00:32

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    10/30/2020 23:25

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    10/30/2020 23:16

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    10/30/2020 22:59

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    10/30/2020 22:56

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    Your work is amazing!❤️

    10/30/2020 22:49

  • Kookie_MyFeels

    it really threw me for a loop, I’m really not big on werewolves but this actually makes me intrigued for what’s to come next!

    10/30/2020 22:43

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    Is wonderful, I don't really speak english but this capter really like me

    10/30/2020 22:35

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    I've never seen so much inspiration and that the story captivates you more and more until you can't stop reading to know what else follows in the story.

    10/30/2020 22:30

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    10/30/2020 22:03

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    10/30/2020 21:56

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    10/30/2020 21:48

  • JustOne

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    10/30/2020 21:46

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    10/30/2020 21:44

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    10/30/2020 21:39

  • Abigail Rodríguez

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    10/30/2020 21:26

  • Malena Colman Martinez

    I was invited from wattpad. I love the story and how the things happened the story has a lot of potential. I really felt like I'm inside of the story, it's so interesting. I really really love it!!!

    10/30/2020 20:35

  • Caitlin Pringle

    I was invited from wattpd. I really enjoyed this story, and there’s a lot of potential. The way you have described things really does set the scene and it’s an interesting story. I love it

    10/30/2020 20:14

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    10/30/2020 19:52

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    10/30/2020 19:33

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    10/30/2020 18:56

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    I love the story. the plot is very interesting and makes me very curious about the sequel. anyone should read this story because this story is very cool and tense.

    10/30/2020 17:47

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    10/30/2020 17:47

  • ghost boi

    I was invited from Wattpad and I just wanna say that this is such good story and I love it!! just like I said before the use of descriptive and imagery language just makes the reading experience so much exciting, can’t wait to read more about Raynes story!<3

    10/30/2020 17:25

  • american-storyteller

    Oh, my. The chapter is so sad. I started with crying.🙊 I am feeling really sorry for her. Thank u for the chapter.♥️ I have only one question:: How she should give Arianna a call? I don't get it.😅

    10/30/2020 17:25
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