Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Julia M

    So I’m here from Wattpad and I read part of the first chapter from the editor of this story and I was hooked from the first sentence it seems like an amazing book and I can’t wait to read more Keep Updating please

    01/08/2021 22:16

  • Candice Ncongwane

    hey I'm from wattpad (a reader of course) and this is an amazing story ❤

    01/08/2021 21:48

  • Ruby Hernandez

    hello I'm from wattaped and I'm happy to say its really good the story is really nice and I'm glade a lot of other people read this I hope u keep making more chapters soon

    01/08/2021 20:31

  • Gracinda Bongo

    hi dear for the 2 chapters that I read I can see that will be a great book.

    01/08/2021 19:59

  • Chloe Dunne

    hi in from wattpad its amazing story and I cant stop reading it ❤

    01/08/2021 19:39

  • klara juric

    heyy im from wattpad you asked me to give u a review and im here im happy for you that your story blew up and i hope for all the readers that they enjoy it

    01/08/2021 19:32

  • llSeaweedBrainll

    Hey, I came from Wattpad to read your story and I love it so far. I've only read to two first chapters but I really like all the details and descriptions. You can really tell what the characters are feeling and thinking. Keep up the good work!

    01/08/2021 19:08

  • North Rose 🌹

    This story is marked complete on the discover page, but it is a glitch. I will be adding more when my laptop is fixed.

    01/08/2021 18:52

  • ash etwas

    i came from wattpad and I like the story:3 the written style( sorry, my English is not so good) is really good, I enjoyed it

    01/08/2021 18:18

  • Poe Writes

    You asked me on WP to read your story and, so far, I like it!

    01/08/2021 18:16

  • Valerie-Merle Theron

    Also asked on wp and immediately liked Rayne.... Excited to continue the story... ❤️🌹

    01/08/2021 16:44

  • Keen Heiza Set

    came from wattpad too, this story seems exciting! very well written ❣️

    01/08/2021 16:18

  • Hatice Albay

    Bir Türk okuyucu olarak seni tebrik ediyorum 😙

    01/08/2021 16:08

  • Noor Sipa Maulida

    I was asked, like many here, on wp if I want to read and judge, I have read something and I think the story is very well written, even if I am not really good at speaking English and admittedly I do not understand every word, It's a very interesting story, you're very animated when you write, I feel like I'm getting into the storyline.

    01/08/2021 15:30

  • Namsoom Kharraz

    woooow🤩

    01/08/2021 14:26

  • Namsoom Kharraz

    Oh, it's more than cool

    01/08/2021 14:22

  • Namsoom Kharraz

    Oh, it's more than cool

    01/08/2021 14:22

  • ralph carter

    i am still reading story yes I do like the plot. i am hook can not put story down i will recommend a book. god bless ralph carter

    01/08/2021 14:05

  • Dora Pig

    Normally I don't care for this particular genre but I am hooked on the plot and I'm only on the first chapter!

    01/08/2021 13:13

  • Dora Pig

    I

    01/08/2021 13:03

  • Stephanie Hagymassy

    Such a great book, I just wanted to keep reading!

    01/08/2021 12:22

  • aimen naeem

    Came here from wattpad and let me say I am hooked and I am only one chapter in LOVE IT

    01/08/2021 10:28

  • MrsC

    Is there a carry on for Parkers story about his family returning or is that in the 2nd book, redemption?

    01/08/2021 10:14

  • cocobabay

    different from what I expected it to be based on the sample chapters, in a good way. I truly like this story. I am very interested in the story and can’t wait to read more :)

    01/08/2021 08:48

  • Kimmie Kins

    coming over from Wattpad:) I love this story! I’m only on chapter one and I’m hooked 🖤

    01/08/2021 08:23

  • Wafaa Termizi

    its really a good story

    01/08/2021 07:18

  • Jung Jung

    wow

    01/08/2021 05:45

  • Swathi Mahatma

    Hey guys, I am here from wattpad as well, and I must say ,the first chapter got me hooked to the plot, though it sounds like the usual plot, as I am going deep into the story, my opinions are changing.I like the way the female lead is being potryed .The transition of the female lead is amazing. Keep up the amazing effort in building up ther story :) Ps:, first time giving a opinion

    01/08/2021 04:53

  • -_-wolfie-_-

    just came from Wattpad and am so excited to continue reading!

    01/08/2021 04:41

  • Pia

    coming from wattpad..i love this..i dont regret download it..thank you for recommend this..and this type of story is my fav😍..

    01/08/2021 04:30

  • Yareli Jeronimo

    such a wonderful book. Im happy that i spend my time reading this book!!! its such a really good book and would recommend anyone to take the time and read the story as well. such good content!!!

    01/08/2021 04:21

  • Yareli Jeronimo

    I just came from wattpad from someone who recommended this book to me and let me just tell you its such a good book so far one of the most mind blowing stories i have ever read!!!! love all of it so far!!

    01/08/2021 04:17

  • Yareli Jeronimo

    Hiiii!!!! this is such an amazing book so far !!!

    01/08/2021 04:15

  • Yareli Jeronimo

    wow!!! Just wow this is a good book so far!!! love it!!

    01/08/2021 04:14

  • Ozleyjone Caño

    came from wattpad and im thankful to someone who recommended this book to me. this is a mind blowing story.

    01/08/2021 03:35

  • Joseph Krivanek

    It is pretty good but this is not my type of book per say.

    01/08/2021 02:38

  • CyanSpider_ Killer

    pretty good. note. I am not a fan of this type of book so hold this compliment as a sense of accomplishment. cuz I font like this kind of book, I'm not a fan of alpha's or werewolf romance or soulmates. but in my opinion this is a pretty decent book

    01/08/2021 01:30

  • Kiri Fox

    I’m from Wattpad and I absolutely love this story so much, I’d absolutely recommend it to anyone reading. Keep up the amazing writing!

    01/08/2021 00:20

  • Reader-438877

    it’s really nice thx for telling me about it

    01/08/2021 00:07

  • Steven Cutler

    love is

    01/07/2021 23:09

  • malill

    Came from Wattpad. Need to say I really love this book and would recommend it to everyone to try this out! Amazing work :)

    01/07/2021 21:57

  • xXMoonlightLunaXx

    I’m came from wattpad, this book is really amazing omg! great job:DDD

    01/07/2021 20:54

  • Paige Coy

    Mind blowing story great work.

    01/07/2021 20:00

  • Бездушная Эллис

    Wow !!!!! The book is interesting, promising) Thank you!

    01/07/2021 19:14

  • Darian Ong

    hiiii i'm so proud of youu!!! I've read so far it's really good congratsss!!!

    01/07/2021 17:31

  • vanessa

    I’m also from wattpad and this is very good so far, it’s well written and so far has a nice plot

    01/07/2021 17:30

  • Mohammed Fadila

    I am from Wattpad and I really like what I am seeing, can't wait to see more.

    01/07/2021 17:29

  • Linda Vu

    I'm from wattpad as well and from what I've read so far it's really well written. It's pretty obvious what will happen with Rayne but the way the story is written, it makes me want to continue reading and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the good work author! 😊

    01/07/2021 17:14

  • Linda Vu

    I'm from wattpad as well and from what I've read so far it's really well written but like the previous comment stated, it's pretty obvious what will happen. Now I haven't read the whole thing yet but I'm interested to see what's going to happen next. Keep up the good work author!!

    01/07/2021 17:06

  • Blabla 111123

    As I can see a lot of people are here from wattpad and Im no different.... I just wanted to say that this is well written even though its really obvious(I think) what will happen, I know I havent read the whole thing but I hope that there will be an original consequence. Then I think the story will be perfect :3

    01/07/2021 16:53

  • Sarah Herrmann

    it is a piece of Art

    01/07/2021 16:51

  • Holiday girl Sally

    I am from wattpad I think it is well written you are really talented good luck with writing:D

    01/07/2021 16:32

  • Dress Lady 411

    does Parker have red hair or curly black hair.?

    01/07/2021 15:03

  • Aila Eevee

    I love it

    01/07/2021 14:24

  • xJumper

    Hiii. I was asked, like many here, on Wattpad if I wanted to read and rate the story here. I've read something and I think the story is really well written. Even if I'm not really good at English and admittedly I didn't understand every word, I understood what the story is about so roughly. In addition, the chapters were read nicely. Even though I've read many such stories on Wattpad, it doesn't apply to me. (But that's not directly because of the story, but because of me! I'm very picky there) I still wish you a lot of fun and good luck writing : ) Thank you for allowing me to read the few chapters : )

    01/07/2021 14:17

  • Patty Slawatecka

    Great book, felt as if it was a movie. Loved the description but sadly only got to read 3 chapters.

    01/07/2021 14:00

  • Qnh Na

    this story so amazing.

    01/07/2021 13:55

  • Mortality Sold

    Not exactly my kind of genre to read for books, but it seems good from what I read. I'm not really a fan for purchasing chapters to read so I haven't gotten really far. It does seem a little cliche from what I've read, but it is overall kind of good. Character development would be something I would like to focus on if I read further. I've saved this book for a later time to read. There are a few grammarical errors, but can easily be ignored otherwise when sucked into the book. Thank you editor for taking your time on offering a new story to read. and to you as well author, I wish you luck in your writings. P.S. I usually read stories more so for the thrill of world creation and characters that aren't focused on romance in mostly fantasy genres where it's more adventure and war. But still enjoyed the first few chapters of this story.

    01/07/2021 09:19

  • Sunny Two

    love this story

    01/07/2021 05:09

  • Reader-491771

    why does it say story is ended and complete?

    01/07/2021 03:59

  • Haneanwuzhere

    I really want to finish this book but I can’t bc of the coins

    01/07/2021 03:58

  • Hannah Bain

    So sad that I can’t finish the rest but loved what I read so far. Great start, really gets the reader hooked, very detailed and well written. The only thing I’d say is this plot is similar to other story’s that I’ve read before but of course I don’t know how it ends. 8.5/10 :)

    01/07/2021 03:25

  • Queen

    this is a amazing story I'm from wattpad the story makes me curious on what's going to happen next

    01/07/2021 03:07

  • Nur Bazilah Abu Bakar

    heyyyy. this such a great storyy. im glad i found this on. i'd give it a 8/10. another 2 bcs i havent done read it yet : )

    01/07/2021 02:56

  • T Rex

    I’m from Wattpad and I have to say keep going on 10/10

    01/07/2021 02:54

  • Zeal Thomas

    Okay I’m not trying to be rude but this is a very cliche plot. The abused orphan who doesn’t wanna to be mated. The stud Aphla. and the abusive old aphla. I’ve read plenty books like it. However the few chapters I read was pretty good.

    01/07/2021 02:38

  • Zeal Thomas

    I’d give it a 7/10

    01/07/2021 02:31

  • Tes_03

    I’m also from WattPad. In my opinion, this story is amazing and very captivating 🤩😊

    01/07/2021 02:10

  • JujUU KEKEKE

    from wattpad too, I remember when u sent me a few chapters and I was captivated 😍

    01/07/2021 02:07

  • Rose Silver

    Hello! I'm from wattpad as well. the first chapter of a book in my opinion is what should hook readers, one of the many characteristics found popular books and novels. While the premise of this book intregued me, I wasnt sure about whether I would like Her Returned Mate, however I found myself hooked pretty quickly within its very first chapter, and I plan to continue reading. Other than that I completely agree with Bookwyrm on this story!

    01/07/2021 02:05

  • Bookwyrm

    As with all things this story has a few, albeit, minor flaws such as some small grammatical errors and a few of tense shifts; however, in my opinion these are majorly overshadowed by its captivating plotline, interesting and dynamic characters [and Wilson. . . what a jerk], and some amazing detailing of environments and characters. I found myself wanting nothing more than to sit down on my bed, say, "Frick my schedule," and continue to read for the rest of the day.

    01/07/2021 01:05

  • DarkForceWhis

    From Wattpad. I’d give it a 10/10, it very descriptive and I am to clearly tell who is speaking. The constant switching of views helps me connect with the characters

    01/07/2021 00:58

  • Gerardo Reynoso

    Also from wattpad, I have enjoyed what I have read and while it sucks it cannot be posted there, it is a great story and is a must read for fans of the genre.

    01/07/2021 00:35

  • Merian Mendez

    No me gustó el cambio de protagonista, en serio que no. Aún más para enlazarla con alguien distinto a su especie, qué pasará al procrear por mezclar especies distintas? Sebastion debió tener su oportunidad de redimirse frente a ella

    01/06/2021 23:37

  • Ken

    I came from whatpad and it is a really good story, with excellent character, a interesting plot, a really good development, I like that it isn't too long or to short, also that in the whole story it doesn't have boring part and thats something really good it always get more and more interesting.

    01/06/2021 23:30

  • Oink-sama

    I also came from wattpad. It was so well written and the plot is amazing! I love it! 100%!!!

    01/06/2021 22:43

  • Fiji Wolf

    thr story itself is very well written, the characters and developments are well done too, though the plot feels similar to other books I have read, this one kept a good pace and wasn't too long or too short for certain parts of it. i would give it an overall of 8.5/10

    01/06/2021 22:14

  • Eline de Nijs-Schmitz

    i came from Wattpad top and i love this book. its welk written and i love the story itself. its sad that i cant Read the Whole story because i'm not buying coins but i really love the story. 10/10

    01/06/2021 22:12

  • Hope Swiger

    I came here from Wattpad too, to read and review this story. Its well written, I really like the story plot, and its really interesting. I would give it a 10/10.

    01/06/2021 21:35

  • Zoey Coe

    I came from wattpadd too and this book so far is so interesting and well written and the Rayne is my favorite character.!

    01/06/2021 20:44

  • Joseph Vann

    Everyone here was contacted from wattpad to read this. Overall it such a good paced story. The grammar and wording make it so vivid. 10/10

    01/06/2021 20:34

  • Stacy Nicole

    I was contacted on Wattpad to read and review this story. It is amazing, although I am unable to continue because I will not purchase coins. The writing is immaculate and very alluring. I like the characters and I am sad this won’t be on Wattpad. Good Job to the author.

    01/06/2021 20:15

  • KingKaylaTv

    when i got a message from wattpad from the author i got was amazing when i read the chapters i got hook on so easily and that what a reader want they want to be hook and be connect to the character and you did just that keep up the good work💕💖

    01/06/2021 19:51

  • Nadine Babuke

    I also come from Wattpad. I came across this story because I received a very lovely message from the author. I must say that I like the story very much and I am curious to see what else is to come. I hope to read more from her in the future.

    01/06/2021 17:49

  • Luisa _prime_

    A great story that inspired me from the start! I had to keep reading and reading because the story is very well written ❤️👏🏻

    01/06/2021 17:30

  • Quentin

    I'm from Wattpad too, was able to read the sample chapters given from the author herself and I'm really happy about it. It is well written and the concept keeps me on edge. IFREAKINLOVE this!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️

    01/06/2021 16:51

  • Night Mare

    I love the concept of the story and, it is very well written I hope that this book is a succes for the writers and the editors. im also from wattpad so I did not expeect this story to be what it really was.

    01/06/2021 15:28

  • Aurora Erskine

    This is amazing. I was drawn from the first sentence that I couldn't stop reading it. Keep up with the great work.

    01/06/2021 15:24

  • kuroneko 77

    Hello, I'm from wattpad too. Will you put this on Wattpad ? The story is very well written and I love the characters. Rayne has a strong-will. I think the meeting with Sebastion will be interesting and I'm curious about Rayne's family (I smell a secret^^). I'll continue reading so thanks for your amazing work ! And sorry for my grammar, English isn't my native langage.

    01/06/2021 14:34

  • Mane What

    can you please put this on Wattpad 😇

    01/06/2021 13:59

  • Thálassa 14

    hii guess what? I’m from wattpad too, i really love this is written really good, I hope will get you far in the far in the future💛

    01/06/2021 12:51

  • Chiamaka Thelma

    Hey! I'm from Wattpad and I have to say this story is very addictive and makes me want to go on and on from the very start. It really got my attention. What an amazing work you've got here. keep up the good work 😍

    01/06/2021 11:59

  • Kyla Last

    Hello, im fom wattpad.. The story is really interesting and really good.. I keep thinking of what will happens next.

    01/06/2021 10:31

  • cjiminx

    Hi I'm also from Wattpad you're book is amazing from the very beginning it's very interesting that make you really read it. I love it keep up the good work💜

    01/06/2021 08:37

  • Deanna Bates

    Hello I'm from Wattpad and let me say from the start of the story to the very end it held my attention. Rayne went through a lot but I'm glad she was able to free herself from the pain she endured in Jade Moon at the hand of Alpha Wilson. Sebastion was a straight up jerk when he met Rayne and he was still a jerk five years later. Gia got what she deserved, I can't believe she would kidnap her own child just to hurt Sebastion. Glad Sebastion let Rayne go so she could be with Parker whom genuinely loves her. I was shocked when Edmund came back into the picture but happy that Rayne has her dad back and they can grieve and heal together. I don't like The Collectors and I hope they get stopped before going after Sebastion and Arianna. Can't wait to read book two.

    01/06/2021 06:22

  • Sabryna Hedman

    hi im from wattpad. Your book is really good and I want to keep reading it over and over.

    01/06/2021 06:01

  • elizabeth-rosey

    hey I’m from Wattpad this book is amazing

    01/06/2021 05:56

  • Nokuphiwe Dlodlo

    hey. I'm from wattpad! Your book is amazing and I love it❤

    01/06/2021 05:39

  • Emberli Roland

    Very engaging plotline. However, I would like a little more character depth. I would recommend diving into Rayne's past a little more, all her trauma, from her Alpha's abuse to her parents' death... why was it so traumatic? What things went through her head? I feel as if this would enhance your already wonderful story. Yet, I only read a few chapters so far, so take that in consideration while reading this comment. Overall, I would say that you have a pretty swell story. :)

    01/06/2021 04:34

  • Moza Lwamba

    An amazing story going reading it omg all love, love it❤️

    01/06/2021 03:22
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