Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Maddie Rodriguez

    woops accidentallysent it twice but you get it

    09/10/2020 14:03

  • Maddie Rodriguez

    Someone on Wattpad, user @doloris_daven_1979 said they were an editor and that they were working on a story and wanted me to read it. They sent me the first chapter and the link to the story and asked me my thoughts... this is kinda suspicious.... I got the message on Sept 9 @1:00pm

    09/10/2020 14:02

  • Maddie Rodriguez

    Someone on Wattpad, user @doloris_daven_1979 said they were an editor and that they were working on a story and wanted me to read it. They sent me the first chapter and the link to the story and asked me my thoughts... this is kinda suspicious.... I got the message on Sept 9 @1:00pm

    09/10/2020 14:02

  • Irune Pirrone

    Arianna's pack is Crimson Dawn or Redwood?

    09/10/2020 13:38

  • Vicky James

    thanks so much for updating your book is amazing fantastic writing to can not went to see what happens next

    09/10/2020 13:23

  • Shakira likes The Maze Runner & Teen Wolf

    looking at the comments which I tend to do. This book seems expensive but can't I buy a bunch of coins at once to use? are you the same person who wrote to me on wattpad I see comments about people trying to steal the book. to the people who want her to end the book I personally think this is a great book that so far I dont want to end. when I get more money i will buy some coins to use.

    09/10/2020 12:43

  • Alice Maciel

    beautiful history I love

    09/10/2020 12:40

  • Mallorie Barkley

    I had been sent the first chapter on wattpad and usually this wouldn’t be something I would read but honestly it’s actually really good! I suggest reading it!

    09/10/2020 10:45

  • Lotus FangPhan

    this is an Amazing story I can tell, but I just downloaded this app so I can read it for this wattpad account claiming that they're an editor? I wish I could read more but to be fairly honest I think the chapters are too expensive..

    09/10/2020 10:03

  • Cailyn McConnell

    The first chapter was sent to me and wattpad saying they were an editor. the person who sent it has the username (1975_jenell_lama..) I not sure if they are or not but thought I should let you know. But part from that its a great book and I loved reading it.

    09/10/2020 09:52

  • sheryn yan

    this is my first time reading wolf stories. but it's really amazing I really like it oh cut it I really love it. hope you have more and more reader.

    09/10/2020 08:50

  • Michelle Cadimas

    its getting beautiful and beautiful to read!

    09/10/2020 07:33

  • Indah Widiarti

    as far that i read in here is. it a good story, actually i'm not to fond to this genre, but still i enjoy it.

    09/10/2020 07:15

  • Meh_name_is_amelia

    Hey, it's Amelia. I forgot to comment on here, but I just wanted to say that I'm loving the book and my friends are too, I'm hooked! ♡♡

    09/10/2020 05:55

  • Ki-kiz Common

    how do you get coins?

    09/10/2020 04:31

  • Nataliaa_18

    wow this book is called “her return mate” and the return mate doesn’t get to be with her I’m kind of disappointed I really love Parker and everything she’s done for Rayne and with rayne but I hoped for him to find his true mate and for Sebastion and Rayne to find their way back to each other. I guess! 😏😒

    09/10/2020 04:11

  • TC Choi

    This book is great, although I just read the first few chapters, I think it is a fantastic book, keep it up!

    09/10/2020 04:05

  • Adina Naomi Nyla

    book is legit awesome still though. I'd consider it a win lose situation. cuz like someone's putting your book put there but they're claiming it

    09/10/2020 03:56

  • Adina Naomi Nyla

    I had someone on wattpad say its their book. their @ is @470-Elvira-Lemler

    09/10/2020 03:54

  • Hiro_CM

    love this story! don't listen to bad comments, you write art 💕

    09/10/2020 03:52

  • Reader-273693

    why call it “her returned mate” if Sebation didn’t return to her

    09/10/2020 03:43

  • LyliaLazerWolf

    So far I really love the story because it's both thrilling and interesting to read. Though my Ship didn't sail at Sebastion but it's still a very nice story and I can't wait for the next chap, I'm really excited about it already (*-*!!)

    09/10/2020 03:32

  • brybra723

    Loved the book until Parker became Rayne’s mate.This could have been a really great book, but I won’t know the ending because I can’t get past that to continue reading. Both guys were bad but, to choose the possessive toxic guy over the selfish arrogant guy that was attempting to change was just bad for the story. Good luck on your writing, you have talent. I will definitely give another story you write a read, fingers crossed that the story line is better.

    09/10/2020 03:28

  • LyliaLazerWolf

    The story has been really interesting since I first read the chap on Wattpad, and so far it's an awesome story for me. It's so thrilling to think of what will the next chap be. Though my Ship didn't sail but it's still an amazing story

    09/10/2020 03:27

  • Jessica Shannon

    I now feel the title doesn’t make sense I mean the book is called her returned mate unless they end up finding each other in the end otherwise the title is misleading

    09/10/2020 02:34

  • April Colima

    i don't usually read wolf stories but this is an interesting one . love to read this until the end 💖

    09/10/2020 02:13

  • Fetuani Lutu

    I like that you are honest in telling us that you are not going to write Rayne/Sebastion love story. Too bad. Hopefully I can find something similar to this storyline elsewhere. I wish you luck in your future endeavors.

    09/10/2020 01:54

  • FeatherRift

    Hey North Rose, I've finally been able to read your story and I honestly think that it's really good. it grabbed my attention almost immediately with your first chapter that you sent me and I've low-key been hooked on it since. The only things that looked off were some extremely minor spelling/grammar issues in the earlier chapters but other than that it looks really great. I wish you the best of luck with any other books you wish to write and further future developments with this book.☺️

    09/10/2020 01:41

  • Jo Ann Dolan

    I know many didn't like the turn the book took. I actually am glad she is mated with Parker. Seb is her return mate and he returned from the dead to see his mistakes and become who he was meant to be. I wouldn't mind seeing them all become friends and work together to help those hunted by the collectors. can't wait to see who will be Seb's 2nd chance mate.

    09/10/2020 01:35

  • lee Lee

    this was an amazing story to read... really enjoyed the descriptions in it and it certainly was very captivating...I wish I had the money to read farther...but from what I've read seem very well written...I highly recommend to read it

    09/10/2020 01:11

  • The Unknown

    I freaking LOVE this story.This writing is Just soo good.I'm waiting for more chapters.And Rayne It's my favotite at the moment

    09/10/2020 00:51

  • Jacinda Davis

    I for one am so happy that it played out, Rayne deserves happiness after what she's been through. I did hope though that in that five years at the mate ball they would be mates (like the moon goddess had hoped) but Parker has been there for Rayne more times than I can ever count with Sebastion... Especially if Sebastion only wanted Rayne after finding out what Gia's been doing behind his back AFTER his pack members been telling him what Gia's been doing! As much as I am all for second chances, I personally don't want to be second best... Everybody makes mistakes I got it! But if someone hasn't been thinking of me after the first time we met and we're supposed to be soul mates, I'm GOOD! I vote for Parker and Rayne!!

    09/10/2020 00:12

  • Viviam Barbara Whittle

    Hi North Rose, I really would like to read your book, but this coin stuff is ridiculous. Is there a place I can buy this book outright, please? Thanks in advance

    09/09/2020 21:43

  • Madonna Boyd

    wonderful book so far.

    09/09/2020 19:42

  • JJ Ace

    As a reader and writer from WP, this isn't my kind of genre at all, however the book has a good flow in the few chapters I read. Its written well and has potential. But the fact there's writers out here asking for reviews is a little sad (considering I've got the same review messages from new writers more than once now.) All in all, hope the book does well, I'm sure many people in tje vampire and werewolf fandom will love it.

    09/09/2020 19:10

  • Jennifer Ithal

    lots of money

    09/09/2020 18:14

  • Jennifer Ithal

    love it

    09/09/2020 16:17

  • Jennifer Ithal

    good book.

    09/09/2020 16:16

  • Jennifer Ithal

    so far its great

    09/09/2020 16:04

  • Keesha Thomas

    I love the book, it's interesting can't wait to read more.

    09/09/2020 16:01

  • Keesha Thomas

    I love it, it's super interesting, can't wait to read more.

    09/09/2020 16:00

  • _debbyeve

    ♥️♥️love the book chap I read on wattpad...I hope to enjoy the rest of book as I continue to read.

    09/09/2020 15:06

  • Zino Magbegor

    Story is really interesting

    09/09/2020 14:40

  • Maribel Villaruel

    its nice actually

    09/09/2020 14:30

  • ppoggirl

    i can’t believe Sebastian and Rayne may not have a happy ending together

    09/09/2020 14:29

  • Elena엘레나

    GG

    09/09/2020 14:27

  • Lucy Loach

    It's getting so much more dramatic and twisted into its self its great

    09/09/2020 13:33

  • Erika Ariesgado

    I thought the one who sent it to me was the writer that her story was just in here.btw it's Migdalia_Safe_Nov2 who sent it to me. I really thought I was special like what others thought lol

    09/09/2020 13:26

  • officialwerido 14

    I love this story

    09/09/2020 13:24

  • Angel Cunningham

    Won't be able to finish. due to the price of the story I will be deleting the app from my phone. I have a limited budget and you can't even earn coins to continue reading. All my other book apps at least let you warn coins or get rewards for reading a certain amount of time.

    09/09/2020 12:16

  • Joanna Nuñez

    it seems like an interesting book, from the first two chapters it captivates You into the story and leaves You intrigued .

    09/09/2020 11:52

  • Mitxh Majesty

    its a good story but i wish i can read more of it but i dont have money please can you make it too in wattpad so we can read it free i love this chapter - Sorry im not that good in english hehe

    09/09/2020 11:09

  • olivia kingsley

    too expensive, am at of here,good book though.....

    09/09/2020 09:45

  • Reader-237666

    i am loving the book and cant wait to know what happens next with Sebastian. i wonder if he chose to forget or to continue by letting Rayne go.

    09/09/2020 09:42

  • Sandra Winsby Berdu

    likening the book but hate having to wait

    09/09/2020 09:10

  • Random Extra Ac

    I got here by a link by someone on wattpad claiming to being a editer and you being their friend they told me I had good taste in books and asked me to review flattered I said yes I thought it be on wattpad but it took me here they gave me like chap 1 and told me you didnt want anything more and sent me here They wont respond when I asked to talk a few mins ago and im seeinga. comment saying they got this im worried for you seeing they're claiming your work the user is "emilia-lanoue- 1986" if you would like to speak(im only here because of that so I dont know if theres a messaging system) my user on the app they sent me this on (wattpad) my user is "@yOuRdRuNkFrIeNd" or "why am I like this" I can send you the account i think it may be a bot and I feel you should report this soon as this is a big issue if you dont know them

    09/09/2020 08:31

  • Lucy Loach

    Love this chapter as it moves the story around nicely Intreged to see what her old alli is in help for and who means to hurt her

    09/09/2020 07:31

  • Amanda Lea Palermo

    I like the book so far but I think Sebastian is in for a surprise if he thinks his mate will accept what he plans to do. I hope she puts him in his place and rejects him before Gia does something stupid again

    09/09/2020 07:18

  • Rere The Pabo!!

    I am not sure who the editor is, some one in Wattpad send me the link and stuff Claiming their the editor of this story, I'm still not sure, Their name is Billye-Poliks-Nov29

    09/09/2020 07:10

  • Vicky James

    I love this story thanks so much for updating fantastic writing can not went to see what happens next

    09/09/2020 04:51

  • Kay Myers

    like the book but not the last chapter or two to.me that was not happy ending if its the end of that book I feel like I wasted my money to read it so disappointed

    09/09/2020 04:31

  • Tri Tri

    Wtf... Who's story is this..... Am confuse cause a writer on wattpad send me the first chapter of this and its the exact same story.

    09/09/2020 04:13

  • mackenzie berrry

    I just got a message from leena_cring_961

    09/09/2020 02:25

  • Citra Zizi

    HI, im Citra Zizi, and I will read the story now

    09/09/2020 02:14

  • Okonkwo Amarachi

    I was introduced to this book by someone who says he or she is the editor of the book while on wattpad. So far all I can say about this book is that I love it, I am so thankful to the person that introduced the book to me, this type of novel is what I love reading and I would also recommend this book to anyone that comes across it. A big thanks to the writer for a lovely book.

    09/09/2020 01:06

  • Tracy Secord

    the story is very good

    09/09/2020 00:43

  • Paula Perez

    good narrations but i hope u tone it down a lil bit. anw continue writing luv, it's a good book (so far) 😊

    09/09/2020 00:32

  • Nova Alisia

    That's a good story and I'll read it over a snack, the passion for writing the story. it's very entertaining.:)))

    09/09/2020 00:17

  • Jennifer Reyes

    i am soo happy! yay parker is her second mate. i didnt want her to end with sebastion. he only wanted her now because he found out about gia otherwise he would have never looked for her.

    09/08/2020 23:51

  • Recklessjen

    if the book ends like this I'll be so sad 😥 even if Sabastian gets another mate too it won't be the same.

    09/08/2020 22:59

  • Natara Alexander

    i thought i could read this book if i installed the app

    09/08/2020 22:01

  • Paige Copeland

    Okay so I am sad that they didn’t end up together, true. However, I’m really really wanting to know Jazmin’s story now. 😂 I love when witches and shifters get paired together, and second chance mates are always interesting/juicy. 🤷🏻‍♀️😂

    09/08/2020 21:05

  • Cara Goodmon

    The story is good if you can get past the numerous grammatical errors. I understand misspellings and wrong tense here and there but every other paragraph has some kind of grammar error.

    09/08/2020 19:25

  • Savannah Hamilton

    I came upon your book because someone messaged me on Wattpad claiming to be a editor. Although I don’t believe they were being entirely truthful, I am glad that they introduced me to you book. Your story is very interesting and even though the app itself is expensive l still find myself buying coins to read new chapters. I do have one question though. Who was the person singing to rayne? I only asked because when I read I little further it seems like the person outside her bar watching her was one and the same. But now I think the person outside the bar could be Wilson? And Jaz only mentions two people and I’m pretty sure if it was sebbie he would’ve taken her.

    09/08/2020 18:54

  • Rose Marie

    this is so good I hope you can on to make good stories like this again

    09/08/2020 18:43

  • Catrina Groves

    so far this is a good book

    09/08/2020 18:10

  • Maze

    is there no way to earn coins? I really wanna read this!

    09/08/2020 17:44

  • Maria Eduarda

    very good and interesting your story I liked it, but it is not translating so it will be a little difficult to follow it only gave to read that chapter that sent me because I managed to translate more now the rest will be difficult

    09/08/2020 17:25

  • Jasmin Smith

    yessssss! so excited about the new mate situation

    09/08/2020 17:07

  • Jani Dj

    excelente historia!!!

    09/08/2020 16:51

  • Mony R C

    It sounds like a very good story, I only read three chapters and I must say it has potential. Keep it up, congratulations.

    09/08/2020 16:43

  • Veronica Santillan

    This book is good so far, I really want to read more!!!

    09/08/2020 16:04

  • Sapna Rawat

    Amazing story. The best supernatural story read so far❤️

    09/08/2020 15:56

  • Sapna Rawat

    Amazing story. The best supernatural story read so far❤️

    09/08/2020 15:55

  • Dora

    sorry but it’s called her returned mate this makes no sense and has taken a different turn than I like

    09/08/2020 15:27

  • Jessica Murray

    I am upset that the app just stole 200 coins from me and now I can’t continue on reading right now.

    09/08/2020 15:16

  • omarmieo

    I got a message today , to check out this story from other people on Wattpad ! I will be continuing to read it but just thought you should know

    09/08/2020 15:14

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    I was hoping that Sabastion and Rayne would get together. Parker would find his fated Mate. such a let down 😕

    09/08/2020 14:44

  • inter milan

    like kost you, last week a person send me that message (and I'm sure you all know what), but I am not regret, I end up addicted with this story. I am so eagerly want to know who Rayne will end up with

    09/08/2020 13:56

  • Peace Tea

    this story actually affected me emotionally, I just got sucked in an now I’m attached! very well written.

    09/08/2020 13:11

  • Shelby Semore

    “Her retuned mate” Is a great romance to read with the many twist and deep plot to it. It even has some action and dark themes embedded into it to keep you on your toes and reading. And I just hope you will like the story just as much as me.

    09/08/2020 12:23

  • Shelby Semore

    “Her retuned mate” Is a great romance to read, it even has some action and dark themes embedded into it so you know you’ll never be left bored. This book is definitely worth taking a chance on and I hope whoever else reads this story likes it just as much as me.

    09/08/2020 12:15

  • bhavyasri bhavi

    the story was so interesting boss but it was expensive

    09/08/2020 11:43

  • Fox'sOnlyVixen

    You said Rayne was the daughter of Wilson's old Beta. How does she have other parents then? And then you say Gia wore a skin tight dress. How does Seb pull her "barely legal skirt" up?? It's inconsistent.

    09/08/2020 11:29

  • Julianne Ruclane Nui

    Team Sebastian!

    09/08/2020 10:59

  • Julianne Ruclane Nui

    a second chance for mate which is Parker. i was hoping the Moon goddess would give Sebastian and Rayne a second chance! I really want them together to work it out and find their way back to each other.Despite that, I am completely loving this book.

    09/08/2020 10:52

  • Fetuani Lutu

    Please Ms. Rose there must be more to the Rayne and Sebastion love story. Please don’t let him forget her. I think she still wants him despite the fact that he hurt her deeply. I just feel Ruby and Ares are also meant to be together.

    09/08/2020 10:26

  • Ophelia Annang

    Perfect. It's lovely. A must read!

    09/08/2020 10:19

  • kookiesncream

    This book was interesting from the start.

    09/08/2020 10:02

  • Suné Stander

    Someone sent me a message about an hour or so ago on wattpad saying that she is the editor of this book .The person's username is monicaorth1227 and they sent me the first chapter of this book. I read through the comments and I felt that I had to let you know in case it wasn't your editor.

    09/08/2020 09:25
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