Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Anchen Van Aswegen

    good read thus far, story stays interesting and I love the use of third person telling gives more of a flow.

    10/14/2020 15:26

  • tifa💜fleur✿

    The narration is beautiful and even the narration method is wonderful

    10/14/2020 15:20

  • Stella Flor

    i love it😍

    10/14/2020 15:02

  • Fariha Nowshin

    hi! i am Fariha Nowshin from Wattpad. i didn't read your whole story yet, but i read the first chapter and it's truly amazing. i will read it soon and I'll make sure to share my opinion on it.

    10/14/2020 14:30

  • REJOITH

    its an amazing story Nd plot line so far. 😇❤

    10/14/2020 14:24

  • Varsha Rao

    Hi I am Varsha Rao from Wattpad, Thank you so much for the gift. I am for sure going to read your story. Once again all the best for the story “The Returned Mate”

    10/14/2020 14:17

  • Deanne Dooley

    Just curious how many editors you have for this book? There’s a lot of spelling errors, extraneous words that make no sense why they are even there and continuity errors. I was contacted by one editor and I’ve seen a couple of reviews on Wattpad that mention the editor that they were contacted by and they are different people. The story is actually very interesting and would be great but to spend at least 30 coins a chapter there should be less mistakes for a book handled by multiple people.

    10/14/2020 14:07

  • Banana_fish

    Very thankful for the message for me to read this story

    10/14/2020 14:01

  • Liu Lee

    Amazing! Really Good, your story is just Amazing❤

    10/14/2020 13:54

  • Martela Nyzza Castro

    I'm so thankful you messaged me to read this story. thanks for the coins. 😊😍

    10/14/2020 13:45

  • Christine Cauan

    Wow ❤️✌️

    10/14/2020 13:43

  • Hadil

    Amazing story 💖💖💖

    10/14/2020 13:14

  • Christine Duran

    Amazing story!

    10/14/2020 13:01

  • Gabriela Marmolejo

    for a moment I thought that the mysterious stranger was her father but I guess his memory loss time doesn’t add up 🧐🤔

    10/14/2020 12:59

  • Indies Posta

    Amazing story!! 😍💖

    10/14/2020 12:48

  • majik moka

    I really love this story 🤩💟💟

    10/14/2020 12:31

  • Flash GirlM38

    I definitely do not regret reading this! Amazing story!!

    10/14/2020 12:27

  • Angel Mae Teves Sastre

    very nice storyy!

    10/14/2020 12:17

  • Ganna Mohamed

    hi iam gogomoham from wattpad

    10/14/2020 12:06

  • eda ayyıldız

    hi ı am biryildizkaydi from Wattpad did you send me a message?

    10/14/2020 11:50

  • Devanshi Shah

    It's a beautiful story!!

    10/14/2020 11:40

  • P.I PINK

    I love this story so far and I was instantly captivated by it!

    10/14/2020 11:24

  • Quennie Grace Soliveres Dudas

    I got a message to review this. I'm not really into paranormal story but this one is exceptional.

    10/14/2020 11:15

  • Alyssa SL

    I was asked by the editor to read this and I have yet to regret it! 😍🤩

    10/14/2020 11:15

  • Ashnii AS

    Really liked the way the author detail everything. You can imagine the scenes in front of you just because of the detailing. KEEP IT UP, YOU DID GREAT ❤

    10/14/2020 11:15

  • peni rizkym

    Love this story!!

    10/14/2020 11:11

  • CrystalResist

    Got a message to review this. Loved it and always will!

    10/14/2020 11:03

  • x.dazai.x 22

    This is wonderful in the sense of the word !!!!! I loved everything here oh oh how beautiful your writing is!

    10/14/2020 11:00

  • sheeriosity

    This is really amazing work. Super excited to read it!!

    10/14/2020 10:01

  • WillBeMyPleasure

    I do like your first chapter💕

    10/14/2020 09:52

  • Vinigar Apply Cider

    🤩The plot and how the story progresses is fantastic🥺If only I had more coins

    10/14/2020 09:30

  • Jacomi92

    I like your first Chap 😉

    10/14/2020 08:53

  • Yololo Lolo

    reader Plot! It is like a Werwolf book but it's not like these typicak ones! This is defenetly the best Werwolf book I habe ever seen! I realy realy realy realy LOVE this story! <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 THIS BOOK IS PERFEKT!!!!!!!?

    10/14/2020 06:58

  • Yololo Lolo

    I alredy Love this story xD this is fantastic? I f*cking love it!

    10/14/2020 06:48

  • Jennilyn Jhen Morales

    i love it

    10/14/2020 06:17

  • Channie Park

    i think it's good.

    10/14/2020 05:52

  • Léa

    i absolutely love this story and the way to write is amazing !

    10/14/2020 05:50

  • Breezy Boo

    very nicely written!

    10/14/2020 04:09

  • LaDavepetasprite

    ok soooo...imma leave my opinion: 1-) i dont see much creativity and chaos here soo its kind od boring 2-) the way the p.o.v's are made is pretty cool to be honest 3-) let's be serious the people want interesting character's not a boring story type "ohh im a evil gurl and imma be soooo bad ohhh daddy werewolf pleasee punish meee" thats dumb and no offense if you want to progress in my opinion add a villain a change the werewolf type like...give it superpowers break the time and just travel over it , add something that make your story different 4-) more than that you dont need nothing just fix that and it will be perfect UwU

    10/14/2020 02:52

  • clara olivieri

    I love it, I can't stop reading it!

    10/14/2020 02:29

  • ELI

    I haven't read the rest of the chapter yet but this story caught my attention. It's also my first time reading a book that's all abt vampire and werewolf and i can say the story is interesting and worth to read.

    10/14/2020 02:19

  • Dani Udelhofen

    I think the mysterious stranger is her father. I think that when her parents were attacked that he survived an lost his memory, Wilson sent him away to torture Rayner. That's what I think... only time will tell!

    10/14/2020 02:17

  • american-storyteller

    Where are they coming from?🤔

    10/14/2020 01:59

  • Uri Umi

    I truly find this a little boring, but it's ok, I guess

    10/14/2020 01:45

  • Maylin Hoog

    Oh no Alex

    10/14/2020 01:41

  • Maylin Hoog

    i like Parker

    10/14/2020 01:41

  • Maureen Onazi

    This book is interesting. Glad she didn't end up with Sebastian cos that would have been annoying to read. Great plot, it wasn't like the typical werewolf book. This is probably one of the best werewolf books I have read.

    10/14/2020 01:11

  • Wizard Of Minecraft

    Gia seems toxic

    10/14/2020 00:31

  • Campos Valle Lya Adalid

    this is soo griping, I don't understand all because I'm from latinoamerica, but, I liked, I'll be recommending to my parents and friends, it's a good opportunity to know new histories in other languages. :3

    10/14/2020 00:17

  • Nanamie Haruie

    I started reading the first chapter and if I title by chance it is one of those stories that catch me where there is from an alpha and omega added that I see that open vamiros yaiii is really beautiful and the story has something that since you start you already want to reach the end and know what else will happen⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💫

    10/13/2020 23:55

  • Padfoot

    I’m very excited to read this! the first chapter had me on the edge of my seat

    10/13/2020 23:43

  • Alicia Portillo

    mucho inglés

    10/13/2020 22:42

  • IT'S Shinu-Devil

    I just read the first chapter and already gave that suspension and anxiety of what may happen later

    10/13/2020 22:37

  • Mary Ann Samonte Jumao-as

    ❤️❤️❤️

    10/13/2020 22:33

  • Gali Sanitanava

    Loving this story. I'm glad that it is not the boring same old mate comes back and makes everything better like a bandaid.

    10/13/2020 21:25

  • gözde gün

    Başarılı 👍

    10/13/2020 21:08

  • •Paralysis •Queen•

    Here from Wattpad loving the story can’t wait for it to continue keep up the good work

    10/13/2020 20:54

  • JungTae Hyungeon

    oooh I'm dying to read more about your book, thanks for the coins <3333 I'm sure I'll love it, I hope more people come and love your story :DDD

    10/13/2020 20:46

  • Rayanne Pereira

    This story is perfectly serious The mystery is well formed, I am loving rayne

    10/13/2020 20:22

  • Nanette Villaresis

    Just DL it can't wait to read this❤️

    10/13/2020 19:56

  • Zainab Ilyas

    is their any other way to unlock chapter other than by coins? pleaseeeeeee

    10/13/2020 19:47

  • Kerri McIntosh

    i downloaded this app for this book.Worst ending I've read. I've stopped reading. For Rayne and Sebastion to not even have a chance is beyond me. why introduce them as soul mates and give them stories only to have it ripped away. there was an out and a happy ending for Parker too once found his mate. I will not recommend this in my blog.

    10/13/2020 19:35

  • Gabriela Marmolejo

    awww.... poor Alec! he deserved better 🥺🥺🥺

    10/13/2020 19:25

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    This has spark curiosity in me due to the reader that has recommended me this story ! I love it.

    10/13/2020 18:57

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    I love the story it was really interesting! Thanks for the person who sent me the link I love it

    10/13/2020 18:43

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    10/13/2020 18:37

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    I love this story

    10/13/2020 18:16

  • Gabi S

    It's really good written, and the storyline is also very interesting

    10/13/2020 17:36

  • Alinda Thomas

    man I wish somehow rayne and sebbie could be together

    10/13/2020 16:57

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    this is really good, you write it in such a way that one would need to read the next chapter. Very good indeed, the story line, characters and i wil stronglyl recommend the book.

    10/13/2020 16:40

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    10/13/2020 16:39

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    10/13/2020 16:37

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    10/13/2020 16:19

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    10/13/2020 16:18

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    10/13/2020 16:11

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    10/13/2020 16:05

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    10/13/2020 15:50

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    10/13/2020 15:49

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    10/13/2020 15:42

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    10/13/2020 15:31

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    10/13/2020 15:20

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    10/13/2020 15:19

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    10/13/2020 15:11

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    10/13/2020 14:57

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    10/13/2020 14:56

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    10/13/2020 14:13

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    10/13/2020 13:44

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    10/13/2020 13:41

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    10/13/2020 13:03

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    10/13/2020 12:04

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    10/13/2020 11:48

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    10/13/2020 11:39

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    10/13/2020 11:27

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    10/13/2020 11:25

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    10/13/2020 11:02

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    10/13/2020 11:00

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    10/13/2020 10:58

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