Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Reader-706603

    So there’s no clear price for these books. I don’t mind continuing to pay but I’d like to know how much more I’m going to pay. also for a book not proof read I was hoping to get it at what I typically pay for a book.

    09/21/2020 12:05

  • Ashley Chapa

    I'm very interested in Monroe he sounds like a very interesting person cant wait.

    09/21/2020 11:27

  • Lisa Watts

    if I wanted to read about witches. warlocks and vampires I would have looked for those stories. I literally paid $5:00 for 7 chapters. I will not be finishing this story to have to pay more money for a couple more chapters. I will be deleting this app.

    09/21/2020 10:34

  • Darksoul 707 UwU

    It's good! I love this story

    09/21/2020 10:25

  • Mae

    Team Sebastian!!!!. Honestly it's a verryy impressive book 💘❤.

    09/21/2020 10:08

  • Teni Lismaya

    nice story. I like it. you did well :)

    09/21/2020 09:14

  • Shon Burris

    i like it so far but Gina I can't stand her

    09/21/2020 08:47

  • Joanne Hoera Mauauri

    Oh pwerty please allow Sebbie to come back already...... Does her an her father have some sort of power???

    09/21/2020 08:45

  • Verushca

    hey, so i got a message on whattpad from @KYONG-OBERDIER saying he/she is the editor and the person and the writer is working on a book and asked if he/she could sent me some sample chapters to read and give a review back the person only sent me like little pieces and then a link to here? i think it's a great book i just want to let you know because after reading all the comments I do not think that person is the editor and is just claiming the book as their's

    09/21/2020 08:38

  • Ιωάννα Τζελέπη

    You are an amazing and great author! well done for your job!

    09/21/2020 08:18

  • JetBlackT

    Such a dark and intriguing read!! Love the fact that they have a whole other wolf personality, it's very uncommon for this type of fiction. Also the love triangle is somewhat different, as it isn't between the main character and two other people. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

    09/21/2020 08:10

  • Brigid Popata

    why cant I get anymore episodes??? Ive akready paid enough to cover the book. Im not paying anymore. Ive only read two chapters

    09/21/2020 07:01

  • Nadira Paramita

    This is great story so far as I read it. Keep going.

    09/21/2020 06:43

  • Joanne Hoera Mauauri

    Lets say Sebbie is a total douche bag Gia had him wrapped around her finger real good that he became a fool a man without a head to think ha ha ha IDIOT good to know he finally see sense.... Rayne an Parker relationship looks like only Friends with benefits no wrong in that right have some ass on the side girl lol... Wasnt she raped by Alpha Wilson when she was 13???.... I wonder why he abused her so badly was it something to do with her parents death?????.....I'm neither for Sebbie or Parker I am for RAYNE

    09/21/2020 06:22

  • Camila Campos

    Dear author of the book, I am afraid to tell you that the same thing happened to me as some users where, they asked us for the opinion of their book and they promoted it under their name on wattpad, without putting it there directly announcing it to enter this application. in this case, he was posing as editor @ kathey-bell-1983

    09/21/2020 05:14

  • Pao

    funny to see how many readers are willing to give up so easily on relationship based on trust and love, to give in into a relationship with someone you barely know who rejected you 5 years ago and now wants you back just because he was played by his ex. Everyone deserves a healthy relationship

    09/21/2020 04:52

  • Vicky James

    I love this story can not went to see what happens next amazing writing

    09/21/2020 04:51

  • Tosha Brown

    You are truly a writer of all times you have a fierce imagination and is very definitive and descriptive in it so it was a privilege hearing from you on Wattpad. Happy I checked you out keep up the awesome work!!!

    09/21/2020 04:23

  • Naruto Uzumaki

    the story is nice and i qm excited to readthe next parts but the thing is i think i need coins for it.☹️

    09/21/2020 04:19

  • Vianney Amezcua Ochoa

    Hi this book is amazing, i read the first chapter and i love it ❤️❤️

    09/21/2020 04:15

  • Lisa Watts

    I feel like I’m reading 2 different stories.

    09/21/2020 03:38

  • Eddie Pole

    Fireflies? In Oregon? I don't think so.

    09/21/2020 03:29

  • Zahra Dilley

    this book is incredible so far, but this app is way too expensive! with the apps I frequent, these prices are twice the expense for half the coins you receive. as an author myself on a few apps, I support where I can, but once I finish this book, I will not be returning! again, you have an amazing talent!!!

    09/21/2020 03:26

  • marittee ebonia

    why do i have this feeling of being scammed? Purchased coins and spent money for some unfinished story?

    09/21/2020 03:24

  • Joyce Berry

    so the story just stops when the clock strikes misnight

    09/21/2020 03:05

  • Young Bootyclentch

    i hope she doesnt forgive him

    09/21/2020 02:53

  • Angelia Weldon

    I'm not crying 😢 😭, you're crying 😢 😭!!! How often do you update? just so I know 😁

    09/21/2020 02:31

  • Angelia Weldon

    I'm ssssooo happy you're turning this into a series!!! honestly, 1 book is just NOT enough!!! 🤣❤🤣❤

    09/21/2020 02:17

  • Bonnie S

    I am totally hooked!!!! This has been a really awesome read. You should be proud of yourself

    09/21/2020 02:05

  • Angelia Weldon

    I was wondering if/how Parker would mark her. wasn't sure since he was a shifter??

    09/21/2020 01:59

  • Angelia Weldon

    it's good that they can at least be friends now. and possible allies in the future with what they're both building...

    09/21/2020 01:33

  • Angelia Weldon

    maybe I'm wrong, but I swear that I read in an earlier chapter, when Rayne was contacting ari for the first time, it said she had remembered her number by heart?? if that's the case, why now does she need the card out was written on?? am I wrong in what I read??

    09/21/2020 01:25

  • Angelia Weldon

    awe, this is ssssooo heart breaking 💔 😢.... poor jace 😔

    09/21/2020 01:12

  • Angelia Weldon

    ssssooo, will Irina be Seb's second chance mate??? OOOHHHH, I can't WAIT to see how this plays out!!!

    09/21/2020 01:05

  • Angelia Weldon

    I'm so freaking stoked!!! and so over the moon that Seb made the right choice!! I just hope he meets his second chance mate soon, he really does deserve it ❤

    09/21/2020 00:50

  • Ash Merlin

    WHAT!! What happened to Alec?! I am really pissed off!

    09/21/2020 00:46

  • Jenny G

    is there a way to read this online? kind of short of cash and want to know what happens though :(

    09/21/2020 00:39

  • Angelia Weldon

    YAS!! YAS!! YAS!!! OMG IM JUMPING WITH JOY RIGHT NOW!! This honestly could NOT have worked out better ❤❤❤❤❤!! TY TY TY!!!

    09/21/2020 00:21

  • Angelia Weldon

    wow, this just keeps getting better!! surprise after surprise after surprise 😁. It's Rayne feeling his death or his choice???

    09/21/2020 00:12

  • Rae Stearman

    Please add this on wattpad so others can read and enjoy the book. you'd probably get even more readers there too

    09/21/2020 00:09

  • Dora Amanda Morris

    I love this store. it has kept my interest. I have not stopped reading yet from start. I told my family to leave me alone I am reading.

    09/21/2020 00:05

  • Angelia Weldon

    this makes me wonder if the same thing happened to Edmund when he died?? what choice was he given?? Don't be selfish Sebastian, choose honestly.....

    09/21/2020 00:03

  • Angelia Weldon

    I wish humans had mates. God, it would make things ssssooo much easier for 🤣🥰

    09/20/2020 23:54

  • Angelia Weldon

    I love these glimpses into their pasts. it explains more of what happened and gives us a better understanding. thank you for that 👏❤

    09/20/2020 23:46

  • Anatali Aguilar

    I really like the story it was really good, I think the writer should keep writing more stories in my opinion.

    09/20/2020 23:46

  • Angelia Weldon

    I hope to hell she dies!!! but please let Sebastian be OK!!! after everything he's been thru, he doesn't deserve to die now 😔

    09/20/2020 23:25

  • Mishy

    this is a very excellent read - and I'm looking forward to what's next!

    09/20/2020 23:22

  • Angelia Weldon

    she better not kill him and get away with her plan!! however, I have a VERY bad feeling about all this 😞

    09/20/2020 23:04

  • Angelia Weldon

    the only thing I can think of would be a diety??? i know I'm probably waaaaay off base, but still...🤷‍♀️

    09/20/2020 22:45

  • Reader-986589

    yeah I love the reading ,

    09/20/2020 22:31

  • Reader-986589

    I love the chapters you have sent to me and I can’t wait to read , good job

    09/20/2020 22:29

  • Angelia Weldon

    I'm ssssooo sorry to hear about your chronic illness 😔. I pray you are doing better 🙏 ❤

    09/20/2020 22:24

  • Jin Soul

    someone on wattpad it's claiming this as his/hers, that he's working with the author and that he/she wanted to know my opinion cuz i had a picky taste in books

    09/20/2020 22:17

  • Angelia Weldon

    Wow!! 2 blasts from the past!! that's awesome!! they both deserve it!! ❤

    09/20/2020 22:04

  • Angelia Weldon

    I'm ssssooo happy Jace is his ❤!!! stupid bitch!!! 😤

    09/20/2020 21:46

  • Angelia Weldon

    please dear God find another way!! how can they guarantee they can bring her back after 5 mins!?!? 😱😱

    09/20/2020 21:21

  • Jenn McGrogan

    I look forward to more in this series! I love how the author takes us on an epic journey. There is so much substance in this story. You not only get romance or love triangle like most of these stories are, but also an amazing adventure with lots of twists & turns. it’s filled with a ton of characters, which you get a sneak peek into their stories as well, which you’ll be able to connect in future books. it is well written & even when things seem predictable, the writer then takes the story on a winding road, with lots of twists & turns the reader wouldn’t have ever expected...making things completely unpredictable. stunning characters. lots of thoughts, emotions. I love how she takes her time, not rushing the characters nor storyline, giving you that forced feeling you sometimes get with some stories. I look forward to getting to know the other characters in the future series. Parker & Ryane are not only an amazing power duo, but they’re so well written that they’re believable. The writer def has a passion that can be felt when reading her stories. she def has a future in taking the world on a great adventure with her words.

    09/20/2020 21:12

  • Angelia Weldon

    Sorry, but I'm still team Parker all the way 🥰

    09/20/2020 20:54

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    ugh, shut up Alec

    09/20/2020 20:45

  • Desie Maas

    It's a good book, I liked it a lot. Though I noticed an inconsistency with Parker's brother. First he was named Owen and suddenly he became Connor only for us to not hear anything else about him. It made him seem like an unnecessary addition to the story But overall I loved it and I really enjoyed the fact that Parker became her mate instead of her abandoning him for Sebastian. And the title is just fine the way it is!

    09/20/2020 20:44

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    poor gia :(

    09/20/2020 20:42

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    grace is right, sebastion. you should focus

    09/20/2020 20:41

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    sebastion has such a big heart, I like him

    09/20/2020 20:40

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    this reminds me teen wolf lol

    09/20/2020 20:36

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    she is being abused by who? I guess we’ll figure this out after these chapters

    09/20/2020 20:34

  • Angelia Weldon

    WOW!!! Honestly, I want her to be with Parker!!! Regardless of this "new" man Sebastian has become, it doesn't negate what he did 5 years ago. jmpo 🤷‍♀️

    09/20/2020 20:33

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    she was too young

    09/20/2020 20:33

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    poor Rayne 😭 She lost her parents that night

    09/20/2020 20:33

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    the beginning was awesome 👏🏻

    09/20/2020 20:27

  • ɧΥՄՌʝɿՌ'Տ ʝṏՏɧՄԹ X

    This is about werewolfs super cool 😎

    09/20/2020 20:24

  • Cindy Anderson

    when does the next book comes out and what is called?

    09/20/2020 20:16

  • Angelia Weldon

    kinda wish it was either Edmond or Rayne who took that bastard out!! Glad he's gone though. now, too deal with this other dark force still approaching?? 🤔

    09/20/2020 20:10

  • Nika)

    That's do amazing so far, love your story and writing style as well as the descriptions;)

    09/20/2020 20:03

  • queen shipshit

    this stories great it gets me in the feels gia i doubt your pregnant, yous a hoeeee

    09/20/2020 20:03

  • MISSMONALISA95@AOL.COM

    just started reading this and so far so good . I like it, I usually read two books at a time but I can’t wait for this to update .

    09/20/2020 20:02

  • Umuhoza Hortance

    nice character☺I like

    09/20/2020 20:00

  • Reader-982941

    sorry I’m not spending money to read stories there are free stories to read and it’s ridiculous to ask ppl to buy coins to continue reading.

    09/20/2020 19:37

  • Will

    Um, hey, so I’m a writer who was reached out to via Wattpad to help beta read/edit? I wasn’t given many detail, really, just sent a link. Is there a way I could get more info.

    09/20/2020 19:11

  • Jung MelHo

    I just finished reading the sample. And really ... Woah. You have a good narration and the knot of the story as I read, is about the girl being kept in a kind of brothel where she has to please, right? That I joined when I read that it is a beta but they treat it like Omega. I like the plot and the way it is formed. You have my opinion that your book caught me. I'm going to read it. I hope you continue like this.

    09/20/2020 19:07

  • Madalena De Melo Sousa

    Is this story finished?

    09/20/2020 19:04

  • Jenn McGrogan

    I am quite enjoying this book. I like that it has substance. it’s not just romance or sex, but has an actual storyline, that you can tell will branch off into many other interesting stories. this author is gifted.

    09/20/2020 18:59

  • Gina Herrera

    I was really excited to finish this book but now it’s like being pulled into a different story in each chapter. Throwing flashbacks in there when there is so much happening in the present to be discussed. very confusing and a bit disappointing.

    09/20/2020 18:55

  • Kashaf Rashid

    I’m kinda curious as to why she’s treated as an omega even though she’s a beta. I’m not that familiar with werewolf rankings but I assume that alpha is the highest rank with beta and then omega.

    09/20/2020 18:24

  • Suss

    hi! N0RTHWIND here. I'm afraid I'm not too fond of this. Im not one for eolf pack things, and paired with the writing and writing style, it's just not my type! I don't plan on reading anymore. thank you, bye!! 👋

    09/20/2020 17:58

  • Angelia Weldon

    Wilson is about to feel holy terror rain down upon him!!! stupid sob!!

    09/20/2020 17:55

  • Angelia Weldon

    I wonder, after she sees Sebastian again, if that will change?? 🤔

    09/20/2020 17:46

  • Angelia Weldon

    I hope by retrieving their memories, that they can put the past behind them, move forward, and face whatever is coming!!

    09/20/2020 17:32

  • Denzelee Lugg

    This book is good, not a fan of supernatural books but I was great I liked it, keep making great stories

    09/20/2020 17:19

  • Eliška Křístková

    hello, I'm lazy_elizabeth from wattpad and i came for more!😏

    09/20/2020 17:18

  • Araceli Olvera

    I like the idea of your story but I’m confused how Parker’s first mate is still out there. so even if rayne and Parker mate and there bond becomes stronger, will Parker’s first mate still have a strong affect on him?

    09/20/2020 17:05

  • Araceli Olvera

    I liked the story line you had going in the beginning but now it’s just confusing. this is your story and listening to your fans is up to you as you have every right for how the story will go as you see fit.

    09/20/2020 17:02

  • Reader-301027

    great book so far but wish you could pay for all chapters as those coins are expensive but the book is great it has me wanting more for sure so great first book wish I could read it all

    09/20/2020 16:51

  • Denise Whitchurch

    I love this book. I’m so damn torn with Ray and Parker. I love how they would do anything for one another like a mate would. BUT the longing Parker is feeling to find more of his own is hard as well. Findingbout he was an orphan was hard, my hubby was adopted so I thought about that and just like Parker’s chactor he was placed with a family who loved him so much. THEN there is Sebastian, yes he was a d&$k the last time he saw her 5 yrs back and the horrible excuse of a person Gia did a number on him. I am fighting myself to read each chapter because I can feel myself rooting for Parker to find his mate. He is longing for her even if he doesn’t know it.. Well that’s how I see it because it’s brought up so much.I also love their relationship. Parker and Ray have been through so much together and built so much together. BUUUTTT... I still feel myself wanting Ray and Seb to be together because she as well is longing for a Pack and I think it would do her Father some good as well. I stayed up until 4:45 am reading of course I think I read 5 chapter because I wouldn’t put my phone down to finally go to see. I was being stubborn hold my phone close as it would slip out if my hand and hit my chest. I’m lucking I didn’t smack my face with it. I so excited to keep reading I’m on chapter 32 Edmund.

    09/20/2020 15:39

  • Love Ly

    it's very nice to read I love it😘

    09/20/2020 15:20

  • local happy

    Love it!

    09/20/2020 15:15

  • Arlene Macedonio

    i dint cont reading the nice story ihave money tobuy coins how can i read the next chapter in free pls i like the story

    09/20/2020 15:05

  • ellenger

    i love it!

    09/20/2020 14:58

  • Aoko Cantabile

    I found this stories because your editor suggest me from wattpad chat and I'm absolutely happy to read this amazing stories. You such a great author who can makes me imagine how Rayne's feeling and situation, and omegaverse wolf is a likeable theme and you put it in perfect stories.. I will read the next chapter..

    09/20/2020 14:21

  • Cindy Razel Ragasa Urcia

    So, apparently someone gave me a link of this book of your's and I got hook immediately. The flow of the story is well written and almost perfect grammar. I love it. Keep up the good work.

    09/20/2020 13:31

  • Cindy Razel Ragasa Urcia

    Hello North Rose, you are perhaps Jeanie_Pelman_1985 from Wattpad?

    09/20/2020 13:28
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