Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments
Lenitz Forrosuelo Cordova
ok i read it now thank you
09/20/2020 13:01
Sensa Gita
sorry...i found Gia at the party.. :D
09/20/2020 12:22Sensa Gita
chap 2...why Gina doesn't come to the party?
09/20/2020 12:19Nancy Cobbinah-Abban
how do i get free coins
09/20/2020 11:54Nancy Cobbinah-Abban
interesting
09/20/2020 11:42Hannah Denise Barba Llanzana
What The Fuck! I'm enjoying it! How can I still proper attend my Online Class and answer my paper works if it's like this Addicting?🤦♀🤣
09/20/2020 11:16Carmileon
Yeah... Soooo reading all the comments here made me think that I was an idiot. I got a message from Tamar_Betancur_0627 on wattpad, telling me the same, that was an editor and his or her, writer friend were working on a super cool story and he or she liked my taste in books. So I agreed to help, just trying to be nice, and they sent me the first chapters to read the story and then the link. I clicked the link (I still feel dumb) and maybe you know what happened next. Then he or she, offered me the promotional code to have free coins to read all the chapters.... And.... I fell in their trap. I'm so sorry North Rose for have been reading your story and realizing recently that I failed miserably on "stranger danger" messages. I know this is messed up, but I liked your story by the way. You're a good writer. And sorry again.... :(
09/20/2020 08:09Мария Садовникова
this is great,I really liked the story , thank you so much for this book!
09/20/2020 07:22
Izzy
Hi there! just wanna day I love the story so far but someone did message me on wattpad saying you (the editor) and then are working in this story together which I am now starting to see is a lie I do hope you can get that fixed and I will help in anyway.
09/20/2020 07:22Dominic Almοηt
I think it's a great story, and that from the introduction it draws attention. And also the plot, that paranormal air I love
09/20/2020 07:12Marsha Hailey
Didnt like how this story played out.
09/20/2020 06:19Jean Solo
hehe
09/20/2020 05:41Honey Ignacio
Well, it’s about time Sebastion to show your mate your sincerity and regret for hurting her 5 years ago. Make the effort and show her you’re a changed werewolf 😜
09/20/2020 05:29Roselyn Lapez Abacajan
not accessable to read freelym difficult to gain points.. dissapointed.. byt tje story is very good and captivating..
09/20/2020 04:39Roselyn Lapez Abacajan
expensive..
09/20/2020 04:38•Prøud Mudbløød•
I love this book so much! It has really good detail to!
09/20/2020 04:26
Reader-013686
I had some one on Wattpad send me a link too I didn’t think much of it but it was a little weird to me if I could send you the name or something I would
09/20/2020 04:14Malak Yassir
Thanks for the effort in writing the story, I liked it very much❤
09/20/2020 03:41
Grace Goff
it's a good book but the site to advance and read chapters is very difficult to use
09/20/2020 03:21sucharita biswas
After a long time reading a story with romance and werewolves. Really enjoying it.
09/20/2020 03:20Alex Miller
It's a good history, I like
09/20/2020 03:20Grace Goff
this is a very difficult site to use to get to the next chapter. I have been trying for 30 minutes to advance and can't very upsetting.
09/20/2020 03:19Charmaine Bautista
woah
09/20/2020 03:19Angelica Rodriguez
I really like this story!
09/20/2020 02:49Rebecca Farmer
Wow!!!!!! What an amazing story, I could not put it down!!!! I am happy with how it ended!!!!! Can't wait for the next story!!!!
09/20/2020 02:29SuperWeeabo Anime Girl
You have a lot of creative potential! Your writing is incredible. From one writer to another, this book is 10/10 in my books. 👍. Great job.
09/20/2020 02:29Maria Cris Tina
Good story but somehow expensive
09/20/2020 02:17
ESmylie
Great story, but I'm not going to pay to read it on an app where I have to buy coins to read a single chapter. If you ever publish this as a book, I will buy it. I simply do not do in-app purchases. Again great story! But the app sucks. Way too expensive. I'd rather buy a physical or E-book copy from somewhere like Amazon or Barnes And Noble for $8-$10 dollars.
09/20/2020 01:43Ella Harvey
hi i was wanted to ask you if you have Wattpad? because i got a message saying to read and review it and that it was there story?
09/20/2020 01:33Hell_ Angel_69
Oh my god! THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING BOOK IVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE!
09/20/2020 01:28lunar kiss
cmoooon she can’t sever the bond!!! I’ve been waiting for years to them to love each other 😤😤😤
09/20/2020 01:06Angelia Weldon
so, is it Wilson in the shadows then??? poor Rayne, ssssooo much coming at her from all directions!! a darkness coming, her mate, her father....
09/20/2020 00:59
Kyle's Girl
I like the story it is good
09/20/2020 00:45Angelia Weldon
her father is alive!? holy hell!?
09/20/2020 00:45
Seokiejin
it's actually pretty good though! and yeah I kinda want to read more of this! too bad I have to purchase some coins to continue reading it.... by the way, thanks for the recommendation! and keep up the good work cause people need to recognize this book! hwaitingg >♡<)~☆
09/20/2020 00:42ROSA agUIRRE
.. .... .
09/20/2020 00:42Jannell
aww, super sad they didn't end up together:(
09/20/2020 00:26Angelia Weldon
this is getting extremely interesting!! who is watching her from the shadows??? and what's going on with this Morty character 🤔
09/20/2020 00:25Honey Ignacio
oh not Gia, just remembered she’s locked in the dungeon.
09/20/2020 00:23Honey Ignacio
So far, the story is going well. Who would want to hurt Rayne? Could it be Wilson? Gia? 🤔🤔🤔
09/20/2020 00:19
Zoe Harr
its a good story thanks for the editor who reccomended me on wattpad this story
09/19/2020 23:34
Yoona Rara
i think it's a good story
09/19/2020 23:16
Daniela Faraci
I am so stupid, that I spend all the money... the story was not mine- I thought it gave a chance for her and sebastian... my fool
09/19/2020 22:04
Lucillè Rose
great chapter❤️
09/19/2020 20:24
Mary
I knew it
09/19/2020 20:03Salote Malu Taufa
its expensive and there are no daily free coins 😢☹
09/19/2020 20:02Galaxy Starwatcher
This is a really good book I love it I hope she is happy in the end
09/19/2020 19:20
Isabelle Odonzo
as much as i want to continue this story i just dont have coins and no money to buy. this is so sad
09/19/2020 17:56Reader-087468
Wilson why are you not dead 🤬
09/19/2020 17:47Reader-087468
That’s right Rayne 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
09/19/2020 17:40Mary
before going to next chapter I thinks, the men is her father and no clue who the future bartender is. let find out...
09/19/2020 17:36
XxLaylaxX
Hey! I am thay girl from Wattpad! :D I'm re-reading ur story! 😂😅
09/19/2020 17:30Jenn McGrogan
lol I knew that the scar guy was going to be her dad.
09/19/2020 17:25lucy shelby
I’ve had this happen to me too which is weird be I don’t write or read alpha fics but this seems to be a thing now
09/19/2020 16:29Jenn McGrogan
ok so I am seeing ppl questioning why Seb suddenly seeks Ray. here’s the thing, the writer touches upon something many I think ppl are missing. that he has been haunted about the way they left thing. the writer also touches upon how the mating bond works. his wolf has always wanted ray cuz her & her wolf is the other part of his soul. seb even wanted her all those years ago, but he let his mind cloud his judgment, when Gia told him she was pregnant. he also allowed for Gia to manipulate him sadly in an abusive way. all he knew was Gia & he let his idea of what love was blind him. that is obvious with the fact he couldn’t even believe his best friends when they tried to tell him the truth. some ppl can be so blinded by their idea of love(not to mention their lack of self love) & can let someone warp their minds so much that they will close themselves off from the truth. a soul mate is special. they’re one that completes you on a whole diff plane. when they enter your life you do not realize how distorted your thinking may have been. they are what you have been lacking. they make you face yourself. so I believe seb let his mind cloud his judgment & close it off from seeing & truly feeling that connection. Gia tech was a narcissist & messed with his mind. is it weird that it suddenly clicks right away? yes, but I think the writer writing in the fact that the one who got away could have been killed or hurt, put things into fast motion for him. what would take normal ppl years to realize until their paths crossed again, the character was put into a reality that made him face it immediately & seek her.
09/19/2020 16:25Patricia Berry
I love this one I love this book
09/19/2020 15:57Sayani Karmakar
Great work
09/19/2020 15:48cloudy_ mood
this story is soo good it was recommended from the editors and I can tell it was an amazing opening the messages
09/19/2020 15:05Inky the Squid
I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR! But I can't buy the rest of the book but I can tell that this book is going to be AMAZING
09/19/2020 14:49Reader-142116
I don’t have the coins to keep reading. is the story in Wattpad or another reading app?
09/19/2020 14:28
gabbrielle anderson
I am totally enjoying this book
09/19/2020 13:49
Avery Lambertson
Dear North Rose, I just came from Wattpad, from the two people Lawdawn Burkett was also talking about. I hope this doesn't continue for much longer, and as a fellow author it hurts to see people doing things like this. If there is anyway I can offer help, please let me know. I just thought it would be a good idea to let you know about this.
09/19/2020 13:24Danica Mele
This was really incredible, like I can’t even use words to describe how much I love this. Thank you so much to the wonderful person who asked me to read this, I really enjoyed it!
09/19/2020 13:21Darknight Shinto
nvm there was a warning...in the introduction but I didn't read it obviously lol
09/19/2020 12:51
Akiza 10
The story is really good and I really enjoyed reading it
09/19/2020 12:50Darknight Shinto
I was not expecting that kind of ending in chapter 2. There could have least been a 18+ warning when that person sent me the link lol
09/19/2020 12:49
Olivia Brewster
This is a great book I really love it.
09/19/2020 12:24Joanne Ritchie McCormack
would love this book to be on amazon the whole coins purchase can be expensive and as someone who is on the transplant list with no sizable income its frustrating getting into the book then run out of money to buy more coins at least amazon provides a way to let those with low incomes to get books I was enjoying this book but just can't afford to keep up with the coins needed ur a great author and I hope to one day be able to read the rest of ur book
09/19/2020 12:05sakura basin
I whis it was for free because the story is really good but I can't keep reading because it's not free
09/19/2020 12:02Strix 36
VerlaHarnos1983 giving this link.. XD
09/19/2020 10:31
Louise Madalette S. Badal
Omg this the best ever and love it so much
09/19/2020 09:37Jenn McGrogan
I’m confused is this a diff unknown character? I thought the unknown guy, didn’t know her, but she triggered some sort of memory for him. that he didn’t know who he was for 14yrs & what happened to him, but he was drawn to her due to the fact something about her made his mind sorta itch to remember things?
09/19/2020 08:53
-the-mad-hatter-
Hey this is Emma-the-mad-hatter from wattpad
09/19/2020 08:19
CellyCherry02
Hello! I am one of the users you have reached out to me on WP! I want to say that it is a good story so far! And I hope for a great success for you friend!
09/19/2020 08:14Galu Glas
this is not free. it’s a good story but I won’t be returning if I wanted to buy chapters I would buy an entire book for like $20. what a rip off
09/19/2020 07:01Vicky James
thanks for updating love this story can not went to see what happens next amazing writing
09/19/2020 06:47monica mayflower
I really like this
09/19/2020 06:44
Alexis Christian
Its horrible that Im not the only person whos been lied to and marketed this book under false claims. The account that approached me under the disguise of liking my taste in books is a spam account. Its a total BS account, dedicated to marketing this book and app to everyone on wattpad. its basically a marketing tatic to get you to read a couple of chapters, direct you to this app, then have you instrested enough to pay for this book. But why lie? Why have someone honestly looking forward to reviewing something manipulated? I honestly feel dumb asf for believening it.
09/19/2020 06:23Katkat Gregorio
The story is really nice, and in times like this i wish we have this in watty:< no coins here baka naman may gustong mag donate... Joke
09/19/2020 06:06Katkat Gregorio
Send coins:< KIDDIIIIING great story btw
09/19/2020 05:57AngieGalit
It's a very nice book and it's also interesting
09/19/2020 05:19
Welem xd
i like the story it's very interesting sorry for my english i'm spanish hehe the editor of this story contacted me on Wattpad and i really enjoyed reading ^^
09/19/2020 04:37Nameless Soul
Um, I got a message from someone named “vernice_biser_dec29”, who claims to be an editor for the author of this book, asking me if I could provide them with my reviews and opinions of this story. I honestly don’t know if it’s real or not. It appears that this is a frequent occurrence at the moment, and I have no idea what I should do.
09/19/2020 02:47Reader-479643
Good book so far but I’m not going to pay to read it
09/19/2020 01:11
Comes And Goes
"let's go get that bacon" reminded me of the Beggin Strips commercial.
09/19/2020 00:28Abomination demon-feather
omfg i love this so far!!!
09/19/2020 00:26Insatiable Reads
I was contacted by another wattpad user as well TYRA_TOPI_103 to review this story. I don't know if they're trying to pass it off was theirs but either way they claim they know my reading tastes but clearly they don't. This story is for Paranormal readers who love werewolves and sadly that's where I must be honest and say I'm sorry this story is not for me. Congratulations on gaining popularity and I hope you're successful wherever you take your story
09/18/2020 23:53Mary Bordoff
This is bull I won't pay, it's highway robbery
09/18/2020 23:18
douglas davis
the name is literally the returned mate like wtf why make Parker the mate when Sebastian is doing everything he can to show her he’s trying to become a better man and alpha and making him look like a piece of shit fuckin a
09/18/2020 23:12douglas davis
wtf the writer is right making Parker her mate is some bullshit I was paying to read it because I wanted to see them work out it and become a power couple but this shit is so aggravating the story is good I’m not shitting on the writer at all but I just need to vent my thoughts lol
09/18/2020 23:10
Ta_taa
so far so good,, the story line is good.... keep up the good work.
09/18/2020 22:55
Elizabeth Gibbs
this is a very descriptive story. I felt like I was there with the story characters. The emotions and feelings of the lead are explained so welll that we feel like we experienced them. this story has a mature theme and the actions described in this tale are straight forward and bold, with no questioning the emotions that drive the main character. I wanted to like the main character alot because I could also sympathize with her thoughts and actions.
09/18/2020 22:39Dominique Thomas
I'm not ok he decided to make Gia son go away with her! Even if he is not his son he is innocent and he really think he is his father, also, banishing him with his mom will make his life way harder, he is only a small child.
09/18/2020 21:45Sarah Cacic
i’m still team sebastian lowkey
09/18/2020 21:23
bueaty1
its a nice book
09/18/2020 20:54Sarah Cacic
oh gosh a series? i can’t afford that ugh i can barely afford this book
09/18/2020 20:47Alice Gammage Jones
I have enjoyed the storyline of this book, but it truly needs editing. There are too many typos to keep up with. I paid almost $10.00 to read this book, and there is not a single paragraph that does not have typos. Seriously though, fix the book then publish on Amazon or other platforms. It will sell.
09/18/2020 20:46Hope Is strong
i like this story
09/18/2020 20:30
someonepassingby
that is some fine work and great plot by the way....still there people sending messages in Wattpad claiming that they are the editor and the author of this book,and sending the first chap as a sample and asking for review.the link to of this app was sent saying that I could the rest of the chapters here.........though I got tricked I am happy that I landed here,this is a great story. author,just mentioning that this a great book and people are going around saying that this is their work be cautious......
09/18/2020 20:19Emily Jones
This story does have a nice flow and is consistent for the most part. The characters are fleshed out and have different motivations. A nice read.
09/18/2020 19:38
