Her Returned Mate (The Gathering Shadows Series, Book I) Comments

  • Clear Vision

    773_Lanette_Kobza another person tryna claim

    09/04/2020 21:05

  • Reva

    It's amazing, I love it .

    09/04/2020 21:03

  • Tyra Shay

    i have someone on wattpad saying they are an editor for this book and they sent me a chapter of the book and then a link to here, i ended up downloading this app but as i read the comments i see im not the only one going through the same thing. i wanted to let you know, but this is a really good book though!

    09/04/2020 18:07

  • Shadow Lights

    This is a great book! :)

    09/04/2020 16:43

  • Vicky James

    I really love this story thanks so much for updating amazing writing

    09/04/2020 15:46

  • Jen Wedge

    why does everything need to be paid for? there should be an option to wait for it to download or pay to open right away. not everyone can pay for such things

    09/04/2020 15:19

  • Angelica Maria Adames

    i love this book!! ive seen alot of comments on price, just want to say i dont mind the price of the chapters. When a book is as good as yours its worth the wait and price. I have fibro to so i differently understand your situation. So excited to read the next chapter!!

    09/04/2020 15:18

  • Caitlin O'Malley

    hi, just wanted to let you know BonitaTraynorOct10 messaged me on wattpad with a link to your work claiming it as their own and asking for a review

    09/04/2020 15:11

  • Stuff

    I haven't read very much yet, but it's one of the best stories I have read so far

    09/04/2020 14:50

  • Teodora Balan

    Great story

    09/04/2020 11:22

  • Evangelina Lloyd

    Hello I have just had someone message me claiming to be your editor @Patrick-Kasowski-486

    09/04/2020 10:06

  • اديان قحطان علي D

    it’s amazing work I loved it❤️

    09/04/2020 09:25

  • Tanaka Chiro

    it is an amazing story cant wait to know what happens next

    09/04/2020 07:17

  • Rose

    phew! for a second there I thought Parkers mate was going to be Gia with the whole Paris plot ... unless I’ve jumped the gun and she somehow survives.

    09/04/2020 05:38

  • Rose

    phew! for a second I thought Parker and Gia were going to be mates ... with the whole Paris part

    09/04/2020 05:34

  • Grace Fart

    This book is amazing can't wait till there more.

    09/04/2020 05:03

  • Faith Hellman

    *cries in can’t like the chapter* TwT

    09/04/2020 03:36

  • Lynn Nicks

    I thought these books to read were free that's what it said false advertising u have

    09/04/2020 03:25

  • Rebecca Lassaline

    is there a printed book? or is it only online?

    09/04/2020 02:14

  • Blank 00

    It's a really good story😆😆

    09/03/2020 23:56

  • selly kapweya

    yay

    09/03/2020 23:53

  • selly kapweya

    this book excites me....

    09/03/2020 23:50

  • Jessica Shannon

    ok so on in previous chapters rayne was ready to let Parker go once he found his mate but now that she has experienced Sebastians pain she was afraid she miscarried Parker’s child this is confusing. I even went back to read when she got pregnant in the first place didn’t find anything

    09/03/2020 23:29

  • Book_Worm_2_point_0

    I only got to read the first 2 chapters but from what I've read so far this book is about to get interesting. It's sad that I wouldn't be able to continue it though because I can't purchase coins but those were great opening chapters.

    09/03/2020 21:28

  • Rose SB

    Loving the story. Glad or hope Gia is finally out of the picture. Hope Sebastion recovers and get his mate!!

    09/03/2020 20:56

  • Sally Olei

    Waay too expensive

    09/03/2020 20:27

  • Sally Olei

    waay too expensive

    09/03/2020 20:12

  • Sally Olei

    why was my comment deleted?

    09/03/2020 20:11

  • River's _Dream

    This story was send to me over wattpad for reviewing, and im gone say inwasnt disappointed at all, I love this story and from the 3 chapters I've red so far this book is fantastic, the storyline is absolutely amazing, I really enjoy reading this and if anybody ever sais this is bad im gone fight them. straight up punch to the face >:^ Thank you for letting me review this I absolutely love it. and I hope to see more stories the two creator's make. im not disappointed at all

    09/03/2020 20:10

  • Kim Almendarez

    Will the book be uploaded once complete? I want to read it without waiting for chapters. It is such a good book but definitely loosing interest waiting for each chapter

    09/03/2020 20:07

  • Sally Olei

    waaay too expensive. I absolutely regret paying for as many chapters as I have. I have paid more for this average book than I do for my monthly kindle unlimited subscription. this site and authors are a ripoff.

    09/03/2020 19:20

  • Nataliaa_18

    every when does a new chapter get uploaded? I love it!! I need more! lol

    09/03/2020 18:56

  • Sandra Loustaunau

    how often do you update? this odd getting good!

    09/03/2020 18:54

  • Liz Alvarez

    I wish this was on wattpad because I cannot afford to read this book 😔

    09/03/2020 17:55

  • Nurur Rafida Yulia Astanti

    this story is great.. it's been a long time for me to find such a good story where I want to kick and slap someone.. Hahaha.. this story is easy to understand (for me who learn English as a foreign language) plus can stir my emotion.. I swear I really wanna hit someone right now after read these jerk Alphas (both Sebastian and Wilson).. 😑

    09/03/2020 14:01

  • Itz_ MeAlex

    I just started reading today and I love it already... The writer of this book actually messaged me on WattPad and suggested their book and I'm happy that she did... I am actually REALLY underaged for this book but... I write stuff like this on Wattpad as well...

    09/03/2020 12:11

  • Reader-beep-boop-bop

    waah someone just give me their log in i wanna read it all😭😭im broke

    09/03/2020 10:32

  • Biney Ruelas

    for anyone who wants to see Rayne with Sebastian, I want to know why? He only wants her because he found his chosen mate cheating. never did he want her before, he didn't even think of her. if he didn't find Gia cheating he would still be with her. he would have married her. he would of never thought about Rayne. he only wants her because he thinks he should be with her. is that what you guys want for her? to be a second choice. to always be second, because if she ends up with Sebastian that's all she will be. Im not saying Sebastian doesn't deserve a happying ending but he needs to choose who he loves first not because of a bond. if you guys want him with Rayne then you guys might as well say it's okay to let a guy walk all over you and take him back because he got cheated on and egrets not chosen you because you're loyal.. I'm not saying she should end up with Parker but she shouldn't end up with Sebastian either. but I do hope markers mtw is married and in love with some one else

    09/03/2020 09:28

  • Rose SB

    Listen, I like Parker but it’s tilt for him to find his mate and leave Rayne. Though Sebastion had been a full on ass, he and Rayne need to be together!!!

    09/03/2020 08:22

  • Leilani

    On a side note... did anyone else think that Arabella was going to be Rayne’s father’s second chance mate??? Didn’t he feel a pull towards her?

    09/03/2020 07:57

  • Leilani

    I’m a bit conflicted. I like Rayne with Parker but I feel like the mate bond is there for a reason. Just as she declared her love for Parker over her Mate, Sebastian did the same thing... except he did it first. They both didn’t want to believe in the Mate bond. She’s doing to him what he did to her 5 years ago... knowing that Parker May leave her for his Mate. It’s the same yet different. I would love to see redemption for Sebastian and a chance at true love for them. The only way for that to happen would be for Parker to find his mate... I believe in redemption otherwise it’s just all downhill for most of us lol.

    09/03/2020 07:55

  • Soaring_Flash

    I am new to this app can someone explain how the coins work because I want to finish this book. is there a way to earn coins?

    09/03/2020 05:37

  • Tiffany

    love this book ! Love how rayne is a badass

    09/03/2020 02:58

  • Kassandra Joeliz

    also the third POV can get confusing sometimes when the focus changes

    09/03/2020 02:31

  • Kassandra Joeliz

    this story is good but it should have an intro page or something where it explains the wolf packs and history before going straight into a story line. other than that it’s very good

    09/03/2020 02:29

  • Allan Ramonolos

    it's a good story ... interesting but to expensive to read....

    09/03/2020 02:23

  • Taylor Fleming

    Heya, here from Wattpad. A user named EmikoHendley0215 left me this link to this book to read and review. Before starting to read I noticed a lot of comments having the same experience as me. So if this person is not working for you, or you, should also report this user.

    09/03/2020 01:47

  • Amber Nichole

    this is an amazing book I can't stop reading the chapters are a little wordy but overall one of the best books I've read

    09/03/2020 00:53

  • Sleepy_Dragon

    I think this story has potential, there are a few grammar errors that are fixable. The plot is good as well as the twists you add, usually I am not the one who likes twists and turns. But with your story, I accept the twists it makes it more interesting to read. Do keep up with your writing.

    09/03/2020 00:08

  • Max Villasan

    Hi it's me. I love this story you made. Hmmm. keep up the good work. lovelots ♥️

    09/02/2020 23:43

  • Darline Louis

    Parker is very possessive of Rayne from putting out clothes for her and holder her tight when men is around them if it continues that’s going to create disaster in their relationship. Neither Rayne or Sebastion wanted the relationship to begin with what Sebastion did was for Rayne to hate him but his wolf really wanted Rayne, I really hope they get together. From other wolf stories I read the men have to be the one that rejected the mate or death for them to go their separate ways and Sebastion is not going to reject Rayne it is interesting to see how the story unfolds.

    09/02/2020 22:08

  • Alexis Gonzalez

    this is such a good story

    09/02/2020 22:08

  • Ruthie Briggs

    I still can’t see the chapter for a trip down memory lane it’s just the title. is anyone else having this problem? I tried logging back in and out but still cannot see it

    09/02/2020 22:05

  • Kelly Weadick

    supposedly I have free coins? I can access them not find my chapter??????? Not amused.

    09/02/2020 20:27

  • Honey Hale

    love it

    09/02/2020 20:24

  • North Rose 🌹

    I want to address all of you that came here to bring the Wattpad issue to my attention. This has been resolved. I was informed that those people were part of the marketing team seeking readers and reviews for my book. Thank you all for bring it to my attention. Secondly I am changing the cover picture. I was informed that another author on a different platform used it for her book, so out of respect I am changing it. I also added to the blurb of the book so there was a bit more meat to it. Hope you all stick with me, this publishing and having others read my work is new for me. I have been writing short stories for years but never had the courage to share them with anyone before.

    09/02/2020 19:56

  • Elisa Y Raul Carreon

    Is there any more chapters because it can't end like this and I want to read more love it.

    09/02/2020 17:41

  • Little Luna's Safespace

    It's kinda refreshing to me

    09/02/2020 15:06

  • justine louise

    So someone send me a link to read this. I was really overwhelmed when he/she told me he/she thinks I have fantastic taste in books and he/she ask me if I could write a review for this. So me being overwhelmed I replied “yes”. She send me a couple of chapters here, the unpaid chapters to be exact. Those were great chapters btw, to be honest I'm hooked with this story so I'm very upset when I learned that I need to buy coins or in short to pay this story in order to finish it. I was asked by this person to read it whole here in this app and give him/her a review after. So, if you're reading this, really disappointed. It was like I was fooled, nice try btw. Godbless

    09/02/2020 14:56

  • Acadia Green

    I love this so far. The book is well written and very detailed

    09/02/2020 14:29

  • Beta_776

    you gotta love when you're name is Bridget and you see it spelled every other way except the way your name is spelled!!! 😭😭😂😂

    09/02/2020 14:26

  • Lucy Loach

    I think the stranger maybe a relitive like a brother she never new of or her dad

    09/02/2020 13:25

  • Mariah Atwood

    I love the slow burn of this story but I have to admit I hope that she chooses Sebastian they have both changed for the better and I think they would be amazing together a real power couple. she’s beta born if she got with the alpha there would be no stopping them

    09/02/2020 09:32

  • Foxie V

    Ooooohhhhh, this really DO look interesting...

    09/02/2020 07:33

  • Stephanie Marie Overstreet

    @north rose when will you have more of it up. I love this story is their more of it because I'm at the part where he kills Gia and she shots him but I can't get no more after that.

    09/02/2020 07:30

  • Christena Phillips

    I'm so eager to see where this story will lead. not your typical wolf romance that I've read.

    09/02/2020 04:39

  • Wendi Ellison

    I can't wait for the next chapter.

    09/02/2020 01:20

  • Tanya Sterner

    I am absolutely hooked. I can’t wait for the new chapters! I hope to see Parker find his mate and Rayne and Sebastian come together and she will give him a chance once she sees he has changed, but that Rayne and Parker will keep up with their bar helping the supernatural when they are need and that Sebastian steps up to help and open up more about the world he didn’t know existed.

    09/02/2020 00:58

  • Vanaheim

    2 people by the users 824_Cathi_Kissam and porsha-moranda-sep05 have been posing as editors for this story and asking for feedback through people's dms on Wattpad. Were not able to provide proof like a screenshot of the edit page on this app with this story to prove they are the editors. Thought I'd inform you as they are using feedback off from others about this story for their own benefit. I wrote a comment earlier, but it didn't post.

    09/01/2020 22:39

  • Kiara Garcia

    Hi. I came here from Wattpad cuz I think users on that app are trying to steal your book, claiming they are 'editors' for this book.

    09/01/2020 21:13

  • Nicole Evans

    Awesome book! When can we expect the next chapter!

    09/01/2020 21:06

  • Vicky James

    really love this story thanks so much letting me read it I do hope it's a happy ending

    09/01/2020 20:23

  • North Rose 🌹

    Ok it has come to my attention that there are a few writers on Wattpad that are claiming my book is theirs. This is not true at all. The cover photo I found online, should I use a different one? I have sent an email to AnyStoris informing them of what is going on with screen shots of the comments from the people who told me what was going on. This disturbs me greatly, I spend my time creating my story, characters, and plot twist. Only to have this happen. All of what you read is straight from my creative vision. If names of my characters are similar to other books, that does happen with names. This news really upsets me.

    09/01/2020 19:10

  • Vicky James

    o my got this story is Amazing

    09/01/2020 19:09

  • Vanaheim

    Hello just so you should know I am here because I'd like to let the author know something important. I was dmed by the users porsha-moranda-sep05 and 846_Cathi_Kissam on wattpad and they said they are editors for this story and would like feedback. I was given only a few paragraphs from the first chapter and was told the rest could be read on this app. I had doubts this was their story because of how they approached me as if I was one of their readers and I see someone else here mentioned being dmed on wattpad here too. I asked one of them for a screenshot of the page where they can edit stories on this app as proof that this is their story or else I would not be providing feedback. They responded with "Thank you very much! It helps a lot!" which I find very strange. I just thought I'd let the author of this story be aware of this and I don't know if any other people are involved in this on wattpad.

    09/01/2020 17:54

  • Glory Godwin

    good read so far !! just getting started however paying for a book is one thing same as store but when they promise bonus coins and u wait weeks or never get them smh

    09/01/2020 16:25

  • Adrian Pawar

    can you please explain who's mate is who cause it's confusing....

    09/01/2020 16:21

  • cielcat

    Will you publish this in to a paper book after your done writing it? If so i would buy the book. But if you don't think you can or don't want to i understand I'll be sad but it's understandable.

    09/01/2020 14:16

  • Lucy Loach

    Love the first chapter carnt wait to see what happens next

    09/01/2020 13:50

  • Vicky James

    amazing story can not stop reading fantastic writing

    09/01/2020 11:40

  • Ruthie Briggs

    a trip down memory lane for some reason just the title is showing up and then it goes blank :(

    09/01/2020 10:47

  • Mary Brandenburg

    SPOILER ALERT!!!!!!!! After all that I can’t believe you killed him off. predictable but still

    09/01/2020 07:53

  • mladwaj

    how often does she update? I found another book that I like, just to learn that it’s unfinished as well.. this is torture ...

    09/01/2020 06:27

  • Kim Almendarez

    OMG HE CANT DIE😭😩

    09/01/2020 05:39

  • Reader-671383

    when i realized this was the last chapter i could read until it was updated my heart just about shattered omg

    09/01/2020 04:11

  • Reader-039177

    I don’t know what I want to see... ugh!!! live this story.

    09/01/2020 03:33

  • Sandie Rizzo-Link

    noooo Sebastian can’t die.

    09/01/2020 02:03

  • colie37

    yesssss thank goodness. wonder if Rayne will feel the pain of her mate being shot.

    09/01/2020 01:29

  • Jessica Fawn Anderson

    North Rose you are doing awesome i would love to see Sebbie and Rayne tograther and parker with his mate the goddess has her reasons for sticking them togeather and they would be more powerful

    08/31/2020 22:22

  • Jessica Fawn Anderson

    i love the story i just hate the waiting for the next one but i understand

    08/31/2020 22:11

  • Roxana Hernandez Garcia

    the hell, what's the other demons obsession with Morty sis? he watched from distant and became obsessed? weird, like the drama tho. I think the ex alpha is trying to rid of her something about what she witnessed maybe?

    08/31/2020 20:50

  • Roxana Hernandez Garcia

    I think he should find the boys boy's biological father, see if he will take him. before he decides to keep him, he was not born of alpha blood isn't that a big thing in this world? How can he be heir to the pack? just curious poor kid

    08/31/2020 17:13

  • Justina Eappen

    In the last line of 5th paragraph you have gone from 3rd person's view to Rayne's point of view

    08/31/2020 16:35

  • Roxana Hernandez Garcia

    I love this story so far! I'm interested in this drifter... who is he to Rayne. could it be her father??

    08/31/2020 16:34

  • Adrian Pawar

    adrienna is close to my name

    08/31/2020 16:12

  • Juleen Lees

    Your story line is pretty good with twists and turns. I am not being critical of your story or you directly, yet...you really need to proof your writing from spelling and grammar. Bad tense of words and spelling detract from the story especially when having to go back and reread the sentence because of tense of the word. I am enjoying your story though.

    08/31/2020 15:57

  • Kazz Thurgood

    just find this story through face book - started to get hooked but it looks like it will be a very expensive read - so with a sad heart I will be deleting - good luck with your writing and your health

    08/31/2020 12:22

  • cherelly !

    just started the story, have managed to read the first 4 chapters bit didn't have enough coins for the 5th one yet. it starts off really good and is written well, personally a story has to pull me in ideally within the first chapter and this certainly did. This story does actually make me want to purchase more coins so I can see what happenes with rayne. The plot so far is good and all the characters are interesting in their own way. Very well written 😊 hopefully I can continue and find out what happens!

    08/31/2020 09:00

  • Lizzy-Timpy

    I definitely love the way the story is written. All the little details bring the story to life. I like the concept, just don't know if it is my cup of tea. Guess I will find out if I keep on reading...

    08/31/2020 08:33

  • Lizzy-Timpy

    Like the way the story is written. All the little details bring the story alive. I definitely like the concept, but am not sure if is nu cup of tea. I guess I will find out if I keep on reading...

    08/31/2020 08:30
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