Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • Adelecia Garfias

    The plot isn’t sappy and I love the descriptions in this story so well written.

    07/20/2020 06:15
  • Adelecia Garfias

    I also came though a dm and I got to say it’s really good. The plot has structure and the characters are funny and interesting. I can’t wait to read more!

    07/20/2020 06:12
  • irene

    is there any way to continue reading the book without buying coins?

    07/20/2020 06:05
  • irene

    I was messaged by the author(?) and told to read and give a review. My Reviewβ€”> I absolutely love this book! I haven’t found anything good to read lately and this is amazing.

    07/20/2020 06:05
  • Saniya Idrisi

    the moment I read the first paragraph, immediately got the idea how well written and catchy this book is, thanku so much for asking me to review this art, though I never really read any werewolf story before as it's actually my first time reading a werewolf book and I'm already loving it, I'm actually no one to review it the book is just too perfect for me or any other reader, each and every word, the paragraphs, the grammar as well as the plot and the creativity inside it is on point and I'm thankful that you recommended this to me love, you and your friend did a great job, keep doing it<3

    07/20/2020 06:02
  • Astrid Kanbara

    well, personally idont read werewolf story.....But it's plot and storyline is interesting and capture my atention in a few sentence. over all its catchy to read. <(β€’ α΄—β€’)>

    07/20/2020 06:02
  • @PatixaiiAniahsLuna

    Thanks for the recommendation, Author and editor. I really love it. thanks for the opportunity to read this.😊

    07/20/2020 05:39
  • Morasi Gretel Lucy Matthew

    From the start I got hooked, there's so much description and action right from the beginning which is what got my undying attention. I'm amazed how the characters seemed so real and everything else is just captivating. I'm sure no one would pass up the opportunity to read this mind blowing story. can't wait to read more but unfortunately, I need coins to unlock rest of the chapters. I'll get on with earning coins so I could read more...

    07/20/2020 05:13
  • Holly Mcginnis

    I am glad that this story was suggested to me. it was really good. I loved how it wasnt like how most of these other stories go. You dont fall in love with the main guy right away. In fact you hate him for a while. I thought this was very well written. You wrote in a way that had me imagining I was there and could bring the story to life in my mind. That made it even better. Thank you for sharing!

    07/20/2020 05:06
  • keyanna b

    I received a message on wappad from the editor and they sent me a sample and now I'm hear really engrossed in this book. wish I could read it all night and day.

    07/20/2020 05:01
  • Nelly LS

    you should not Mop around for this toxic male bitch

    07/20/2020 04:56
  • Trina Fleming

    I also found this author on Wattpad and they gave me the link to this site to read their awesome book. Thank you for taking the time to send me a preview of your book, it has me hooked 😍😍😍

    07/20/2020 04:40
  • Lyn Hianh

    came here from wattpad, editor recommended it from me

    07/20/2020 04:02
  • noturaveragegoldfish

    I gotta be honest I wasn’t expecting much when I was first recommended this story, but I was pleasantly surprised just within the prologue. The characters are intriguing, the world building is interesting and I genuinely craved more after reading each chapter. I must say I was a little peeved I couldn’t go on and read ahead after the first 6 chapters since I’m new to the app and have no coins! But I’m glad I read what I did. I will have to come back once I’m paid to continue on.

    07/20/2020 03:59
  • wxngcami

    I came here through a dm from wattpad, like many others, and I can tell that with the few chapters I have read I like it a lot so far, it really grabbed my attention! πŸ’•

    07/20/2020 03:57
  • tulipsandlily

    I like reading this story. The editor recommended it to me, and sent me a sample and I liked it so I said I will continue reading it because it is a good story and it caught my attention.😊

    07/20/2020 03:33
  • Mytshua Chang

    Just started reading the first sentence of the prologue and am hooked already!

    07/20/2020 03:18
  • Karlascape

    wow, the author asked me on wattpad what's my opinion about the book i must say i'm super picky when it comes to books specially on grammars and style of writing. my expectations were so high that after so many books a read 10/50 was the books who only reached my expectations. and now i think i have a new one which is this! babe this book is amazing! fight me if you don't agree, this book doesn't need changes but needs more support! it's perfect, more power on this book!! lovelots! 🀍🀍

    07/20/2020 02:26
  • Mars

    I found this book through someone who recommended it to me. It has an amazing beginning. I’m going to read more of it tomorrow

    07/20/2020 02:12
  • MonicaX27

    Amazing plot & very well written.

    07/20/2020 02:01
  • Paige Marie Pangrazio

    This book is amazing! I highly recommend it. It's definitely one of those books that keeps you on the edge of your seat

    07/20/2020 01:52
  • __itzrose

    I found this book through the author who had Messaged me through wattpad and i couldn’t be more glad about it. I just started reading it but i can already tell i will definitely enjoy it.

    07/20/2020 01:50
  • Reader-011331

    this chapter is really good

    07/20/2020 01:30
  • TElise48

    So far I am enjoying this story from the chapters read so far. I like the different species of supernatural characters coming together to create this story. Looking forward to see the development of the main character.

    07/20/2020 01:29
  • Mjoy Aurillas

    I just finished reading the prologue and I'm already in love with the book. The author is good. I'd totally read every book they will write. Keep up the good work and thanks for recommending this lovely book to me.

    07/20/2020 01:20
  • Chloe Grennan

    Would prefer to pay for this on Patreon, but I did pay to read it all as it was a very well written story. Will there be a second book with their relationship development?

    07/20/2020 00:42
  • Mayar Mamdouh

    I'm so happy to read this story it's so beautiful keep going β™₯

    07/19/2020 23:52
  • Meliah-Melvinazia Howell

    I love it,great story

    07/19/2020 23:48
  • Throwaway_2019

    I want to say this book is amazing. I’m able to picture everything with the incredibly descriptive words. And I think it’s wonderful, I highly recommend it being read. -Throwaway_2019

    07/19/2020 23:36
  • Sadia Sultana

    wow I have no words, from the beginning I was taking into another world and loved every second of it, the storyline and plot is amazing and I hope there’s going to be another book because I would live to read more

    07/19/2020 22:44
  • Captain Sai

    An editor for this story had recommended it to me on Wattpad and I see they were right when they claimed this was rated highly. The writing flows very well and is action-packed. I binge-read the free chapters which is something that doesn't happen often for me, so yes, it definitely hooked me in fast! Too bad I'm broke and can't unlock the rest of the chapters to see how the characters develop. The only bit of criticism(?) I can give is to not make references to pop-culture because (in my opinion) it can make the writing sound dated as time passes (examples here include: Buzzfeed Unsolved, (even though I love them) and Bodak Yellow). Regardless, it's a pretty fun read! I like that it jumps right into the action instead of dumping a load of info onto the reader (which can get tiring real fast). I would definitely continue if I could but as I said, I'm poor lmao.

    07/19/2020 22:21
  • Mona Abugosh

    Oh boy indeed!,😁

    07/19/2020 22:15
  • Maya Vlogs

    Ian! Oh my god it was funny how he was pretending to be Kane.

    07/19/2020 21:58
  • Lil' Sparky Animates

    When the author recommended this to me I was unsure but I love how well told the story is! I was at the end of the free chapters before I knew it, loving every word I read. I felt like the characters were real people and not just fiction

    07/19/2020 21:30
  • Allie

    Is this story on Wattpad too

    07/19/2020 21:27
  • Shareen Moody

    Im enjoying the story keep up great work

    07/19/2020 21:10
  • FandomTrash

    I’m only a few chapters in and I’m already obsessed. I can’t wait to continue reading!

    07/19/2020 21:08
  • idon'tcare 122

    in my dad's I was recommended this book, and I'm do glad I checked this outπŸ‘πŸΎ

    07/19/2020 20:40
  • GalaxyToastUwU

    I was asked to review this by the editor, this has an amazing plot and I'm happy to say, this is an amazing story so far. :)

    07/19/2020 20:36
  • Rebecca Mhoon

    I like this book already

    07/19/2020 20:34
  • Reader-055296

    dats funny like mh could never I would’ve shacked him

    07/19/2020 20:33
  • Scxrlett _gacha

    This is one brilliant piece of writing! Having come from wattpad and sent a part of the first chapter, I am inticed. Being a person who only reads in depth and interesting storys (basically a picky reader) this is brilliant. The one thing I would say is that if you could publish it to wattpad, that might be easier for people to read your fantastic books :) -From Thewhitefoxstar5 (from wattpad)

    07/19/2020 20:27
  • Reader-336785

    love this book!! just came from wattpad it’s really good

    07/19/2020 20:25
  • Mbali Sidumo

    Hi! So I was asked to check out the story and give some feedback and honestly, I’m loving it! The story is well developed with an interesting plot, it’s well written, which I think is important so that the readers can tell what is actually taking place. I’m impressed and captivated, this story gets my vote!πŸ˜€

    07/19/2020 20:08
  • Nova Stargazer

    I’ve only read the prologue and a few pages but I can honestly tell this is going to turn out a great book! I’m not exactly into paranormal things but this makes me very intrigued, on how the story will continue!

    07/19/2020 20:05
  • Ana Ali

    okay I have just read the prologue and chapter 1 might I commend the grammatical structuring if the story and the english wow...also great story line building up...had to install the app but that is totally okay. I am liking this book so far. Kane would need an ass whopping though.

    07/19/2020 20:04
  • Robbie

    This story took me by surprise as someone who doesn't dabble in any other genres but contemporary! The plot had me hooked, the pacing was perfect to keep you entertained all joined by good writing! All around very enjoyable!

    07/19/2020 19:21
  • Anshika Sharma

    This story is by far the best paranormal stories I have ever read. The story line and everything is just so amazing! Thanks to the writer for recommending me this story. I really loved it!!!!

    07/19/2020 19:12
  • aquamarinegrey

    Like a lot of the readers here, I was asked to go check this book out by the editor and I honestly am interested in the storyline. Judging by the first 7 pages alone I can already tell this isn’t your average werewolf story. Sadly I can’t continue to read this book myself because there is a price for the next chapters, But for any one willing to pay for a nice reading experience this is the book for you.

    07/19/2020 18:53
  • Jollyrancher’s fame Life

    I found out about this book on Wattpad the writer asked if I wanted samples and I said yes I read them and instantly knew that this was going to be an amazing book! Can’t wait to read more!❀️

    07/19/2020 18:43
  • Mona Abugosh

    why aren't you defending your self,God she's driving me nuts

    07/19/2020 18:15
  • Alaa Saad

    In fact, I expected him to appear (kane) 😹❀

    07/19/2020 17:47
  • Leanne Cherie Thomas

    I read the whole book and it was amazing I just loved everything about the characters and all.

    07/19/2020 17:04
  • Mona Abugosh

    come on girl stand up for urself, don't let them get you

    07/19/2020 16:56
  • ledect

    I got asked in WP to read this story and for what I see, I'm not the only one. This book is really good and so well written, i'd like to keep reading but unfortunately I don't have the money to pay for it.

    07/19/2020 15:58
  • J.zainabx X

    yeah can’t wait I acc got someone that told me about it on Wattpad

    07/19/2020 15:48
  • Daniella Mattis

    I really enjoyed this book! story flows well/ characters are detailed and interact well

    07/19/2020 15:09
  • Kajol Ramlakhan

    So happy the author recommended this story to me! It's refreshing having a female character that doesn't want to stick with being looked down on. This book is gripping from the start. I'm sure most of us will agree that finding a werewolf book that's entertaining as this is hard, especially when you've read so many werewolf books on WP. I already know from reading a few chapters now this will be one of my favourite werewolf books.

    07/19/2020 14:58
  • sanna_ssi

    the author also reached out to me...and honestly speaking ones he sent me the sample chapters i read it right away and got hooked already

    07/19/2020 13:52
  • Daniela AtaΓ­de

    I'm so glad your friend contact me on Wattpad, this is an amazing story. Not your usual clichΓ©, great plot. And you just breeze right through it because you realize you're at the end. Such a fantastic story. You have talent so keep on!!!

    07/19/2020 13:41
  • Esther Omojola

    Im happy her editor recommended this book. Just a few chapters on wattpad and Im in love already

    07/19/2020 13:28
  • oyinkansola ilori

    I'm so loving this bookπŸ˜„

    07/19/2020 13:11
  • Fariya Mir Ali

    I was reached out for a genuine review and gosh this is actually good.. it keeps getting interesting.. and I love how it is written clearly and in distinct words no beating around the bush.. glad you reached out.. iam enjoying it, I hope the get unlocked quickly.. I hate waiting.. that too when the plot is good.. all in all a good bookπŸ‘πŸ‘ .. good efforts πŸ‘

    07/19/2020 11:14
  • Brittneyjade Mernik

    I’ve come across this book before on Wattpad, I love the authors take on the whole β€˜werewolf mate’ theme within this book because after awhile every story I have come across seems to be regurgitating the same plot. Definitely a good read.

    07/19/2020 11:05
  • Sadaf Khan

    Wow man I must say you have amazing writting skills :):)

    07/19/2020 09:38
  • Ramsha Ejaz

    Its really an awsome story with the best plot and best story line

    07/19/2020 09:33
  • Nemo

    what an intresting world!! So many different species...not only werewolves, but also a wizard, troll! (where did this idea come from?) even a faerie - I really like faeries - :). Ember isn't a simple chatacter, under this mask she wears around others in school, there is very complicated person, who is caring, strong and mysterious - I can't wait what she will do next, she is unpredictable in a good sense. Every chapter connects nicely with the rest, the tension is building up, the plot gets more and more suprising and absorbing. Very riviting book.

    07/19/2020 09:22
  • Keyloblu

    Came across this book through a message on Wattpad. Just started this book, but it’s already has me hooked. Excited to finish this book!

    07/19/2020 08:31
  • Amina bi

    a different kind of book, the flow is good although there are the odd bit where I thought I'd skipped something. not keen on this app though and its it's far more expensive then what wattpad would be ... everyone has there own preference, but for those unable to is a shame. another thing is no one actually responds to the messages . you have to have coins for EVERY new chapter

    07/19/2020 08:25
  • Rsameena

    I could just read the first feww chaps because I can't pay for the coins. But I literally loved reading it😍😍😍

    07/19/2020 08:16
  • Weirdo-Maddy

    This book is so good and I’m so glad I read it!

    07/19/2020 07:47
  • Asma Khan

    Hello! I came here from wattpad. First off, I really appreciate the efforts of people trying to find people and personally dm them in a very decent way to review their book. love how friends are supporting one another. I've read just 3 chapters. It looks interesting. I won't say that I instantly fell in love with it. It takes time for me to really like a book. But whenever I finish reading a book, I always write a message to the author about how I think the story was etc. So, when I finish reading this book, I'll write a note on how I think the story was. And, I think this story should be on wattpad too but I guess the story got removed or something. Try to post it again because wattpad is what I use the most. Thank you for recommending this story. I will surely read it πŸ˜€

    07/19/2020 07:37
  • mitchell hernandez

    I've read books about rejection but so far I like the plot of Alpha Kane. It is different and it is very engaging. I really like it, would totally recommend it.

    07/19/2020 07:27
  • Danis Greathouse

    funny*

    07/19/2020 07:20
  • Danis Greathouse

    this is too funnu

    07/19/2020 07:20
  • Swathi Gudapati

    The book is really interesting with many unexpected events. I like the descriptive language at the beginning of the chapters. but unfortunately I don't have any coins to continue reading the book πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    07/19/2020 07:04
  • Sk Makeup

    I really like the story line ... ❀

    07/19/2020 06:15
  • Nik Nur Amanina

    wow, this story is very interesting and i really enjoy myself reading it. good job writer ❀️

    07/19/2020 05:35
  • TheOdd LittleCreator

    got to say that this is enjoyable- (got here through wattpad- I'm the TheUnknownCreator667 if anyone asks-)

    07/19/2020 05:03
  • TheOdd LittleCreator

    got here through wattpad- got to say it's enjoyable!

    07/19/2020 05:02
  • Danielle Hughes

    someone dmed me on wattpad saying they were an editor, asking me to review their book. they used your prologue to show me their first few chapters. they then gave me a link to this app and your book. the user that dmed me has a crazy username. wanted to make sure you’re aware of this, kinda sketchy

    07/19/2020 04:42
  • Nidhi Pabari

    wow man..

    07/19/2020 04:29
  • Sara Malick

    I just don't have words honest to God the few chapters I read were awesome they literally had me at the edge of my seat.... the way the characters were described in detail the way the scene was laid out and the character development as the story progressed was something I have seen except in already published authors books. definitely a reccomend. dude new York times publish this book already!!!! but honest to God thanks for reaching out dude it was a pleasure reading. i'd be waiting for the hardcopy anytime soon now!!! hopefully at my nearest book store thoπŸ˜πŸ˜„πŸ€©

    07/19/2020 04:21
  • Salma Salaat

    This is honestly so captivating. The plot is fantastic, it will have you constantly on your toes with the twist and turns. would defo recommend to ##paranormal and #warewolf fans.

    07/19/2020 04:18
  • Miranda Laabs

    the author contacted me on Wattpad a few minutes ago and it is great

    07/19/2020 03:44
  • Seven Enchanted crystals

    Oooh i actually enjoy it!!!

    07/19/2020 02:52
  • π•ͺ𝕖a𝕙❀️

    this app is so different from Wattpad.....I feel out of place

    07/19/2020 02:35
  • π•ͺ𝕖a𝕙❀️

    did this bitch just tell her to kneel?

    07/19/2020 02:32
  • Rituparna Adhikari

    The couple of chapters that is available is very detailed and keeps you hooked with the plot. The characters so far are strong and the flow is really good. some lines are REAL good

    07/19/2020 02:14
  • Christine Yonah

    I’m shook this is the first book I’ve read that takes place in my hometown Seattle πŸ₯Ί

    07/19/2020 02:07
  • claire reed

    this is an amazing story. it definitely pulls you in from the first chapter, well done author.

    07/19/2020 02:06
  • Normandy Boatwright

    Have read a few chapters so far. I'm very curious as to where the author is going with the werewolf/far story line. Could be very interesting!

    07/19/2020 01:00
  • Any Ebrahim

    I love it

    07/19/2020 00:19
  • Any Ebrahim

    i found out this book because of the author, but luckily I really love it,I really the the flow of the story,thank you for ur recommendation I love it

    07/18/2020 23:57
  • Sondrea Perry

    This book is amazing!

    07/18/2020 23:19
  • Wow_rin Ep

    dude I love

    07/18/2020 23:09
  • Kerry Tresise

    I really enjoyed this book, it was very well constructed. It was a refreshing take on a typical werewolf story (which I wouldn't normally read). The only downside is probably not the author's fault; the amount of coins needed for each chapter varied so I couldn't read the last 2 chapters after paying to read the rest of the story which was a little disappointing. I found very little mistakes in this story and every chapter added to the storyline and meant something. I completely recommend. The only improvement I do have is that if you rewrite at any point, make sure it is clear when there are flashbacks or memories. There were some very confusing moments when reading this but I did understand eventually. I know how difficult it is to complete a story though and do not shame the author for anything (and I never would).

    07/18/2020 22:52
  • Bangtan's Artist

    I love it!

    07/18/2020 22:45
  • Christina Ma

    I, like many others, was messaged on Wattpad by the editor asking if I could review this book. The story is very detailed, with a plot that is unique. The protagonist is individual in her personality and is easy to relate to. Not only was I intrigued by the prologue, but from the first few chapters I quickly became immersed in the story. There is a variety of humour and seriousness, as well as a hint of suspense in each chapter. The fact that the editor who reached out to me was polite, respectful and friendly gave me the impression that this book was written and edited by genuine people, which made me even more interested in reading their work. Well done to the people who have worked on this story, I have the upmost respect for you all. Thank you for your kind words and for asking me to give my opinion on your work.

    07/18/2020 22:35
  • Kurston Schroeder

    this book is well written. I'm confused as of to why it's not up on wattpad. the story just... flows. it's really enjoyable and I've only read a little but of it so far. well done

    07/18/2020 22:16