Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
fallen_girl
The plot is good... The writing style is unique... No grammatical mistakes ..... I think the book is fantastic!!!
07/12/2020 18:27fallen_girl
The plot is captivating and the writing style is perfect... The book is fantastic!!!
07/12/2020 18:22Ineffable
I came here cause of recommendation on Wattpadπ this is a great story I can already tell
07/12/2020 18:20Nikki Reese 101
this is amazing
07/12/2020 18:18Darkempress97
Hey to all the readers! Even I was contacted by the writer as well from Wattpad too. In my opinion I only read a few chapters so far, but Iβm glad that I took this opportunity because I love how this story is written very well. I have read many werewolves stories before but this one has succeed my expectations and took a different approach. Canβt wait to read more!!!π€©π Thank you for asking me to read your story !!
07/12/2020 18:16Ash Mash
itβs really a good book i wonβt lie, it isnβt in my usual genre but the way itβs written and the plot are wonderful, i love how itβs easy to read and the only thing i would really say is in the first few lines it says β i wouldβve done plastic surgeryβ i really think itβs β i wouldβve gotten plastic surgery β tho iβm not a grammar guru
07/12/2020 17:19abril delfino
Hey, i was asked to read this story and give my opinion about it. You can read the review in this link: https://my.w.tt/jHIDjAA837 I'm sending all the love from Argentina. Abril Delfino
07/12/2020 17:17Taylor Hays-watts
I really like this story
07/12/2020 17:14Mary-Ellen Gomez
Loving it so far. Can't wait.
07/12/2020 17:01abby81
I found out this book because the writer recommend. I love the storyline! It's interesting! Keep going and have a nice day <3
07/12/2020 16:00Chocopunch127
So the only thing I'm upset about is that I have to pay to read out the book and it's so amazing that it hurts my heartπ
07/12/2020 15:54Rania Saad
The author's way of of writing is really good but it made the scenes seems vague with barely any information of the happening and oftenly being lost in the character's though but overall the plot got 3.85β/5β from me if I'm being honest. Although I quite admire the way the emotional conflict of the MC was put in. Also there are no noticeable mistakes or whatnot.
07/12/2020 14:29Tiajuwonn Watson
The way its written is just amazing ππ½ππ½ππ½
07/12/2020 14:29Tiajuwonn Watson
I'm glad the writer recommended ππ½ππ½ππ½
07/12/2020 14:28α΄α΄ΚΙͺ Κα΄κ±α΄
EMERGENCY, HOW DO YOU GET MORE COINS,CAUSE I NEED TO FINISH THE BOOK.
07/12/2020 14:04α΄α΄ΚΙͺ Κα΄κ±α΄
I'm loving this book so much, thanks for dming meπ€©π€©
07/12/2020 13:53Aisha xu
Interesting!! I found this story throug the editor in another app, good read!!
07/12/2020 13:51areum kim
i start to get obsessed with this story
07/12/2020 13:35Madeline DeRousse
I was recommended to read this book by the editor! At first, I had to admit I was a bit skeptical as werewolf mate stories aren't usually what I gravitate towards, but this was very enjoyable to read! You can really connect with the characters and the plot goes beyond just the typical heated werewolf romance. The way its written pulls you in, and its it's almost as if you're listening to a friend tell you a story. It's amazing!
07/12/2020 13:29Burrito
Someone recommend this to me on Wattpad and I read a few chapters already and I really like it.
07/12/2020 12:48123miss321
the writer recommended me this book on wattpad and im glad i checked this baby out. i have only read the free chaps and the last chap and from what i read its quite good, the flow, the writing style all r in my favour i didnt expect that, its a story that keeps you engrossed, so definitely gonna recommend it .im broke so i wont be able to read all the chaps but i will come back when i have some coins i wish i can get them so as possible but *sigh* I'll have to w8. Give it a shot i sure most of u wont regret it.
07/12/2020 12:20πur fave humanπ
I love this book and Iβm glad the author recommended it to me on WP but I canβt carry on reading as I donβt have any coins :(
07/12/2020 12:12Kira Skeet
I love the plot of this book. it pulls you in so you have to read more.
07/12/2020 11:58Jen Biddy
I find this quite interesting. Iβm so happy the author contacted me and recommended this
07/12/2020 10:19Weeb Potato
Hi there! I'm so glad you recommended this to me, It's really creative, I love it! I can tell you're going to go far writing books :)
07/12/2020 10:18Lavier_β€
Am really happy that the writer recommended this book for me.. I only started reading and it amazing .am really picki with books but i love this already. thank u Eugenieπ
07/12/2020 10:16Aimen_334
i got recommended this book by the author and im so happy she sent me the links to this book coz this book is really well written and soo intresting i just can't stop reading it
07/12/2020 09:15White Angel
This is amazing!!! I love it!!!
07/12/2020 07:58Zaima Jarnaz Suzana
thank you for recommending this story to me on wattpad. I really loved how you focus on one particular aspect per chapter and end the chapter in a way that left me wanting to read the next chapter eagerly. youβve done a great job! looking forward to read more of your stories.
07/12/2020 06:45Zaima Jarnaz Suzana
thank you for recommending this story to me on wattpad. i loved how you focus on one particular aspect per chapter and end the chapter in a way which leaves me wanting to read the next chapter eagerly. Youβve done a great job! looking forward to read more of your storiesβ€οΈ
07/12/2020 06:40Sam Montes
Im really disappointed I couldnβt read the whole book
07/12/2020 06:05Sam Montes
Well, I really like it! I really canβt give you my final review because I thought it was gonna be the whole book, I didnβt know I had to pay for the chapters because when I usually review they give me the whole book. The prolouge was the one that captivated me the most. The world with werewolves not just that but also mythological creatures fascinates me a lot. I really applaud the female protagonist for facing rejection not in wallows but she instead she express anger. I love how you written the characters emotions and how they feel it, Either with theyβre words or actions. The story and plot is captivating itself youβd want to read it chapters after chapters I give it a 4/5 stars I hope I could read the whole book someday.
07/12/2020 06:02Zara_Philz
I love the entrance of the story and I find the plot of the story to be very fascinating. I also love the use of words there. English is not my first language so you can sense my elation here. I love that the female protagonist here isn't portrayed like the many stereotypical weak omega I usually find in stories. She was put down but she successfully managed to mold herself and seal her cracks. I love that she has a little bit of fire which I'd love to see more of. Especially when dealing with her bullies. Kane to me seem like one of those possessive assholes who can't get a way around their feelings. He doesn't want her but the bond forces him to acknowledge her and he gets kind of angry or really angry to see her conversing with other males. Am only 3Chapters in but I can absolutely say this is amazing. I love the flow of the story. It doesn't feel rushed and is going at its on pace. I love how you introduced both main leads, it gave me an insight to what both characters are like. Mostly I'm glad you referred me your book. This is going to be really entertaining.
07/12/2020 05:41Marie Luna
I love the flow.
07/12/2020 04:54Kyuuri Kyuuri
This is a well written story and Iβm so glad that the writer recommended it to me...
07/12/2020 01:08KadiaK. Taylor
Got recommended this book on WattPad and i am enjoying it so far.
07/12/2020 00:53Radioactive Wendigo
The way the prologue started was a normally overused trope, but I think with the way the first chapter was written really helped set it apart from most stories and keep the readers coming back. By using that prologue, the story would have a wider audience compared to an original one. I love the originality and the way you introduced characters and different settings flowed beautifully. I love the fact different myths were included, I found them interesting to read about. The author took a familiar setup and turned it into a beautiful piece of writing unlike the others! Iβve loved what Iβve read so far!
07/12/2020 00:45Joseyππ
just read the prologue and got hooked.... I'm loving what I'm reading keep up the good workβ€
07/11/2020 23:08Cyndylus Lart
loved it -futureastronauthere from Wattpad
07/11/2020 23:06Julia Seneadza
I'm really glad the author recommended this book.I mean,the story is so interesting. Good job π
07/11/2020 21:53Karen Dela rosa
Im loving this book!!!!!
07/11/2020 21:17Destatonni Macaroni
I was recommended this story via Wattpad and was sent sample chapters they really piqued my interest so I look forward to reading the rest of the story ππ
07/11/2020 21:02Damilola Babatunde
I love the twists
07/11/2020 20:07Morgan
Love it
07/11/2020 19:07TristeMietitore
Usually whenever I read a book about werewolves or anything supernatural the story is usually really cliche, so when the editor recommended me βAlpha Kaneβ on Wattpad I wasnβt sure if I would actually enjoy reading it. But Iβm glad I decided to. βAlpha Kaneβ is interesting, original, exciting, and unpredictable.
07/11/2020 18:06Blessing Oche
Just like most people here, I got briefed on this story through wattpad and Iβve gotta say, Iβm sooo glad I checked it out. Iβm not really a fan of werewolf stories but now I think Iβve found my ticket to more werewolf stories ππ
07/11/2020 17:48Betty Smith
the author recommended me this on Wattpad and so far I am in LOVE with it so far
07/11/2020 17:34Wolfy
reached chapter 7 and I guess that end for me... I really enjoyed the books. I'm kinda sad I can't finish it. Keep up the good work you two.
07/11/2020 17:07kaneesha
Iβve only read a sample but i love this! Iβm so excited to read the rest of the book! Amazing job with the book!
07/11/2020 17:06SeptemberRosie
i love how each chapter focuses on one thing and it makes you so absorbed into the book. i really enjoy this book, it very detailed and you can easily visualize whatever the author wrote down. the vocabulary was on point. i like the characters, the author portrayed them in a way that makes you understand them. i think this book is beyond amazing. would recommend to someone, definitely.
07/11/2020 16:56Rinne Aurora
This book is so beautifully written! Reading it is mesmerizing. The author did some SPECTACULAR work!!
07/11/2020 16:29Caroline Sheryl
I love this story, so far so good. Thanks to the writer for your recommend this story. Can't wait for the next chapter
07/11/2020 15:25Kpop_trash_ruined 05
I was actually recommended this story by the author and I am really glad for that.. Thank you very much..
07/11/2020 15:21Ashley Guevarra
I'm glad the writer recommended me this i haven't read the whole story yet but i can tell it's entertaining by the prologue c'ause i know some of you guys can tell wether the story is worth your time or not by the prologue and yes i really get bored easily if it's not good but this is really amazing good job authorβ€π
07/11/2020 15:11Prince Saeed
I love the story very much its nice and story is super entertainment and I love it
07/11/2020 14:49sital agarwal
its really a good book... i really loved the story..
07/11/2020 14:01Mah Noor
great book best one read yet
07/11/2020 13:17Reatile Mohoabyane
Yo. this is fire . when I was asked to review... I was like ok. then they said a werewolf story... I was like great... another one. you know how there's always that one thing missing... But this one surprised me. I'm glad I gave it a chance
07/11/2020 13:04Khanyi Mkhwanazi
I haven't read much but the story seems amazing so far. I'm really excited to read this π
07/11/2020 12:05ALWAYS_LOVE_V
I found out about this book on WP by the editor. And if they had not came to me and recommendeded, I would've missed this amazing book. (of course I didn't finish it) but it's REALLY good so far. I like the storyline alot!
07/11/2020 11:32Suzieyla Dzulfahmi
it's good to have a good book to read and I will be giving 200 %of my life 2 read n enjoy reading this book
07/11/2020 11:24Creamatur
Hi! I'm new to this app because someone showed me a sample I really liked it thank you very much for messaging me about thisπ
07/11/2020 11:11Tae Angel
hey I'm here from wp... I love to read it.. thank you for recommending.. lots of love for you and your bookβ€οΈπ
07/11/2020 08:34nnenna udeogu
The Book Is Great, I love the fact that the writer brought in all kinds of supernaturals and the story is quite intriguing, excellent work
07/11/2020 08:08Plag Zemmen
this is so interesting to read, I was recommended to read it from wattpad, and can I say I'm not disappointed at all! a lovely start, that's keeping me on my toes! wonderful work!
07/11/2020 08:03Mamitaa209
Iβm very happy that the writer of this book asked if I would like to check it out. So far Iβve only read a few chapters, but I am very impressed by how well written this is and I have a feeling that the rest is going to be a great outcome (Iβm literally obsessed with this book and canβt put it down! ππ)
07/11/2020 07:12Blank738
I first learnt of this book from the editor of the writer after she contacted me asking me to check It out. I must say as a writer my self this book made me believe it was an offical published book not just a hobby piece. I really liked how the writer places each scene and the description behind the characters and story line. There were how ever a couple errors but that's common as you learn from them. The world that this story is based in should be more known rather than introducing a character that's a different species, you should talk more about each characters feelings and thoughts. I do really like how you made the possessive side of Jan very seen and known showing his character. In this book there is more positive things to say than negative but I do really like how you made the book seem like an offical published book and that shows you have talent and a possible future as a offical author/writer. I wish you luck on your journey Ami and hope this review helps you.
07/11/2020 05:14floravx
i also found this book through wattpad when the author DMed and recommended it to me. The plot is genuinely very eye capturing and will make the reader want to keep going, this book is the type that would get you hooked for days... itβs also somewhat similar to fanfics and i, personally, love that. β₯οΈ Overall, the story is just, AMAZING! You nice, keep going! :)
07/11/2020 05:01mjchristian lazaro
i really love it thanks to the author who recommended me this in wattpad i love it.. it makes the story goes over to the whole story and the flow to the other scene and scenery i just like it ππ
07/11/2020 04:51Mhadz16
I like this story, can't wait to finish this.
07/11/2020 03:19Ember Adelaide
This is not the typical story I would normally read but after reading a couple of chapters I am glad I agreed to check it out. A very well done job from the author and editor.
07/10/2020 21:28frenchfriez
I enjoying the story. I like a somewhat dark fantasy that has possessiveness.
07/10/2020 17:49Hannah Rosato
Thank you for asking me to read your story! This is so good and I canβt put it down. At the end of every chapter, Iβm excited to start the next and find out what happens next. Great job!
07/10/2020 17:31sohnieya
just want to say 'luv d book'
07/10/2020 15:14Jaspher Jean Bigornia Benabese
wow great story i like it
07/10/2020 13:52Amealia Griffith
This is a really good book. At first i thought it was just gonna be anither cliche when the author recommended it to me. I love surprises and this was a great surprise
07/10/2020 13:50Pranjal
*faeries gave weird presents" π
07/10/2020 13:10Amritha Sriram
I was asked to read this and review by the editor and I'm really happy. This story is really well written and beautifully articulated! Wonderful work! I'm glad I didn't miss it out and tbh, I've read only like two chapters till now.
07/10/2020 13:03Angela Dee
yes, this litte fighter is alpha. I love her already
07/10/2020 12:49Wolfs Be
This book is really good and the attention to detail is great. The only problem I have is paying to read it. But it is a really great and you should definitely read it.
07/10/2020 12:39Sabrina Willcocks
Iβm honestly not one for wolf stories, but this isnβt like any Iβve read, and the descriptive, ongoing plot has me captive. A great book, and definitely recommended, even if youβre not a major werewolf reader.βοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈ
07/10/2020 10:56Honey Faustino
Actually this my second time to read a paranormal story...and iβve been asked if i can read this story as the editor recommended it and guess what i like it..iβm just on a few chapters but i like it a lot.. when you start, to read it, youβll stop at the moment for whatever youβre doing.. coz youβre engrossed by it...this story has a different plot form itβs different from those iβve read.. it makes you eager to find out will happened next.. and every time i read it ..i also felt what the characters feels on that moment..i feel sad for Ember and feels bad for Kane for he controlled everything..i guess thatβs the author wants us to feel regardless of what we would like it to be.. but then this story is so much you couldnβt refused to pass by... youβre an incredible author..your talent is amazing..thank you for telling us about this story...you really did a great job! God Bless! looking forward to see more of your story.πππΌπ
07/10/2020 10:44Humna Khan
it's really nicely written and I love the whole story line and everything was so good, I found about this book through wattpad and I wanna thank that person because its was a great book
07/10/2020 10:17Ravenbluue
I've just read a book that I LOVE BUT MAMA I'M BROKE AS HELL HUHUHUHU I WANT TO CONTINUEEE BUT I'M THE BROKEST OUT OF ALL HISTORY OF BROKE HUHUHU
07/10/2020 08:02sami gaston
I was recommended this via Wattpad and the prologue had me hooked, but sadly I don't spend money on unlocking stories and I'm not too big of a fan of the 'jacka$$ alpha mate' character but other than that this is very good and I'd recommend those who do pay for stories to read through and finish π
07/10/2020 06:52diamond_golden9
Im loving how even though everyone at school saw her as weak for being an omega but truthfully behind the sences is her true strength and her doing what shes capable of.
07/10/2020 06:47Gayatri kothuri
Your story is really interesting and intriguing. The way every thing and emotion is described is awesome. I couldn't find any mistake in the sentence structure and the vocabulary is good too. The way plot is developing till now is good but I can say more about it after a few chapters. Keep it up!
07/10/2020 06:33Sarah Sapphire
I just wanted to know if this is going to return to Wattpad anytime soon. This story is great and really well written and I'm so glad I was introduced to it.
07/10/2020 05:16Unicorn Ent.
I love this book and I only got a sample of it. π©
07/10/2020 04:57Joyan J George
The characters are astonishing and we'll portrayed. I really got hooked on it starting from the prologue. It's a really good book and one of my favorite genres.
07/10/2020 04:43KayBaby019
Ember Yale? That's my last name too if you add YalΓ©!!
07/10/2020 04:41Rachel Aldersea
This book is Amazing! I love how descriptive and detailed everything is. I canβt wait to continue reading
07/10/2020 03:49Tatiana_Lily89
I enjoy reading the book it has a pretty good plot line and I was recommended it by the editor, I'll be honest I wasn't sure at first but as I read more I enjoyed the storyline of it. However, I wish I didn't have to pay to continue reading such a good book. And since I've never really used this app I don't know if it's the same for all books because my main platform is Wattpad and that's what I'm used too. But if that's how this app functions then I understand, and I also understand if it's how the writers get some kind of small or large income from their work. Anyways, very good book, and a very good read that I enjoyed. β₯οΈ :D
07/10/2020 03:26QweenMaira
I'm not really a fan of paranormal novels but Ive got to say,this book is amaze ballsπ―.Ive never heard of any stories till d editor contacted me on wattpad to check it out and I'm glad that I did. I love hw the story just flows!!!
07/09/2020 22:02SecretAmbitions
I got asked to read the story and write a review. I must say when I was sent the prologue my attention was peaked. My review: https://my.w.tt/htvaxgOkZ7
07/09/2020 19:50Favour Aya
Excellent masterpiece created by a talented writer. I haven't finished it yet, but the few chapters I've read are captivating.
07/09/2020 19:43Tsholofelo Makhura
I was reading this book on wattpad. I wondered where it disappeared to. I love it. It's a great book and you are an excellent writer. I would read any book you write. Keep on doing the amaizing work
07/09/2020 19:00Make-up Lover03
interesting
07/09/2020 18:10bubba gump
So far, so this has been fun. Kinda sad that I missed it on Wattpad, I think it would have been a pretty interesting read :(
07/09/2020 16:34Sarah Sapphire
I normally don't read books like this, but when the author contacted me on Wattpad, I was intrigued. They sent me the first chapter and it was really detailed and made me want to read more. It's super entertaining.
07/09/2020 15:44