Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments

  • zoey864

    I was recommended this book through Wattpad too and I’m so glad I was because honestly I can tell from read a line of the book is gonna be good and boyyy I tell you what I was sent was amazing 🤧🥺

    07/14/2020 08:18

  • Bryjess Jimenez

    The story is pretty good. The plot is very interesting. congratulations to the author and editor for making such great story. I'm already in chapter 10 but it requires coins😭😭. What should I? I really want to finish reading this

    07/14/2020 07:59

  • Asuna Yuuki

    I also found this book through watpad because the editor of the writer asked me to write a review, and I'm so glad I said yes, the story is so good and unique, I really love it.

    07/14/2020 07:51

  • Faizah Shahmat

    Awesome read!!! Funny too! I do love a fair share of angst in stories. So this was perfect for me

    07/14/2020 06:58

  • Nimna Vishwani Alwis

    i came here through wattpad and I'm so glad I was asked to read it. I really love it but I dont have coins to read the whole thing :(

    07/14/2020 06:39

  • Moon

    Best story I have read in a very long time. Very well written an very exciting .

    07/14/2020 06:29

  • Just_Lacey

    First time using a different reading app since the writer recommended the book. Never thought of exploring other communities aside from wp but here I am. And I gotta say..... If all the other books here are like this😊😊then am here to stay

    07/14/2020 06:28

  • Druxx

    Firstly, I wanted to thank you for recommending me your book. Based on the 6 chapters I was able to read I could tell that you have an amazing plot. The first chapter definitely grabbed my attention right away. But what I liked most was your use of imagery language. It helped me visualize the characters and plot a lot easier. Lastly, the way you wrote out your chapters for sure kept me interested in reading more.

    07/14/2020 05:56

  • R.M. Pluto

    I also found out about the book from the editor on Wattpad. I really enjoyed the first few chapters, as they are filled with detail, but still maintain clarity. The characters are well thought out. The story is very interesting and I would read more, if I wasn't broke.

    07/14/2020 05:08

  • KenzKenz

    Thanks for the recommendation from the author on Wattpad, because I’m honestly enjoying this book a lot. I love the style of writing and the overall preface is so intriguing. Liking it a lot!!

    07/14/2020 05:06

  • Bryjess Jimenez

    The editor send me a message thru wattpad to read a sample chapter of this story and I'm so glad that I gave it a try, just reading the prolongue leaves me a with a heavy heart and I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.

    07/14/2020 03:48

  • Taetae-aholic

    so far the prologue is well written.i am excited to start this book.thank u Abigail for this opportunity

    07/14/2020 03:42

  • Bryjess Jimenez

    The prolongue leaves me with a heavy heart.

    07/14/2020 02:57

  • Kim Jordan

    I love how the story makes you as a reader feel for the character/s or the situation.

    07/14/2020 02:53

  • VB BTS

    I finished the whole story and loved it. very detailed though I did get confused when all of a sudden the story would go back in time for flashbacks and then would be back to the normal timeline. I still enjoyed it and will definitely recommend others to read this. I am curious as to what Arius wanted from Ember since he did say she worked for him.

    07/14/2020 02:46

  • Kim Jordan

    I love that the chapter has been so descriptively written, that it feels like I'm there watching it happen, it gives such dept to the character's emotions and thoughts and how she has changed from the prologue

    07/14/2020 02:45

  • Kim Jordan

    I was asked to read this from the writer, on wattpad. They seeded the prologue and it caught my attention. The plot was do nicely put out. I'm a picky reader who doesn't like cliché type of books or books that dont dig into the characters thought and emotiond aswell as not developing the story through time instead of speeding it up unnecessarily but this defs has caught my attention BC its not like those books, its different. I've read many rejection books and most are cliché. From the start of this, I can see that its not gonna be cliché and that it will be a great book already. I like where it going so far and will continue reading it.

    07/14/2020 02:39

  • Mila Bihag

    Actually found this through wattpad so far the books really good.

    07/14/2020 01:36

  • anime_and_ fanfic_lover

    So worth buying the coins for! Not what I was expecting when I read it was paranormal. Plot twist were defiently just how I like them, as well as the teasing romance. Cant wait for pt. 2 to be completed!

    07/14/2020 01:33

  • Mochi Jiminie

    Great story, but I'm broke. Wish it was on Wattpad so I could end my suspense.

    07/13/2020 23:55

  • Stephanie Smith

    the BOOK is AWWESOME I wish that we could comment after every chapter. But it cool I'll deal with that

    07/13/2020 23:41

  • Irena Syakirah

    i enjoy the first two chapter... it's quite refreshing for all supernatural combine in one book that co-exist like it normal... i thought I'll be reading a normal werewolf story.... it's interesting...

    07/13/2020 23:34

  • Aria Fraser

    awesome book! worth every second of reading ❤️

    07/13/2020 23:33

  • Kristina Garcia

    really enjoyed this! thsnks for the recommendation

    07/13/2020 21:55

  • Miss_Azaleas-Sun

    I really, really like the flow of the story and characters even though I’ve only read a few chapters and from what you suggested me! It’s very entertaining plot-wise and overall I very much like it! I think I’ll keep reading!

    07/13/2020 21:41

  • Aaliyah White

    I enjoyed reading this book. I am such a fan of supernatural creatures.

    07/13/2020 20:52

  • Maria Zayas

    this book looks very interesting. ....

    07/13/2020 20:47

  • random bullshat

    oh frick frack patty wack I also got sent by a Wattpad user. even though I can already smell the cliche “alpha + omega” story from a mile away, the details are lowkey highkey extraordinary. probs can’t finish it ‘cause I’m too poor to afford coins

    07/13/2020 20:17

  • Funiey_S Mukwevho

    Thank you so much author for the recommendation, the chapter which you sent on wattpad, got me hooked to a point of downloading, this app so 8 can read the rest of the chapters. ❤️📖

    07/13/2020 19:56

  • V Vale

    I got recommended by the author and was asked for a review and I'm glad I said yes! This story is sooo good, from how the story flows to how each chapter is very detailed and easy to visualize. Great job author! Gonna buy them coins once I get enough money😆

    07/13/2020 19:51

  • Shanourra Xavier

    omg

    07/13/2020 19:37

  • Rainbow Colours

    This story is great. The plot is amazing and the ways things are described are very good. I loved the story I read but I'm really sad that I can't read the whole😭. but Great work!! I really enjoyed whatever I got to read!!

    07/13/2020 18:55

  • Van_Muez

    I'm so glad the writer recommended it to me, the first few chapters got me hooked and it's quite good. keep it up 👍👍👍👍

    07/13/2020 18:38

  • Juanita Mynhardt

    I just love this story. I can't put down my phone..

    07/13/2020 18:22

  • leighXsX

    I really appreciate the author for telling me about this book I absolutely adore it it’s a really good book

    07/13/2020 18:21

  • J Mickey

    This is a great book!

    07/13/2020 18:07

  • unicemon

    hah, im here

    07/13/2020 17:49

  • Jung Hoseok

    I also like many readers,have got to know this book through wattpad.When I first read it, I was immediately amazed and wanted to read more.I still absolutely love the beginning.The way that the book just..... The development of the plot is brilliant and the characters are portrayed well. (did I spell that wrong) It's my first time using this app TBH. But I recommend this to many readers.

    07/13/2020 16:44

  • JeonBunicaTan

    I've never read or watched stories in this genre cause I thought it would be scary. this was recommended to me on wattpad by the Author. I was not planning to read it(cause I am easily scared) but I read it out of curiousity. this is my first time reading such a genre and I enjoyed it. I'm very thankfull😊 to the Author for recommending this story to me and also apologetic and sad since I cant read any further cause I dont have money to buy coin.😔 Thanks for recommending it anyway☺😊

    07/13/2020 16:18

  • haikqu

    I recently just got asked to read and write a review on Wattpad! I must say when I was reading the prologue, I was already hooked! This story has amazing vocabulary and flows very nicely. I would definitely recommend this to my friends. Thank you for reaching out to me!!

    07/13/2020 16:02

  • loveisreal2235

    this is an awesome book it so awesome that I’m itching to read more plz post on Wattpad cuz I really don’t feel like waiting 🙏🙏

    07/13/2020 16:00

  • Mochi •W•

    I found this book through Wattpad, it is beautifully written with amazing complex language. It is very enjoyable and great.

    07/13/2020 15:33

  • ishika singh

    starting is good....

    07/13/2020 15:17

  • Evy Lyn

    This story seems very interesting so far. I love it. Ussually I don't like werewolf stories because it ends up just not being my favorite. The editor on wattpad told me to check it out a few hours ago, and I was very excited when reading the prologue they sent me. Seeing as the story seemed decently great I decided to check it out here and it did not dissapoint. I'm very excited to check out more. The story flows so well, (some authors have problems trying to make a smooth flow in their story). I really like it! I dislike the Alpha already, cause like 😭😭 i cant imagine being rejected in front of everyone.

    07/13/2020 15:15

  • Esha Shah

    So far, the book is really good! I already enjoy the characters and can feel the emotions through every word!!! Thank you for recomending this to me!

    07/13/2020 14:56

  • Rupal Gaur

    I found it on wattpad like the most of u ..and it's amazing .. 😍😍😍 .. keep going u both ...

    07/13/2020 14:00

  • Rupal Gaur

    I also found this book on wattpad ... its a good one ... keep going mates .. 😘😘😘

    07/13/2020 13:58

  • Sumaya Abdy

    I really love this books thanks to the author for recommending it.

    07/13/2020 13:50

  • Mia Gardner-Lewis

    the writer messaged me on wattpad and sent it to me and it’s so good!! can’t wait to finish :)

    07/13/2020 13:32

  • alpha ulrich

    Great story I love it

    07/13/2020 13:30

  • hello bitch

    ok so I was dmed thru Wattpad to review this book and I was very 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤intrigued and I’m happy to say I gave the author and this book a chance 🖤🖤

    07/13/2020 13:27

  • hello bitch

    I would love to voice this

    07/13/2020 12:54

  • Fidelia Williams

    You write well.

    07/13/2020 12:24

  • Arianne Schwenke

    I really enjoy the unpredictable aspect to the characters. But maybe we should learn the Omega's name before chapter two? Just a suggestion.

    07/13/2020 12:15

  • Arianne Schwenke

    Wow, that's a great hooker!

    07/13/2020 12:10

  • Rashi Sahay

    i read some chapters and must say so far i am way too impressed ❤️ keep the work, I am totally enjoying reading this😍

    07/13/2020 10:43

  • Mimi MonbebeOT7

    I'm going to read it but it's already entraining ! (I read a passage on wattpad)

    07/13/2020 10:38

  • Hayashi_Lily

    I came here from Wattpad as the writer had contacted me as well just like the others who had also commented here. I've only read the Prologue of the story so far and I'm already into the story. The writing is very detailed but not too complex for teenagers like me to not understand the words, instead, it actually draws me in. I've read a lot of fanfics in Wattpad and also some original stories here and there and this book is certainly a story that you would want to read continously once you have started and not get bored of it.

    07/13/2020 10:26

  • Freja Spångberg

    awesome idea and very intriguing story. Also very few grammar mistakes with a varied language. Good job, I enjoyed it very much :)

    07/13/2020 10:07

  • Madison Petrie

    I really like the beginning. I love how it doesn’t tell you what’s happening straight away. Like, you don’t really expect her to be a total badass and then here she is beating people up for fun (well and for money of course) I only got to chapter 7 since I don’t have any coins but I really like it!

    07/13/2020 09:04

  • chimchim park

    The story is amazing!!

    07/13/2020 08:56

  • Rhona Danklu

    this book is 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

    07/13/2020 08:50

  • lupe Red

    I’m so happy that the author decided to share this story with me along with everyone else. I can truly say that I am loving it so far and I can’t wait to finish it!! 😁

    07/13/2020 08:40

  • _sakura_23

    I made it to chapter 34 and it’s a pretty good read. I really enjoyed the beginning seemed a bit choppy and didn’t make much sense. However, as you read along, everything falls into place. There are a few things that are a bit confusing but I’ve pieced them together and figured it out. I’m not done yet but although, this is a really good story, I really love it.

    07/13/2020 07:35

  • Steve🧚🏻‍♀️

    I wrote a review on this about 5 minutes ago but I’m unsure wether it posted or not so I’ll write another haha! I have only read a sample of chapters and I am hooked. The characters are written perfectly and the descriptions are fire 🔥 I’m glad I got asked to write a review of this story. Not only is it about werewolves but it includes faeries and trolls which only makes me like it more !

    07/13/2020 07:32

  • Steve🧚🏻‍♀️

    I got asked to read this story and write a review. Even though I’ve only read a few chapters and have not finished the book I can tell that it is written perfectly. I am not the best at writing reviews but so far in the book i am addicted. The characters are written very well and you can tell a lot of thought has gone into them. At first I thought the plot would be about werewolves but it includes other things aswell such a faeries and trolls! I can’t wait to finish this book and find out what happens!

    07/13/2020 07:24

  • Avocado-Chan

    I’m so glad this was recommended to me. All I read was the prologue and I’m already off my feet!

    07/13/2020 07:18

  • Cierrea Spencer

    The writer also recommended me to read this story on Wattpad and so far I like it. It get intriguing each chapter and I just love the concept.💗💗💗👍🏼👍🏼

    07/13/2020 05:59

  • Mahiyain

    Okay so, someone recomended me this in Wattpad, the person sended me a sample and I found it really awesome! And that's why im here to read it because it got my attention to that sample, and im LOVING this so far!❤ Keep it up!!!♡♡♡

    07/13/2020 05:40

  • ravenclawsoutlet

    kinda glad the author/editor reached out to me on wattpad lol werewolf fics are my guilty pleasure :)

    07/13/2020 05:17

  • sykina

    so i found this book through wattpad the author send me a couple paragraphs and i loved it so i downloaded this app asap and started reading.

    07/13/2020 04:20

  • Bluedaydreamer

    Wow! I can't stop reading this book.. You did great Miss Author for creating this masterpiece. It's my first time reading a werewolf story with the other supernaturals, other than vampires, participating in it. I'm quite thrilled and excited to read more, although.... augh... coins..😫.. should I or should I not... to be or not to be.. I'm stuck in this loop since finishing the free chapters.. All in all, thank you so much for recommending it to me earlier in WP.. This is quite a gem.. Although I also wanted to dwell with Ember's feelings after Kane just dropped off rejected her. Well yea she hated the thing, but how did her nerdy self transitioned toan on cage fighter. I love her friends also, I want to see more interaction with them especially that Fairy which is a first in my werewolf reading history. Will be reading more as soon as I get off this loop lol.. Kudos to you Author!! Good luck for more works!

    07/13/2020 03:35

  • MUN0014

    I love this book. I found out about it on Wattpad from the writer. I really like the use of Grammer and the interesting words, sorry if that doesn't make any sense.

    07/13/2020 03:28

  • Jennifer Arquette

    I love it.

    07/13/2020 03:06

  • Jennifer Arquette

    I'm liking it so far.

    07/13/2020 03:03

  • lily Breina

    a man who does not know your worth is unworthy of your thoughts. ... I'm stealing that.

    07/13/2020 02:27

  • BangtanBubble

    The plot is so unique and I'm so excited to see character development.

    07/13/2020 02:25

  • Reader-121290

    I like the story but I don’t like that I have to spend money to ready each chapter.

    07/13/2020 02:25

  • Persephone Hardy

    I got asked to read this story and i like what im reading its is very interesting.

    07/13/2020 02:06

  • jimkook

    it's really amazing story, thank you so much for suggesting me this story! I love it tho!

    07/13/2020 01:44

  • chimingoo13

    I read twilight a while back and reading this story honestly makes me feel like I’m reading a novel. Well written and keeps me wanting more after each chapter. I really like it and would recommend!!

    07/13/2020 01:33

  • Mikeria Johnson

    The chapter is intriguing and captivating. I like the detail, I could imagine the scene very well. Overall it’s Great! :)

    07/13/2020 01:20

  • Sydney Burk

    I think it’s 100% wonderful and I love werewolves.

    07/13/2020 00:43

  • Natalia Lind Hagalin

    I really liked this book,the charecters are well ritten,the story flows well though sadly I can not read to much because Im broke though I recomend it

    07/12/2020 23:49

  • Marina Verdura

    Even tho I can't read beyond chapter 6, this story's every promising. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing that's a bother. In my personal opinion, the time jump from the prologue to Chapter 1 should be more emphasized. I don't know, it just lacks that feeling of 'this isn't the same little kid we saw before. times has passed, and they've grown' that I believe it should irradiate. The world building is a little bit sloppy due to the fact that it relies on the reader's knowledge on magical creatures. And that makes it a double-edged sword which can guide or confuse the reader. As for the plot, I'm sure it's because I've only read till chapter 6 that I'm not seeing it. But I only expect the magical world in which is placed has some big role in it, because if not, adding magic to the story may feel unimportant. As for the Character, I wished they had a better description. Sometimes you can't picture it because you don't know how they look. I like their personalities, tho I wished our main character acted more on what their trying to prove. For what I got from the story, and be free to correct me if I'm wrong, they're trying to prove that they can be as strong as everyone else even as an omega, and that they dont need their mate in their life to accomplish great things. And still they're doing nothing to fight their omega's need for the Alfa. That annoyed me a little bit. Also, the gender of the main character wasn't very clear to me 😅. I know it should be obvious, but I just didn't get it. Sorry. The main character is also lacking the conference that I believe you're trying to make them have, and then disappear when around their mate. And that makes it confusing to tell what's their endgame as in character development. Even tho, I still enjoy reading through this story and I'm sure you'll have a bright future as a writer.

    07/12/2020 23:49

  • Raven Nutella

    This is so interesting, it's not as cliche' as other books I've read where the alpha mate rejects the omega. I'm so excited to read more.😊😊

    07/12/2020 23:27

  • Sylvia Chunga-Besa

    truly enjoyed the 6 chapters l've read. Well thought out plot though l would suggest more character building& more depth to the storyline think on the lines of Anne Rice's interview with a vampire. Well done am a fan !

    07/12/2020 22:31

  • Joseline Deaquino

    I love it can wait to see more of your stories they are enjoyable yo read and also interesting to read and they are entertaining hope to see more of this amazing stories I could see that you are amazing author I just love it :)

    07/12/2020 21:49

  • Joseline Deaquino

    I love this book it so entertaing I really enjoy it and it also interesting it a story that i am really look Foward to see more of this amazing book:)

    07/12/2020 21:40

  • mochim

    I was asked to read this story and then give my feedback. I have only read the Prologue, but I can tell that this is going to be a good story. The plot and flow of the story are easy to follow and I’m excited to read the rest of this story!

    07/12/2020 21:37

  • Maggie Kariuki

    found u!

    07/12/2020 21:27

  • Blair Hamilton

    This is my first werewolf story, and I have to say I love it! its really well written and the characters are nicely developed, I love it. Thank you so much Author!😊

    07/12/2020 21:08

  • kutlwilett

    this is sooo good

    07/12/2020 21:04

  • Vanessa -

    I really enjoy this story even though I just read the prologue!

    07/12/2020 21:00

  • Pamela Campos

    lol only read the first chap and I’m already hooked

    07/12/2020 20:59

  • _fuxk_if_ik

    i downloaded this app for this book cause a sample was sent to me and i loved it

    07/12/2020 20:27

  • 21_Kaitlynn Marsh

    The editor of this book recommended it to me- I really like it so far, and I read the comment section. You’re a great author too! Hopefully you don’t feel pressured to respond to everyone’s comments. How many coins does one chapter cost? I don’t see it anywhere- •~•

    07/12/2020 20:04

  • Emily Burke

    I found this book through Wattpad from the editor and I can seriously tell you that from what I read that this is amazing. It has great flow of background information and solid character details. The story pulled me in from the beginning and still has me intrigued. I would highly recommend this book!!😊👍

    07/12/2020 19:20

  • Luna

    I was recommended to read this story by the editor. We began to chat for a bit. The editor sent me the prologue and chapter one. I have read many werewolf and vampire, fae, jin, fiction, non-fiction, historical fiction, and fanfic. I will be honest. The story intrigued me even though there are more than one story similar to this one. A fighting fatherless omega and many other characters. This story places the reader to visual the events happening just before your eyes. It captures you when you begin to read. Slowly you find yourself having one question once you finish reading the prologue. What was the most embarrassing thing that happened to her? Why would she want to change states? Which brings me to this question what is unique to this story? The answer is that the author create a character that connect with the scars in each person. All in all it’s pretty good story for a person new to paranormal stories. Please don’t grab your knifes to throw them at me if you dislike what I had to say! Thus it’s time to run! 🏃🏼‍♀️🏃🏼‍♀️🏃🏼‍♀️🏃🏻‍♀️🏃🏻‍♀️🏃🏻‍♀️

    07/12/2020 19:12

  • Seokiee

    I came here through a dm from Wattpad, and I got to say your story has got me hooked! It's such a great story all in all.

    07/12/2020 18:53
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