The White King's Favorite Comments

I’m tired of the Ashen bashing. People complaining about Ashen not being a strong king isn’t reading the book correctly and not understanding his circumstances! Remember, he’s only became the king because ge was the better choice BUT he doesn’t have the support of a strong tribe(s) to helo stabilize the kingdom, thus the competition! there’s a power struggle right now within the 13 tribes and he’s stuck in the middle; his primary concern right now is to prevent another civil war! we all know how hard it is to please everyone. Ashen doesn’t have a lot of allies and he’s spread thin. Cessi has come along now and is helping to take on some of the burden! I am loving the book!

probably one of the best series I've read I hope you continue this series. I'd like to read about her brother next. but I can't wait to finish this one. Jisel need a painful death.....

Gee Higgins

when she gets out she should send krai to finish them off

Gee Higgins

omg so intense loved it

Cindy A

I loved today's update it was amazing.... krai how I missed you.... I wonder what it could be that got Cessi I hope is nothing to bad and her body can fight it.. so nice everyone is helping even the king..ty Jenny amazing chapter as always ❤❤❤❤

Penny A Foxie

50 Oh Ashen is about to get an ass whooping!! 😂 He’s so unsure of himself when he has everything he needs! if they take a small section surely they can keep it secure. :/

Kian wouldn't leave Jisel behind 😳 that's soooo cool. Her reaction had me in giggles☺ Poor Nana & Tessa feeling for them the most right now though 😔 Wow Cheshi Tribe have been ricking solo for awhile, can't wait to hear their story

I cannot wait to see the fight. Maybe her dragon instincts will come out to play and she'll get all territorial over Ashen!?

Ahlie

my heart

Lally Devon

That was hot 🥵 thanks 🙏 for the update Jenny Fox 🦊 😘❤️❤️❤️

Ali Brady Nilson

ohhhh!!!!! what will happen?!? what is happening outside??? ans where is Jisel???

shanaaz shaz

amazing

Woodenheart Plaza

omg, so intense..

Allison Elizabeth Patel

YES!!!

Drawkser

love it 😍😍😍

jen

Tessa's in trouble now...shouldn't have taken those swords

Yaaasssss finally the bros get here!!! I really really really hope Nana and one her brothers fall in love with each other. 😍🙌🏽🐲

just wondering why all these people suddenly need food...did the rain ruin theirs? What is the deal. I don't get it.

Yey! The chapter I've been waiting for!

Claire O'Sullivan

awesome chapter. more please!

Reader-742236

enjoy your vacation, we’ll all be here when you get back

BookDragon

WOW Jenni!! You sure know how to write a cliffhanger 😳!!! Like one reader commented “I was NOT expecting that”!!! Ashen’s half-brother is alive? I have to read back and refresh my memory if this guy is a full or half brother! But pretty sure he is a half brother, because he sounded like he wasn’t there for a “happy” family reunion!! I think as well that what killed Istis and also caused that red mark on Cessilia’s back was a poisonous dart or something that someone shot them with & Istis died from that. It didn’t affect Cessilia much at all because of her Dragon skin! I can’t wait to read the next update to find out what happened to Istis and see why all of a sudden long lost brother showed up??

Wendy Virginia

still floating on cloud 9 from your stories! thank you so much!

Cindy A

that was a beautiful chapter ty Jenny love the story... I hope Cessi has the strength to stop before she kills istis even if the dumb girl deserves it for doing her clans bitting.. I hope Ashen stops the competition because its obvious Cessi is a true Queen.🤍🤍🐉🐉🤍🤍

Kathryn Ngatuakana

Shame on your undies yebakh🤣🤣🤣you are going to regret it alright.. cant wait for the next chapter, be cool if kairen and her 2 older brothers just do those grand entrance 🤷‍♀️😆

Kat M

interesting to see what happens next. Cessi will want to know her story

well hello there brothers!!! been waiting for your appearance in this story...

I hope cessi fights and kicks some ass

Roseam

They are growing as a couple. It's endearing.

shanaaz shaz

dragon.... it has to be 🙏🙏🙏

Lally Devon

She’s her fathers daughter that was pretty 🤩 intense but I hope Cessi doesn’t completely loose herself 🥲 🙏🙏🙏 😘❤️❤️❤️

Soph Hugh

🤍💚🤍💚🤍

Just like Cessi is finding her voice Ashen also has a lot of growing to do. Love it they will.do it together. I know this is their story I wish Tessa had her own and even Nana too. lol I just love everyone in this book!!! ❤️

Auras Laura

great let's finish them 👏👏👏

Kate Wildey

I am loving this story!!! I loved the first one but this one was a little slow to start, so I'm glad I hung in there!

Prettymoon

I been checkin and waiting too. 😩no update today??

btw sorry got sooooo excited!! thank you for such an awesome chapter!! I’ve got goose bumps!

Omg I cannot wait for the next chapter!!! Super interested to see what's going to happen with Jinn. It'll be interesting to see Nana's reaction to the brothers too 😀

BookDragon

What an ending to this chapter!! But at least they got rid of the Yekara soldiers,& hopefully the dragon!! BUT…….Krai will save them!!! He never really strays far so he’ll know something is wrong!!

I love the cuteness between Nana and Darsan!!! I think they suite each other. when will we know what happen to Cessi? and Ashen???

LJ Lim

I just can’t stop checking for updates. Hope it’s soon

64 yay I’ve been waiting for this. her brothers have come! Hope they made it in time to help ashen.

oh lord! I will now be checking hourly for the next update! how cruel…..1st Yassim now Ashen is hit…..

The brothers!!! Now Darsen needs to fall in love with Nana and Kassien with one of the other allies.

Wonder which brother of Cessis is going to fall in love with Nana I just knew her brothers were going to rescue them this is gojng to be interesting. can't wait for the next update.

Katie Factor

Yes!!! Your tell them Cessi! I love Ashen and Cessi together, but he definitely deserved that! I'm just worried about Jisel... where's she at? What's she doing? Although this could/should lead to Ashen getting rid of her, I'm still afraid she's going to put up a fight in leaving, and that there's going to be a lot of drama with her.

it's finally revealed what happened to Cessi and Cece..it's horrible and heartbreaking 🥺🥺🥺

abobda’sgirl

should have killed Jisel and Jin

Latiffa K

love the update! thank you😍

Go th Cheshi 👊👊👊 I had a thought that the Kunu would be backing The NutCase Wanabe King, the fighting scenes are amazing Jenny, I can see it all pan out as I read. Thanks

Michelle Hill

cece!?!?! that’d be amazing!!!!

David Marcano

Why Cecilia? Why would you "domineer" the whole room only after the worst hapoens

Drawkser

omg I need to know more. I’m loving ashen and cessi relationship

Drawkser

love it !! I want more about Cessi and Ashen ❤️❤️

Way to go Cessi!

Ann Poiron

I really hope Sab isn’t one of the ones to be made an example with. Tessa will kill everyone for touching her boyfriend. Darsan and Nana, how cute - this is how she goes back to the empire to learn? Right!?! Kassian and Cessi will fight and win! I just know it! I love this book!💕

Amy Sabatino

updattteee ppllleeaaase

Penny A Foxie

I could feel my heart start to race through that chapter! Holy moly!!! Reminds me of the throne room chapter from TWGF!!! Aaaarh another chapter please Jenny! 😂

fck..... i really hate jisel!!!!! ughhhh the super evil devil villainess for all the time!!!!!

Joan Weller-Winstead

I'm loving this story!

Soph Hugh

Tessa and Sab are so cute together

Weh, I hope the tribes stay by Ashen and Cessilia. I’m so excited and hope the two brothers help with the fight as well as the two dragons.

Reader-555364

Amazing as always! And the intrigue continues…….. Seen dragons eat people where?…….. 🤔

Carmen Reif

wow!!!!!!!!!! you have such a brilliant mind!!! im so in love with this story, keeps getting better and better!!!

Maria Patricia

love it ❤️

Ann Poiron

Nana! your a peach! love that girl! I love that we know about Tessa and Sab. but I’m wondering about Cessi and the king? I hope everything is okay for the both of them!

FINALLY Uughhh lol slow burn romances are almost torture but yet I love them so much. 😍 this was awesome as usual Jenny!

Allison Elizabeth Patel

🤣🤣🤣 great chapter

omg 😜😜😜💃🏾💃🏾💃🏾

Reader-397104

love the update! Cessi hope your dad and brothers don’t get overprotective!

Ludmila Bacova

OH MY GOD!!! Loved that chapter. ❤

Vicki Trewella

arrgghhh No!!! not Ashen😳

Amy Sabatino

when is the next update?

Jayde Ash

I love how this story is unfolding. I’m waiting with bated breath for the next chapter. ❤️❤️❤️

Kian!!

when is next update seems slow

Suella J Brown-Torres

why just one chapter. please your killing me!!!

I need more!!

Penny A Foxie

Mic drop!!!!

Victory Aires

i think jisel is being held, if her dragon is climbing the walls and not attacking clearly he is in distress for her. the yekara took her and are using her blood for the kings brother

oooo, my goodness!! and the cliffhangers continue! I love it!! thank you!!

Anita Mara

i know Jisel is involved. I’m sure she is the one that send the dart that injured Cessi and killed

now i understand why even Cassie's daughters have dragons...it's because she herself obtained some kind of dragon abilities from the Water God...

Beatriz Astorga Morales

🤜💥🤛 Go Ceci!!!

Roseam

She shouted that whole thing at him without stuttering! Way to go Cessi. 💜

irechukwu kelechi ugonna

Another amazing Chapter Jenny

Roseam

It's great to see so many working together. I wonder who the tattooed woman is?

William Cooper

enjoying this book, it's an excellent read

Kayla Elliott

ohhh yes!!!! i can’t wait for the next chapter!! I’d love for your stories to be made into movies!!! they would be the BEST! enjoy your family time!!

sae

loved the chapter so sweet and hot! can't wait for more.

Marija Marković

jisel's brother can't have dragon unlesshis father is dragon prince. Children of dragon princesses don't have dragons. there are plenty of princesses married outside castle and nobody have dragons except royal family princes and their sons

you go Nana!!! love her brains and courage!! now if Cessi and the King can survive their ordeal!!!

anna sota

why my first time wasn’t even in half so wonderful like these too have, (cry). Jenny you are master in that kind of scene:-)

Katie Factor

🥰🥰🥰🥰 At least he was thinking enough to not want to get her pregnant yet.

Soph Hugh

I am intrigued to learn everyone’s back story. the characters are all so interesting.

Pey Phang

I knew I should have waited before reading this chapter 😂 still couldn’t help myself though.. 😂

Damn I can't wait to learn more about Jisel's backstory! Also yeah, go Cessi, put Hephael in his place and make him take a stand! 👏👏

Conni

should maybe someone let Yebekh that Krai has a tendency to munch on anyone who threatens him or his humans? Krai hasn't has a snack in a while....🐉🐲😜

ohh yesss people will like him now thats great he needs it ❤️

was NOT expecting that!!!!